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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
nice update

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
i just simply love this ff..........continue soon.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aweosmeeee updt loved it cnt wait plzz contine soon n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

i just simply love this ff..........continue soon.......

yaar tu mujhe aik bAT bata keh mein jo bhi likhti hun tujhe itna pasand kyun ata hai .................. kahin ham mele mein bichar toh nahi gaye the na...... i mean soul sisters types.....full on filmi
....nupsi ki tarah
Edited by annie98 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nyccc update
cont soooooon n thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ar4evr

nyccc update
cont soooooon n thnx 4 d pm

yaar tum mujhe hamesha aik hi tarah ke comments deti ho please kabhi kabhi chNge acha hota nyways thnx for commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
nice....i loved it!!!!
pls continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

wow nice update

mayu flirtimg and sam the loving caring brother
do update sson
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Hey guys here is the Part 3 of my FF

So as u know now everyone is exploring the college

And so is mayank

Now mayank is standing with a girl and flirting😆

Mayank:waise toh larkian mujhe bohot saare naamon se bulati hain u know lover boy😆,rockstar😆,romeo😆………….leikin ap oon sab se bilkul alag hain to ap mujhe kya bulayein gi

The girl:well………………..tumhara nam mayank hai na

Mayank:han

The girl:toh phir mayu kaisa rahe ga

Mayank holds his head and now he is getting flashbacks:a girl(nupur)calling him mayu and mayank is saying:mujhe mayu mat bulao and nupur says sadu

Now the girl

Girl:kya hua are u fine?

Mayank:han main bilkul theek hoon woh…………….aise hi

Girl:I think ap koh rest ki zarurat hai

Mayank:no I am fine

And now a person puts a hand on his shoulder

Its samrat

Mayank:arre sam tu aa gaya

He takes samrat to another side

Samrat:who girl kon thi

Mayank:woh maine na tere liye aik aur bhabi dhoond li

Samrat:bhabi…………bhai ap na pichle 4 saalon se har din mere liye aik nayi bhabhi kyun dhoond lete hain

Mayank:chal chod na…………waise kahan tha ab tak

Samrat:doctor ki appointment lene gaya tha

Mayank:kyun kya hua(checks his forehead)samrat teri tabyet toh theek hai na

Samrat:bhai……………mere liye nahi…….ap ke liye

Mayank:magar main bilkul theek hoon samrat

Samrat:actually bhai ye psychiatrist ki appointment hai

Mayank:psychiartrist………………..par kyun

Samrat:bhai ap koh joh sapne ate hain na…….yeh oon keh bare mein hai

Mayank gets angry

Mayank:tujhe kya lagta hai keh main pagal ho gaya hoon………..ya main apne senses mein nahi hoon

Samrat:bhai……………….aisi koi baat nahi hai

Mayank:aisi hi baat hai samrat……..tujhe lag raha hai keh tera bhai pagal ho chukka hai….day dreaming karta hai haina

Samrat:bhai aik baar meri baat toh......................(mayank interupts)

mayank:ab kehne aur sune ke liye kuch nahi raha samrat ab sab khatam ho gaya ab tu apne raste aur mein apne raste

mayank leaves

samrat in his mind:kya ghalat socha tha maine kyun kia bhai ne aisa mere saath main toh bas bhai ki mental stress kam karna chahta tha main ......leikin phir bhi main aik baar ja kar bhai se maafi mangu ga kyunke bhai disturbed hai na aur abhi maa bhi nahi hai unn ka khayal rakhne ke liye............aur agar bhai zyada stress le ge toh unhe aasthama ka attack ho sakta hai na phir se iss liye main mai mangu ga(awww how sweet of him😃)

now cut to adhiraj's cabin

suhani is crying

adhiraj:suhani please rona bandh karo bayis saal pehle jo kuch bhi hua ............woh ham mein se koi nahi chahta tha magar uss hadse ko koi nahi rok paya na

suhani:leikin aisa hamare saath hi kyun hua.......................dia benji uday mayank nupur gunjan bhai.................sab.............sab ham se itne door ho gaye

(and flashback starts)

dia and benji hugging eachother

dia:benji aj mein bohot khush hoon kal hamari graduation bhi hai aur hamari engagement bhi hai na

benji:main bhi bohot khush hoon aur phir uske baad meri aur tumhari aur samrat aur gunjan ki shaadi aik hi mandap mein hogi na............i am soo damn excited

dia:main bhi................leikin benji....mujhe kuch ajeeb si feeling aa rahi hai jaise kuch ghalat hone wala hai aisa lag raha hai keh kuch kahania adhuri reh jaygi

benji:kabhi bhi koi kahani adhuri nahi rehte aik na aik din woh kahani kisi na kisi roop mein poori zarur hoti hai

dia:kahi hamari kahani bhi toh.............(benji puts a finger on her mouth)

benji:dia relax dont worry hamari kahani iss janam mein nahi toh agle janam mein toh zarur poori ho jayegi(mark his words)

and now cut to where the whole gang is sitting together in the cafe

and an anouncment:saaf dhan iss college par terorists ne kabza kar lia hai sab koh saaf dhan kia ja raha hai keh woh jaldi se assembly hall mein ikathe ho jaye

nupur:kya .....................terorists(she starts crying)

and dia and gunjan too

samrat:guys.......roh mat dekhna aj ham college se ghar bhi jayge dia aur benji ki engagement bhi hogi aur hamsab dance bhi karen ge(poor guy)

and suddenly a person puts pistol on his back

the person:ghair lo in sab koh

samrat:leikin ap sab hain kon

the person:beta ham sab wohi hain jin keh baare mein yeh ailan ho rahe hain

mayank:matlab terorists.........

person:han..........pakad lo isko

they hold mayank

person:ab tum sab chup chap yahan se jao warna tumhe bhi(he puts a gun on mayank's forehead)

samrat:nahi.........ham nahi jayen ge

mayank:samrat pagal mat bano tum sab jao

benji:mayank tum ne soch bhi kaise liya keh tumhe iss hall mein ham chod kar chalen jayn ge

uday:han mayank ham yahin rahe ge

nupur:uday bhaiya please mayank ko bachao na

mayank:nupur tum meri fiker na karo main theek hoon benji nupur dia aur gunjan koh yahan se le jao

dia:nahi ham nahi jayen ge

mayank:please guys meri khatir aisa mat karo

gunjan:nahi jiju ham sab yahi hain tumhare paas

the terorist:jate ho ke main is ko

samrat:acha theek hai ham ja rahe hain leikin tumhe aik wada karna hoga keh tum mayank koh nuksaan nahi phonchao ge

samrat slowly starts walking towards him

terorist:main kehta hoon wahi ruk ja mein keh raha hoon wahi rook ja warna main goli chala doon ga

and he shoots but

gunjan comes in front of samrat

and gunjan gets shot

everyone screams:gunjan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gunjan falls to the ground

samrat now runs towards the terorist but terorist again shoots and now sammy

now everyone runs towards them

but the terorist now shoots dia

dia screams

benji:dia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nupur runs towards dia and then the terorist again shoots and now nupur

OMG slowly slowly the whole gang

now benji:teri toh main

he shoots benji too

benji too falls to the ground now mayank in full temper hits the terorist and thn the terorist too shoots mayank and uday and runs away😭

just emagine guys the gang which used to do masti in the cantin were dying in the same place

everyone trying to hold eachothers hand but everyone just diessssssss😭😭😭😭😭

flashback ends

suhani:aur uss din college ki coolest gang ka end hogaya 😭

they dont know that nupur is standing on the door listening all this and crying

adhiraj:leikin ajeeb baat yeh hai shakal chod kar in sab ke naam bhi bilkul same hai na

now adhiraj notices that nupur is standing their

adhiraj:arre miss nupur vardhan ap yahan kya kar rahi hain aur ap roh kyun rahi hain









ok guys that was an end to part 3

hope u liked it

all my pm listers i tell u kehjab apko pm milta hai i get to know maine woh option activate ki hai so dont try to cheat me

precap:mayank and samrat have a fight again

sajan mayur and benia meet again and frndships start

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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserved will edit later
*edit*
awesomeeeeeeeee updt loved it aww everyone got shot contine soon n thanx 4 the pm
Edited by -mysterygirl- - 15 years ago

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