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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

Rocking part loved the way you prottryed love and concern of both brother, Mayank having special viral fever which spreads to guys only not to girls🤣. Loved it but it was very short do update longeeeer part next time😳

ya i know yaar but i was ill

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Asmara.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Awesome.......

Continue soon........

And thnks for the pm.........

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nerdndproud

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

awesome.................👏👏 nd get well soon.

Edited by ridi_onasis - 15 years ago

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#94

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis
awesome.................👏👏 nd get well soon.

thank u soooo much yaar

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RapChick101

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

oh! a nice ff.......
plz add me to ur pm list!
nd cont soon!:)

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Aliya Singh Kapoor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

lovely update

wanna read the nxt part

mayu wanna know if gunji fallin for him and Sammy has fever

do update asap

thnx for the pm

love

sneha

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RICHA

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

heyyyy awwwsum update
its realy vryyy interstng
cont soooon
n thnx 4 d pm

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: annie98
ya i know yaar but i was ill

Oh sorry get well soon

😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

hey guys here is the fifth part
sorry for disappointing u🥺 with the last one coz i wrote a smaller one
actually i was ill
but no prob today i will write a bigger one😃

so lets come to the fifth part
so now its sayank's house
samrat is trying to wake mayank for the college
and mayank is taling while he is asleep
mayank:arre wah tia aj direct mere room mein ................chalo ab aa hi gayi ho toh mere paas betho na please
he holds samrat's hand
and says
mayank:arre meri basanti yeh gabar jaise haat kyun hai tumhare😆
samrat:bhai......utho ham college keh liye late ho rahe hain
mayank:thats not fair bat nahi karni toh kam se kam bhai toh na bulao tia😆
samrat:bhai main hoon samrat
mayank wakes
mayank:kya hua itni subah subah kyun bula rahe ho
samrat:bhai ham college keh liye late ho rahe hain
mayank:arre tere haath itni garam kyun hain
samrat:kuch nahi bhai aise hi
mayank checks his forehead
mayank:samrat............tujhe toh kitna tez bukhar hai
samrat:arre bhai aisa kuch nahi hai ap ja kar tayar ho jao
samrat tries to get up
but mayank pulls him back
mayank:bas......................ab agar tu yahan se hila toh phir apni khair manana
samrat:bhai......please.........mujhe college jana hai
mayank:kyun
samrat:woh gunjan
mayank:wah wah ...........mera bhai kitna badal gaya hai na pehle main college larkion ki wajah se jata tha leikin ab tu bhi
samrat:aisi koi baat nahi hai......aj mein usse college drop karne wala tha
mayank:acha toh baat yahan tak pohonch gayi aur mujhe pata tak nahi
samrat:bhai aisi koi baat nahi
mayank:leikin joh bhi ho aj teri tabyet kharab hai aur tu college nahi jayega
samrat:please bhai
mayank puts a themometer in his mouth
mayank:ab agar tu ya yeh thermometer apni jagah se hille toh phir dekhna
now samrat is silent
after sometime mayank takes is out
mayank reads it and says
mayank:abbe chote tujh par toh omlet ban sakti hai😆
samrat:mazak chodo bhai aur patao kitna hai
mayank:103
and suddenly takes his phone out
mayank snatches it
mayank:abe tujhe itna tez bukhar hai aur tu mobile use kare ga?
samrat:bhai woh...................
mayank :nahi aj tera phone mere paas rahe ga............ ab mein ja raha hoon ramu kaka koh soup banane ke liye kehta hoon aur tu iss bed se agr hila toh dekhna........aur main doctor koh bhi phone karta hoon
samrat:magar bhai.........
mayank:agr magar kuch nahi aur ab tu soh jayega bas......
samrat:ok bhai
mayank comes out of the room
and samrat's phone ring
mayank:ab yeh chote keh phone par kiska hone a gaya yaar?
he picks the phone
its benji
benji:samrat yaar kahan hai tu college kyun nahi aya(gunjan is standing with benji)
mayank:hi benji main mayank
benji:oh mayank..........yaar kahan ho tum log collee kyun nahi aye
mayank:yaar woh aj main samrat college nahi aaa sakte
benji:par kyun
mayank:yaar woh samrat koh bohot tez bukhar hai aur main uska khayal rakh raha hoon
mayank in his mind:bada maza aye agar benji gunjan koh bata deh aur woh yahan aa jaye mujhe bhi pata lag jaye ga keh usse samrat ki kitni fiker hai
benji:oh yaar tu samrat ka khayal rakhna aur agar kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat hui toh mujhe bula lena
mayank;thnx yaar
benji:bye
mayank:bye
ok now cut to the canteen
where the whole gang is sitting together
gunjan:kya samrat koh bukhar hai...........
benji:han meri mayank se baat hui thi
nupur:toh phir tumhe nahi lagta keh hammein uske ghar ja kar pata karna chahiye
uday:gud idea
dia:toh chalo chalte hain
benji:kya kamaal ka idea dia hai morena express ne
nupur:yeh tum sab koh ho kya gaya hai yaar koi mujhe nupur bhushan bula raha hai toh koi morena express
benji:i am sorry nupur magar mujhe khud nahi pata keh maine tumhe yeh kyun bulaya
nupur:its ok magar agli baar nahi
uday:ab ham unke ghar chalein
dia:ok
now cut to sayank house
where doctor is examining samrat
after he examines
doctor:ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai mamuli sa bukhar hai yeh kuch dawaiyan hai yeh doh din tak lete rahiye aur doh din complete bed rest...................ok?
samrat:ok doctor
mayank:chaliye doctor main apko bahar tak chod deta hoon
doctor:chaliye
now wen doctor leaves
the door bell rings
mayank:ab kon a gaya yar
mayank opens the door
and he sees everyone standing
mayank:arre tum sab yahan
nupur:kyun entry banned hai
mayank:nahi nahi ao na..........waise tum sab yahan kya kar rahe ho
gunjan:samrat kaisa hai ab
maynk:usse doctor ne aaram karne ke liye kaha hai iss liye woh soh raha hai
gunjan:oh toh ham sab yahin baithte hain
mayank:han han ao na
now everyone is in the lounge
nupur:waise mayank ab tumhari tabyet kaisi hai😳
mayank:kyun meri tabyet ko kya hoga
nupur:bhool gaye kal tumhe bhi fever tha na...........ab kaise ho
mayank:oh ab main theek hoon
nupur smiles
mayank to himself:hansi toh phansi
nupur:kon phansi
mayank:woh mujhe apni bachpan ki picnic yaad a gayi uss mein maine apne fishing rod se bohot fishes phasayi thi
nupur:oh mujhe laga keh tum
mayank:flirt kar raha hoon......
nupur:maine aisa kab kaha
mayank:leikin tumhari ankhon ne keh dia
nupur:kyun ..............tum eye specialist ho kya?😆
mayank:nahi toh
nupur:toh tumhe kaise pata
mayank:aise hi
now cut to samrat's room
samrat:yeh bahir se itna shor kyun aa raha hai ..............kahin bhai neh larkion koh ghar toh nahi bula liya.................
samrat goes out
and sees everyone there
samrat:are tum sab yahan
nupur:samrat..........ab tabyet kaisi hai tumhari
samrat:ab mein better feel kar raha hoon
gunjan:toh ham sab kamre mein bhi aa sakte the na tum bahar kyun aye tumhe bukhar hai na
samrat:kuch nahi hota
mayank:bohot kuch hota hai samrat chalo ander ja kar leti
samrat:par bhai
maynk:par var kuch nahi.......tu ander leit sab ander aa rahe hain haina guys
benji:han......akhir dost hote kis liye hain
now everyone is in samrat's room
mayank:samrat tune apni dawai kha li?
samrat:nahi bhai woh.........(gunjan interupts)
gunjan:kyun samrat yeh tumhare liye zaruri hai na apni health keh saath toh compromise mat karo
mayank to himself
mayank:kya baat hai chote ki toh nikal padi

ok guys this was my mehnat
please do rate and comment
precap:gunjan taking care of samrat
everyone feeling love for eachother

thanks for reading

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#100

Wonderful part really loved it now role reversal mayank is taking care of sam and sam is desperate to go to college why not afterall he had to drop his chashmish to college really lovely part loved the canteen scene and mayur bickering
Eagerly waiting for next part chashmish khayal rakegi to sammy jaldi thik ho hi jaayega and waiting for their love stories to begin😳 Continue soon

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