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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
it's ok write it when you feel better 😆
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its ok..plz write when feel good
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sorry for the wait

heres the next part

Part69

Day 2

Kripa hires a man to look after mishti and josh and capture their conversation in a video cam and return her after 3 days. And goes to find wat she can do more. She goes to a club where josh use to go and sees josh was there with the watchman of her old (angad's) home and was having a bundle of money and having bear.

J: mil gaye puray paise ab apna muun band rakna

W: shukriya.

J: bloody poor

K (to herself): muun to tumhein kholna hi hoga by hook or by crook…..

She inquires about him and gets to his home. His wife opens the door.

K: namast

Watchman's wife- sonali = S

S: namast. Main ne ap ko pehchaana nahi.

K: apke pati ……..mere ghar pe nokri karte thay

S: jee par unhon ne naukri chod di hai

K: kyun

S: wo……

From behind the same watchman came.

K: tum ne naukri kyun chod di

W: pasand nahi thi

K: achanak 3 saal baad kaise pasand nahi ayee

W: wo

K: bachon ki padhayee ke paise bhi nahi honge

W: ji mushki;l hoti hai par

K: jhoot tumne hi jhoot bol kar meri Zindagi kharab ki hai ab yeh chote chote bache apne baap ko police ke hawale hote hue dekhein ge.

W: nahi memsaab

K: yeh sab to hona hi hai.

W: main sab sach bata doon ga par plz

K: aise nahi mere hesaab se…..

She says him to call josh at a non public place and tells him to ask for more money to keep his mouth shut.

Kripa hides behind a tree and sees the scene amnd records it in a movie camera

W: sahib memsahib ko mujh par shaq hogaye hai unhon ne aur paise dene ka bhi kaha tha. Par agar aap mujhe paise den to main muun band rakh sakta hoon

J: theek hai. yeh lo

Kripa smiles and says step two accomplished

Day 3

Kripa meets josh at hospital and as kripa hired a spy to keep eye on josh he was capturing their conversation as well.

J: u here everything is ok

K: nothing

J: u can tell

K: get off my way

J: plz tell me

K: u really wants to know (tells a thing)

J: wat

K: y u r getting shocked. Greet me.

Josh leaves frown….. Kripa gets in tears.

Day 4

Kripa goes to photo studio and checks out the fake pix of josh and her and gets the real picture and as a proof she makes some pix using angad's face wid other gals.

Day 5

She sees all the work done by her and makes a CD to present she sees the part of she was talking to josh and cuts that.

K: I won't tell angad.

Preview: truth is in front of angad he has to make decision
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
Awwwwww i hoope ur feeling better now. I just read the last two parts. Awesome job!!! 👏 👏 👏 It's nothing like Ekta's work. 😆 😉 😃

Continue when u can 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: PopPrincess

Awwwwww i hoope ur feeling better now. I just read the last two parts. Awesome job!!! 👏 👏 👏 It's nothing like Ekta's work. 😆 😉 😃

Continue when u can 😊

i m much better now and may be send a part today

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Posted: 19 years ago
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cont soon soon soon
please
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part 70

kripa goes to angad's home and calls mishti and josh there.

A: tum yahan kyun ayee ho, Koi naya natak hai kia

K: nahi kissi ke natak se parda uthna hai

Kripa takes the remotes and plays the recordings.


1. audio of mishti and kripa's conversation
2. video of josh and watch man
3. * &nb sp; * josh and mishti discussing plan.
4. fake pictures of angad with and written docs

K: dekh lia ab yakeen aya.

A: kripa plz 4give me.

K: no way. I want my conditions to be fulfilled.

A: wat conditions

K: divorce papers signed by u first.

A: I can't I wont give u divorce I lo……

K: hold on I want that u promised and hope u won't break it.

A: if u were wanting divorce so y u have cleared the misunderstandings

K: I just want to proof myself innocent and when I am done I want the divorce

Angad comes closer to her and hugs her desperately. Kripa wants to push him away but her love was not letting her do that. But her anger was also not letting her to hug him back.

Angad kisses her like crazy and then lets her go.

A: see u don't push me out. Coz u love me.

K: I never refused that I don't love u but I can't live wid u.

A: y???

K: just becoz I can't trust u again

A: I promise I won't do it again. Even if god will came and say me.

K: just some point to say. U don't mean this. U will believe the person has already hurt u. a person who was ur and mine enemy. Sorry but I can't forgive u.

A: y not. I won't let u go.

He goes closer to kripa and kisses her and kripa pushes him.

K: don't come closer to me.

A: I will

K: angad plz…………

And comes closer to kripa but before he can even touch kripa she screams and faints in angad's arms.

A: kripaaaaa

He carries her to his room and calls doctor. He rubs her hand and checks her temperature but she was fine.

Doctor comes and checks her. He makes a happy face.

D: congratz Mr. Khanna u r going to be father, even its 2 month.

A: wat….. It's a gr8 pleasure for me. Thanks.

D: don't thank me thank ur wife. And stay her away from stress. Congrats once again.

Angad pays the doctor and comes back to kripa sees her wid full love and affection. He leans towards her and then kisses her cheek, then her neck, her forehead and then her lips. Kripa opens her eyes and which were wide open. She sits.

K: yeh kia kar rahe thay tum.

A: leave that….. u know wat u r going to b mother of my child

And he hugs her.

K: I know

A: wat…. Y didn't u told me earlier.

K: becoz I didn't want my child suffer from ur blames. And have a father who is not a good human.

A: enough even I wudn't reacted like this if u told me. I know wat relation which relation we were having….. now I m not gonna let u go.

K: wat. U can't stop me.

A: try me

She walks to the door and angad closes the door and locks it wid a key.

K: gimme that key.

A: no

K: I will

A: u will wat?

K: not eat….. and it will be bad 4 me and the child.

A: ok stay here a night.

K: never.

A: ok then stay rest of ur life in this bedroom wid me.

K: u will divorce me after that…..

A: will think

K: yes or no

A: may be

K: ok I will stay be only 4 a night now let me out of this room.

A: y u have to take rest. And now u will not cum to office. After giving birth u can and I will stay at home wid my little kid.

K: open eye dreaming is a bad habit.

A: planning is not.

K: I will stay only tonight. Not even a day more.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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continue soon plzzz its maddd awesome... i luv da babiies
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful parts
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