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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
Lovely parts!!! 👏 👏 👏 It's so hard to wait for the next part 😭 😭 😭 Btw plz don't make Mishty and Josh get in the way of A-K's relationship. 😭 😭 😭 I JUST CAN'T STAND MISHTY 😡 😡😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
very nice
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👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
awwww plz continue soon 👍🏼 👍🏼 😎
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
i ll post it either today or 2morrow
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
part 66

K: angad tum jao office main ghar par sahi hoon

A: kripa…. Tum aisi halat main kaise chod jaoon

K: kuch problem hui to call kar loon gi naa.

A: paka

K: paka

A: theek hai to main jata hoon par khaana kha lena. Spicy mat khaana. Aur……..

K: bas bas main samjh gayee ab jao

Angad leaves 4 office and josh has appointed a undercover agent to send the info.


AGENT: Sir Mr. Angad abhi abhi akele bahar gaye hain.

J: ok

Cuts the fone

J: wow wat a news. Chalo kripa tumhari shaadi tootne ki baari aa gayee.

Josh didn't goes to office. In evening, josh comes at Khanna Mansion and bribes the watchman.

When angad was back he sees josh coming out of the house. Angad was shocked. He sees josh leaving in his car. Angad tries to catch him but he was fast enough to escape.

Angad goes to the watchman and….

A: yeh yahan kia kar raha tha.

W: sir wo…..

A: meri ijazat ke bagair kyon aane dia usse.

W (lies): kripa mam ne kaha tha ke unhein andar aane doon.

A: wat???

Angad was burning wid anger and drives to josh's home.

A (yells): JOSHHHH

J: angad tum yahan,

A: tum mere ghar aa kar kia kar rahe thay.

J: nothing…….

?: main batati hoon.

A: mishti tum

Mishti comes forward and faces angad.

M: haan main, josh tumhare ghar pa kripa ke saath……

J: shut up mishti…….

M: sachai kadvi hi hoti hai…….

A: mishti main sunna chahta hoon…..

M: kehne se to sharam aati hai…. par kuch dekhna zaroor chahoon gi

She spread the fake pics of kripa and josh…….

A: yeh jhute hai. meri kripa

M: wo tumhari thi hi nahi yeh tasveerein jhoot nahi bol rahiin hain. Kripa jhute bol rahii hai

Angad squeezes the neck of Josh.

A: tell me wats the truth……..

J: nothing

A: tell me or I'll kill u……

J: ok

Angad lets him go

J: kripa aur main ek doosre se bohat pyaar karte hain….. we r also having relations

A: chalo mere ghar

Angad takes him to his home….. as kripa sees angad she runs to him and hugs him.

K(still hugging): where were u…. itni der se tumhara Intezaar kar rahi thi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
Lovely part 👏 👏 👏 plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
Part 67

Angad pulls her apart and looks at her with anger.

A: tumhare liye ek surprise hai.

K: kaun sa

Angad points to josh.

K: is it surprise or shock.

A: shock….. shock to tumne mujhe dia hai……

K: main ne kia kiya hai

A: mujhe Dhoka dia hai….. josh kaho jo tumne mujhe kaha….

K: us ne kaha aur tumne maan lia kia pyaar hai tumhara….. wow…..

A: is par t shayad yakeen nahi karta par tasveeron par na chahte hue bhi yakeen karna pada….

K: kaisi tasveerien

A: dekhna chahti ho yeh dekho.

He spread the pics on the table and kripa was even more shocked looking at those pics

K: yeh jhoot hai….. main…

A: BAS… sab jhoot hai sirf tum achi ho hai na…..

K: anga……

A: sssshhhhh bohat bura kia tumne mere saath tum mere pyaar ki haqdaar na hi ho na hi ho gi. Kissi aur se saath rishtaaa……

K: ENOUGH…….. Chup chap sun rahi hoon is ka hargiz yeh matlab nahi ke tumhare Mann main jo aye tum wo bolo……… theek kaha tumne I m not able to get ur love. But I have right to get more love….. u think that love is being together but 4 me love is to trust….. I have shown my love by trusting u on that incident.

A: oh to shayad wo bhi tumne plan ki tha….. ke main us incident ko yaad rakh kar tumhein maaf kar dun.

K: maaf tum karo ge mujhe…… main ne Koi galati nahi ki and one more thing I m leaving this house.

A: sure…… nobody will be there to stop u….. and leave the mangalsutar here and rub ur sindoor and wait 4 divorce papers.

K: in 5 days I will proof myself guiltless and if I cud not so I will give u ur everything back i.e. mangalsutar sindoor and give u divorce and if I will be succeeded in proving myself innocent then…… u will divorce.

A: no problem 4 me. Exactly after 5 days u have to give divorce papers…… be ready….

K: its ur time to be ready coz truth can't be vanished…. Got that Mr. Angad Khanna

She packs her stuff and leaves the house giving a glance of sadness to it.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
wow nice twist, 👏 👏 👏 anyways continue soon. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
Part 68

Kripa leaves the house and goes to her home. She reaches her home and her aren't becomes shocked by her arrival in a condition of a widow. She hugged her mother and cried. She told them all matter and that she hates angad.

S: kripa hum angad se baat…..

K: nahi papa aap us se Koi baat nahi karein ge. Aur ab humare rishte par shak kar ke usne is riste ko khatam kar dia hai ab mera yehi maksad hai ke main apne aap ko be gunaah sabit karun.

S: par beta…….

G: aap isse aur kuch mat kahiye yeh khud samjhdaar hai. (to kripa) beta bohat raat ho chuki hai jao so jao.

K: hmmm

Kripa goes to her room and thinks how to prove the truth. She sat on her bed and sees a magazine she just takes it. She turns the pages and sees a story and reads it.

K: got that, main yeh to janti hoon ke josh ne yeh sab plan kia hai aur agar usne yeh sab kia hai to zaroor yeh baat kissi ko batane jata hoga aur agar nahi to phir main us ka muun apne samne khulvaoon gi………

Day1

Next day she went to the beach 4 relaxation. She bumps to some1. he was angad.

A: tum…….

K: wow…. Wat a co-incidence hum dono 5 din pehle mil gaye. Ache scenes dekh kar dil ko thandak mili thi ke tumhein dekh kar……. Just forget it.

A: forget how cud I 5 day aren't enough to make fake evidences kripa.

K: I don't wanna lose my time on u. just get out of my site.

She leaves from there and sits on a bench. Someone just pats her shoulder. It was josh

K: tum yahan aaj ka din shayad bohat bura hai. pehle angad phir rum. Gwaaaaaaddddd

J: plz kripa . main ne kuch nahi kaha angad se bas mishti ke kehne par sab maan kar us ne mujh par bhio haath uthaya. Tumhari help kar ke main humdono par se wo daag mita doonga.

K: ho gaya……. Tum se na hi mujhe Koi help chahiye aur na hi Koi sympathy just leave.

Josh leaves and after a while mishti comes up.

K: uuuuuuuuuuuuuuffffffff…… tum bhi aas paros ke logon ko bhi bula lo……. Jerk

M: bohat hoshiyaar samjhti ho na.

K: kia matlab

M: dun fool me….. kuch nahi kar pao gi tum arre Koi sabot bhi nahi mile ga.

K: aise keh rahi ho jaise sab tumne kia hai.

M: haan main ne hi kia hai…….. ab kia karogi tum. roti rahogi Zindagi bhar. (and grins)

Mishti leaves wid leaving her voice it kripa's recorder and kripa looks at tape recorder and smiles and says first step.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
haila!kripa is tht smart,i never knew tht 😆 .anyways nice part.

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