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a duke and a duchess story
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Suddenly riddhym pulled her close to him and slightly touched
her lips!!!………!!!.and it made riddhima completely speechless!!!
…..riddhym sucked her tears with his lips!!...riddhima lost her voice !!!!...what's happened!!...riddhym ne ye kya kiya!!!...riddhym whispered in her ears…..."mai hoon na….i will be always with u my angel!"……and in a minute….she hugged riddhym tightly!!!……mano ushe sabse bara sahara mill gaya ho!!!!……..

Feer saari raat riddhym ushke paas hi tha….ushe barey pyar se
khana khilaya….wo bahut tired thi…….…pata nahi kab riddhym
ki baten sunte sunte ushe need lag gayi but riddhym ushke paas
hi baitha raha….subah jab need khuli toh riddhym ja chukka
tha….ek massage chorkar ushke naam…"ab tumhara naam mere
saath jur gaya hai…tum ab akeli nahi ho,mai her pal tumhare
saath hun……apne papa ka sapna pura karo riddhima….."I will
be always with u"……….



...

Riddhima ne mallick medical college mein admission le li thi….riddhym ushi college mein 4th year mein tha…wah kabhi bhi wo milne ki koshish nahi karta….but riddhima janti thi ki wo riddhima ki saari news muskaan se leta rahta……

Feer riddhym ka INTERNSHIP complete ho gaya aur wo PG ke liye papa ke paas ja raha tha……..jaane se pahle wo riddhima se ushke ghar per milne aaya tha…..

Riddhym :"angel,mai 3 years ke liye ja raha hun….papa ki tabiyat thik nahi rahti…mai jaunga to study ke saath saath unhe business mein kuch help bhi kar sakunga……aur feer soch raha hun papa ko bhi lekar chala aaoonga…….

Riddhima(looking at the ground) :" hmmm……..

Riddhym: "aaj bhi kuch nahi kahogi?...mujhe rokogi nahi……

Riddhima : "nahi…tumhe apne papa ke paas jana chahiye………

Riddhym :" saari life dusron ke bare mein hi sochogi….ok…but aaoonga toh sanjiwani mein join karoonga….as a senior
doctor……

Riddhima;" hmmm……

Riddhym :" aur mai jahan bhi rahun,tumhare saath hun…chahe kitni bhi bari mushibat aaye…darna mat…
.
Riddhima :" hmmm……

Riddhym (smiling): ja raha hun…ek baar galey nahi milogi…..

**Riddhima lifted her eyelids only for one second ,blushed and again looked at the ground**…….

Riddhym(smiled) :" bush tumhari ishi sharmane ki ada per mai mar mita hun angel……ok..but meri ek request rakhogi..plz…..
Riddhima :" kya?...

Riddhym ;" mai ek kangan laya tha ..tumhare liye…meri ma ka kangan hain ye….bush ek baar tumhare hathon mein dekhna chahta hun….plz……

Riddhima closed her eyes……..riddhym slipped the kangan in her hand and touched it softly with his lips!………

Riddhima shievers!!!...

Riddhym :" bash!ab mai chain se ja paunga…..chahe mere jaane ke baad ishe utar dena angel…but jish din mai wapus aaunga…ishe pahankar mujhse milna….jish tarah apne pyar ko chorker ja raha hun…ushi tarah wo mujhe wapus miley!...


Wah apne dill ko tatolti hai….kya wo riddhym se pyar karti thi ?...shayad haan ya nahi!!...kya wo ush umra(age) mein pyar ko samajhti thi?...pata nahi!...ushe riddhym apni life ka ek bara sahara laga tha...jo ushke papa ke sapno ko pura karne mein saath dey…..toh feer ush raat kya hua tha!!...shayad ek kamjor pal tha..jab ushe jeene ke liye ek sahara chaiye tha….but baad mein bhi riddhym ko ushne' Na'..keun nahi kaha?...keunki riddhym ne toh ushe kabhi propose kiya hi nahi….ushne toh riddhimna per sidha apna haq jata diya tha…uska saath dene ka haq…uske sapno ko pura karne ka haq…ushe pyar karne ka haq…………


Lekin riddhym na hota toh shayad papa ke jaane ke baad wo sambhal hi nahi paati….feer aaj wo riddhym ko kaise bhul jaaye!...uske ahsaano ka badla kya wo ish tarah chukayegi?...ushe muskan ne bataya ki riddhym ke papa ki death ho gayi hai…toh ab jab wo akela hai aur riddhima ka saath chahiye..to wo mana kar dey?...



Aur arman!!..jo ushe pagalon ki tarah chahta hai!!..usko kya kahegi?...aur wo khud kya arman ke bina ji payegi!!...nahi! kabhi nahi! Ab usse ek pal bhi doori sochtey hi riddhima ki jaan jaane lagti hai….but riddhym kya uski baten samajh payega!..wo maan lega!!..but wo kahegi bhi kaise!!..kya kahegi!!...ki riddhym ab mai arman se pyar karne lagi hun…kya ye baat usey kahna itna aasan hai,jisne usey sapne dekhna sikhaya!sahara diya! !!…

Toh kya riddhima ko uske ahsaano ka badla chukana chahiye!..shayad haan!...but armaan!!..arman toh shayad pagal ho jayega!..ushe toh gusse mein kuch bhi hosh nahi rahta…shayad apni jaan hi de dey!….aur kya wo apne ish pagal premi ko bhulkar riddhym ke saath whole life gujar sakegi!!..nahi …wo armaan ke bina nahi ji sakti….
"love you armaan…riddhym mera kal tha but tum mere aaj ho…wo mera sahara tha but tum meri jindagi ho…mera sapna ho…maine kabhi bhi riddhym ka intjaar nahi kiya…but tumhara her pal mujhe intjaar rahta hai…tumhare deewanepan ka mai her pal intjaar karti hun
arman..…..haan arman!!mai tumse pyar karti hun !….shayad mai tab pyar ka meaning hi nahi samajhti thi…but aaj samajhti hun….pyar means jindagi…aur tum hi meri jindagi ho!!!!……


…………………………………


Mobile ne feer se bajna start kar diya tha….arman tha…bahut jyada tensed!!...wo bahut der se call kar raha tha….everyday night ko ish time dono kaafi der tak baat karte hain…to kya riddhima jyada beemar hai?...

Arman (worriedly): "kya hua duck….so gayi thi kya?...maine disturb kiya kya?...

Riddhima :" nahi arman…

Arman :" papa ko bataya ki tum beemar ho?...papa ab buddhe ho gayen hain…mujhe kaha mai riddhima beti ka khyal rakhunga…aur unhe toh pata bhi nahi tum beemar ho……..

Riddhima :" hey bhagwan! Tumne papa ko bataya kya?...
.
Arman : "yes…maine papa ko khub daant pilayi…ki apni bahoo ka dhyan bhi nahi rakhte….

Riddhima(smiling):" tum meri life mein aane se pahle wo hi mera dhyan rakhte they arman…jara si beemari ki baat sunte hi bhage –bhage jatey they….mujhe dekhne…..


Arman : "hmmm….keun…aur koi bhi aata tha kya bhaga bhaga ….mere jaisa koi tumhara aashiq!!...

Riddhima: " tumhare jaisa pagal ashiq duniya mein ek hi hai….arman…I am very tired….

Arman : "ok…kuch der mein papa ghar pahunch jayenge….saath mein atul,muskan aur Rahul….
.
Riddhima(lovingly) :" sabko bata diya?...pagal……...
Arman: "duck…aaj ek gana gane ka mun kar raha tha….dono sath mein….gaun?...mera saath dogi na?...

Riddhima:" of course arman….chalo tum start karo…..……

Arman started to sing …………

Arman (kissing the mobile): hmmm…(song)

Kuch khwaab dekhe hain,
kuch rang soche hain
ab maine kal apne,
tere sang soche hain
is raah mein jab bhi,
tu saath hoti hai
kisson ke panno si,
har baat hoti hai...
rooh jo hui meri fida,
toh pal mein uthi koi sada
ke dil se hua juda juda,
toota main is tarah
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka,
ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka,
ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua...



Riddhima was shocked!!!...yahi song!!...ishi song ko ush raat riddhym ne uske liye gaya tha!!…aur usne bhi riddhym ka saath diya tha….ye kya ho raha hai uske saath!!...kya bhagwanji ko maza aata hai,uski test lene mein!!!...



Flashback ---that night

Riddhym(held riddhima's hand and made her to sit on the bed): " angel…tum rotey hue bilkul bhi achchi nahi lagti ho….i hate ur crying face….tum muskurati,gungunati achchi lagti ho…..chalo rona aaj se bhul jao…aur abhi mujhe apni sweet voice mein ek song sunao…
.
Riddhima (sighed):" mai gana bhul gayi hun riddhym…….
.
Riddhym(gently caressed her hair):" ok..mai gaunga aur tum mera saath dena…dogi na…..

Riddhima( nodded her head):" I will try………koshish karungi….

Riddhym (kissed her hand): hmmm…….(song)


Kuch khwaab dekhe hain,
kuch rang soche hain
ab maine kal apne,
tere sang soche hain
is raah mein jab bhi,
tu saath hoti hai
kisson ke panno si,
har baat hoti hai
rooh jo hui meri fida,
toh pal mein uthi koi sada
ke dil se hua juda juda,
toota main is tarah
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka,
ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka,
ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua...


(riddhima smiled )...hmmm...

tere mudne se suraj udh gaya,
teri roshni ke saaye mein
main dhoop si khili...
mera aasman bhi chhota pad gaya
mujhe jab se hai baahon mein
teri panah mili
woh thehri teri ada ada,
ke rukh bhi gaya mera khuda
toh mujhpe yeh asar hua,
toota main is tarah
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka,
ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka,
ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua
kuch khwaab dekhe hain,
kuch rang soche hain
ab maine kal apne

teri khushbu mein
bheeghe khat mile,
tere rang ki syaahi se
likhe, padhe sune
teri baaton ke woh saare silsile
meri dil ki kahani si sune kahin bune


riddhym (caressing her locks)...

main kar na sakun bayaan bayaan,
ke chup si hui meri zubaan
yeh dil mehmaan hua hua,
toota main is tara
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka,
ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka,
ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua

kuch khwaab dekhe hain
, kuch rang soche hain
ab maine kal apne,
tere sang soche hain
is raah mein jab bhi,
tu saath hoti hai
kisson ke panno si,
har baat hoti hai
rooh jo hui meri fida,
toh pal mein uthi koi sada
ke dil se hua juda juda,
toota main is tarah
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka
, ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua
sadka kiya yoon ishq ka,
ke sar jhuka jahan deedar hua...


>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Flashback end


Arman : "duck…so gayi kya?...

Riddhima : "aan!!...nahi toh!!...

Arman : "tumne mera saath nahi diya?...……
Riddhima (with a choked voice): " tum jaldi wapus aa jao arman…feer tum jo kahoge mai karungi…….herdam tumhara saath dungi…..

Arman (mischieviously):" oyye hoyye!!...jo kahunga!!…..promise?...

Riddhima :" haan promise…..tum jo kahoge…..

Arman (overwhelming):" bush kuch deen ki duri mein hi itna ghabra gayi?...mai jaldi hi tumhare paas aa jaunga duck….aur feer itna pyar karunga ki tum saare purani baatein…apne saare pain bhul jaogi…..

Riddhima(mumbled): mai bhulna chahti hun arman….mai sirf tumhe yaad rakhna chahti hun…..
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love u all
punam


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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww me first
loved it punam
u rockkk seriously
n loved even riddhym's part with ridhima 😍😍😍
n yipeee 1st one to comment

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Posted: 14 years ago

woooww di...

u seriously rocked..

simply amazing part...

loved it...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey di🤗
hw r u di?
awesome part di👏👏⭐️
loved it so so so much
loved Armaan n ridz phn convo so much
cn't wait nxt part
thanks for pm
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
amazing one...
m glad dat riddhima iz clear bout her feelings...der won't b any confusions
n even more glad dat she luvs armaan
cont soon
tc
shaaz
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey punam awesome part dear ...👏👏
loved it sooo much
waiting eagerly for next part
thanks for pm
plz continue soon
Edited by Rapunzzel - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update.pleas continue it soon.thanks for pm.

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