Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 88

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Posted: 14 years ago
aww so cute
geet's new tutor is good i hope
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Cho Chweet....... 👏 👏 👏 ...... Loved it.....
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hayeeeeeeeeeee....😳
beautiful update....
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update soon yaarr...do add me to ur pm list ..😊
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Mrk- send me a buddy request please :)

Updating guys!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: geet.a

Mrk- send me a buddy request please :)


Updating guys!


Geet🤗🤗

sorry for commenting g so late...**please mujhe maaf kardo**

well fabulous updates as usual!!!!!👏👏

and i am just busy with my new SR FF and also Maaneet FF.....

continue very soon!!!!!!!!

and thanks so much for all the pm!!!!

loads of love❤️❤️
mayuri❤️❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay so I lost all that I had written :((

Trying to start again

Geet was very busy with Rajji-Vicky milaap and her studies..
Dadi had her new past-time- she had taken a liking to gardening as well and found a friend in her butler Nakool😆

Vicky and Rajji were extremely confused
Vicky had a crush on Rajji...but nothing more
Rajji had no idea what she felt for Vicky..thought it was friendship as it was unknown to her..those feelings she couldn't describe..that came like pangs..
Vicky really didn't want the M-word to be uttered again and again..He was anyway confused, he didn't want to end up married in such a young age..And Rajji was so young too..

He thought- Bhabhs n Dadi toh meri shaadi karwa kar hi rahengi..but maybe I can use it to my advantage if I include Rajji in a plan

Geet was so busy during the day and tired during the night that she barely spent time with maan.
She missed him so much and knew he was getting annoyed

One day, she was waiting to talk to Rajji, who was here and had finally decided to speak out and talk to her sister

Rajji- Di..woh..I wanted to talk to you about something
Geet smiled internally- haan bolo
Rajji- woh..vicky..

Tring tring..
Geet picked up the house phone

Geet- hello
silence
Geet- aapki chhupi bhi pehchaan sakti hoon maan
Maan- tumhe kaise pata chalta hai?
Geet- aapke ragh ragh se waaqif hoon..
Maan- achha? toh tumhe nahi pata ki aaj kal main...
Geet- aaj kal ...?
Maan- main...
Geet- Maan..Rajji is here..she wants to talk to me about something very important..I'll talk to you once you get home, okay?

Maan- But Geet...Geet? kaat diya? MEra phone kaat diya? ise ho kya gaya hai?
At night she's tired from her busy days..when do I talk to her?

HE felt detatched and lonely..with only the presence of Geet...and not his involvement in her days and nights..He felt so lonely..even Dadima didn't talk much these day being busy with gardening and what not..

He decided to just close his eyes for some time..he felt a warmth on his forehead

He was dreaming..sitting on a cliff jutting out towards the ocean with someone on his lap

Mehek- Hi Daddy!
MAan- my princess...such a long time!
Mehek- aap mujhe bulate hi nahi ho..I'm angry with you.I won't talk
Maan- my baby..if u get angry too..toh mujhse kaun baat karega..aapki mama toh karti nahi hain
MEhek- Daddy it's beautiful na? I love this spot..You can hear the calmness in the stormy sound of the waves...it's beautiful

Suddenly MEhek giggled
MEhek- Aap mama ki shikayat kar rahe ho?
Maan- MAan Singh Khurana...
Mehek- kisi ki shikayat nahi karta..yeah yeah..
Maan- I miss you
Mehek- then call me back
MAan- I do call you..you're here
Mehek smiled sadly- Daddy, I m not here..I wish I could be..But you need to call me..you and mom both
Maan- matlab?
MEhek- I can't tell you more.. IT's for you to figure out.
Bas- Im willing to come back..Waiting for you to call me..
I love you daddy
Kissed his forehead,
He woke up with his heart in his throat, MEhek's words resounding in his ears, mixed with the sound of the waves
He could still feel the salt on his lips
HE decided to go home and talk to Geet

Vicky was roaming the corridor outside Dadi's room waiting for Rajji to pass by
Rajji was waiting for Vicky to go away so she could pass by..

She finally decided to walk past him
Vicky- Rajji..I need to talk
Rajji- uh..abhi nahi..im busy..
Vicky- it's v important

Dadi wondered how important it was, eavesdropping outside her door😆
Dadi- hmm..i wonder..

Vicky- chalo..yahan nahi..

Dadi- oho Vicky bhi na..spoilsport..

Maan reached home and Geet was barely able to focus..she had had to solve those physics numericals, and they were anything but easy or comprehensible

MAan- Geet..I want to talk to you..
Geet- MAan..just hold me..please
MAan- aajao..
ANd he took her in his arms..

Maan- shh...kuchh nahi..kya hua?
Geet- maan..i hate physics..
And she burst into tears

MAan made Geet sleep..saying koi nahi..she had finished all her numericals on time and now she must sleep.
Geet(in sleep)- u said u wanted to talk?
MAan- haan..i love u ..so jaao ab

Geet- hmm..okay..

MAan smiled
MAan-i will talk to her tomorrow...

Thats it guys!

I m so sorry..i had typed it all out n by chance pressed the back button- lost all of it..so hd to retype from scratch

NOTE
Anyhow this is an important note-
GUYS- DO you mind a lot of the waiting that you have to do cuz of my busy schedule?
IF there's problem with it..I think I should end it..and start something when i have the time...otherwise..will keep updating n beechh mein breaks cuz i go for vacations 4 times a year..lol..
So please consider n let me know if waiting is a huge problem!
love to all!

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Posted: 14 years ago
thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
gna read properly now
p.s i knw hw it feels when u spend soo much tym on sumthing n then lose it - very irritating because u lose ur flow of words
ok after reading
firstly ur note - its alll tooo good dear!!! we can wait for u - btw by long how long do u mean because if its just gna stress u out then i guess ending it is a plausible explanation!!!
but yhh this update is soooooo gooooood lool vicky admits his crush at least - bechari rajji is still tooo innocent n omg omg omg mehek - awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hahahahaha how cud maan not understand wat the angel meant to say????
hahahahahahahahaha awwwwwwwwwwwwww i luved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent update do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Veryyy nice part!!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima

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