Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
it will be a short one

MAan wakes up alone and looks around for Geet..

MAan- GEET!!!

Geet is downstairs in the kitchen..doesn't hear MAan...

Maan runs downstairs after getting fresh looking for Geet

MAan- Geet...

Geet- kitchen mein MAan..subha subha Geet Geet kya kagaya hua hai...
yeh kya? office nahi jaana?
I have gotten your b'fast ready..jaldi tyaar ho jaaiye

MAan is staring at her..kind of stunned

MAan- Geet..tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet- Maan..we are not on holiday anymore..get ready ,you have loads of meetings today...biwi hoon toh iska matlab yeh nahi ki aapko koi aur secretary mil gayi hai..cmon..fast!!

MAan - okay..

He goes gets ready comes back and Geet serves him breakfast

Geet is giving him a parantha, and while doing so

Geet- Dadima ka call aaya tha..she wants us to go meet her before we leave for office..

MAan- WE?Tum bhi chalogi?

Geet- Maan..Seriously..aap kal raat soye nahi the kya?

MAan- Geet..but you..

Geet- yes Maan..and that reason doesn't exist anymore so I'm coming with you

She starts to go away when Maan holds her by the hand

MAan- Okay..whatever you want..but please..naashta kar lo..Sit down now

GEet- Aaj chai bhi nahi pi subha ki

MAan gets up..

Geet- where are you going?

MAan- Baithi raho..eat your breakfast..

Geet- but MAan..

MAan- Coffee bana raha hoon

Geet- maan..maine banai hui hai

MAan- it's gotten cold and i'm not reheating

MAan (to himself)- yeh mere liye naashta bana rahi hai and I'm not even doing anything for her..
Aaj main Geet ko chai pilaata hoon..

He makes Ginger Tea for Geet and brings it to her..She is engrossed in eating and doesn't see him

MAan- Geet bachha..yeh lo your chai
Now your head won't ache

Geet(wide eyed)- aapko kaise pata..that my head aches if I don't have morning tea?

MAan smiles a little smugly..- Geet..mujhe bohot kuchh pata hai

He says giving her a very very smoldering MAan look..

MAan- aur waise bhi..MAan Singh Khurana bohot achhi chai banata..try kar lo

Geet-hmm...toh aap kiske liye chai banate the?

MAan- Dadi..aur kaun?

Geet takes a sip..

Geet- aah..

MAan- kya hua?

Geet- garam..

MAan- Geet..tum bhi na..dikhao;..

HE touches her lip and gently neds down to blow and then kisses her..just a small tendr kiss

MAan- ab thik hai?

Geet(dazed)- haan?

MAan smiles..

and then kisses her again...

DAdi walks in and sees them..occupied

dAdi- Ahem ahem ahem..
Kya hum aa sakte hain?

Both jump apart as if electrocuted

MAan- Dadi..woh main..woh..uh

Geet- woh...chai...chai se mooh jal gaya tha..toh MAan dekh rahe the..

Dadi - Geet...MAan sirf dekh rahe the? Hain MAan?

Geet and MAan-uhh..woh..

Dadi- anyways...mainne socha you toh are not comin to meet me..main hi aa jau..but I didn't know ki...

Dadi is obviously teasing them..She was happy their relationship was going great..more than happy in fact..

She grinned and

Dadi- Aaj raat aap log..uh..busy honge ki humare saath dinner kar sakte hain?

Geet- of course dadi.we will be there..
MAine Nakul ko samaan shift karwane ko bol diya hai

MAan looks at Geet..

MAan- uh..woh..main..jaata hoon..waiting in the car for you.
Bye dadi

Kisses Dadi on the cheek and goes

Geet blushes and does the same and leaves

in the car

MAan and Geet are sneaking glances at each other

MAan- Geet..woh..ek baat bolni thi..

Geet- kya?

Maan- uh...I'll have to go to Thailand for 3 days..meetings hain..resort project ke liye

Geet- Thailand...?when do you have to leave?

She is looking out of the window and doesn't see Maan's look...

MAan- tomorrow morning
Geet, look at me

Geet doesn't reply

Geet- aapki packing main kar doongi..don't worry about anything

MAan then pulls geet's arm and makes her turn her face towards him

MAan- I thought I asked you to look at me

Geet releases her arm from MAan's grasp

Geet- yes Maan..you ASKED..you did NOT order me..so don't do it now..

MAan(v gently now)- Geet..please...do you want to come along?

Geet- Nahi Maan..I 'm not interested..and I'm too tired from the trip

MAan gets angry- FINE..MAt aao..MAin 3 days mein waapis aaunga..

Both glare at each other while the other is not looking and then looks out of the window..sulking like children

that's it guys..

don't hit me please!!
I will make the separation worthwhile!!

love to all
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
great chapter. plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
wow nice
loved it how they were annoyed and were sulking like kids...cute...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
well well nice but very short geetu...... update it soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
hey
phir se jhagda
but as always good
plz continue soon
eagerly waiting for the next update
Nidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66


GEET beta tu tho chaa gayi
yaar tere updates itney meetey????
dairy milk bhi kam padegi... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
awesome update!! it was cute!! cant wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Too good...!!! Ah..toh maan sirf dekh rahe the ke Geet ka lip kaise jala hai, kahan jala hai and kitna jala hai...lol...loved it...😉😉

Update soon girl...!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Thats awesome dear
Loved it
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Geet ...
how can anyone complian ??.. we all get our regular maaneet fixes from you .. so what is there to complain about!!
great update .. thanks as always ..
looking forward to the next one!!
Uz xx

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