Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 5

Originally posted by: swetha10

lovely update... sasha behind vicky.. thts hilarious.... do continue soon..

hmm..would you like to see more scenes between Sasha and Vicky? 😆

thanks for liking it!

Originally posted by: neahakhan

Hey awesome. I'm so in love with ur ff

pls continue. :)

Aw..thanks darling!
😳

Originally posted by: 353115

gud job. plz continue
plz add me to ur pm list!

hey! (your name plz) 😊

thanks!

You already are there..I send you PMs too..nahi milte? 😕

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

congrats on the new thread and the new part was amazing!

thanks jaan! 🤗

Originally posted by: liv2laugh

<font color="#ff0066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Hi Geet

Wonderful update. I actually read a lot of the upates in one go today. I apologize for not commenting regularly but work is crazy.

I loved the way you are moving the story along. There is an innocence to the characters that I completely enjoy.

Could you kindly add me to your PM list.

Thanks
Jhan</font>

Jhan! HI!

Aww..MAin bhi toh ek innocent bachhi hoon na.. 😳

😆 😆

But if you have any suggestions etc..please please let me know!

Its perfectly alright for late commenting...as long as you are liking the way i move the story...is it moving at all..? 😆

Love you loads!

Originally posted by: cute-aly

for new thread


update

love geet dadi and pinky's convo
Dadi-Geet bete..boliye na..Maan ne aapko zaada sataya toh nahi

maan and adi convo is also

<font color="#990000" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">MAan- kya hua Adi?

Adi- woh..sir..woh..uh..Vicky..uh..nahi mera matlab hai...pinky..nahi..woh Sir..I..

MAan- ek minute..Pinky and Vicky? Really?</font>
<font color="#990000" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">
MAan pretends a happy look while inside he's thinking

MAan- hmm..toh problem kya hai?
If Pinky and Vicky like each other..then?

Adi- No problem sir..Bas wahi problem hai jo aapko hui thi when Geet left the job </font>
<font color="#990000" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">
Maan is stunned

MAan- ...that much?

Adi looks morose..

MAan- hmm..and why did you laugh when I mentioned Sasha

Adi- Sir..Sasha has been after Vicky sir</font>

geet and vicky chemistry

Vicky- nah baba na...Unpe toh sirf MAan sir ka bas chalta hai

Geet- hmph...She would wish...

Vicky- Haan..Bro toh aapke pyaar mein lattoo hain na?<img src="http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/000203F2.gif" alt="" />

superb update

conti soon

aww...hi!! I missed you!!

Glad you like it..will give more of these characters if you guys like them!! which i think yo u do!! 😆 😆

love you!!

Originally posted by: uzmam1

beautiful .. beautiful!!

nice interaction with vicky, pinky and adi ..bulking out the storyline and adding depth to it!!

luv it sooooooooooooo much!!

Uz xx

maine socha kab tak..isolated rakhooongi bechaaron ko..they need to be seen out and about too..and so do the other amazing characters!! 😳

glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: deniac

geetu love the way u r using other characters.... yes story does become boring if only 2 characters r spoken about..... nice update

😳 🤗

thanks!

love you

Originally posted by: rituka7

superb
too good
update soon

thanks ritu! 😃

Originally posted by: kooliio

Awesome update!! Loved it!!!
Can't wait for next part!!
Pls cont.soon!!

thankie!!

will update as soon as something comes in my mind..LOL