Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi! can u plz add me to ur PM's list . i like ur updates.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello my dear innocent bachha,😆 😉
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lovely update...😛!!! sorry did not have the time to comment on your previous updates..!! but i read all of them in one go and here i am now to tell u, rather to threaten u 😆😆😆😆😆 to update fast...!!!😉

wonderful update honey..!! am glad geet finally told maan she loves him..!!! 😃... well , like they say absence makes the heart grow founder and maan's absence for a couple of days made geet realize his importance..!!! well written.... 👏👏👏👏

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Originally posted by: pickle6586

hello my dear innocent bachha,😆 😉
😉
lovely update...😛!!! sorry did not have the time to comment on your previous updates..!! but i read all of them in one go and here i am now to tell u, rather to threaten u 😆 to update fast...!!!😉

wonderful update honey..!! am glad geet finally told maan she loves him..!!! 😃... well , like they say absence makes the heart grow founder and maan's absence for a couple of days made geet realize his importance..!!! well written.... 👏

soumya



hey!!

Aiio..I got ur PM(s) ..will go now finally and catch up with ur updates..which I m sure will be awesome! 😃

I know...absence se hi..Aaj maan ki chaandi ho gayi
😲

Will update now! and read urs and muski's 😆

love
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Posted: 14 years ago
Update

Night time

Finally Maneet have shifted to the mansion

Geet is busy with packing dadi's stuff...

Vicky barges in

Vicks- Bhabhi!!!
Help me na....Bro toh kuchh help nahi karte
Whatever I ask him..he says no..

Maan comes in too

Maan- Geet..this is wrong..he's such a liar..Maan Singh Khurana har kaam thik se karta hai..and this you know Geet

Geet put down the saree she was folding and looked from one bro to the other

Geet- Stop fighting and complaining like kids.
Vicky, Why did you go to him when you know how khadoos he is?

MAan glares- But Ge..

Geet- ek minute

Geet- and aap..Why don't you help your brother seriously?
What is the problem?

Vicky- Bhabhi, i asked him what kind of clothes hot french girls like? I haven't been to that part of France..and he glared at me and said

(here Vicky imitates Maan)
Maan Singh Khurana has never noticed what Girls like or what they don't like. wear whatever. If a girl likes you...she will like you even in a vest

Geet blushed

MAan- Did I say something wrong?

Geet- Maan..Do you want Vicky to wear vests in France?

Maan- God..you two..will never ever get my point.

Vicky and Geet- We do too!

Vicky- Bhabhs..Aap batao na plz!

Geet- hmm.Vicky..give me an hour..let me finish Dadi's packing..In fact..Maan why don't you do it? I can go to Vicky..

Maan(thinking)- ek toh Dadi bhi na..khud toh she has gone to the beauty parlour and left me with two crazy people

Geet- Maan...C'mon..all you have to do is fold the clothes and put them in..I'm sure like everything else...you're great at this too

Maan- GEET... 😡

Vicky- LEt's go bhabhi..

He leaves and she is about to when Maan blocks the way

MAan- ek minute..

Geet- What?

He pulls her close

Geet- MAan...this is Dadi's room..what do you plan to do?

MAan- I have a plan...

Geet- Achha? I'm not interested..let me go

Maan- Geet...You think you can run away..Go..Go as far as you can..we will be alone v soon and then your flimsy excuses won't work anymore

Geet- Oh really? Then..I will have strong excuses...that you would have to accept..

She runs away

Maan- uff..she's driven me mad

Vicky and Geet

Geet- achha tell me..what if you find some one there?

Vicky- I wish..bhabhs koi milti hi nahi

Geet- what kind of girl do you want?

Vicky- someone like you..exactly like you

Maan coming into the room

MAan- Not possible

he comes and puts his hands on Geet's shoulders

Maan- My dear brother..Finding someone like Geet..is impossible

Geet is blushing and Vicky is stunned that Maan is so openin his praising
when he continues

Maan- After all..God could make only 1 disaster..and I reserved it before you..so..Sorry..but you might find someone less disaster-prone

Geet smacks him on his arms

Geet- Jao..I'm not talking to you.

Go from here and let us pack in peace

Vicky- ji bro..I think it would be wiser to go..Me and Dadi will leave..you will be left with her..and I'm sure the wrath of Geet Khurana is not very pleasant to face

MAan- Hmm..It isn't...but I'm more than equipped to handle it 😉

Geet- FINE..I'm leaving...

Maan- Geet

Vicky- Bhabhi

Vicky says sorry and Geet smiles

But Maan she glares at..

Geet- Baad mein dekhungi aapko

In bed that night

Maan comes close to Geet..all in the RAWR mood

Geet pushes him away

MAan- Oh Please Geet..stop it..you know you want to

Geet-hmph..Do you? what did you call me?- Disaster-prone..
Well..woh toh dikh hi raha hai...hmph..MAan..stay away from me

MAan suddenly becomes serious

MAan- Don't ever say that Geet. I cannot stay away from you

Geet- hmm..Then why do you say things like that?

Maan- It wasn't a lie

He's back to being jokey jokey

Gets on top of Geet and she gasps

MAan- Ab Bas..CHup

Geet- Maan..you are not really umm..the lightest of people

HE turns so that Geet is on top

MAan- Ab thik hai?

Geet- aisa lag raha hai I'm on top of the world

MAan looks confused and Geet comes close and kisses him on the lips

He pulls her even closer and kisses her deeply, passionately..playfully teasing, and yet..oh so arousing.
All their passion concentrated on giving each other the best..giving each other their all

Geet broke away

Geet- You are the world

MAan- As you are mine.

She is lying on her back and Maan slowly carefully comes on top of her

Maan- I'm not that heavy am I?

Geet- I don't care

And she puts her arms about his neck and kisses him again

MAan opens her hair while kissing her neck

Maan- I love your hair..

Geet- hmm..aur...

MAan- I love your shoulders..

HE kissed her tenderly...and then with force

(tiger-LOL)

Her jaw, her neck,collarbones - gentle..so slow..

He let her feel every touch, every touch in which he put his love for her.

Every moment was eternity and then he looked at her

The love and intensity in his eyes made her realise she was wrong

Eternity was a moment in their love

She closed her eyes and she realised just how much she felt for him and he noticed

Maan- Geet..

Geet- I love you Maan

MAan showed her..That night, he showed her just how much he loved her..well..At least in one of the ways he could show her

He commanded her to take off her clothes..startling her

Geet- but Maan...

Maan- Geet..will you or..

Geet- or what?

MAan- or I take them off for you?

Geet- nahi..I'll do it

She lay on the bed- stubbornly glorious.
A vision in light.
He had never seen anyone look so beautiful.

A wave of love and happiness passed through him..took him under

She's mine..She loves ME..he thought

And then, he couldn't stop himself from touching her..everywhere, while she lay, he didn't let her do anything..
just moaned with pleasure..

so much of it...and she was not aware of where she was...who she was...till he joined her
and then she knew

She was Geet...and Maan was hers. He was Maan and she was his.
She smiled faintly

Maan- why do you smile?

Geet-You are mine

Maan- Oh yes...LEt me show you how right you are...


LOL..Guys..I hope this was better..

love to all
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved the update ... lolz it was really good!! its okay i don mind the lack of x ratedness.. haah its nice to read without blushin too mch 😆😆 i thought it was very sweet!!! and i loved how vicky came to the rescue for maan and geet 😊 and i absolutley loved the kodak moment 👏👏👏 and the next update was also very good!! i'm great enjoyin the maan and geet flirting and i love how maan is jst soo mch more open about his feelings it soo cute 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
it's really nice and mannet have such a great and passionate relationship. and plz add me to ur PM's list
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG !!!!! well the update was good with all side no actually it was aweusm nd i cudnt stop blushing ...........


best one She was Geet...and Maan was hers. He was Maan and she was his.
She smiled faintly


thnk you 🤗

see i knew it u r nt at all innocent 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
surely we like it geet 😉 naughty girl
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
continue soon.....
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have sent u a buddy request- please accept it and pm me when u update!

PLEASE!😭

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