Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thats so lovely

pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey not fair at alllllllll......itna short.....😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!! Loved it!! Pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
awesome part,
lol awe they missed each other soo much
anyway cant wait for more
do continue soon
Maheen xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow sucha romantic update! 😍 .. yay im soo happy geet finaly confessed her love!! lolz n i love how vicky teases maan and maan doesn even get embrass but proudly lets vicky need tht maneet indeed are forever <3 .. and lmao at this line: 'Maan- if you thought that was long..you have no idea what you're in for..." hahaha tht is sch a Chuck line ... lmao chuck jst cracks me up hehehe 😆 . can't wait to read next update 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was shoooooooooooo shweeetttt!!!

loved iT!!!!

but it was short!!!!

update sooN!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow! brilliant part, i love your writing style, its amazing, please do continue soon and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely finally geet confessed
too great bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay..here is the next update!!
After some time of silence, Geet asked
Geet- Maan...? Maan..?
Maan- hmm
Geet- are you sleeping?
Maan- Geet..I'm at peace.
For the first time, my head and my heart feel weightless
Geet- Your head was anyways weightless..

😆

Maan- Geet!

Geet- sorry..you were saying..

Maan- I feel happy Geet..I feel...

Geet-...excited?

Maan got up and looked at her

MAan- yes..I want to do something..

Geet blushed
😳

Maan- oho...seriously..stop your thoughts!
actually...don't...

Geet- Maan..stop it..it's late..you're tired...

MAan- don't make excuses Geet...DO I look tired??

Geet(to herself)- hell no..you look like a tiger

Maan-hmm? did you say something?

Geet- uhh..Maan..please..let's go to sleep..

Maan-Geet..

Geet- Maan...

They stare at each other..two willful people..

Then look away

Geet- uff..Maan..I'm sleepy..

saying that, she sleeps

Maan- This girl doesn't have 1 ROmantic bone in her body...But Maan ..You need to change that...

With a better hope for tomorrow..he slept..

Sometime in the middle of the night
MAan woke up by the sound of Geet's voice

Geet- chhodo..chhodo mujhe..please

He frowned in darkness..no one was holding her..and she wasn't scared

Maan- err..Geet...

Geet- MAan...chodo mujhe..please..koi aa jaayga...Yeh koi matlab nahi..you cheated..leave me na! let me go..they are searching for me

Maan grinned wickedly

Geet groaned in her sleep..her lips smiled in ecstasy

Geet- oh MAAN....

Maan propped himself on his elbow and stared at her..so wanting to be in her dream..he was there..and yet not..

Geet stopped talking and Maan gently kissed her..on her lips

she opened her eyes..and stared into the eyes of her tiger.. 😆 😆

she gasped..

Maan- hmm..chhod doon haan Geet?

Geet- nahi..woh..main...

MAan- shh...

He kissed her slowly..taking his time

his hands rested on her arms..gentle..and yet scorching.

Geet broke away..

Geet- Maan..please..abhi nahi...

MAan- toh kab Geet?

Geet blushed and didn't say anything

Maan let go of her

Maan- it's okay

He was obviously miffed by her response..

Maan- You are crazy Geet..when I want to make all your dreams come true..you don't let me...

Geet didn't say anything

Maan- ab bolo kuchh

Geet- Maan..I'm sorry

MAan- Sorry..bas sorry...
it's okay..
Go to sleep..good night

With that, he turned on his side..and slept off

Geet(to herself)- Itni neend aa rahi hai..upar se sapna aisa...yeh Maan bhi na..uff..subha thik karungi inhe

She also slept off



😆 😆

In the morning..

Maan felt a light pressure on him..

He tried to open his eyes but the light coming into the room hurt him and so he just mumbled and turned on his side

Geet- AAAAHHHH!!!

MAan instantly realised and put out his hands to steady her...

Geet had decided it was time..

MAan- Geet...tum...tum..mere upar kya kar rahi ho??

Geet- Khel rahi hoon..honestly MAan

Maan looked so adorable confused that she smiled

Geet- I'm sorry for yesterday but you and I, we both needed to sleep

Maan- hmmm...

He closed his eyes while Geet talked

Geet- DOn't you dare go back to sleep now!

MAan opened 1 eye

Maan- Are you commanding me?

Geet put her chin out

Geet- YES, I am..KOi shak?

Maan looked dangerous and was scared of Geet and if she knew what she was doing to him

MAan- Geet..

Geet remembered and replicated..

She leaned forward(she was sitting on him.. 😆 😉 ) and placed her hand on his lips

Geet- chup...

Eyelock...

she traced his face with her hand..then trailed down to his chest..

Geet whispered- Now who's the tiger?

Maan stared at her- You are... 😲

Then , MAan was on top of her..

Kiss, touching and what not...

until, they finally connected..became one for some moments..

with tears in each others' eyes, they lay..rested and exhausted by love and passion

Maan looked at Geet and kissed her tears away..Geet did the same with him

They touched noses and laughed gently

Maan- Geet. I love you

Geet- Maan. I love you

MAan- You're okay?

Geet- 😆 Are you?

MAan- oh YES..I'm perfect right now!

Geet- So am I 😳

She rested her head on his chest...and was ready for more..

He knew..and he complied


A few hours and many missed calls later,

Maan and Geet were at the outhouse with Dadi

Dadi- I don't believe this. You ..neither of you picked up my calls! WHAT WERE YOU DOING??

They blushed and didn't meet her eye

Maan- Dadi..woh..main..Geet..woh ..

Geet- uhh..

Vicky- Dadima..let it be na..the important thing is that they are here!

And now tell them the good news

Dadi- haan...woh..My visa just came..I'm going to PAris day after tomorrow

Maan and Geet- WHAT?

Dadi- aap toh aise chaunk gaye

Waise toh Iw as about to send you both but..you weren't interested so ...humne socha.. 😆

waise..if you want to join us.

Geet gestured no to Maan

MAan- han?

Geet whispered no

MAan- Nahi dadi..There is work to be done here..You go with Vicky..

Vicky- bro...But aap akele?

Maan- vicky..Dadi won't go alone..you go with her

vicky was about to say no when Geet nodded enthusiastically

Vicky- Fine..I will go...but only because Bhabhi told me to!

Dadi- Wow Geet..aapne toh is ghar pe Jaadu kar diya hai! I love you bete!

Geet went and simply hugged Dadi..and then Vicky joined

MAan was wondering when they will remember him when Geet peeked at him and gestured

MAan went..

MAan- finally..I thought you would never ask

KODAK CLICK!


😆 😆

okay..so Sorry if THE scene disappointed you..couldn't write ..uss tarha se.. 😳 😳

After all..I AM an innocent bachha

love you guys!!

honest opinions please!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I have not read all the parts but this one is very good...
i like the tiger wala part the best one........and especially the way vicky is convinced to go with dadi.

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