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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww.. the ArSh parts... 😍 super truper.. love it.. n ahem ahem SR kissing... !!

Lovely epi dear... 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mayuri ur os is awesome 👏 its so beautifully written tat it made me to sit for hrs and and complete to read dis 4m 1st part to te last part i loved and enjoyed reading ur os..dis is wat i wantd in dmg bt bad luck nothi as such happened in dmg😡...bt im happy to atleast read and imagine it thank u so much 4 ur cute os and plz update it soon as possible and plz do pm me 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Mayuri🤗


Awesome update
Liked the ArSh scenes.....not very fond of Armaan but happy that Shilpa's happy😊
and SR romance....it was short but romantic nd cute😳

Do continue soon nd thnx for the PM😃


Zarqqquuuu🤗

thanks!!!!!!!

loads of love❤️❤️
mayuri❤️❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: romiosugar

Mind blowing update twineeeeeeee 👍🏼👏


WOW.....I wish this would have happened in DMG 😍 but kyaa kare, nahi huwa😭 Thanks for lovely update and making SR & ArSh possible through your OS 😃. Your OS always reminds me our beloved SR 😍

Looking forward to your next update😳


Twinieeee🤗

wow.......i loved your reply!!!!!!!

thanks!!!!!!!

loads of love❤️❤️
mayuri❤️❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
guyyyysssssss🤗

thanks everyone for all the stupendous comments!!!!!!!love you all and your comments and replies and your wonderful gifts make my day....so keep replying!!!!!!!

i thanks each and everyone of you.....and the next update will be in 30 minutes!!!!!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update

pm me when will update
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Posted: 14 years ago

this part is dedicated to my twinieeeee...meri soul sis🤗



Part 26

She gets up and goes to the door. Opens it to find that there was no one and she gets all the more angry. As she was about to slam the door hard; she saw that a bouquet was kept near the door step. A huge one of red roses; her favorite. She very gently picked it up and started to walk in when she noticed that a note was attached to it. Also a box of pastry was kept beside the bouquet. She kept the roses on the table and opened the box to see a pastry inside it. The pastry was just too delicious. It was a rounded one and was covered with kiwi slices and kiwi marmalade. The pastry read *Happy Birthday My Chudail Wife*. A smile started to form at the corner of her lips. She kept both on the table and opened the note. It read:

**My jaan; my sexy chudail wife**

A very happy birthday to you!

You know that I am bad at expressing my feelings; but I know that we both love each other and when you look into my eyes; you exactly know how much I love you. Well I just don't know how much I love you. I can't every time confess that what I feel for you. I know I should have been there with you right now. But I don't know whether you will like all this or not. Hence I will come later. But as I know that you were thinking about me and me only I shall come back very soon. I hope you shall adore what I have written for you. I just know how much you miss me when I am not there with you; there is always a fear in your mind about me leaving you all alone again to face the harsh world with out me holding your hand. I know that I am you universe and that's why you and I are together today; as a much in love couple. I just want to say the three words again to you as you made me promise that I have to say that everyday; to signify that I shall always be there with you.

My chudail; sexy wife who is all in tears reading all this; I promise you that before the tear drops on the floor, before that you shall be in my arms.

I am no great lyricist or a composer but it is often said that love appeals to the person whom you consider through words. Words which are simple yet touching. You are my life; my happiness. My wife. Mrs. Riddhima Modi I am so in love with you.

When I was alone, I miss you the most.

When I stay with others, I know the value of you.

When you are with me, I would like to miss this whole world.

**Your loving husband Siddhant Modi- handsome and cute doctor**

The letter did make her cry. Tears of happiness. She didn't want to stop them from flowing. She just tapped her head and was just lucky to have been married to this idiot whom she loves more than anyone else.

She ran straight into his arms; her heaven. The note still tightly clasped in her hand. She parts and kisses him passionately. And in those moments of intimacy both were so lost that they slipped in their world.

Here in the hospital Shilpa calms Armaan down; and makes him get up. She very gently cups his face and wipes away all tears. She asks him that whether he accepted that Riddhima is in love with siddhant and he gestured a yes. She smiled and he returned it. She lessens the distance between them and whispers in his ears that "I love you". Her one touch; her close proximity was affecting him very much. It was a very different feeling and he didn't want to suppress it. She gave a quick peck on his forehead and he bent in towards her. As she was about to leave he clasps her hand; pulls her toward himself. He gently turns her so she stood facing him. He took out his house keys and also his bike keys which were together in his keychain. He says that I know you are a very creative person; kneels down in front of her without breaking eye contact.

Armaan- Shilpa Malhotra kya tum mere saath apni poori zindagi bitane ke liye tayyar ho? Kya tum mujh jaise paagal ke saath shaadi karogi?

She stood there in awe of what was happening; she was too astonished and equally happy. Tears welled up and wiping them she said;

Shilpa- Haan paagal main tumhare saath apni poori zindagi bitaane ke liye tayyar hoon.

She slowly makes him get up and gives her hand in his. He takes her hand and slides the key chain in the ring finger. He places a small kiss. She hugs him overpoweringly and he reciprocates with equal passion. His joys knew no bounds. She was still in his embrace; he tells her that you rule my heart and with a grin continues that I promise that you will rule my house also. Her face was glowing and she still had tears and he wipes them away. He gestures her that from now onwards no more crying as I promise to spread happiness in your life. She hugs him as if never to let him go away. She gently yet very passionately kissed him. It was needed for him to assure him that let anything come in between them; I will always be with you. She parts only to realize that Armaan was bearing her weight. She left a small peck and rushed out of the fire escape. She was blushing and in here he was left for wanting more of romance and he leaves from there; a smile on his face and humming a tune.

In the house Riddhima is still atop siddhant. Her hand drawing patterns on his bare chest and looking very lovingly at him. His one hand entwined with hers and the other entangled in her hair. Both thought that time should stop now. "Yahi woh lamha hai jaha kash waqt tham jaaye". Riddhima was thinking about proposing him and suddenly gets up and goes inside. Here siddhant was left confused by her actions. He got up and stretched himself. His back was aching tremendously as he was on the couch with Riddhima on him. he wore his shirt and that's when he saw Riddhima coming. She sees that her actions hurt him and she put her arms around his neck and buried her face. She distanced herself and she knelt on her knees and proposed him.

Riddhima- siddhant modi kya tum hamesha mere saath rahoge? Kya tum mera zindagi bhar saath doge? Kyunki agar tumne aise nahi kiya to main mar jaoongi. Siddhant tumhare bina tumhari Riddhima adhoori hai.

"You complete me in every sense. I don't know a life without you".

Siddhant was listening to all this with tears in his eyes. He makes her get up and takes her in his arms. He was just so ecstatic. She lifts her head and asks him-

Riddhima- Siddhant Modi; bolo kyat um mera saath doge? Kya tum mujhse dobara shaadi karoge?

Siddhant just nods and has a huge smile. She screams on top of her voice and says that I thought so much about the proposal and what answer I get from my would be permanent patidev? Just a nod? And saying this stomps her foot and leaves from there. Siddhant pulls her and she lands with a thud on his chest. Her back was facing him. He tightly wrapped his arms; started removing hair and planting kisses along the length of her neck. He slowly unzipped her kurta and was placing a kiss as his fingers were hypnotizing her. As he reached her waist she twirled and kissed him passionately with much more intensity. His hands were all over her back creating patterns. She deepened the kiss as time passed by. Siddhant picked her up; her legs across his waist. And he rushed themselves to the room. Placed her on the bed and was above her. She could feel his weight. She removed her kurta and ripped open his shirt. Pulls him closer and both made love to each other. She confessed that this was her best birthday till date. She lies on him and both are lost in each others eyes and both fall asleep.

Armaan drops Shilpa home and she enters and is shocked.

This is a pretty much longer part that I promised you.

Hope you will love this part. Enjoy!!!! And drop your comments!!!!! Will love to read them. Your comments make my creative cells to work and inspire me to write more parts…

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Loads of love❤️❤️

Mayuri❤️❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing ... Can't wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
MAYURIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII main maar gaayiiiiiiiiiii
what an update
Both SR and ArShi part was just brilliant...i'm hyperventilating now.......



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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful..loved the note n her proposal...looks like ridz cant stay away too long frm her chudail mood...n made love in shilpa's room..guess they forgot where they were..n ROFL...shilpa walks in....cant wait for the next part..plz continue soon...

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