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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggg

hey yaar shweta...sorry for making u and my other readers wait for so long... the thing is, i had finished typing out the whole story for this fan-fic but somehow it all got deleted.. so i was kinda depressed for some time, and opened another fan-fic on mayur instead.. i am typing out the parts for whatever i remember that got deleted accidently and then i will post more regularly.. by the coming week, the next part of this fan-fic shud be up... thanks yaar for understanding, and sorry to make u wait so long...
Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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NEXT PART COMING SOON...
~ Part 18 Promo ~
Scene 1...
Anurag: Beta Prem, tum hi ho jo humare Heer ko ab sambhal sakta hai. Bolo, kya tum ussey shaadi karoge?
Anurag just stands in front of Anurag in a dilemma. He loves Heer and wants to marry her, and also wants her to love him. But like this, Heer will never love him. Heer is too distraught over Raj's death to find love in someone else so soon.
Scene 2...
Heer comes up to Anurag and says, "Papa, mujhe is shaadi se koi inkaar nahin. Main Prem se shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hoon."
Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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~ Part 18 ~
Heer is still pretty much distraught due to Raj's sudden death. She talks more to Prem, giving only monosyllable answers to everyone else. As few weeks pass this way, Anurag and Prerna feel that Prem is the only one able to comfort and connect to Heer so much. They realise that Prem loves Heer a lot, and will keep her happy for the rest of her life, and spending more time with him Heer will also begin to forget Raj. So, Anurag and Prerna approach Shashank and Padma, Prem's parents to offer their daughter's hand in marriage for Prem.
Shashank: Haan. Vaise maine bhi Prem ki aankhon mein Heer ke liye pyar dekha hai. Mujhe aur Padma ko is shaadi se koi inkaar nahin. Lekin kya Prem aur Heer is haalaat mein shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hongey?
Anurag: Baat toh sahi hai. Chalo, Prem aur Heer ko neeche bulaakar unse poochte hain.
Prem and Heer come to the living room of Prem's home where their respective parents are sitting and discussing the possibility of Prem's and Heer's marriage.
Prem: Jee papa. Aapne mujhe aur Heer ko kyun bulaya?
Prerna: Main, uncle (Anurag) aur tumhare maa baap yeh chahte...
Prem: Kya aunty?
Padma: Prem, hum sab yeh chahte hain ki jis tarah se tum ab Heer ko sambhal rahe ho, usi tarah se usko zindagi bhar sambhalte raho.
Prem: Woh toh main zaroor karoonga. Aakhir, Heer is my best friend.
Shashank: Nahin, us tarah nahin.
Prem: Matlab?
Shashank: Hum sab chahte hain ki tum aur Heer shaadi kar lo.
Anurag: Haan Prem. Tum hi ho jo humare Heer ko ab sambhal sakta hai. Bolo, kya tum ussey shaadi karoge?
Shashank and the other adults tell Prem why they want Heer to marry him. Heer just cries silently. On the other hand, Prem stands there in dilemma. He loves Heer and wants to marry her, and also wants her to love him. But like this, Heer will never love him. Heer is too distraught over Raj's death to find love in someone else so soon.
Prem is about to give his answer, when Heer is unable to handle it anymore and runs to her room crying. Prerna and Padma go in there after her to make her understand. They try their best to convince her for the marriage. They say that getting married to Prem is in Heer's best wishes.
Heer finally makes up her mind and goes to the living room to tell everyone of her final decision. Heer goes up to Anurag.
Heer (to Anurag): Papa, mujhe is shaadi se koi inkaar nahin. Main Prem se shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hoon.
The adults get all happy and shake hands, while Heer sets into a thinking mode. Prem is just looking at Heer and trying to decipher her facial expressions. He knows that Heer doesn't love him, and wonders why the actually agreed to their wedding. Prem decides to ask Heer this question to clear this doubt soon.
Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NOTE:
hey guys.. so i finally updated.lol😆
anyways, sorry for this short part.. i am feeling sleepy so was able to only do this much. i will type out the new parts tomorrow. and only then i will pm ppl coz i dun wanna flood everyone's inbox's and also coz i am really sleepy like i mentioned earlier (past few days i had exams)
thanks all for understanding.. see ya again tmr...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesmeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap its too short

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesmeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap its too short

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Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzz waitinggggggggg




hey shweta... sorry for making u wait for so long... hav been really busy with my uni...
i will update sometime this week ok... i am trying to type out a super long part to make up for not updating for so long...
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~ Part 19 ~

(remember...this story is still in flashback mode.....)

Heer's and Prem's respective homes are bustling with excitement for their upcoming wedding. Prem is happy that at last he will get his love, but as for Heer... She is just moping around in sadness, at having lost her first love, but not knowing that her true love is Prem, who is awaiting her eagerly. Padma and Shashank (Prem's parents) are happy that their son is happy. Heer's parents are happy that their daughter has someone who loves her so much, and who is willing to do anything to make her happy.

It comes to the day of Heer's mehndi. (Heer didnt have her mehndi ceremony for Raj coz he died before that). Meher has been assigned to go and collect the "shagun ki mehndi" from Prem's house. When she reaches there, she sees some decorator putting up strings of flowers all outside the house. Suddenly, the "decorator" drops a whole basket of flowers on Meher's head. When he looks down to see the damage he has done, he is awestruck.

"Kitni khoobsoorat hai woh ladki. Chal, ab main neechey chalke apne aap ko introduce karta hoon" He comes down to talk to Meher. "Hi", he says to her, "Mera naam hai Preet". (yes, the one who dropped flowers on Meher is none other than Preet😃)

"Toh main kya karoon" replies Meher angrily. "Dekho, mere saare baal kharaab kar diye. Ab apne baalon se in phoolon ko kaise nikaaloon?"

Meher walks into the house in a huff, as Preet just smiles after her, dreamily.

"Haye! Mujhe pyar ho gaya us pari se. Love at first sight for me, just like bhaiya fell for Heer" Preet says to himself.

Meher takes the shagun ki mehndi from Padma, and turns around to go out of the house when she again bumps into Preet, who has come into the kitchen for a glass of water. She is about to scold Preet and shout at him for bumping into her like that, when she hears Padma say, "Arre Preet beta."

Meher realises that he is Preet, Prem's younger brother, and gets embarrassed. Apologizing to Preet for bumping into him, she slowly backs away from the kitchen and makes her way out of the house and to Heer's home. Preet meanwhile, just stares after Meher, his eyes fixed on her retreating figure.

Later at Heer's home...

Heer's mehndi ceremony is going on. While she is getting mehndi applied on her hands, Meher, Kripa, and Nupur are dancing along to "Mehndi Hai Rachnewali" from Zubeidaa".

(Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai) - 2
O hariyali banno
Le jaana tujhko guiyyaan aane waale hai saiyyaan
Thaamenge aake baiyyaan, goonjegi shehnaayi
Angnaayi, angnaayi
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Gaaye maiya aur mausi, gaaye behna aur bhabhi
Ke mehndi khil jaaye, rang laaye hariyaali banni
Gaaye phoofi aur chaachi, gaaye naani aur daadi
Ke mehndi mann bhaaye, saj jaaye hariyaali banni
Mehndi roop sanwaare, o mehndi rang nikhaare, ho
Hariyaali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taarein
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Gaaje, baaje, baraati, ghoda, gaadi aur haathi ko
Laayenge saajan tere aangan, hariyaali banni
Teri mehndi woh dekhenge
To apna dil rakhdenge woh
Pairon mein tere chupke se, hariyaali banni
Mehndi roop sanwaare, o mehndi rang nikhaare, ho
Hariyaali banni ke aanchal mein utrenge taarein
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

"Madam, aapke honey waale pati ka naam kya hai?" asks one of the ladies who is putting mehndi for Heer. But Heer is busy thinking of Raj and his untimely death, so doesn't reply. Kripa who is sitting just nearby says, "Prem. Uske hone waale pati ka naam Prem hai." And the mehndi-professional writes Prem on Heer's hand, while Heer just sits there in sadness.
Soon, the mehndi ceremony also finishes, and Heer retreats to her bedroom to rest before the haldi and wedding tomorrow. (the sangeet was already over, and not that much of an excited affair)...

As Heer is sitting on her bed, looking at pictures of her's and Prem's sangeet, which have just been printed. Among the lose photos, she finds a picture of Raj, which has been put among the sangeet pictures by mistake. Heer gets sad thinking about Raj again, and then when her eyes fall on the drying mehndi on her hands, the fact that she is getting married to Prem hits her.

In the fit on a moment, she feels she is cheating Raj, so she rushes to the bathroom and tries to wash off the mehndi on her hands, which has Prem's name on it. In the midst of doing that, she suddenly remembers that Raj is dead and will never come back, and starts crying.

Heer retreats to her bed and cries herself to sleep. But when she wakes up in the morning, hoping to see the mehndi light coloured and almost faded as a result of washing it off too early, she is disappointed because the exact opposite has happened. Heer's mehndi has darkened to an almost-black colour.

But Heer just ignores that fact, thinking there is no way that Prem can love her. Heer just remains unaware that infact, Prem already does, and that too, the love is such as no one has ever loved anyone so much before. As Heer is geting ready for her haldi ceremony, the fact that Raj is dead hits her again, but this time she decides to accept her life the way it is. She remains unsure of whether she will love someone like she loved Raj, even though it may not have been her one true love, Raj was her first love and her companion and she could never forget him. Heer decides to try her best to live her future life with Prem.

The rest of the ceremonies including the actual wedding itself - the varnmala ceremony, kanyadaan, gathbandhan, saat phere, and even the bidaai go without a further hitch. Even Heer participates in everything without being distracted by Raj's thoughts.

Heer goes to Prem's house, her sasuraal and after her mooh-dikhayi there, goes to Prem's bedroom, which is now theirs. And Heer sits on Prem's bed, now Prem's and her bed, and awaits him for their suhaag raat.
Edited by NehAditya8791 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww...................😳
awesome part
plese update the most awaiting part
PREMEER SUHAAG RAAT☺️
update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeee too good waitinggggggg for next asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!...
thankgod u updated!...
good to see that heer had accepted raj's death and her marriage with prem!
continue soon!

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