FF: Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi (IMPT NOTE +upd pg 14) - Page 5

awesome update......glad Prem is able to bring heer out of her shock!

Originally posted by: crystall

Poor Heer !
But Prem is their for her so no worries !
Nice update !

Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

awesome update......glad Prem is able to bring heer out of her shock!

continue soon.....

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sofsunmannee

very nyc part dear😃😃😃

Originally posted by: Naina2127

wow! great updates! sorry i didn't get a chance to comment on the last two parts... hey naina.. its ok actually.. maafi accepted.. u made up for it by giving a long and relatively detailed comment.. i think its the longest comment i've got so far, so i'm glad.. thanks for commenting..
part 16- =/ very sadd. i know.. raj's death and heer's dukh is heart-wrenching.. but heer will soon start life afresh.. wit prem.. and she'll get all the happiness... but heer's anxiety/emotions written amazingly, especially the apshagun and whatnot (sorry my spelling sucks.) thanks yaar... actually, i was not really sure if it was a sure sign of apshagun, but then i was reading macbeth where the rain signified the evil, and kinda incorporated the rain and some other stuff into the story...lolz
part 17- awww i literally felt heer's pain, as she thought that raj was alive, and how she went into shock.... aww... thanks.. i'm glad ur able to connect wit heer's pain.. it must mean i'm going rite somewhere, and writing well na? 😉😆😆😉😆😆 gosh you described the situation to perfection👏 thank u yaar.. no words to thank u other than thank u actually..😆😆 luv ur comment..and prem slapping her, poor girl, but at least it helped in some way.... it did help.. it brought her out of the shock.. btw, this scene is not my own original thought.. i hav scene this type of scene in almost every tv show or movie where the person in shock is slapped to be brought out of that trauma.. well, either slapped, or the entire tragedy tt occurred to get the person into shock is reanacted.. but then i thought if i tried writing the reanactment of the death scene to bring heer out of shock, then it wud take too long, and i'll hav to type a lot and my fingers will start paining and i'm kinda too lazy for tt.. so i decided to just do the slap.. (whew! vaise my reply to ur comment is also long na? and my fingers r also starting to pain now..lol😆😆😆)
and oh yeah! yayy prem doesn't have cancer =D thank godd. yeah, thank god prem doesnt hav cancer.. i dunno if its even medically possible of what i wrote, but since it happens in all kekta serials, y cant i do it too??😆😆😆..hmm do update soon! that i will.. i want to see how premeer's love story started it already started.. now its kinda going the rnbdj movie way.. and tt's y i specifically chose the title for my fan-fic.. and thanks for the pms! errm.... PMS?😆😆 lol.. well anyways, ur welcome..

Cheers! cheers to u too... and once again, thanks for ur comment...
~Naina

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzz