GamE [MayUr FF] : *Completed* [25/Dec/2011] - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
hey sujata dear!
nice update, cool start haan, continue soon honey and thanx 4 the pm.
luv u!
komal ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb part
plz plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear!!!!!
plz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Nupur fell down and Mayank didn't save her??😒
I think its a new thing in any MN story, right?
Nice concept and update..Do PM me next time.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Diffrent concept dear....
i would love to read this FF...
Pls add me in your PM list......
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amazing concept plz do cont and add me to ur pm list plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry 4 updating late........due to my busy shedule. hope u understand.😊
thnks u very much 4 liking this concept...........i hope u ll start enjoying after main even take place. here is part2, after 1-2 post, main event will start. hope u bare me untill then.😊

Part : 2

After some day.......at night.

Nupur lying on the bed......gazing the white roof......so many thoughts engulfing her.......she's worry about her present........her future. Specially today her parents talk about her marriage-

"Nupur, dekho, humne tumhare liye ek ladka pasand kiya hai."

"kya!!! Maa, aapne mujhse ek baar pucha bhi nahi?"

"tumjhse puch ke kya karenge?" her father said, "tu to koi journalist nahi bannewali!"

"par papa??"

"kuch nahi. Agar tu journalist hoti to koi baat thi!" he become emotional, " par tu to sirf pass mark se pass hui hai??koi tujhe journalist nahi kahega."

Nupur become silent.......she knows, the words of her father is right........she was the most pathetic student of NSS. She silently finished her foods and went to her room.

She sighted, Suhani is so lucky, she already got a job in famous sport magazine in Mumbai. After farewell party she will join. Why m not like her????? Why m so nervous???? Why m so fool???? Tear forming her eyes??..suddenly interrupted by her buzzing cell. Oh!!! Its Suhani......thank God! She didn't forgot me!!!

Farewell party.

The disco lights were flashing brightly. The hub of the crowd was growing louder by the minute. Everyone enjoying the party. Mayank also enjoy with his friends.

Nupur slowly entre into the hall......she wore a maroon saree, with minimum jewelry, she looks so beautiful, but nobody notice her. She slowly entre and hide herself behind a pillar. She notice everyone and spotted Mayank, he look so handsome in casual ware. Nupur hold her breath, he is every girls prince charming, not only mine. His would be girl friend ll so lucky!!!

Sheena walk towards him, Nupur was far from them, so she cant listen their talks. Nupur sighted, when they laughs...and headed to dance floor, hand to hand.

He is not my prince charming. We are belongs to different worlds?..different nature??.and most important, he is champion and I am a looser, not his type! Sheena is perfect for him. Or waise bhi, its just a crash, not love??aur Mom ne mere liye ladka pasand kar liya hai!!!!

Nupur withdrawn her concentration on them, trying to find Suhani. Where is she???? Nupur couldn't found her anywhere. Her cell beeped, a massege from Suhani?.oh god, she was not come in this party!!! God!!! What will I do now??? she is so lost in her thoughts, that she failed to notice, Mayank was behind her. He tapped her shoulder, she quickly look behind, MAYANK!!!!!

(Mayank's POV)

I was feel tired for dance, so I excused myself and headed to counter and ordered a pineapple juice. Suddenly my eyes caught a glimpse of a girl behind pillar. I know, the person is a girl, because I notice her maroon saree. I wonder, who is she? I mean, aaj ke zamane me saree pehenti hai!!!

I stand behind her. Oh!!! She is the same foolish interview girl. Oops! I forgot her name! but she looks really gorgeous and totally different rest of girls?? I notice her, she is lost in her thoughts, her face slightly worry, She was doodling with the hem of her anchal.

I tapped on her shoulder,

"Hi, you are the same interview girl!! Right?"

Nupur nodded. Her facial expression was change from frown to nervous one. I chuckle to her nervousness. Well, in front of cool handsome rich dude The Mayank Sharma, every one getting nervous! But Sheena is the girl, who have a guts to stand still in front of mine.

I brushes my thoughts, now concentrate on this girl??.accha timepass rahega!!!

"so whats your name? sorry I forgot."

"my name is Nupur Bhushan...and its ok, I am not a very famous person that you could easily spotted me." She replied with slight smiling.

I was surprised. What a gut she has!!! An ordinary girl speak this way with Mayank Sharma!!!! I feel a lump of anger building up inside me??? she insulting me, and I ll take the revenge soon. Suddenly an idea stuck into my mind.

"well" I cleared my throat, "kaal raat mere ghar me party hai, tum aogi na?" I asked her innocently.

"main? Kyun? I mean, we are not friends??so?.urn?.u know?." She hesitate.

"thik hai, dost nahi hai toh ban jaate hai. Friends?" I increased my hand. She bite her lower lips to took some time before place her hand to mine, "friends." she smile?.. I smile broadly to hide my evil grin.

Then I excused from there and announcing a party on my home tomorrow. Everyone shouts, they know Mayank Sharma's party means a lot of fun. I notice, she is smiling beside pillar. As soon as I notice her, she smile and gesturing a 'bye' and left.

Mere party me entertain karne ka kaam tum karogi Nupur Bhusha! I smile, Sheena was right, iss ladki ka mazak banane me bahut maza ayega!

(POV end)

Next morning.

After finished her breakfast, Nupur got a call from Mr.Ahemed, placement officer of NSS.

He told, if Nupur interested to join as a journalist in magazine?.so come sharp on 10 in NSS.

Nupur was surprised this news, yeh kaise hua! Maine to asha chor dithi k mujhe interview milega, coz of my poor result. Most of the senior student of NSS already bagged jobs???so there is almost no one in NSS.

She's obviously very happy to got sudden opportunity. She hurriedly went to NSS.

"may I come in sir." Nupur peeping in Mr.Ahmed's cabin.

"yeah. Nupur come." Mr.Ahmed said. Nupur entre and notice Sheena was there?..she is frowning to see her.

"well" Mr.Ahmed clear his throat, "nice to see you Nupur?.please take your seat. You know, why I called you, but the reality is, only you two are jobless??and others are bagged jobs. So its our responsibility to push you both to reputed companies. Soo -"

Sheena cuts him, "well sir, the companies are MNC or just Indian?"

"well, we choose both Indian mags. But one is hindi and other is English. So you choose -"

"I want the English one." Sheena grinning widely to Nupur.

"Ok! Nupur, have you any problem to work in a hindi mag.?"

"no, sir."

"ok, then your first assignment is commonwealth games, which ll starting day after tomorrow???and, both of you ll collect you appointment letter and ID card form your respective offices???here is the address."

Both leave from NSS.

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with Love
❤️ Suja❤️
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
nice update
mayank is doing wrong thing.......nupur is sooooooo sweet
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Sujata
fabulous update

awesome dear

i loved each n every bit of it

awwwwwww whatever maynk is going to do is totally wrong
nups is a very sweet n cute girl

i hope nothing bad will happen with her in the party

wah nupur got a job
that's great.


it was very different ff and i loved it dear


plz try to update it regularly.............

take care



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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing update dear thansk 4 d pm

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