GamE [MayUr FF] : *Completed* [25/Dec/2011] - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Alini.

Awesome part.......

Continue soon...........

thanks you. 😊
yours comment's really encourage me😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Sujata
fabulous update

awesome dear

i loved each n every bit of it

awwwwwww whatever maynk is going to do is totally wrong
nups is a very sweet n cute girl

i hope nothing bad will happen with her in the party

wah nupur got a job
that's great.


it was very different ff and i loved it dear


plz try to update it regularly.............

take care



thanks you. 😊
yours comment's really encourage me😊
mayank is really doing wrong, but he is arrogant jerk, never listen to anyone. u can say, aamir baap ka bigda hua ladka .😊
yes, i tried my best for update regularly, it ll twice or thrice in a month. hope u tolerate me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 1-

pehle part mein hi tumhare ff se pyaar ho gaya hai
i feel bad for nupur

thank u.😊
aap ka comment itna pyara hai, k mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha k main kya bolun.
just say, thank u.keep reading my ff.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

thank u.😊
aap ka comment itna pyara hai, k mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha k main kya bolun.
just say, thank u.keep reading my ff.😊

so sweet
and i'll definately keep reading ur ff
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 2-

nupur should teach tat sheena a lesson

sure dear.
she should, but iss me abhi time hai. sheena is one of d imp character of this ff.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

sure dear.
she should, but iss me abhi time hai. sheena is one of d imp character of this ff.

koi baat nahi
itezaar ka phal meetha hota hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
thanks you guys. 😊
thank you very much for ur sweet comment, which's really encourage me😊
from today i tried to update this FF twice or thrice in a month. hope u tolerate me.
here m going to post part -3.
plz bare me with spelling n grammatical mistakes.😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

thanks you guys. 😊
thank you very much for ur sweet comment, which's really encourage me😊
from today i tried to update this FF twice or thrice in a month. hope u tolerate me.
here m going to post part -3.
plz bare me with spelling n grammatical mistakes.😕

tat's gr8
i am eagerly waiting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

PART - 3

ADARSH (name of mayank's house)

Mayank sitting on window pane, cool breeze ruffling his hair. He is thinking something deeply. he totally lost in his thoughts,unaware that his mom enter into room.

Shilpa, his mom place her hand on his shoulder, " what happened Mayu? any problem?"

He sighted, "no, mom. I am thinking about games, just 25 days more. I am too excited to compete foreigners." His voice fill with hope, "sab kuch thik hoga na mom?"

"off course. Sab kuch thik hoga. God is great, he never did wrong." She smile, "ohh, aaj tera party hai na! sab arrangement ho gaya?"

"yes mom. Main sab karlunga." He hugged Shilpa, "ab main chalta hun, party ke kuch plans banane hai. Bye." He almost ran out from room.

Mayank arranging the party on their out house. Shilpa comes-

"Mayu, arrangement complete ho gaya hai kya?"

"yes, maa, almost."

"ok, beta, agar koi help chahiye to bata dena!" Shilpa adore him, and went form there.

Party time.

Every one gather almost on time……… every one look gorgeous. Mayank waiting for Nupur. Mayank's parents are away from this party, as they consider some privacy of youngstars.

Mayank glancing his watch impatiently, it was already crossed half an hour. Mayank was now sure that Nupur will not coming in the party. He is very disappoint to miss a good opportunity. Frustrated he danced with random girls, but his mind is in with Nupur.

After some time Nupur entre into the party. She wore a light purple-cream dress with minimum jewelry, hair braided, she hold a bouquet and a gift.

She is looking very cute.

She was on the door, nervously looking for someone, but her eyes are unable to find out Mayank among the crowed. She slowly stepped into the party.

"aap andar nahi ja sakte" bouncer stopped her in mid-way.

now Mayank's eyes fell on to her. He just starring at her….she look so beautiful.

"par kyun? Mayank ne mujhe invite kia tha!" she said sheepishly.

"sorry mam, but you aren't in proper dress code or invitation card."

"oh sorry" she smile embarrassedly, "ok, so, can u please handed this gift to Mayank?" she handed the gift and bouquet to the bouncer and about to leaving.

Mayank signaled Rohit, immediately approach to Nupur. He brought her to Mayank, who is now on the middle of the hall, sipping his drink.

"Mayank, is she your guest?"

He turned to Nupur, she is smiling, "hi."

Mayank bits his lip, she is look so innocent.

what I am doing to her!! She is so nave; her child like eyes reflecting her innocence. He is feeling ashamed and embarrassed. But he just kicked out his thoughts; this girl is today's joker, so it's the time to fun.

"no" Mayank frown, "who is she?"

Nupur's smile vanished, she look at Mayank sheepishly, "what are you saying Mayank? You don't know me?"

"off course not babes." Mayank finished his drink, place the glass on the counter, "who are you? Am I know you?"

Nupur just stared at him. She couldn't believe, Mayank say this!!!

She is just speechless, her mind was blank, doesn't understand what to do or what to say. Finally she gather little courage, "ok Mayank, I am sorry. Its all my fault, I am leaving."

"not so soon baby." Mayank caught her wrist and dragged her to the dance floor. A spot light following the two, every ones eyes on Nupur.

"my dearest friends" Mayank hold mike, "here is a uninvited girl in this party." He pointed to Nupur, who is really scared, sweating; looking everywhere trying to releasing her hand from Mayank's tight hold.

"she said, she is my girlfriend. Do you agree with her? Kya who mera girlfriend banne ke layak hai?" his voice full with taunt. Nupur feel like, digging a hole and jumped into. She was so shocked, unwillingly tears forms in her eyes.

"what say girls?" Mayank shouts.

"NOOO" roar fill in air, guys also joined with girls. Tear brimming down from her eyes, she is unsmart, she is fool, but no one never insulting her in front of a crowed. She pressing her lips together tightly, not to let out her sobs.

"Mayank, this cheater needs a punishment." A girl shout in the crowd. Everyone supporting her.

"what kind of punishment guys?" Mayank ask, "like clean the kitchen?" he winced.

"NOOO" another roar. "she claimed, she is your girlfriend. So prove it."

"how?"

"by kiss you."

Nupur was shocked to hear it. She never ever imagine a kiss or something else form someone. She is nave type of girl, also very timid and little unsmart type. She never roaming around Delhi alone, her parents never allowed her to go to any places alone. So Nupur become a very unsocial and unsmart girl, who was always under her parents shadow. she never talked to strangers, she talked only Suhani in her entire college life; so kiss to someone is far away form her imagination.

"yes, you are right guys." Mayank look at Nupur, who was very frightened, shivering in fear. He smile evily. Next second, Mayank harshly pulled her towards him, hold her tightly and pressed his lips to her. Every one hooting, Nupur feels terrible, she is struggling to release herself, but Mayank was stronger than her. He only tighten his arms around her, deepened the kiss. Nupur suppressed her lips together tightly, she feels his tong searching a way to enter her mouth. She feels vomiting in his touch. But now, she is out of breath, she needs air, urgently; with her full strength, she push him, only to torn shoulder of his tee.

Nupur composed herself within couple of second, then -

SLAP!!!!!

She slapped him hard. Immediately hooting turned to pin drop silence. They look at her with surprise, yet shock. This girl slapped The Mayank Sharma???!!!! Who is most eligible hot bachelor till date!!! This girl is really an alien.

"MR. MAYANK SHARMA YOU DESERVE IT." Nupur shouting full with anger, aghast, "you'll pay for this….pay for -" her words faded into cry. She managed her trembling feet and ran from there. She heard, every one hooting laughing at her.

She was back to home, thankfully no one awake in her house, either her parents ll ask too many questions, and she ll unable to answer properly.

She closed the door of her room and break down on the bed. Nupur crying her eyes out, she never felt so much insulted. Tear brimming out of her already puffy red eyes, only wetting the pillow. She never realized when she slept.

On the other hand, Mayank was very happy. he was not only kiss a girl, also taught her a good lesson to how to talk to The Mayank Sharma.

Ohh, kash Sheena yahan hoti, toh aur bhi maza aata. He thought while sipping his drink, He never feel guilt.

Next morning.

Adarsh.

After training Sharma family having their breakfast. Mayank was busy in sports page of the news paper.

"ahem, Mayu" Mr.Sharma clear his throat to begin a conversation with Mayank, who look at him.

"main one week ke liye foreign ja raha hun for a business deal. So, do you want something new gyming or training equipment?"

"yes, dad. I need this." He pointing a new gymming equipment, which available only in US.

Mr.Sharma smile. He feels proud to be a rich man, who fulfill every necessities of his only son.

Days passes like a wind. Mayank was forgot about everything, and busy in training and only training. As a talented athletic, he crossed all the barrier and grabbed a position in the final team of commonwealth games for India.

Form that day, Mayank-Nupur never faced to each other......untill......

They completely unaware form upcoming future, which changed their life.
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precap : commonwealth games. mayank touches the finishing line, and.......
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❤️ suja ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
i m busy with my exam
will read it soon and then comment .....................
keep updating


take care

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