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Tv-Fanatic

@Tv-Fanatic

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Posted: 14 years ago

#661

Hieeeeeeeeeee.!! first of all me shooo choooliiee not able to comment :( :( actually was out of town n was reading parts on fone soo from dat was not able to comment..!! n den me bhool gai n aaj after getting ur PM yaada aya dat i haven't replied yu since long time..!! :P :D

Ur parts are simplyy superbb..!! pleej pleej unfold the mysterious adill soon naa..!! ashna ko thoda toh hint dedo dat he's cutee n caring..!!usko kuch adil k relation wid her dad k baare mein hint dedo :P :D

Awesum parts..!! keeep up the wonderful parts..!! loved dem..!!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#662

sumi i'am here commenting on your ff after a long time...sorry beech mein i got busy with other things..lekin abhi i'am back with my comments..😊 well droplets is progressing really very well...mujhe yeh kahani bohat hii zyada achchi lagne lagi hai...i'am really liking the twists & turns you are bringing about in this fanfic...there is so much of mystery in this ff..& i'am serious hooked to this particular ff...curiosity is killing me...is ff mein sabse zyada mysterious tho humare hero jii hai, Mr. Adil Raichand...yeh character kabhi mere poore samaj mein aatha hii nahii hai...woh joh bhii kartha hai, kyun kartha hai, i'am seriously not able to make this out....i do not know why par adil kudh ko bhii takleef de raha hai, by distancing himself from the relations he has got...patah nahi kyun adil rishton se durr bhaag raha hai...yeh tho samaj mein aatha hai kii adil chahtha hai kii rishab comes back to where he belongs..shayad adil yeh bhii koshish karr raha hai kii he gets rishab back aur woh raichand parivaar ko poora kar sake, lekin na jaane kyun mujhe aise lagg raha hai kii dheere dheere adil is making a ground for himself to move away from the raichand's....aur dusri taraf mujhe yeh bhii lagtha hai kii though adil is getting attached to ashna, he still maintains his distance, because he wants to make it easy for ashna, when they actually part ways...i just don't understand why can't adil be open about his feelings...i really cannot see him sad, upset..mujhe aisa lagtha hai kii maano jaise adil ghut, ghutke jee raha hai....woh bas dikhave ke liye rude, arrogant banntha phirtha hai...jabki no one knows who the real adil is....anyway ashna has developed a kind of attachment with adil...anjaane mein hii sahii lekin ab woh ek dor mein bund si gayi hai adil ka saath....she knows & realizes that adil is her only support this is nice....i liked ashna care for adil, jab woh usse pareshaan dekhthi hai..i only hope that ashna understands the true side of adil aur woh usse kabhi apne aap se durr na jaane de...i wish that ashna gives adil so much of undying love one day, that there should be droplets of tears in adil's eyes, not from his loneliness, but from the happiness & love being showered upon him, i hope this happens because adil surely deserves it....the story is progressing well...i'am liking it very much...keep up the good work going....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏sumi yaar i have a request, i want to see love blossoming between our hero sahab & heroine sahiba soon.... & dear please do continue soon...waiting for the next part eagerly..😊

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#663

Hi sumi di😊......so finally the wait is over...glad to see the update😛

Adil is cho chweeeet😳......cho cute.......cho cho cho very adorable☺️.....coochy coochy coo😳......

sorry for the incoherent and nonsense blabber.....but....adil hai hi aisa.......super charming😍.....sigh*

was a beautiful part....😃

loved the way ashna quickly listed all the bad qualities in Adli😆.....and not to forget.....aaj kal adil ka dil out of control hota jaa raha hai😉.......hope they sort out their feelings sooon.......👍🏼

and rishabh😡.....don't mess with dil.....ooops sorrryyy adil!!!!😉

luv❤️

vidushi

PS-----update sooon....and do update looongerr parts.......😆 😆 😆

(someone hide me lest sumi di plans to abduct me saying ki abhi to itni mehnat kar ke update kiya and madam ko lambaaa part chahiye.........but what to do.........i'm incorrigible...hehe)

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C3_IF

@C3_IF

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#664

hey sweety, thts an awesum part re, i sumhw loved Aashna in ths part, i'v finally started luving her confused state also😉....rahi Adil ki baat , he's a true sweetheart as always, bhale hi tum usse kitna hi kam baat karwao, i'll still find him awesum😊☺️....& the best part wat gt a smile on my face was the ''Adil analysis''😊😆😆.....& thnku sweety 4 updating d part for VDAY, agar ye na aata to mein yahi se tumhare kaan keechti thi 😛....& haa part waise kaafi long tha , no prbs wid tht....hope we get d next UD soon & as always keep up d awesum wrk🤗👍🏼😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#665

hello sweety......................very nice and interesting part.....................so ashna madam ne adil ki saare qualities likh di...................dunno when she will add romantic, very adorable, love etc etc...................i can now itself feel the passion they are starting to feel now......................cont soon dear.................
Advance Happy Valentines Day to u too dear...................
Happy birthday Suhana dear...................

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#666

Great , Perfect , Awesome , Mind Blowing Dear

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Hello guys....finally am here wid the part!! Sorry to keep you all w8ing....but have been very busy....and again....I was celebrating the biggest event of the year😉 in my own way...😉😉😆

Will start the post by congratulating our hero for the biggest happiness of his lyf...😳😳....hope he continues to get all the bliss and success in future!!

And then....two days later its gonna be Valentines...😉 so.....

Wishing you all
Happy Valentines Day!!

Co-incidentally I just updated the 14th part of my fic...😉 so thats it for Valentines. 😳 Kisiko part chhota lage to I wud say....she is very smart....as the part is actually smaller than the previous ones...😆...but then....jo hai wo hai...😉😆 I just hope u guys dont feel disappointed wid the part...

Waise I knw u all wanna see lovey-dovey scenes btwn the couple....but to be honest....I'll bring in the romantic element when I think the feelings are strong and reliable enough...😳...feelings are critical....according to me....they take tym to unfold and be accepted...😉...so am gonna take that much tym!! 😳

And now lastly will end the post wid another super duper important thing....😳

Arre its Suhana Dii's birthday na....so of course am gonna wish her!! 😃

Have fun Dii...🤗....this part definitely goes for you!!

And now....I'll let you all rest in peace stopping my bak bak right here!! Take care folks....stay well and have a blissful Valentine!! 😳😉😆

Luv,
Sumi. 😳

@Namita Dii: Ur PM box is full Dii...😳....khali kar do...😳

First of all thanx for the wishes Sumi..😊

Happy Hug Day to u..

Happy Valentine Day In advance to u too..

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#668

Hi Sumaiya

Update was brilliant as usual 👏👏👏 and a special one too coz u wrote it for me..😊😊

Ashna is bit shocked over Adil's absent minded behaviour but she doesn't know that her hubby has lost his heart to her..

he was constantly staring at ground and somehow Ashna was really confused..

She didn't knew wat has happened to him..here Adil was blaming himself for behaving like normal people😆😆😆😉

He still thinks that Ashna is a kid who is watching a cartoon but he doesn't know that his wife has a crush on that hero..😆😆 But cartoons r fun to watch..I think Adil has not scene a single cartoon since he was a very responsible kid and he never lead a carefree life..

I like that word intoxicating..chalo Mr.Adil atleast feel some human emotions 😆😆😉

Ashna is always so confused but she gets angry fast..i so hate this Rishabh?(Why did this character's name has to b Rishabh)

He is always fighting for the wrong and why is Adil so desperate to call him back..let him b there na!!

I loved Ashna's psyco-analysis abt her husband..She wrote all his positive and negative traits but still she was not able to understand him..he is indeed a very complex man..

Adil saw her writing something and he was bit curious but his expressions remain bald..this man can really get on your nerves..😆😆 u never know where u r with him..Poor Ashna or rather I shud say lucky Ashna!!!😉😆😆

Even I feel that they have to b friends first before romancing each other..😃

Pls continue soon

Bye

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#669

Update was too good.👏

Ashna is surprised 😲too see Adil so lost in his thoughts..for she has always seen hi alert and composed. But little does she know that adil ka yeh haal ussi ki wajah se hai. She is confused to see him so absent minded…just staring at the floor. She is confused😕 about his behavior and begins to get worried about him. Whereas Adil is angry with himself for losing his self control infront of her.😡

Adil does not want to take Ashna with him to the site..he thinks that she is still childish as she enjoys watching movies that appear like cartoon to him…poor fellow has never watched t.v. let alone any cartoons.😉

Ashna is very curious to know why Adil had come to inspect their new project site himself when he could have sent any of him employees. She wants to know everything about Adils work…wants to share his knowledge and experience. She is a good student.😊

Why does Adil want Rishabh to come back when Adil knows that his return will only create more problems. But I guess he wants to unite Rishabh with his family.😕

Ashna's analysis of her husband's traits was indeed the best part. 😉The way she listed down his good and bad points. But later all she could conclude that he is a big puzzle🤔 for her and the more she tries to understand him the more confused she gets. She wants to know the real Adil Raichand. But for that she will first have to be Adil's friend.

Please continue soon

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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#670

nice part

are yaar ye adil rishabh ko wapas kyun bula raha hai..i'm scared .kya chal raha hai adil ke dimag main..ab kya soch rakha hai ihone

aur ye ashna o y god actually she did it i mn she actually main pt out the gudness and badness of adil i mn uski gudness use samajh nai aayi to usne ye kaha ki usme achai hai hi nai hahaha aur kyapts diye hai usne for his not gudness ..yaar muhe ye sab uski gud quality hi lagi i mn arrogant hai,attitude hai,yaar ye sab na hoga to fir wo adil raichad kaise hoga i mn after all personality hai bande ki

well ashna bhi kya kare uske saamne adil ne kuch aisa kiya bhi to nai na..ekdum rajeev style well kya cute scene tha wo cartoon mv wala scene..adil ne bhi kaha ki sabke sab cartoon hi lag rahe the bechari i cn imagine ahna face at that time bechari kitni masoom lag rahi hogi

well nice part

pls cont soon

aur yaar abhi kuch romace/pyar-wyar ka halka phulka tadka dedo na..i knw it will cum as story mvs but u cn understand na..mujhse wait hi nai ho raha hehehe

ccont soon

take care

:))

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