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Posted: 14 years ago
gunjan drunk???? awesome ud
Edited by Kiely - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update..............loved it a lot.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the awesome comments.....sorry for the late update its because i had net problems for a whole week after i updated last. when i asked my bro if i can use his phones internet he said no..then when it got fixed my moms bday came up to was busy for the weekend....and then i thought about updateing last week but my english teacher loaded me with hw. at times i think that my english teacher just wants to torture my class....sorry again..and gunjan sis 🤗🤗🤗 for helping with the song....so here is the next update


G. samrat aise kya dekh rahe ho

S: tumnhe itni jaldi coke peliya

G: ha. Pata hai kitna tasty that coke

S; pehli bar maine sunha hai ke coke tasty tha

Gunjan starts to laugh and then pulls samrats cheek. when gunjan doest that samrat wonders why gunjan did that.

G: samrat mujhe na table par karhe ho kar dance karna hai

S: kya. chashmish tum table par nach nahi sakti

G making a sad face; kyun

S: kyunki main ke raha hoon

but gunjan gets on the table

S; chashmish neeche utro

G: nahi. main tab utru gi jab hum meri liye coke lekar ao ge

S: teek hai main leke ata hoon

G; good

samrat goes and gets coke but this time is coke and not sharaab. and then gives it to gunjan. gunjan takes a sip

G: yeh same drink nahi hai samrat

S: chashmish yah vahi hai coke

G: nahi

then gunjan bends down and gets her old glass and smells it and then smells the coke.

G: yeh different hai dekho and samrat smells the glass

S; shit yeh to sharaab hai. dekho chashmish main tumhe yeh drink nahi de sakta

G: kyun

S: kyunki voh sharaab thi

G: i dont care mujhe vohi jaye

samrat starts to think how to get gunjan down so he can take her home. he cant give her more sharaab.

G; samrat voh dekho armaan a gaya main ab use jake batati hoon ke tum mujhe voh coke main der rahe

gunjan gets down and goes in the crowd and disappears

S; arre chashmish mujhe armaan nahi dikha. kaha hai voh.

and then samrat remembers that armaan had texted him that he isnt going to come back.

S: shit chahsmish ne mujhe jhoot bolo. ab ushe dund tha hoon

and samrat goes to look for gunjan. and our gunjan is at the bar telling the waiter to give her two glasses of sharaab and he does and gunjan gulps them down. and the waiter is shocked to she gunjan do that. then gunjan leaves. when she does samrat comes and asks the waiter if he saw gunjan

w; sir mujhe nahi maloon ap kis ki baat kar rahe hai

then samrat shows him gunjan pic that he has in his phone

w; sir yeh to abhi yahi thi 2 glass sharaab ek hi gut main pee gaye

S: kya. shit. ab kaha gaye hai

w; pata nahi sir. main ushe customers main busy ho gaya

S: ok thanks.

then samrat goes back to the table they were sitting at.

S; chashimish kaha ho tum.

then he remembers he has his phone and decides to call her but when he was going to his phone died.

S; shit is battery ko abhi katam hona tha......suddenly a song starts

Bounce, Bounce, Just Keep On Boncing Baby
Bounce, Bounce, Just Keep On Boncing........the backround dances dance

Malmal Ki Raaton Mein Tu, Khwaabon Ki Baaton Mein Aa....gunjan comes and starts dancing
Baahon Mein Aa Ja Jara Jaaniya, Jaaniya
Chup Chup Ke Dhadkano Ki, Sun Le Sadayein Aaja
Bahaon Mein Rehle Aaja Jaaniya, Jaaniya
Aab To Baton Mein Rakha Kya Hai Jab Har Pal
Teri Aankhein Kehti Hai Sau Kahaniyaan

(shut Up N Bounce Baby Bounce, Mehki Mehki Haawaien
Behki Behki Jaayein Yeh Jaawaniyann) ..........moves her hands left and right

Bounce, Bounce, Just Keep On Boncing Baby
Bounce, Bounce, Just Keep On Boncing

Shame Rangin Kar Du Main O Yeah O Yeah O Yeah..........goes to samrat and starts to dance
Baahein Teri Bhar Du Main O Yeah O Yeah O Yeah
Yeh Ishaarein Rehne Do, Na Mujhko Kehne Do........indicates to samrat
Kahin Baaton Mein Beete Na Jaawaniya
(shut Up N Bounce Baby Bounce, Mehki Mehki Haawaien.......starts to dance
Behki Behki Jaayein Yeh Jaawaniyann)
I Feel It I Need It, I Feel It Do It All Nite

Aankhein Zalim Yeh Teri O Yeah O Yeah O Yeah......goes to samrat and touches his eys
Raahein Roke Hai Meri O Yeah O Yeah O Yeah
Is Tarah De Dekho Na, Na Mukjko Dekhi Na......acts to shy
Yeh Teri Aankhein Kehti Hai Sau Kahaniyaan

(shut Up N Bounce Baby Bounce, Mehki Mehki Haawaien
Behki Behki Jaayein Yeh Jaawaniyann)...........starts to dance again

Malmal Ki Raaton Mein Tu, Khwaabon Ki Baaton Mein Aa
Bahon Mein Aa Ja Zara Jaaniya, Janiya...................does a dance step where she hugs herself
Chup Chup Ke Dhadkano Ki, Sun Le Sadayein Aaja..........puts a finger to her mouth and then hand at her heart

Bahaon Mein Rehle Aaja Jaaniya, Janiya
Abb To Baton Mein Rakha Kya Hai..........moves her hand in front of her lips
Jab Har Pal Teri Aankhein Kehti Hai Sau Kahaniya.....points to samrat then waves her hand in front of her eyes

Bounce, Bounce Shutup N Bounce......goes and dances with the background dancers
(dont Get Your Body Move It
Dont Get Your Body Move It Like Dis, Like Dis)
Shut Up And Bounce Baby Bounce Bounce Bounce
(dont Get Your Body Move It
Dont Get Your Body Move It Like Dis, Like Dis)
the whole time samrat was smiling looking at her dance.

the end......sorry again for the late update.....hope u like....dont forget to comment
Edited by preety88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Preety uupdt ws superb dear.
luvd d song.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part dear
loved it
continue soon
thx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome updarte
loved the part
cute song sequence
cont soon
love
tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey preety...
fianlly u updated...was waiting for it...awsome part yrr...
the song seq was very good.
loved it alot but it was short yrr plzzz write long one na...
and it was my pleasure helping u hon..🤗
love,
gunjan mariya..
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the awesome comments......here is the next update

after was done danceing she went to samrat.
G; samrat kaisa laga mera dance
S: ........
G: samrat
S......
G waves her hand in from of him: samrat
S: uh ha
G: kaisa laga mera dance tumhe
S; bohot acha
G: thanks
S: ab ghar chale
G: ummmmm nahi
S. plsssss chashmish
G: ok teekh hai
S. thanks chale
G: chalo

when they go outside samrat realizes that armaan had taken the car.
S: oh no armaan to car le gaya
G; fir kya huwa hum walk kar ke chalte hai na ghar
S: nahi taxi le lete hai
G: nahi mujhe walk karna hai
S: magar ghar to dor hai
G: mujhe kuch nahi pata main jali agar ana hai to ao. then gunjan starts to walk
S going after her; arre chashmish wait to karo arra hoon main
G: ab kyun aye
S: tumhe akele tori na jane deta
and then they both start to walk holding each others hand. when gunjan got an idea and let go of samrat hand and starts to run. samrat goes after her but gunjan stops and starts to sing

G;Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main.....spining around
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na....shaking his head no
G;Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main.....spining
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na ....saying no
G;Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main .....going close to him
S;Arre Na Re Na Baba Na .......pushing her back
G;Main Chali .......runs around
Banke Hawa
S;Rabba Mere....indicating to god
Mainu Bacha

G;Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main......going around samrat
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na .........saying no with hands
G;Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main .....going around samrat
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na .....shaking his head no
G;Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main .......trying to kiss him
S;Arre Na Re Na Baba Na .....going away from her
G;Main Chali .......runs around
Banke Hawa ......
S;Rabba Mere ......makes a sad face
Mainu Bacha ......

G;Mausam Bhi Be-imaan
Masti Ka Ye Saman ............jumps around
Roko O Logon Zameen Pe
Girne Laga Aasmaan ..........pretends she is falling
Thumak Thumak Ke Jhuloongi .......walks like a model
Main Udke Gagan Ko Chhuloongi
Main Chali .........runs and then spins around
Banke Hawa
S;Rabba Mere.......looks at the sky
Mainu Bacha

G;Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main.....spining around
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na....shaking his head no
G;Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main.....spining
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na ....saying no
G;Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main .....going close to him
S;Arre Na Re Na Baba Na .......pushing her back
G;Main Chali .......runs around
Banke Hawa
S;Rabba Mere....indicating to god
Mainu Bacha


G;Dhandi Dhandi Pavan.......acting like she is cold
Jalta Hai Ye Badan
Jee Chahta Hai Bana Loon
Tujhko Apna Sajan.........indicates to samrat
Hua Nahin Ye Pehle Kabhi ........shaking her head no
Meri Jaan Badal Gayi Abhi Abhi ........pointing finger at watch
Main Chali ........runs while waving
Banke Hawa
S;Rabba Mere.........has a pls same me look
Mainu Bacha

G;Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main......going around samrat
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na .........saying no with hands
G;Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main .....going around samrat
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na .....shaking his head no
G;Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main .......trying to kiss him
S;Arre Na Re Na Baba Na .....going away from her
G;Main Chali .......runs around
Banke Hawa ......
S;Rabba Mere ......makes a sad face
Mainu Bacha ......


S;Jaati Hai Tu Kahan.....goes to her
Jaaneman Jaanejaan
Ladki Hai Tu Khoobsurat........creases her face
Ladka Main Naujawaan......points to himself
Tujhe Gale Laga Loon Aa........hugs her
Palkhon Mein Bitha Loon Aa
Ho Gaya
Mujhe Nasha.....acts like he is lost in her
G;Rabba Mere.......runs from him
Mainu Bacha

G;Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main.....spining around
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na....shaking his head no
G;Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main.....spining
S;Arre Na Re Na Re Na ....saying no
G;Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main .....going close to him
S;Arre Na Re Na Baba Na .......pushing her back
G;Main Chali .......runs around
Banke Hawa
S;Rabba Mere....indicating to god
Mainu Bacha

after the song samrat went up to gunjan picked her up and started to walk. he knew that gunjan would start to sing again. when he picked her up gunjan was kicking and screaming so that samrat would put her down but nothing worked.
after a while gunjan saw a ice cream shop.
G: samrat
S: ab kya hai
G: mujhe utaro na
S; main yeh nahi karne wala
G: pls
S: sorry chashmish but no
so gunjan starts to pretend she is cry. and that made samrat stop and put her down. then he cupped her face and said: chashmish tum roh kyun rahi ho
gunjan stops crying and then runs laughing; main to mazak kar rahi thi taki tum mujhe neeche utaro
S gets shocked; kya
G: ha and then she goes in the ice cream shop and orders ice cream for herself.
samrat had come after she was done ordering her ice cream and goes to her
S: tum mujhe pehle bata deti ke tumhe ice cream kani hai
G; agar bata ti to kane dete
S: um nahi
G: isi liye nahi bataya maine
S: chashmish tum bhi na bilkul bache jaise har kate kar ti ho
G: kuin ki main apni bhai ke laadli hoon
then the waiter came with gunjans ice cream and gunjan started to eat like a kid. and samrat was looking at her.
S: tumhne mere liye nahi li
G; nahi
S: kyun
G: mujhe laga ke tumhe nahi kani
S: par mujhe kani hai
G: le lo ja kar
S: mujhe apni se tori de do na
G: nahi
S: plsss tori
G: ok teek hai yeh lo. gunjan takes the spoon toward samrat and when samrat was going to eat it gunjan eats it.
S: chashmish yeh kya tha
G laughing; main kyun tumhe apni ice cream do
S: teek hai fir main bhi tumhse baat nahi kar ta.
he folds his arms and looks the other way
G: arre tum to naraz ho gaye. acha yeh lo
and takes the spoon to him again and when samrat was going to eat gunjan eats it again
S; chashmish main sach main naraz ho jao ga
G: acha teek hai baba naraz mat ho yeh lo. and this time she gives it to him.
after eating ice cream samrat takes gunjan to him house since it was closer and he didnt want mayank to see gunjan in this state

at samrats house gunjan wasnt sitting in one spot she kept jumping around or dance. and poor samrat was trying to calm her down. but she didnt listen to him. then she asked samrat to get some water for her and when he went gunjan got an idea and hid in the guest rooms closet.
when samrat and didnt see gunjan he got worried and started to look for her everyone. and then when he opened the closet door he found gunjan sleeping.
S: itna bagh aur hyper ho ke so hi gaye. thank god
and then samrat picked her up and laid her on the bed and said good night chashmish and kissed her forhead.
G in her sleep; i love u samrat
S smiles. i love u too
and turns to leave but sees that gunjan is holding his hand tightly under her head with a smile on her face. samrat smiles seeing that. and just sits next to her and sleeps.

In the morning samrat wakes up and see gunjan is still sleeping holding his hand. so he slowly gets his hand out of gunjans grip and goes to his room and takes a shower. and then gets some lemon water for gunjan and goes to the guest room and sits next to her and wakes her up. when gunjan wakes up she smiles seeing samrat but then jerks up and looks around and see that shes not at her house.
G: samrat then holds her head.
S: yeh lo lemon water pe lo. sar dard dor ho gaye ga
G drinks it. thanks but main yaha kaise aiye
S: tumhne raat ko bohot pe le thi isisly tumhe yaha le aya
G: oh thanks
S: vaise kal tumhne mujhe bohot tang kiya
G: sorry
S: its okay
then gunjan hugs him and says i love u and samrat also hugs her back and says i love u too
when they hugged someone came in the room and got shocked and really mad.

the end...hope u guys like it....dont forget to comment....
Edited by preety88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was soooooooooo niceeeeeeeeeee who is getting mad
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finaly pretty m so so so soo much glad dat u updt swty.
part ws superb,awsm ,fantastic,mindblwing.
gud job sW*Hrt.
luv d part.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon dear.
luv u
vritika

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