U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 31

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Posted: 15 years ago
woooooooooo its soooooooooooo cute 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
lovely jaan .
tusi greate ho.👏👏👏👏
so cute n rumatic.😳
make it more more cute n rumantic.
appny viewers ki suna karu jaan .cvs math bano.😆😉
long update do payra payra😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
gosh waiting for next update .please do it soon jaan.
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Posted: 15 years ago
up date day do jaan.😳
i m waiting.😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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❤️ THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYZ ❤️

THANK U SOOOOOOOO MUCCHHH GUYZZ!!!!!!!!😊 4 LIKING AND LOVING MY UPDATE!!!! 😳 I LOVE UR COMMENTS AND REPLY TO ALL!!! 😃

WITH LOVE
KOMAL❤️

Edited by komal991 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
were is apdate jaan.😕
i want update new😭😭😭😭😭😭.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guyz!!!!!! h r u all?? i m here with my freshhh update and i want to dedicate it to my newly lovely frd 🤗DHANOO🤗 (dhanakz)
so enjoyy.....


PART # 14
after rv incident a week passed just a blink of eye, nupur is back to her normal routine but there is something changed , now she take her breakfast ,lunch and dinner on dining table with mayank, but one thing remain constant between them " silence " after the morning talk neither mayank talk to her nor nupur, they live together but no conversation between them.

nupur like sharma mansion she amazed with the architect of the mansion, on the back side of the mansion she found a deep green valley, she sit on the edge of the rock and feel the fresh cool breeze touching her face she feel so much relaxed and calm their, she closed her eyes and inhale a deep breath, she feel so much fresh, she saw so far sun was setting behind the mountains its about 2 hour she was sitting there its getting darker so she stand to go back in mansion but suddenly her foot slipped on the rock and she fall.........

mayank is very much relaxed now he knows now nupur is completely safe now, he noticed the change in nupur's routine, when 1st time he saw her on dining for breakfast he want to jump with happiness but he always control his emotions, he knows very well that nupur did n't like to talk him so he remain quite with her, but he always show his unsaid words through his expressive eyes, he went back frm his office as he enter he want to asked some thing but daimaa cut it off him and said with smile
DM: good evening chotay sahaab!!! ur nupur is on the backside of the mansion she found ur secret place.. mayank look at daimaa with his gr8 smile, he handover his coat and briefcase to her and move towards the valley, it was dark he reached their but not found her he saw here and there, then he shout
M: nupur.. nupurr.. where are you?? he keep looking here and there then suddenly he listen nupurs voice coming down frm the rock... nupur was feeling her hands getting loose in grip she clutch the tree branch, she thought now who can save me?? why all this happened to me? she screamed dai maa , bengi ,help but no use, noone came their to rescue her, she felt her hands loosing , she closed her eyes and want to remember the time she spend with her family tears comes in her eyes then suddenly she listen mayank 's voice a ray of life came to her body she screamed back
N: mayankk... mayank help me!! tears roll down her eyes by constantly screaming her throat hurts badly mayank ran towards the edge of the rock and look down he shocked to see nupur who is hanging with a tiny branch of a tree mayank lay down and give her his hand and said
M: nupur don't worry!!! i m there! now come on hold my hand tightly.. nupur want to hold his hand but she thought if she she left her one hand she will fall she shook her head and said while crying
N: no!!! i will fall!!! mayank pushe himself little downward and said
M: "i will never let u fall"!! "trust me" n give me ur hand! nupur look him she closed her eyes and loose her one hand frm the tree she about to fall then mayank hold her wrist tightly, she left her another hand and mayank hold her another wrist and push her upward , when she able to stand properly mayank wrapped his arms around her, he breath heavily and said
N: r u alright?? did u get hurt any where jaan?? nupur also breath heavily her feets were trembling when she stand then suddenly two strong arms wrapped around her, she slosed her eyes and rest her head on his chest, he was asking something but she did n't listen then she felt some thing wet around her waist she back off with hug remove his hands frm her waist and saw, his hands were bleeding badly nupur shocked to see this she screamed
N: mayank!!! OMG ! ur hands..... mayank remove his hands frm her grip and said
M: its nothing !! leave it!! tell me r u alright i m as.....nupur cutt off him and she shout with anger n concern
N: shut ur mouth! and come with me!!! mayank did n't said any word more, nupur hold his wrist and walk towards mansion....

as they reached their bedroom nupur make him sit on the bed , and grab the first aid box, she sit opposite to him and try to hold his hands when mayank put his hands back and said
M: i m fine nupur!!! there is no need of it!!! nupur stare him with anger she forward her hand and said gringly
N: give-me-ur-hand!!! mayank look at her and take a deep breath and give his hands.... nupur cut off the bandage which was wrapped around his hands, she saw 6 stiches in her right palm n 7 stiches in his left palm, her mouth opened to see that she immediately look at him and said
N: u hurt that badly only becoz of me!!!!... u lied to me u said its just a cut!!! nupur look him in disbelief , mayank knows all this, thats why he refuse earlier , mayank looked down n said
M: nupur!!! i m realy ok!! it did n't realy nupur shook her head n said nothing she wipes the blood which which resis frm his stiches she bandage his hands properly during doing that tears comes in her eyes... she thought he hurt only becoz me not only one time, right now he is going through so much pain only becoz me, tears fell dowm frm her eyes , mayank watched her constantly , he wipes her tears frm the back of his hands he cupped her face in between his hands and said with love
M: jaan!! do n't cry !!! i m fine! it did n't hurt i swear!! nupur remove his hands, frm her face and said while sobbing
N: promise me!!! promise me mayank u never did this again for me! u never hurt urself for me promise me!!!!!! mayank stare at her face he smiled his eyes were sparkling with unrolled tears he said
M: "i promised"!!! " I will definitely do same again till i breath " ....nupur want to say something but mayank hold her both hands he push her to near him little, he saw in her eyes with all his love he said
M: " IF I CAN STOP A SINGLE SCRATCH OF YOURS BY GIVING UP MY LIFE! IT WILL FEEL LIKE, MY LIFE WILL WORTH IT "........
nupur stare him blankely her eyes not even blink once she stare him, after a while she said with blankly
N: why u loved me so much??? mayank look at her with his love he laughed a bit and said!
M: thankss for believing that " I LOVE YOU" nupur move back a bit but mayank hold her arms lightly and said
M: jaan!!! i did n't have a answer of ur question!! i know only one thing that " I LOVE U "... how?? why?? when??? i dont know! and i dont want to know either!!!! nupur look him in disbelief she was not moving n inch she stare him blankly , suddenly mayank remember something he brush his hands in his hairs and said
M: i remember something!! got a go!! take care i will be late hmm .. he move forward and kiss her forhead and move out frm the room, nupur not move a bit she was still in her mind mayanks word resounds continuously..... suddenly mobile bell distract her frm her thoughts , she saw mayank 's mobile on the bed , she looked at number and shocked again dee why is she calling mayank , she pick up the phone and said
N: hi dee!!! h r u??
S: hey nups!!! i m fine! h r u and mayank?? nupur move her hair strand frm her face and said
N: we are fine!!!! u wanna talk mayank???
S: ya!! actually i call to thank him!! yaar u know na??? nupur looked mobile in disbelief and asked
N: wht?? to thanks mayank??? but why??? suhani go silent for a while then said
S: oh! so u don't know!! mayank did n't tell u? nupur get irritated she said
N: ohh dee! wht he did n't tell me? spill the bean dee!! suhani laughed then said
S: actually u know adi was fired frm his previous job about a week ago!! we are really worried about that!! but mayank hired adi for a job on MD post with high salary!!!!!! i tell u nups u r very lucky to have a husband like him!!! nupur is silent tears fall frm her eyes she said only
N:bye dee!!! she cut it off the the line and lay down on the bed !! she thought, whts all this?? y he so much care about me and my family? y he..........? her mind brusting with questions , she take a deep breath and got a answer frm her heart
" because he loved me "








phewwww!!!!!!!!!! long update haaan so guyz do u like it or not tell me with ur lovely comments!!! and about precap mmmmm i only tell u the next update will be hot !! and further u will all know by next update!!! till then love u all tc and seionara!!!!!!!!

love
KOMAL
Edited by komal991 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Jaan thank U so so so much to dedicated this beutiful Part to me
THANK U SO MUCH 😊
Yar Update is really really awesome, zabardast ,Fantastic and mind blowing.
U are really a brilliant writer the way u show mayank concern and Love towards Nupur is so beautiful. Hats off to U👏
and its really too good that Nupur start to realizing his love.
Oho precape is seems too hot .Mera PC to abhi sa hot hona start ho gaya ha.😉
So Plz try to update soon and Thanks again for your love.
With Love❤️
Tumhari Dhanno
Edited by DhanakZ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Hi Jaan thank U so so so much to dedicated this beutiful Part to me

THANK U SO MUCH 😊
Yar Update is really really awesome, zabardast ,Fantastic and mind blowing.
U are really a brilliant writer the way u show mayank concern and Love towards Nupur is so beautiful. Hats off to U👏
and its really too good that Nupur start to realizing his love.
Oho precape is seems too hot .Mera PC to abhi sa hot hona start ho gaya ha.😉
So Plz try to update soon and Thanks again for your love.
With Love❤️
Tumhari Dhanno



hey dhanoo!!!

heyyy main mer jawan...😊.!!!! itna pyara comment by god muwaaahhh to you!!! thankkk uuuuu sooo mucchh dhanoo 4 liking it!!!! aur mere tareef hayyyy bare hi achi lagte hay by god 😳 pura 1litre blood berh jata hay yaar!!!! thank u once again 4 liking it and ur lovely comment!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Komal fabulous update as usaul 👏👏 ⭐️ mayu such caring love hm and this line

M: "i promised"!!! " I will definitely do same again till i breath " ....nupur want to say something but mayank hold her both hands he push her to near him little, he saw in her eyes with all his love he said
M: " IF I CAN STOP A SINGLE SCRATCH OF YOURS BY GIVING UP MY LIFE! IT WILL FEEL LIKE, MY LIFE WILL WORTH IT "........ ⭐️
he was star of the update 2day
helping both Nups and Suhani N Adi
thanks 4 d beautiful update hun
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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful update dear..
thank GOD..mayank saved..........mayu loves nupzi badly yaar........anyways nupur realized it..hope she will also fall in love soon....awesome..pls continue soon dear....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Komal,
u r so sweet u kept ur promise of regular update 🤗 for u
I loved this update too
Gradual progression looks nice
now i am feeling the speed is controlled and it is going the way it should be
one que -nupur made to be in trouble or what?
Bechara mayank all the time he is saving her 😆😆😆😆
This update when she went to his secret place she didnt know it is dangerous and mayank loves to handle danger issues 😛😛😛😛
another when he was hiding his pain ,for her was wonderful.but nupur behaved properly again
and she asked him to promise so that he at least takes care of himself
but mayank being mayank
"IF I CAN STOP A SINGLE SCRATCH OF YOURS BY GIVING UP MY LIFE! IT WILL FEEL LIKE, MY LIFE WILL WORTH IT "
another hit he gave and she is like what?
then he left and Suhani called and what she told made nupur made to think aakhir kyon?
i must say the way story going i am happy and waiting to know more
so update when possible Komal
Luv,
Aru

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