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Posted: 15 years ago

Amazing update!!

ohh sasha is happy that geet wont be coming to office anymore😆

cant wait for the next part!!!

pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

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Posted: 15 years ago
i wish everthing goes smoothly pls when is your next update eagerly waitting for awesome by the way see soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
let me start by saying u have chosen one of my fav song frm one of my fav movies.........i really love it......ur choice of songs is very good and apt for d situation.........👏
Thank U Maanmeet1 ... tht song is 1 of my fav. too ... Tht movie is also gud but has a sad part kind of geet isn't it ... I luv each & every word of that song ....thank U for the compliment ...

coming bck to d update......i loved d way maan scolded sasha.....in her own words"usko uski aukaat dikha di".........i wish he doesnt forget d saree wala incident and takes serious action againts changu-mangu" i mean sasha-tasha".....he makes dem call geet......"geet mam".......
maan needs to scold sasha in front of every 1 tht's my dream ...😆😆😆 ....
would enjoy with my whole heart ....😊 She will pay 4 that saree incident tooo ...

he has always thought of her well being and happiness.......so selfless der actions r for each other.......just love.....pure love and aise pyar pe kaun fida na ho.........
Their love 4 each other is.... Truly Deeply Madly Totally Pure & Unconditional Love ... I love the love they have 4 each other ...

hey dont mind dear bt dont u feel geet should call pinky tu rather den tum........it sounds lil formal.......sry for dis..........
No not at all .... suggesstions are always a welcome ... sure in the next parts I will make a change geet will call Pinky Tu ... U R absolutely correct ... best friends / close friends call each other tu only ... That thing just slipped out of my head ....
thank u very much dear for suggesting that ...

i knw pinky and adi r best of friends a person can ever dream of..........
To find gud friends is like a treasure ... when u find them never let them go ...
True friendship is not that easy to find just like true love ...
loved ur update and looking forward for d next one.........u knw m addicted to dis now.........cant get enough of it.....
Thanks 4 the super duper compliment .... sure I am actually working on it ... will be posting very soon ...
I wish they read ur FF and incorporate some scenes in d actual serial.........loved it......
Thanks once again ... 4 the super duper compliment .... Tht's really a very big compliment dear ... I am elated ...
Actually some scenes have come in todays episode if u had noticed don't want to brag about it .... but can't help myself as I am actually feeling happy that they showed those scenes which I was wanting to see with maaneet ... I wanted to share with u all ...
Maan after knowing geet's pregnancy ...
1).where maan has taken geet to the hospital ... (same in FF)
2)while geet goes inside he waits outside for geet & introducing geet as Mrs.Khurana ...... (same in FF)
3)Geet getting all pushtaini jewelry in addition to wht she got earlier ...(In FF she gets maan's mom's jewelry in addition to wht she already got ...)
In previous episodes tooo ...
1)In the show maan asks adi & then pinky gives him the info ..(In FFwhn geet leaves maan asks pinky 1st & then security guard abt geet's where abouts ... )
2) maan searching 4 geet after she leaves him ... the only change is in FF it was bus stop & show it was railway station ...
3)The duppatta gets stuck to maan's watch whn she was leaving in FF ... In the show the silver jhalar or whtever gets stuck to maan's hand & to geet's duppatta...
4)Maan asking geet 2 say I lUV U episode ... U know abt tht already ... isn't it ...
5)some dialogues too came in earlier episode which I wanted to use 4 the confession part ... which were probably the same wht i wrote ....
6)maan asking geet to call him maan in the bus stand ...
7)maan asking geet in the bus stand - ghar chale ....(tht came in hoshiarpur)...
8)geet talking abt nayi subah in her life on the engagement day ...
wanted to share with u all ... thank u ...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

wow cute update.. waiting to c sasha's reaction on knwing the purpose of the party... luved geet's imagination.. do continue soon

sasha's face is worth watching 4 . .... thnk u for liking geet's imagination ... sure soon ...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kooliio

Amazing update!!

ohh sasha is happy that geet wont be coming to office anymore😆

cant wait for the next part!!!

pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

thank u ... she does not know wht's in store 4 her ... sure ... soon & U R welcome ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
i was waiting for ur update to let u knw dat ur FF scenes were der in d episode and while watching it i was like are ye to dew ne likha tha and i was so happy..........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

i wish everthing goes smoothly pls when is your next update eagerly waitting for awesome by the way see soonnnnnnnn

sure ... don't worry susana ... very soon ...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

i was waiting for ur update to let u knw dat ur FF scenes were der in d episode and while watching it i was like are ye to dew ne likha tha and i was so happy..........

Thank U meetu ... Update will take some more time dear ... Thnk u very much ... U felt happy ... tht's sweet of U ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
please let me know how u like this part ...tired right now it's 4:00 in the morning ....will post the next part tomorrow...

Part 27:-

Geet gives water to choking Pinky & pats her on her back – Pinky … Tu teek tho hain naa …

Pinky – haan … main teek hun … oye geet yeh tho batha … yeh sab ithni jaldi kaise ho gaya hain …

Geet gets up from the bed & walks to & fro in the room … Pinky is also walking along with geet in the bedroom ….

Geet – wo … wo …. Bas ho gaya …. Dadima kae kehnae par main unkae liyae ladkiyaan dekh rahin thi naa …. Issi beech main … unki dil ki baat jubaan par aa gayi aur unhonae mujhae apni dil ki baat bata diya hain … aur mainae bhi apni dil ki baath unsae keh di … phir dadima sae milae aur bas sagai aur shadi ki taareeq pakki kar liya …

Pinky – haai … kash mere life main bhi aisa koi hotha tho kitna acha hota hain …

Then Pinky spots all the shagun material given to geet which are lying on the table …

Pinky – Geet … yeh sab …

Geet – haa pinky …

Pinky – yeh sab … (pointing to shagun)

Geet – pinky yeh sab shaadi ka shagun hain ….

Geet shows pinky all the items she received for her shagun ….

Geet & Pinky carefully keep every thing inside as per maan's order … & are relaxing & chatting … then suddenly door bell rings …

Geet – ab kaun aaya iss waqt …

Geet is walking downstairs … Pinky also follows her … Geet opens the door … sees an unidentified man standing in front of her …

Geet – aapko kaun chahiyae ….

Delivery Boy – aap dono main sae Geet Handa kaun hain ?

Geet – Jee main Geet hun …

Delivery Boy – yeh aapkae liyae …(he hands her a parcel which is wraped up as a gift…)

Delivery Boy – yahan par signature karr dijiyae …

Geet signs the papers & the Delivery Boy leaves from there ….

Pinky – Geet yeh kya hain …

Geet – malum nahin hain pinky … dekhna padega …

Pinky – phir kholna … daer kis baath ki ….

Geet is opening the gift … while she is opening they hear the sound of a phone ringing …. This sound is coming from inside the gift …

Pinky – awaz tho andhar sae aa rahin hain … hain naa …

Geet – haa … (Geet quickly opens the gift & the phone is still ringing … geet now takes the phone is her hand & presses the talk button … It's a Black berry…)

Geet – hello …

Maan – Hello … sweetheart …

Geet – aap …

Maan – haan … sweetheart … main …

Geet (now moving away from Pinky & reduced her volume now …) – yeh kya bol rahen hain aap baar baar …

Maan – kya bol rahan hun main … maine tho kuch bhi nahin bola … sweet heart … (maan smiling mischievously …)

Geet – aapnae jo abhi abhi bola hain … wo

Maan – kya …. Kya … bola hain maine …

Making a face Geet – wohi …

Maan – kya … bolo bolo …

Geet – sweetheart …

Maan – haaiii … phir sae bolo naa …

Geet – sweetheart ….

Maan – haa sweetheart … main sun raha hun … aage ki baath bhi bolo …

Geet - Aap mujhae baar baar swetheart sweetaheart kyun bol rahen hain …

Maan – main tumhae nahin tho aur kisae aisae bula sakhtha hun sweet heart … kisi aur ko aisae bula ungaa tho tum chup rahogi kya ..... Bardasht kar paogi …

Geet – aap ek baar kisi ko aisae bula kar kae tho dekhiyae … phir dekhna main uss kaa kya haal karungi …. Uskae baal noch noch kae usse ganja nahin kar diya tho mera naam bhi geet handa nahin ….

Maan – geet … ithna hyper honae ki koi jaroorat nahin hain … main kisi ko bhi aisae nahin bula ungaa … siva ek kae …. Aur wo ek kaun hain …. Tum janthi ho … hain ki nahin …. Sweet heart ….

Geet now blushing & is calm …

Maan – geet tumnae mujhae miss kiya ….

Geet (thinking about the time when she was lost in maan's thought's & was missing him just before pinky arrived & absent mindedly tells )– jee … (then realises what she just said ) … jee nahin … nahin kiyaa …

Maan – jhooth math bolo geet … main jantha hun ki tumnae mujhae miss kiya hain …

Geet is silent does not answer ….

Maan – geet maalum hain …. Jab tumsae koi sawal punchthae hain aur uss sawal ka tumharae paas koi jawab nahin hotha tho iss ka matlab... haan hotha hain …. Hain ki nahin …

Geet – hmmm ….

Maan – chalo ab batao phone kaisa hain … gift tumhae pasand aaya ki nahin aaya …

Geet – hmmm … parr iski kya jaroorat thi … ghar main phone hain naa …

Maan – geet … jaroorat hain … kyunki mujhae tumhari chinta rehthi hain …aur yeh cell hamesha tumhare paas rakhna .... samjhi ....

geet - jee ... rakhungi ... aap ka hukum sar aakhon par ....
Maan - ab batau lunch kiya ki nahin …. Almost lunch time hone waala hain … kuch khaya ki nahin …

Geet – abhi thodi daer main kha lungi … aur aap nae khana khaya ki nahi …

Maan – nahin … maine bhi nahin khaya …

Geet - abhi aap kahan hain ….

Maan – main abhi bahar hun …

Geet – ghar kab aa rahen hain …

Maan – thodi daer main aa jaaungaa …

Geet – teek hain aapkae aanae kae baad khana khalengae …

Maan – mera intezaar math karna … mujhae thodi daer lagegi

Geet – teek hain … aap kahan hain boliyae main wahan aa thi hun aap kaa khana lekae … aap kaam karnae lagthae hain tho kisi ka bhi khayal nahin rehtha hain aapko …

Maan – geet …. Meri baath mano tum bass khana khao aur aaram karo shaam ki tayyari karo …. Main bahar hi kuch khalungaa ….

Geet – teek hain … main abhi aapko jab phone karungi tho aap sae yeh sunna chahungi ki aapnae khana kha liya hain …

Maan – teek hain baba … khalungaa … waise pinky aa gayi hain kya udhar …

Geet – haan … kab ka … thank u …

Maan – thank u …. Kis liyae …

Geet – wo apnae pinky ko mere paas bheja isliyae …

Maan – maine tumsae kya kahan tha … no sorry no thank u ... hain ki nahin …

Geet – teek hain … aindaa sae nahin kahungi ….

Maan – acha phir main tumsae baad main baath karungaa … tab tak khana khalena … warna maan singh khurana ka gussa tho tum janthi ho … hain ki nahin …

Geet – aap bhi khana khalijiyae gaa jaroor … waise aap bhi geet handa ko janthae hain … geet handa bhi maan singh khurana sae kuch kam nahin hain.

maan - ok maam ... ur wish is my order ...teek hain bye … sweet heart … thodi daer baad milengae ….

geet - bye ....

Geet hangs up the phone & then says Miss U & is checking for pinky …. Pinky is in the kitchen & is busy helping herself with some ice cream …

Pinky – sorry geet … tu … sir kae saath busy thi … aur muhae bukh lag rahin thi … tho maine ice cream kha liya …

Geet – iss main sorry bolnae ki kya jaroorat hain … tu meri dost hain … ithna haq tho tujhae hain … chal ice cream baad main khalena pehlae khana khalethae hain …

Geet & pinky have their lunch ….

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The hall of khurana mansion has been beautifully decorated with Peach color orchids,Roses which are dwelling very well with the Peach Orchids & Lilies (Rajni gandha)…. & to go along with the flowers they had arranged Lt. Peach curtains along with the white curtains which were already present in the hall .

maan & adi in the hall ... checking out all the arrangements ...& satisfied with every thing ...
Maan – Adi jab tak main nahin bolu party main sagai ki baath surprise rakhna hain …. Is maamlae main Meri baath dadima sae bhi ho gayi hain … mujhae kuch important relatives ka intezaar hain …. Jab tak wo nahin aayengae sagai Tab tak rokhna padega …. aur geet ko bhi andhar hi rakhna tab tak kae liyae … yehi baath pinky sae kehdo … unkae aanae kae baad wo geet sae milengae phir sagai hogi … samjhe …

Adi - jee sir …

Adi calls pinky on her phone – Pinky …

Pinky – haan adi sir …

Adi – pinky jab tak main yaa maan sir nahin kahengae geet ko andhar hi rakhna … teek hain … bahar nahin lekae aanaa …

Pinky – parr kyun … adi sir …

Adi – maan sir ka order hain …

And As per dadima's orders geet is getting ready in the mansion …. Pinky is helping her … maan & adi also go & get ready ….
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freinds could not give u more than this already almost 4 in the morning ... GTG ...will update tomorrow ...engagement ceremony ...
please feel free to comment ... luv ur comments ...
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Posted: 15 years ago

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