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Posted: 15 years ago

please feel free to comment & press the like button if u like my post ....thank you ... for ur wonderful support ...which gives me strength to continue ... so please keep supporting me ...

Part 26-

As soon as pinky & adi leave Maan's cabin … maan talks to Mr.manchanda (Pinky's dad) on phone … Then calls Sasha in ….

Sasha – may I come in MK…

Maan – yes … sasha … I was waiting for U … I have very important work … so I am leaving right now … Did U inform every one about the party tonight at khurana mansion …

Sasha – MK … wo tho geet ka kaam hain … wo aapki assisstant hain … main nahin hun …(Rolling her stupid eyes…)

Maan – main tumsae poonch rahan hun … sasha … aur koi Maan Singh Khurana ko yeh nahin batatha ki usse kya karna chahiyae aur kya nahin 😡… jo baath tumsae kehi gayi hain wo karo 😡…

Sasha – Sorry MK …

Maan – it's ok …

Sasha - geet abhi tak office nahin aayi hain … kal bhi nahin aayi thi …

Maan – geet abhi office nahin aayegi ….

Sasha(misunderstood MSK's sentance)2 herself –"finally MK nae geet ko job sae nikaal diyaa.."( feeling happy that geet is not a part of the office any more .)

Sasha – Fine MK … I will inform every one about the party …

Maan – great then … I am leaving right now I will also be out of the office for some time … if there's any thing urgent … just call me …

Sasha – don't worry MK … I will take care of every thing … (giving us her evil smile… )

Maan's walking out of the office ….

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Girls Please check this song … It's from the movie Ghar … one of my all time fav. Thought that might suit the situation of geet … Just imagine geet & maan in rekha & vinod mehra's place only for the song … It's a lovely song hope u girls enjoy it ….

(BTW this video belongs to some one else i just pasted the link ... thnks 2 the uploader ...)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l79Ii26jtU4

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l79Ii26jtU4[/YOUTUBE]

The song starts with Geet in the outhouse lying on her bed looking at the photograph of maan …

Geet on the bed looking at maan's photograph & singing while thinking about all the incidents that have happened between her and maan from the time they have met …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Bin tere … tere bin sajnaaaaa…

Saas main saas aaye naa oh o o o …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Bin tere tere bin sajnaaaaa …

Saas main saas aaye naa oh o o o …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Geet gets up from the bed …. is walking near to the window …

Jab bhi kyayal lon main tu aaye …

Mere badan sae khusboo aaye …

Geet imagines tht maan is behind her … he comes quietly & hugs her from behind while she is looking out of the window …. Sliding both of his hands towards her waist & getting a gud grip of her … geet & maan are looking at each other… Maan is feeling her hair with his face …& geet then moving away from maan ….

Jab bhi kyayal lon main tu aaye …

Mere badan sae khusboo aaye …

Mehki badan main rahan naa jaaye …

Rahan jaaye naa …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Bin tere tere bin sajnaaaaa …

Saas main saas aaye naa oh o o o …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Geet imagining maan still … Geet going downstairs running away from maan & maan following her … they both are playing hide & seek … maan trying to catch geet & geet running away from him not allowing him to come near her ... running around the dining table in the kitchen & then ....finally maan catches her & lifts her gently by her waist & geet puts her arms around his neck ....

Reshmi raatein roj naa hongi …

Yeh saugaathein roj naa hongi…

Reshmi raatein roj naa hongi …

Yeh saugaathein roj naa hongi…

Zindagi tujh bin raas naa aaye

Raas aayae naa …

Maan still … in geet's imagination singing & holding her in her arms & carrying her upstairs to their room & places her on her bed …. Coming close to her face ... maan's & geet's forehead touching each other …their noses rubbing against each other ….

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Bin tere tere bin sajnaaaaa …

Saas main saas aaye naa ha oh oooo …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

Tere Bina Jiya jaaye naa …

As the song ends Geet comes back to her senses & is lying on her bed with Maan's photograph in her hand … & her face on the pillow …. now blushing ☺️& feeling shy … as she was dreaming about maan …. All this time ….

Geet now patting her head on the back – geet tu bhi naa … pagal ho gayi … din main hi unkae sapnae dekh rahin hain ....

Then the door bell rings … geet goes downstairs to check who it is …. It is pinky at her door … surprised to see Pinky at this hour … as she is supposed to be in the office during office hours …

Geet – Pinky … tu … yahan … iss waqt …

Pinky is now munching on a bag of chips & chocolate & walking inside the outhouse – haan … geet maam … main yahan … iss waqt … kyun maine aapko disturb tho nahin kiyaa hain … Ya phir main yahan galat waqt pae aagayi hun … ya kisi aur ko expect kar rahin thi 😉...

Geet – kya pinky tum bhi … aise kyun bol rahin hain … tum mere ghar pae aany time aa sakhthi ho … par abhi tho tumhae office main honi chahiyae naa … phir yahan …

Pinky offering some chips to geet & geet takes some from her & starts eating going upstairs – haan wo DD nae … sorry … maan sir nae … mujhsae aur adi sir sae kahan ki aaj tum dono ka sagai hain aur adi sir ko preparations dekhnae kae liyae kahan tha … aur mujhae tumhae …

Geet – mujhae dekhnae kae liyae ….

Pinky – are yaar mere kehnae kaa matlab tha ki …. Tum ghar main akeli hongi naa … tho tumhare paas rehnae kae liyae mujhae bheje thae … so sweet naa…

Geet – haan …

Geet in her mind thinking that it was real sweet of maan to send pinky over there … he thought that I must be feeling alone on my important day as there is no body near me … tht's Y he sent Pinky over here so that she can be with me … so that I don't feel home sick … tht's real sweet of him … tht's y I luv him ….

Pinky - is liyae hum dono yahan aa gaye hain … adi sir mansion main hain … aur main tumhare samnae ….

Geet – acha kiya tum yahan aa gayi hain …

Geet & pinky now sitting on geet's bed & chatting ….

Pinky – maan sir tera kitna khayal rakhtae hain geet … sach main yaar tu bahut lucky hain … nahin tho kitni saari ladkiyaan maan sir kae upar marthi hain aur unkae peechae padi thi … parr unhonae aaj tak kisi ko palat kae bhi nahin dekha …aur tum sae sagai bhi kar rahen hain … aur shadi bhi …

Geet – haan … pinky sach main …

Pinky – shaadi ki taareekh pakki … hogayi hain kya … shaadi kab hain …

Geet – haan shadi ki taakeq pakki hogayi hain ... Monday evening ko hain …. 3 din main ….

Pinky (shocked) – 3 din main …(her eyes popping out..& choking now … as she was still eating a handfull of chips at that time ..)

Geet gives some water to pinky & pats on her back ….

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Plz comment girls ... as i luv reading ur comments ... 😊

Edited by dewdropred - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dewdropred

Thank U ... Nav preet ... Maan already knows everything about Geet's past ...
Geet told him everything abt her past .... she just din't tell dev's name ....
Sure ... very soon ...


yea i noe tat....tatz wt i meant...tat he will come to noe about d whole truth.....
n thnxx for d pm.....sweet of u to actually explain it n pm me.....thnxx sweetie :)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dimpzz


yea i noe tat....tatz wt i meant...tat he will come to noe about d whole truth.....
n thnxx for d pm.....sweet of u to actually explain it n pm me.....thnxx sweetie :)

I misunderstood U ... sorry abt tht ... U r welcome dear ... any time ...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
when u will give next update ? i m eagerly waiting.
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Originally posted by: nimi.fan

when u will give next update ? i m eagerly waiting.

hope fully very soon ... nimi ... thank u very much dear ...4 ur lovely comments ...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank u pushpi 4 liking it ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi dear............. amazing such a cute update.........
Maan is so caring
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update yaar.......
i wanna see sasha's face aftr she comes to know the motive 4 the party..
yaar... pls update soon.....................
cant wait.........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
aWEWSOME
lOVED THAT IMAGINATION part of geet
Continue soon!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice one honey.. pls update sooon

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