FF-Maan's confession&Geet's revelation-53last part

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Posted: 15 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
So cute ! Maan just pulled Geet away :-o update soon yaar

sure dhara ... asap ...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: premspadhu
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wat an excellent confession yaar
i just love it

kaash serial mein bhi aisa hi hoga

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update the next part asap

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thanks for pm

thnk u ....haa kash ... dekhna padega kya hoga... u r welcome .... sure asap ....

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dewdropred

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Posted: 15 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: pickachu
I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it.
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Maan is soooooooo sweetttttt.

Loveeeee maneet scenes.

Continue soon.

Thanxxx for the pm.

Fatima

thnk u fatima ...sure ...welcome ...

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dewdropred

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Posted: 15 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: swetha10
wow lovely update.. so romantic.. luved maan's expression of luv... plzz do continue soon

thnk u .... maan's expression of luv 😍...sure ....

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Posted: 15 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
wow maan told geet his past thats nice at least they know everything about each other apart some minute details
do continue

bye sumi

had 2 do tht ... sure ...

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dewdropred

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Posted: 15 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: kooliio

awesome update

pls cont.soon!!

thnk u ... sure ...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#287

If I wrote so many pages about Maaneet it is becoz of Ur support & of course pure true & unconditonal luv of maaneet … This part is dedicated 2 all of u girls out there … reading my FF & giving me tremendous support becoz of which I am able to write so please do reply & press the like button as I want ur feed back ...

Part 23 :-

In the previous part Geet was about to tell Maan those 3 golden words that he's been waiting for … but stops half way & does not complete her sentence.....

Maan using his sensuous voice & is coming closer to geet & then has both of his arms around her so that she is now secured in his hold & then pulls her close towards him in his arms so that she does move even an inch from him – main bhi aap sae uthna hi kya geet … bolo naa … bolo naa geet …. Mujhe aur kithna tadpaogee Geet … ab tho batha do …

Geet is feeling shy …. her heart's beating faster & faster …. she is avoiding eye contact with maan ….& is now looking at the beautiful colorful roses in the garden … Maan now touches Geet's chin with his right hand & gently turns her face towards him & with his left hand still having geet in his arms holding her tight & closer to him ….

Maan – bolo naa …

Geet is trying to free herself with both her hands from maan's left hand which was holding her tightly but is not successful…

Geet – please mujhae chod dijiyae …

Maan – kyun chod du tumhae …. Pehlae jo baat bolthae bolthae rukh gayi wo boldo ... phir dekhungaa … chod dhu ki aisae hi pakdi rahun … hain ki nahin ….

Geet – koi aa ajayega …

Maan – ane do … mujhae darr thodi lag raha hain ...

Geet – koi dekhlegaa …

Maan – dekhnae do … main bhi usse dekhlungaa … waise bhi ab tho koi hamein kuch bhi nahin bol sakhthae … tum tho meri hone wali biwi ho … hain naa … hain ki nahin …(now pressing her towards him self even more closer with his left hand & still has his right hand on her chin …)

Geet – Main abhi nahin bol sakhthi … aap janthae hain naa main aap sae kya kehna chahthi hun … phir kyun punch rahen hain …

Maan – kyun nahin bol sakhthi ho … aur main kya jantha hun … main tho kuch bhi nahin jantha …. Mujhe tho kuch bhi maalum nahin hain …

Geet – chodiyen naa mujhae … please … mujhae bolnae main sharm aa rahin hain ….

Maan – Geet handa ko bolnae main sharm aa rahin hain … yeh baat tho mere liyae breaking news hain … kya tum wohi geet handa ho jo bolthae bolthae kabhie thakthi hi nahin thi … aur jis ka bak bak kabhie katam hi nahin hota tha … aur tumhae chup karnae kae liyae mujhe bolna padtha tha … geet chup ho jao tumhara bak bak band karo …

Geet – oh tho main bak bak karthi hun ….

Maan – haan … karthi tho ho … hain ki nahin … waise main bhi pagal ho gaya hun nahin tho mujhae tumhara bak bak ithna pasand kyun aane laga hain … aur tum baat nahin karthi ho tho mujhae aise lag tha hain ki main behra ho gaya hun … aur mujhae kuch sunayi kyun nahin detha hain …. waise mere samnae sharm kis baath ki …

(saying this he is slowly bringing geet's face towards his face with his right hand which is still on her chin ...)

Geet in a very low voice & her heart beat is growing faster & faster as she is coming real close to maan – ab main aap kae samnae nahin sharmaa ungi tho aur kiskae samne sharmaa ungi … boliyae …

Maan now giving his sweet smile after hearing geet's line – kya kahan tumnae … mujhae kuch sunayi nahin diya …

Geet lips are very close to maan's lips as though he is going to seal her lips with his … she is scared , tensed & is blushing simultaneously…

Geet trying hard to resist maan's advances towards her she is feeling weak wants to give in as he is pulling her towards himself but …. tries to take over the situation – ab chodiyae bhi … bahut hogaya … main abhi nahin bol sakhthi …

Maan is angry now as she spoiled his whole romantic mood & loosening his control slowly on geet – ek kaam karo abhi math kehna … bees(20) - pachees (25)saal baad bolna … tab tak hamare bache bhi jawan ho jayenge aur hum budhae … hmmm … tab bolna … Maan … I LUV U …. Yeh teek hain … tumharae liyae

geet is not in his hold now … he freed her …. geet's hand on her lips …thinking to herself – "Shukar hain babaji …inhone abhi tho chod diya mujhae …warna aaj tho mujhae apni baahom lae kae mujhae kya karnae waale thae …. Nahin nahin … Babaji par yeh tho abb mujhsae gussa ho gaye hain … ab inko manana padega …"

Geet – teek hain …

Maan – teek hain … maine jo kahan tumhae wo teek laga … matlab abhi nahin bologi …

(tries to leave from there … takes 3 steps away from geet … now his back is facing geet & is silently smiling to himself thinking that geet will now tell him what he wants to listen from her …)

Geet (then realises what maan has actually said & reacts to it) - kya …. Nahin mere kehnae ka wo matlab nahin hain … main bolungi par tab nahin … matlab tab bhi bolungi aur ab bhi bolungi …

Maan now turning towards her & is facing Geet & walking again towards her – tho bolo naa …

Geet blushing & stepping back each step as maan was advancing towards her – bolungi tho jaroor par thodi daer main … abhi nahin bolungi … abhi tho main dadima sae milnae jaa rahin hun … wo mera intezaar kar rahin hongi naa …

Saying this she runs away from there … by maan's words & actions she came to know that maan was not angry with her ...

Maan is left alone over there … - Geet …rukho …

Geet is not stopping but still running away from him ….

Maan 2 him self - "yeh ladki bhi naa kabhie bhi apna khayal nahin rakhthi … jab dekho tab baagthi aur daudthi rehthi hain … utt patang harkatein karthi rehthi hain ...preg* hain yeh baat tho iskae dimaag main rehtha hi nahin hain ... ab mujhae hi issae samjana padega … ki aise baag daud teek nahin hain uss kae liyae …"

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