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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART- 10



he was irritated,he could no more bear her silence, it was killing him...
but he just felt the pain, when he saw her eyes filled with tears... 😭


He soon asked her gently, what bothered her soooo much
that made her sad.... to which she denied giving reason and
said "kuch nahi sir, mai teekh hu..." .....

MAAN : GEET... mujhe pagal samjha hai kya?
tumhe kya lagta hai? mai andhaa hu?
jo tumhaare aasooon nahi dekh sakta???

GEET : nahi sir .... mera wo matlab nahi hai...
mai bas keh rahi thi ki....


MAAN : KYA??? kya keh rahi thi tum ???
Geet.... ab tak mai tumhey
itna tho jaan chuka hu, ki mai
tumhaari baatein bina kahey bhi
samajh saku.....
Tho ab bataao mujhe, kya tumse kisi ne
kuch kaha???

GEET : huh... [in sigh ]
sir.... mujhse kuch kehne ke liye,
mere saath hai hi kaun???? [ this very word depicted her loneliness ]
sab tho mujhey....
[ she then looked into Maan's eyes... which were showing pain, so she stopped ]

Maan now realised, he should not take the conversation further...
as he knew , it would hurt her even more....
and he was not ready to see her cry there after....
he could not shout, he dint even want to, but it was
necessary,that he change the situation...........
so he returned to his usual tone, and raised his tone to say

MAAN : GEET.... tumhey pata bhi hai ki aaj office ka outing hai???
yaa woh bhi mai tumhe bataao???

GEET : [utterly confused by his sudden change,she had a jerk ]

haa.. woh... [slowly started but came back to her usual self]
haa ... haaa ,mujhe pata hai [ raising her head ]

MAAN : tho tumhey kya card dekar invite karne kaa intezaar hai???

GEET : nahi tho.... [innocently]

MAAN : tho CHALOOO ...... 😡

GEET : abhi??? [ bekhayaali mai... ]

MAAN : NAHI KAL.... [ Oh i love these lines ]

GEET : ok sir... KAL KABHI ????

MAAN : GEEEEEEEEET [ now he lost it ]

GEET : oh..huh... sir aap ka matlab
kal... matlab kal waala kal???
jiska matlab abhi???

MAAN : HAAAA.... abhi... 😡
chalo hum late ho chuke hai...

GEET : hum...????
Kya mai aapke saath jaaungi???

now he dint answer instead he dragged her to the car,
made her sit, slammed the door and geared up driving
to the resort.......

GEET : sir mai...

MAAN : GEET.... ek aur lafz nahi....
ab tum chup chap baiti raho...
ek aur lafz mat bolna.... [ angrily he said ]

GEET : DHUST DAANAV...😡
kabhi meri baat nahi suntey hai...

MAAN : kyaaa???

GEET : uh huh nah..eee..rrr

MAAN : geet tum yeh kya keh rahi ho????

GEET : Mai chup hu sir [ puttiing her finger on her lips ]

Maan slightly laughed turning aside
but managed to maintain his serious looks....
a little later, geet was feeling asleep,
just then Her hands hit the music player
and the song started.....

http://www.rkmania.com/songs.php?download=Kuch%20Tum%20Socho%20Mp3&trck=3592

"Kuch tum socho kuch hum soche ,
Phir khushi ka mausam aaye ....
Hmm kuch tum socho kuch hum soche ,
Phir khushi ka mausam aaye ...
Tanha tanha kaun jiya hain ...?
Rehke tanha dil ghabraye ....
Aa jao milke rishta yeh jode ...
Shart badalde rasmo ko tode ..,
Isse pehle ke yeh duniya humein aazmaye ...!!!!
Hooo kuch tum socho kuch hum soche ,
Phir khushi ka mausam aaye...."



At once.... both of them looked at each other...
Maan slowed down the car.... both equally
drowned in others eyes.... Maan felt a deep emotion in his heart...
as the song was exactly what he was feeling for her...
and geet dint know how to react....
she was sooo immersed in Maan's eyes ,as if she never wanted
the moment to end now...and look at him forever,the way she did now,
her heart started beating at high speed...
Maan could see the love she feels for him
and thought to himself....

MAAN : " Bas GEET....ab sirf shaam tak ka intezaar hai....
aur tum apni dil ki baat mujhe bataogi "

Maan broke the contact slowly....
and geet turned to the window,
trying to compose herself, watching the
silent roads,they were moving on... ,
the big trees which were roofing the roads,
the flowers, the sky, all seemed to be the signs of love
which she felt then, at the very moment....
they never felt this way before.......
they were mesmerised.......
they were deep in love for each other,but
never admitted the fact ...........

Thats all friends
i tried my best to make it longer
hope u all like it
plzzz do comment
and make me write more...
press the like button if u feel
i wort it....
___ have a great time 😛






Edited by wiinie_pooh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
lovely part....the sarcasm part was good
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
😆

best part loved ti thank you ........geet is so innocent thnk you
🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
it was really nice!!!..really!thank you for the pm!wat is maan gona do in the evening to make her say?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95


Originally posted by: desigurl953

lovely part....the sarcasm part was good



Hey thank you.....dear
happy that u liked it 😛

Originally posted by: anu_luv_maan

😆

best part loved ti thank you ........geet is so innocent thnk you
🤗



Thanks dear....and see today i dint forget to pm u 😉

Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN

very luvly part...❤️



Thank you sooooo much 🤗


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Edited by wiinie_pooh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
Vroooooooooooooooommmm....😛...Maan ki car ke peeche meri bhi gaadi follow kar rahi hai......😉.........Neeru u r tooooooooooooo..🤗....kya kahun...m running out of the words....😍....Awesume stuff........Waiting for the evening....."Shaam Dhal Rahi Hai,Tum Yaad Aa Rahe Ho"....☺️........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97





PART- 11



they never felt this way before,....they were mesmerised.
they were deep in love for each other,but they never admitt....


Geets slowly fell asleep.... and Maan Managed driving carefully
even while he constantly watched geet from the corner of his eyes........
she was looking sooo adorable, he wished he never took his eyes off her.
Finally after all the silent moments, they reached the resort........
Maan slowly called out GEET, not really wanting to wake her up....
Then he gave a thought about the staff who might be waiting,
and after many trials,she finally woke up to the phone call ....
Maan spoke to someone on phone,while Geet was trying to release her seat belt,
but found it difficult....After attending the call Maan looked at geet
who was still trying... he gently placed his hands on her shoulder,
and geet turned to him, to see his eyes which made her calm
and Maan bent towards her to release the belt,his touch made
her feel the warmth and even Maan knew it now,but he remained normal,
he was back to his position and was about to speak,but it was geet sooo 😉

GEET : sir yeh... aap... mujhe kaha lekar aagaye???

MAAN : Jahannum mai.... [ wexed with her questions since morning ]

GEET : par woh tho Dharti par nahi hoga na.... aapko route kaisey pata???
[ said knowingly, and tried to irritate him ]

MAAN : GEEET... tum mera mazaak udhaa rahi ho??? 😡

GEET : nahi .... sir meri itni himmat??? na baba na.... [ put an innocent face ]

MAAN : Geet... apni nautanki bandh karo.... yeh resort hai...." DREAM VALLEY " [ said in stiff tone ]
sab staff pahunch chukey hongey, ab chaley??? [moving his face forward he said ]

GEET : haa... sir... chaliye... wo... sab aagaye hongey [ ab yaad agaya ki wo boss hai ]

MAAN : haaa... chalo ...

maan quickly got out of the car and started walking faster
while geet with some reason wanted to speak to him and followed
trying to reach him, sensing something wrong Maan turned back
and as usual our GEET bumped into him....

MAAN : GEEEEEEET ...... kabhi tho dekh kar chala karo...
kyu hamesha takratey rehti ho mujhse???

GEET : Waah sir ..... ek tho aap itni tez chaltey hain
aur achaanak ruk jaatey hain, aisey mai
peechey chalne waale ko tho takraana hi hoga naaa [ said in childish manner ]


MAAN : GEEEET...... tumhey pichey chalne ki zaroorat
hi kya thi???? tum tho mere saath bhi chal sakti thi na...

GEET : woh...sir... mujhey aapka phone chahiye ....

MAAN : mera phone????? par kyu????

GEET : mujhey DADIMA se baat karni hai.....unhone mujhse kaha tha
ki pahunchtey hi phone karney ke liye

MAAN : huh.... [ he took a deep breath, he thouht he could never win over her ]

waving her hands she asked

GEET : SIR..... phone


and she called dadi, who said pari was staying in the resort
she would meet Geet by herself, as AAdi made arrangements .....

Maan was confused as he dint understand, how Geet managed
to have such a good bonding with Dadi within a short span...
and answered his thoughts by saying yeh ladki jo mujh jaise
insaan ko paagal bana ke jawaab deti rehti hai, tho,fr tho....yeh, kuch bhi kar sakti hai..


Then Maan reached the reception to inquire about the staff.....
if they reached or not... and was surprised to hear that
no one still turned up to the resort....and was thinking
what must be wrong with them????

MAAN : GEET... ??? yeh staff abhi tak kyu nahi aaye hai??

GEET : wooh...? jaane dijiye na sir... roj tho wo time par aatey hi hai,
kya hua? agar woh aaj ek din kuch der se aaye tho?
waisey bhi aap unse kaam thodi karwaaengey???
aaj tho masti kaa din hai na.... ?
[ actually it was dadima to change the staff timings
so that maan could meet pari before they reach,and geet being aware of it
after the phone call, tried to manage this way ]

MAAN : GEET.... tumharey dimaag mai aisey ultey seedhe jawaaab
aatey kaisey hai?????
Waise bhi sab tumhaari tarah nahi hongey, aur sab se important
baat tho yeh hai ki wo mere staff hai. khurana constructions ke....
UNHEY DISCIPLINE KA MATLAB PATAA HAIN.......😡


GEET : haan .... haan sir zarror pata hogaa.....
[and thinks]
[ "waisey bhi, jinkey aap jaise khadoos boss ho,unko tho bimaari lagnaa hi hai... hai naa babaji???"]





Yeh nokh jhok tho
jaari rahega....
kabhi pyaar,
tho kabhi gussa,
kab hogaa yeh izhaar???
dekhte rahiye....
KAISEY JIYA JAAYE ISHQ BINA???

lolllzzzzzzzzzzz 😆
__ have a great weekend😛

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
neeru
wow nice and wonderfull update dear
loved it yaar
maneet nok jonk wow nice dear
esp he jahanuum waala dialogue really cracked me more yaar
maan and his taunts
and
with love
sravs



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Posted: 15 years ago
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😆 oye lovely post yaar ........geet nd dadi ne maan ka plan hi badal diya 😆 woah ....lovely part .........thnk you 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
hahah,😆,, gr8 update... 🥳

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