Because U loved Me '(mayur)last part 15/1 pg100 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Alini.

Amazing....lovely one........

Continue soon..............
And thnks for the pm..............

thanx
thanx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
amazing part plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Nice & lovely FF..comt soon :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
wow dear
awesum part
loved it
sorry for d late reply
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
that was nicely written Fiza.. do PM me when you update next..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haey dear

Awesome story.

Just loved it.

Plzz add me 2 ur pm list.

*kulsum*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: arjunmayankfan

will read the 2 parts and comment

till then res😉

oki take ur time
i m waiting for ur comments
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
ch:5
Nupur: uffffffff what a day .i am sooooooooo tired…….it was such n hectic day

Mayank: ya it was….yawning…I m sleepy too

Nupur: wah bhi wah …Mr.sharma is behaving like a normal human being feeling sleepy….gr8

Maynak: ha ha ha….bad joke

Nupur: mayankkk.. im guest at ur house na…..plzzzzzzz can u go an make coffee for both of us

Mayank: raised his eyebrows….ha ha ha another bad joke….y dearr….if u have forgotten I am working on the same project and I am tired tooo

Nupur: plzzzzzzz…with cute face

Oh no not that….he goes so weak when he see her like that

Mayank: mjhy nhi atti bana ni

Nupur:oh h..uff..as if I have never had anything made by u na

Mayank: tht was such a big mistake….no wonder y I behave like a good neighbor n made dinner for u that day...ainda tu apnay liyan bhi nhi banao ga

Nupur: plzzzz na stop arguing na go plzz

Mayank: ooooooookkkkkk but on one condition…dinner is on u

Nupur: han han abhi tu coffe bano….diner k diner time per dkhy gay

Maynk:no no…deal or no deal

Nupur: oooook…fine

After sometime Nupur went into terrace…she was feeling the cold breeze…n was lost somewhere…somewhere in her past

Mayank entered there but stopped at the door…he was smiling n enjoying….but not the breeze…the picture perfect moment in front of him…an angle standing in front of him…hugging her self n closed eyes..hmm..she is….wao…but the frown on her face made him a bit low

Mayank: here is ur coffee ma'am
She excepted the mug with a faint smile…both settle down on the floor beside each other…enjoying the peace around them

Mayank was in a dilemma….he was thinking of asking her about her life…..but than ..shuld I..what if she does'nt wana tell….but than I should give it a try

Mayank: Nupur …can I ask u something

Nupur: she knew that ..this question is gonna cum her. way ….sooner or latter…n than she need to face it again

Yup Mayank u can ask

Mayank: see if you don't wana answer it don't….its complete fine with me

Nupur I just wonder why u left India..n here all alone

Nupur: it's a long story …sipping her coffe

Mayank: I am all here to listen …if you wana tell

Nupur look towards him…he nodded in assurance that he's gonna listen to her with all concern

Nupur: I don't want to be depended on anyone

Mayank: shock his head in surprise….india or out of India …bth place u can live independently Nupur

Nupur: ahhh…mayank …I am divorced ..that u must be knowing…we are two sister .. I am the youngest…. my father died 3 yrs back…my sister is married…so me n my mom use to live together…everyone forced me to get married though I don't want to….actually I want to take my mom responsibility on my own…but than I got married…my sweet husband

My husband was the most non trust worthy person…he gave the gift of betrayal on my wedding night he said he doesn't love me n love someone else….so can't get along with me

Mayank: wht ….wht a jerk than y the hell he marry you

Nupur: cauz his family wants to do so….he said he'll get married to his love in few months and thn will divorce me…by showing that he was already married and his parent forcefully marry him to me…..n our marriage will become fake according to hindu law

He was a rich man so playing with law was simple for him…..n he did the same within 6 moths he divorced me

Mayank: than y you didn't filed a case against him.

Nupur: I don't want to…Mayank it was of no use what will happen then….if even by chance I won the case…he wont start loving me n we cant like live happily ever after

Mayank: but than y you rush here

Nupur … I didn't wnt to live in Mumbai I don't want people to sympathize with me…and even I don't wanna cry for him …my mom died after few months….n so I was free frm her responsibility too ( said with a sad smile)

Mayank was alllllllll hurt …dnt know why ....but.... she even didn't drop a tear from her eyes but he was feeling pain ….he tried to put his hand on her shoulder but then stoped…..didnt want her to feel uncomfortable..

Mayank: ur..ur.. ok

Nupur: ya …I am fine…n plz don't feel sorry… its destiny..

Mayank: .if its destiny than y cant u stop spoiling ur life …u need to move on ...there loads of people around u who really cares for u loves you……

Nupur: I know … n I have moved on………….

...coffee is finished…lao mjhy do mein rekh ker ati hoon..

Mayank' thought

What..what was that…is tht so simple….my god how strong she is…I can see tears in her eyes but she said everything so simply…I know she doent like crying in front of any one…not even me….i thought she trust me n will pour her heart out in front of me…but …but than its ok

Nupur went to kitchen followed by Mayank….nupur stood infront of the counter…holding it tightly n controlling her tears

Nupur: what happen Nupur…y didn't u let it go ….i really wana pour it out but than why I cant…y I just cant

Mayank to himself

Mayank what you have done …she is crying…yes she is …I saw a tear on her cheek…man … y I askd her all that….but it was just that I want her to feel relived…wao she is so relived na…crying ….go n make up for ur mistake..go… I a going I am going

Mayank: nupur ( came back to reality n composed herself) .. you know there is something I never told you…when I don't talk n keep listening to someone…I feel like 10 times more hungry ….so stop gazing at me an start preparing the food

With so much innocence he said…nupur was like ahhhhh

Mayank your impossible…

Mayank…common go prepare food

Nupur: I am your friend not wife you cant order me to do anything…wht if I don't

Mayank: mein bhooka mar jao ga….aur tm mujhy mar ny do gi…nhiiii Nupur tum asa nhi ker sakti…meri pyari dost mujhy asay dhooka nhi day sakti..nhi nhi

Nupur:couldnt help but laughd : stop it..ur such a nautanki….hindi films join kerlo buhat kamao gay

Mayank..so tu hai….hey nupz…he came close to her …..u look so beautiful when u laugh…asay he hastay raha kero…achi lagti hoo

Next she just can smile n adore his friendship…she was truly blessed to have him around her

Nupur: now what r u doing

Mayank: helping u in preparing food…its my kitchen …so u must b needing me around…aur wasy bhi bahar tu I'll get bored

Nupur: smile …ur wife will b really happy to have u

Mayak: that she cant

Nupur: why

Mayank: cause I don't believe in marriage

Nupur: common Mayank.. one person experience doesn't make everyone wrong

Mayank: hmm .. I know…n this not because of u…but I don't trust marriages from start

Nupur: you.. a person like you don't trust relationships…who himself is such a caring n loving person

Mayank: wah wah …aj suraj west se nikla hai…itni tareefain..wao I am fainting

Nupur: Maaayank

Mayank: Nupurrrr….i think relationships are not reliable

Nupur: frndship is also a relationship Mayank..so as love bt marriage is also a gr8 relationship bt if people in it realize its importance n worth…..getting married is not a joke it's a commitment tht u make to love n care for a person whole life

Mayank: n look after her in health n illnes ...u may kiss the bride

Nupur: what????

Mayank: what..what,,,u were saying like father in the church so I just completed it …

Nupur: ur such 😡….mayank our parents were also married na… my parents use to share the most purist form of love I hav ever seen …..

Mayank: frnds n love v pick …. … idnt know abt marriage.. I dnt know y but I believe loves dies after marriage

Nupur: thts not the fault of marriage it's in you…..you thing so…. many people start there love after marriage

Mayank: I dnt know ….. I thing people strt taking each other for granted..n than love dies…sirf explanations rah jati hain

Nupur: ur scared of responsibility???

Mayank: no no not at all… I am all set to take responsibility of her but

Nupur: but what …..people u love the most …u take them for grant but in a positive sense….its beauty of a relation…u know.. u believe.. that the person in ur life will not leave you no matter wht are the circumstance….

Mayank: love is also a bond Nupur….people who are sincere with there relationship ….marriage or no marriage …remain with each other throughout there life

Nupur: marriage provide assurance, purity…dignity to there love

Mayank now this strange …ur experience with marriage has been so awful…n still ur defending it

Nupur: one person fault ..is not everyone's crime

Mayank: i know…but for me marriage makes people to stay with each other with or without love …its that when you know someone is there with you for whole life time…u start neglecting him.. believing the fact ..tht he''ll be there always…no matter u care ,,shower love affection or not….they are completely taken for granted

Nupur: its your fault not the fault of relation

Mayank: ohhh ufffoo…bs meri ma bs….itna argument tu meri sath generation ny nhi kiya hoga

Nupur: seven gernerations…shadi tu kero gay nhi…generations kaha se aay gi

Mayank: who ajay gi…us ke tension mat lo

Nupur: Mayank ur

Mayank: impossible … I know ..soch raha hoon board laga k ghoomo…n now stop arguing …dinner ko dkhy..warna larty larty breakfast k time hojay ga

Edited by drfizaahmed - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
achoose take care n get well soon
ruchi...i hope i kept my words
here u go another update
i think its a bit long..hope u like it...just wana show the diffrence of a strong opnion thy have
anyways do comment ..n prees like if u thnk it worth that
by the way
i'll nt be able to update this FF till eid...
a..lack of time
b..dnt wana right fiction in these days of ramazan
so i'll be back on eid or after eid pakka
Edited by drfizaahmed - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
hey it was amazing
the best part where you showed what marriage means
what is its beauty
loved it dear

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