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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter : 20

Samrat: so shadi kab

Myank: wekend per

Nupur & Diya: whttttttttttttttttttt?

Mayank: sorry agar koi problem hai tu …anytme mein tu asay hi kaha raha..tm

Nupur: bs bhi kero ….tm wapas apni form mein ajao warna waqi weekend tu lya lifetime k lyan shadi cancel

Samrat: nhi nhi…is ke guarantee meri…neeak kam mein dair kasai…soch raha hoon…encircling hs arm around diya….mein bhi sath hi kerlon…kyun diya

Diya: utho.side per ho..abhi in dono ke keraday…bari muskil se hath aaay hain….tu nupur ..kyun k sirf do din hai ….ek aj k aur kal ka….tu aj hi shoping chalty hai…wht do u wana wear…han….excitedly

Nupur: sumthng sim…

Mayank: exclusive..

Nupur: she smiled…thk hai tu tm hi lay aao

Mayank: han ..arahy baba mein mazak ker rahta ..its ur day

Nupur: but im serious

Mayank:whtt…. are sure

Nupur: 100%..smild

Samrat: sekho kuch…kitni farmabardar (obedient) biwi hai…

Diya: acha….tu tm dosri pasand kerlo…

Diya: ok now vr going for shoping …n u guys enjoy urself

Samrat: no way…kya matlab hai…sirf tum ny hi taiyar hona hai…hum bhi hain akhair

Diya: acha baba chaloo..per alag alag…mein bs 5 min mein fresh hoker aai

Samrat: joke of century…half n hr k lyan bhool jao..im going in ur room to take nap

Mayank: sure

Mayank: are u finding evrythng happening to fast…agar tum nahi jahao tu

Nupur: nhi mayank,,,,,its nt like tht….i just want evrythng to happen ur way bs

Mayank: lovingly…I just cant belive u'll be mine forever……get ready…diya ko tu mein dkhta hoon

He left n she was pleasantly surprise

Nupur: ap ko kab se itna bharoosa hogaya shadi per…tht u said I'll b urs forever aftr marriage…she smiled proudly…thy r moving in right direction.

They went on shoping..n the girls where having gr8 fun doing so…..diya was very excited n had tried atleast 20 dresses n was nt sure of any

Nupur: diya….yeah acha tu hai…by god tm kitna time laga ti ho shoping mein

Diya: nhi yaar is mein kitni moti lag rahin ho….aur tm sami k tarah baatein mat kero acha

Nupur: ok baba take ur time….mein tu aram se hoon….pata nhi mayank kya ker raha ho hoga…

Samrat: kasam hai jo mein khabhi teray sath shoping aaya…

Myank: samrat mein kya kero mjhy kuch samhj nhi arha

Samrat: tu kis ny kaha tha hero ban….

Mayank: look at him helpless….i can do it I know…just thnk abt her the way u want her to be at wedding

Samrat: put his hand on hs shoulder…ek baat bata tujhy tu shadi kerni nhi thi phir tu itna emotional kyn horaha hai…formality hi tu hai

Mayank: smarat…in anger…aj kaha diya hai ainda na kahna…I dnt but she does believe in marriage aur yeah humar layn formality nhi hai…plz

Samrat: ok ok …lover boy wedding dress per concentrate kerain..per tjhy exactly chaiya kya

Mayank: dreaming…kuch asa jo sab se alag ko….sirf us k lyan bana ho ..khabi koi asa na dkha ho…

Smrat: hmm..thnking..idea..dhoti lay ly..us per t shirt…sachi aj tak kis ny nhi pahna hoga

Myank: samrat…nt so funny…wah chaly

Samrat: chal bhi chal waha bhi chaltay hai…agelay saal tak kuch tu mil hi jay ga

The reached home hell tired

Samrat: ainada tu meri tauba…jo mein is k sath shoping agaya…diya k sath jana phir asan hai per yeah…nanai yaad agai mjhy

Diya: laughd..kyun…

Samart: mahasahy ko kuch acha hi nhi lag raha tha..pata nhi kya chaiy tha in ko..

Diya: tu kuch lay ya asay hi agay

Mayank: mayank sharma koi kam adhora nhi kerta….v got the bst for the bst

Diya: run twds him…dkhao na..

Mayank: no no ways

He was moving the back here n there n she was trying to catch

Diya: mayank dkhao na

Mayank: nhi kaha na..phly tm nhi dkh sakti samhji

Diya: uffo…who su gai hai ..ab tu mjhy dkhao

Mayank: hehe…bad joke…asa ho nhi sakta…..

He went to her house

He enterd n found her lost playing with her hairs…..he silently was cuming close to her….she heard footstep but didn't turn back…whn he was just about back hug her

Nupur: kya baat hai Mr.Sharama

Mayank: disapoointed…he hug her from back….kya baat hai honay wali Mrs sharma…ap tu hamri aahat bhi pehachan lati hain

nupur: koi shak….yeah kya hai

he turn her twds hm

Mayank: tmhara dress..

Nupur: she snatched from him n was abbt to open

Mayank: nhi abhi nhi ..jab mein chala jao tab kholna…pata nhi tm ny kya socha hoga aur mein kya laya ho

Nupur: m,ayank mein ny kuch nhi socha…mein wasa dkhna chati hoon jasa tm mjhy dekhna chahty ho

True he was touchd my her words..per mayank tu mayank hai

Mayank: sachi….tu phly bata na tha..phr tu is k kya kis dress k bhi zaroorat nhi thi…he was grinning n she was shockd n hel embaressed

Nupur: mayank bahar niklo yaha se …she pushd him outside

Mayank: acha baba suno tu….

Nupur: yeah double meaning baatein mat kiya kero mjhy se

Mayank: acha tu direct bolo..k…leaning twrds her….k…hum khany per ap k wait ker rahy hain..now stop blushing n cum fast..he touches her nose…sweet heart

She was returing back to her house

Mayank: sari baad mein dkh na

Uff…he hits hs head with his hand ..

Nupur: ohh…tu sari hai…simling

Mayank: y its so difficult to hides sumthng frm u…leaning twds her

Nupur: y u try to hide sumthng 4m me…dnt dare to

Mayank: kasi baatein ker rahi hoo…bahla koi apna extramarital affair biwi ko bata ta hai…mein kasay rkho ga

Nupur: mayank..abhi shadi bhi nhi hoi aur tm ..niklo bahar mjhy koi khana nhi khana

Mayank: acha na sorry …chalo…plz

Evening before wedding:

She was standing alone…looking outside..sun was seting done…for her it was the last sun of the incompleteness…the distance..the affection she is missing….she blushed at her own thought..she is dying for 2morow….true she was missing her family..as no one wnted to cum there for weding instead wishd her bst of luck formally…she laughd scracstically..Family…mayank is right abt relations..thy r nt just blood bounded thy are heart bounded…she was feeling excited a little nervous…it was'nt her first but for the first time she wanted to follow evry ritual..aww..but she cant

Nupur: so what if no body is with..the person matters the most to me is with me…thnks mayank..meri zindagi mein aany k lyan….she looked at her empty hands….the r nt empty …thy have a hand to hold whn thy r shaking…whn thy want support or evn if thy just want to feel the togetherness

She was so lost in her thoughts tht she even didn't realize he is standing behind her….he was hearing evrythng…a bit low he felt she is feeling lonely…..he kept staring her for sumtime than realize wht he should do..n went away frm there silently

DING DONG

Nupur: tm is waqt yaha kya ker rahy ho

Mayank was there… he didn't answer her went inside….

Bolo na kya hua

Mayank: chup..yaha bhato..i'll b back in two mins…yaha se hillna nhi plz…

Nupur: per

Mayank: nups plz

Nupur: oookkk

He went inside in kitchen n came back with a bowl in his hand….settle hm self near her on the floor

Mayank: hath do apna

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: because im saying so

Nupur: acha baba …

She fwd her hand upside down

Mayank: nt ths side..ur palm

He deeped his finger in the bowl n strat putng a small circle of hina in center of her palm….she was shocked…surprise …adoring…couldn't belive her luck…couldn't belive ths man….

She was just staring him with wet eyes

Mayank: Ms bhushan…kal ap ke shadi hai…tu technically aj ap ke mehndi…aur aj ap k hath khali …BUHAT NA INsafi hai

he laughd..she couldn't…he was chating bla bla n was busy applying hina on her hand….n she was busy staring at him…how much a person can love sum1 to ths extend ..she …a tear fall on her palm…he looked upto her..she was lost ….

Myank: innocently… I know achi nhi hai na

With a flick of second she hugged him tightly but carfully nt to mess the love he has applied on her hand..he reciprocated the hug

Mayank: hey kya hua

Nupur: tm itna pyar kasay kerlay tay ho

Mayank: DIL SE…he laughd…he knew how she is feeling ..just to lighten her up…hello would be Ms sharma…ap k ek hath baqi hai..let me complete…choray gi ap mjhy

Nupur: nhi..khabhi nhi..mjhy asay hi rahny do ..plz

Mayank: kya zamana agaya hai…shadi se ek din pehlay tu mjhy seduce kerny ke khasoish ker rahi ho…wait yaar..mein as larka nhi hoon

Nupur: kyun technically speaking aj tu tmhari bachelors party hai na..tu enjoy

Mayank was hell shocked with ths answer..kya kaha…really ….ok he tighten hs grip on her

Nupur: oops….yeah tu muskil hogai …..choro…

Mayank: ab kyun choro…

Nupur: mera dosra hath kahli hai islyan

Mayank: no ways..

Nupur: plz na…

precap: wedding😳 n wedding.....morning😆😉
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I totally loved the mehendi wala part.. fab written Fiza..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Fiza
lovely update dar
it was really very cute n nice- socially hena scene
mayank is so sweet.
loved mayur a lot
waiting for their weeding
keep it up

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Posted: 14 years ago

that was outstanding update Fiza

cute i loved hina scene n their hug 😍 mke dua for me in ashura days n i'll for u insha-allah
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey fiza 😃
amazing update........truly amazing......it was so lovely...and the best part was the mehendi...aww....loved it😍
will wait for wedding and wedding.....morning😉😆
try to update soon
love
tasfia
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hayeeee my cutie mayu...Marjaawa...'Tum itna pyaar kaise kar lete ho' Perfect line...Anazing update...I got tears during the mehendi part...Lovely...
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Posted: 14 years ago
its ok fiza i know abt ashura coz m muslim too and m also leaving on ahsura holidays so do update when u come back ok
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update Fiza!
loved it to the core
waiting for mayur wedding 😳😳😳
plz continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwww such a sweet upd8

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update
luved whole update bt mehendi part was superb
cont soon n tnx fr pm

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