Because U loved Me '(mayur)last part 15/1 pg100 - Page 41

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Posted: 14 years ago
its ok we'll wait for your update
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww! it's Okay hope it will fixed soon!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
its k dear...v will be waiting 4 the update..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow

awesome

hope mayur unite soon



update soon

luv

mahima
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Posted: 14 years ago
When will u update next............waiting for so long............hope ur prob solved plsss try n update..............!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
long and beautiful update
thank god Mayank ko Diya ne idea to diya :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
no dear the prblm has nt been solvd yet...eid holidays..pc wala chuti per..so...cant help it....im extrmly sorry
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys

Uffffffffffffff…after so long..it feels like ages..i didn't knew I m so connected to u all..but im ..sachi…finaally I m back..n there is an update…I m sorry ths time I haven't rplyd to any1..but next time se I'll paakaa…thanku so much for ur love ..thanx loottt…. As MJHT is now no where on screen I hope v all will make it eternal off screen…

Do comment….plzzzzzzzzz..n errors k lyan sorry

Luv fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 17:

Mayank: hey steeve

Steeve: he mayank ..how ru..how ru felling r u nt well…

Mayank: had hay..pori kahani karab ker k poch ta hai sabthk hia…..ya im fine..steeve do u know abt Nupur

Steeve: ya ofcourse..dnt u rember she went to Florida for a meeting for a week

Mayank was shocked , surpiresed n happy..ofcourse he knew tht..thanks steeve I got a go..talk to u later

He just cant belive it…. Wht the hell..yes I know ths I so knew ths…v thought of going together…..kitni excited thin a woh…

Nupur: Mayank..tmhay pata hai ..im goin to florida ths weekend..kitna maza aay ga na

Mayank: sadly….whts soo cool…tu tmhay meray se door rahay ny mein khushe hoti hai

She smiled at him n came fwd..n slided her hands… hugged him from back..mayank was surprised to c ths…ths frst time she came closed to him by herslf

Nupur: nhi…I was thinkng.hum dono.i mean um bor hojayo gay weekend per tu tm bhi sath chalo..khub enjoy keray gay

Mayank looked at her mischievously…n the pull her in frnt n hugged her frm back…he digd his head in her neck n whispered

Mayank: how v r gonna enjoy Ms. Bhushan define…

How can a person speak at this position..aur who bhi Nupur….she was losing herself finding him so close to her..he kept tightng his grip on her…

Mayank: nups

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: I love you…..moved his head away….u know it's a great idea ..im glad you came upto ths…n so ecxited abt it …he turn her around n make her face him..cuped her face n move fwd n kissd her forehead…keeping his lips lingering for sumtime

She clunches his collor..he moved back n looked at her sweetly

Bs Mayank bs….enough stop behaving like devdas n get up go n find her its high time now…this isn't like you….diya k ghar ja…im 100% sure who vahin hai….

Hey my sweet heart im cuming to get you back…

He took the first flight available and rush to florida….reaching there he called diya

Mayank: hey diya…is nups home

Diya: whose home…how cum I know …ur there find out urself …

Mayank; stop acting..i know she is at ur place…so act like gud frnd n give us sum privacy n get lost sumwhere…I reaching ur place in 30 mins

Diya: no nups gonna kill me

Myank: diya..plzzzzzz..i m dying

Diya: ok ok….im going out …will leave keys under mat so u don't need to ring the bell .. just enter n shock her

Myank: diyaaaa…. Im scared….wht if she

Diya: shut up Mayank.i know u love her aloot..just be positive..aur han sory abt tht day…mein kuch zayada bool gai..

Mayank: thanks n its ok…tum buhat kam bol gai…bye

He was standing outside Diya's home….finding all the courage...he was so confident when was leaving from NY but now it seems tht he'll loss everything….

He enter her house…..search here n ther.n finally as usual find her in balcony…….her hairs were flying…head lean on wall…….she was looking pale.ahhhhhhh he so hate himself for doing this…she was lost in her thought…he came fwd n whispered

Mayank: Nupur

Listening her name after so long frm him……….she closed her eyes n a tear droped

He placed his hand on her shoulder….she shocked it off

Nupur: mayank mjhy mein aur sun ny ke himat nhi.

Maynk: plz..plz nups ek par last time plzzzz

Nupur turn around in anger but was shocked to see him like tht.Mr.Shrama the perfectionist was looking ….Mess complete mess….

Nupur: ab aur bhi kuch bacah hai sunany ko

She bypass him n was abt to leave…whn he turn around n fall on his knees

Mayank: nups plzz..i am sorry..i am really sorry I know I am wrong ..plz nups plz

His shaky voice n pleading made her to turn around n see him….finding him on his knees head bowed n hands joined…..but she didn't liked him lik tht

I know I am no wher wht ur ..mein tmharay laiq hi nhi hoon ..jo mein ny kiya…I mean how I can do ths..mein ny kisi aur k gusa tm per nikala…I took u for granted….i am sorry ..sachi..it'll never happen again ..sachi..he touchd his throat in assurance…but one thng I want to tel u I Love U..i really do….plz mjhy chor k mat jao plz….mjhy apny akelay pan se buhat daar lag ta hai..mjhy apny ap se buhat dar lagta hai….srif ek tum ho jis k asass..pass mein..jis k sath honay se…I forget my fears..i forget myself..plz nups plz..

This was more than enough for her to breakdown…she rushed twds him actually on him….he hold her tightly as tightly as possible…she do did ths same..n after a while I love you mayank

Ahh..he smiled widely …thanks for loving me tht much I love you tooo sweetheart..

Thy remain like tht..feeling each other…caressing each other…

Mayank: meray jasay insane ko except kerny k liyan thanx

She broke apart n hit him tightly…

Nupur: dnt u dare say anything to the person …who doesn't belongs to u…

Oopss…thts whn Ms buhan realized in wht position bth of them where..she was almost..na na actually lying on him …she couldnt look n his eyes..n he ..he was completely lost in her..seeing her after so long …n so close…she tried to get up but his grip was to firm….her struggle made him cum back frm his dreamland…he holded his hand n got up n than make her do the same…

Mayank: sorry

Nupur: kitni baar bolo gay

Mayank: jab tak tum yeah nhi kaha dayti k tu ny mjhy maaf kiya

Nupur: mayankkkk

Mayank: nhi nupur..promise tm mjhy khabi asay chor k nhi aao gi..promise k tm mjh se baat kerna nhi choro gi…mjhy maar loo data loo par plz dnt stop talking to be..i cant tolerate ur silence..

Nupur: shhh…mayank…I never left you..u thought so….i can never leave u….florida k plan tu official tha…tmhay pata tha…mjhy kya pata that tm bhool jao gay..

Mayank: tmhai pata hai na I m stupid…tmhara bagir I cant think a bit…I m sorry I took u forgranted

Nupur: stop it mayank bas kro….u can take me for granted..im urs..she cuped his face…bhool jao sab…aur hello han…kal se tmny khud mjhy ek baaar bhi nhi call kiya mein kitan perishan hogai thi…

Mayank: I thought u'lll be angry with me..listenin n cutting my calls again n again

Nupur: pagal ho kya…kam se kam Is se yeah tu pata rahta that ht ur fine…mayank tm na..UR IMPOSIBLE

Ahhhh listening ths he took her in his arms…..feeling his love

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

oki

abt the questions i wanna ask...15 days back😕
1. whts the best thing abt ths FF
2. whts the wors thng or wht u dnt like...plz b honest😊
3. wht is missing
4. wht u want to read
i hope u all gonna ans it..n i hope u enjoyd the update
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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