Because U loved Me '(mayur)last part 15/1 pg100 - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous update
do cont sooon
thnx for the pm
love
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arjunmayankfan

fabulous update

do cont sooon
thnx for the pm
love
sneha

thanks a loot sneha....its always gr8 to c ur comments

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

very good updt.

continue soon.

thanks
glad u liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey guys

thanks alot for reading n liking my work...here im with another update
i know most of u have thought that next chap will be a fun filled but it isnt...but i really hope u all dont finding it boring😕.....ur comments good n bad bth are extremly precious...so do share them...
luv fiza
plz prees like if think it worths it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter: 8

Nupur gave him a dead look…she was coughing badly n he was giving lectures…a waiter was bypassing them with some drinks …..she stoped him n drunk a class n another n another …n she was relived

Mayank: nups… no….stop….Oh…..My….GOD….

Nupur: kya nhi …ek tu yaha meri halat karab horahi hai….aur tm mjhy lecture day rahy ho

Mayank: halat karab tu ab hogi ma'am….have u realize wht u were drinking…..it was hard drink..ek nhi do nhi…teen glass….mjhy nhi pata tha tumhary asay bhi shook hain…jo doosroo ko shock day dain

Nupur: ohhhhhhhh…noooo…ab kya hoga

Mayank: kuch nhi …thori dair mein tum gana…mein tali mein tali hogai….

Nupur: Mayank …ur impossible….plzz stop joking….mjhy buhat ajeeb lag raha

Mayank: relax nups..yaha already 80% loog…tm se bori halat mein hain…

Nupur looks at him with a sad face …shaked her head in disbelieve

Mayank: acha baba relax….hm ghar chalty hain ….u'll b fine..OK

Nupur: han ..plz…thanx

He holds her hand..n make his way out….carefully so that nobody notice them..or question them as why they r leaving so early

By the time ..she was all out of her senses….he make her sit in the car n than get to his own seat…

She adjusted herself in a weird way….cross her legs up on seat…lean her back on the window…now she was facing him…she was all smiling…n…smiling..mayank was watching this from corner of his eyes…n was all nervous…or hell nervous …...

Mayank: yeah mjhy asay kyun dkh rahi hai….her look makes me mad..wasy he I am getting ATTRACTED towards her…aur yeah asay keray gi tu paka I m gonna lose control on myself

She lean her head back…and all of a sudden start signing

Look into my eyes - you will see
What you mean to me
Search your heart - search your soul
And when you find me there you'll search no more

Don't tell me it's not worth tryin' for
You can't tell me it's not worth dyin' for
You know it's true
Everything I do - I do it for you


He looked at her surprisingly

Mayank POV: Gosh this girl is full of it…surprise…but what I am more surprised is…y she is singing this song…like is she defining my emotions or her…..what my emotions???…ya its so true everything I do …precisely I do it for you….her voice is beautiful…Mr.sharma..kuch bora hai us mein…hmm nhi kuch bhi nhi…

Look into your heart - you will find
There's nothin' there to hide
Take me as I am - take my life
I would give it all - I would sacrifice

Don't tell me it's not worth fightin' for
I can't help it - there's nothin' I want more
Ya know it's true
Everything I do - I do it for you

Hmmm…I am loving this feeling …I thinking sumwhere I have strat LIKING her…hm I really like her

His thought was broken when he found someone very close to him….looking at him …he was scared again…of himself…but this time more of her

Nupur: near his ear : MAYANK

Mayank: ahh..kya hua…chila kyun rahi hoo

Nupur: itni dair se awaz day rahin hon sunai nhi dayta kya…ganna khatam hogaya aur tum ny clapping bhi nhi ke….how mean

Mayank: laughed…..this is sumthing news Nupur Bhushan acting like a child…

sorry yar …ok…lovely song…u sung it beter han bryan adams…suchi…

Nupur: hmm ..i know

He smile n continue his journey of ….thoughts…soon the recahd..they were in elevator….this time Mayank was smiling n smiling …now he feels satisfied ….satisfied with the thought that what he feels …there is nthing wrong with it….its sumthing more than just liking ….sumthing NEAR LOVE

Elevator stopped at there floor..nupur fwds her hand..in thought tht he'll grab it an they'll make there way out but found Mr.Sharam lost n smiling…she came close to him n shouted

MAYANK

Mayank: tremble….got straight …composed himself…hmm.hmm ya kya hua

Nupur: with grin..pee mein ny rekhi hai..jarhi tum ko hai….mjhy pata hai im hot per kya pori raat lift mein mjhy dekh ker guzaroo gay….ghar chalay

Oops…he realized they reach there home finally …..woh apnay ghar mein apnay ghar

Mayank: nups tum rest kero mein chalta hoo..while making her sit

He was about to leave when she caught his hand

Nupur: mat jao plz…sab chalay jatay hain mjhy akeela chor k jab mjhy un ke zaroorat hoti hai…tum tu mat jao plz…

Her eyes where filled with pain n where pledding him…that's sumthing he cant tolerate…

Mayank: ok mein yahain hoon..aur tum ko chor k khabhi nhi jao ga..tm rest kero ..u need it

Nupur: tell the time

Mayank:11:00pm ..kyun

Nupur: mjhy suna nhi hai…kuch kerna hai

Mayank: shocked….hain….mein gaya…paka gaya…..matlab…..kya kya kerna hai

Nupur: hmmm….baatein

Mayank: chuckled….ok…tum rukho..i'll bring sumthing to drink…u'll feel better

He bring sum lemonade…n settle down beside her

Nupur: ur a sweet boy….really nice person..han deemag buhat kahaty ko per mera kayal bhi buhat rekhty ho ..hamesha achy bacho ke tarahan behave kertay ho …per than every1 has his life na..i know u also have..n sum day u'll find ur way…..n I'll be like…….

Mayank: ur part of my life …how can even u just say that…he was crossed how can she…just how can she evn think that I have a life without her…

Nupur: tell the time

Mayank:11:15…kyun

Nupur; asay he…dkh phr bolay tum…yeahi prblm hai tumhari…today I'll speak n u'll listen

Mayank: yes ma'am

Nupur: first my best frnd my Dad left me….than the person the relation I trusted the most left …adi left ( her husband)….nobody..N-O-B-O-D-Y….trusted me..evry1 thought I was at fault …I never tried to make him mine…how can I ..he was never mine..we lived six mths together..but counting credit hrs..thy'll b like six day…..he always use to cum late at night even sumtime in morning…sumtime drunked…n I need to secure myself from my HUSBAND…( with sarcastic smile)..n..when I told my sis that …she said he is my hubby have evry right on me…what I am his keep….its just nt only abt sharing bed…I was his wife…..tell the time

Mayank: han …was so hurted ..evry word was hurting him he so hurt n she is asking time: 11:45pm

Nupur: I got divorced…my mom died..i know she died because of me..she was a orthodox couldn't bear her daughter being divorced…so apparently I killed her

Mayank Pov:

Life is cruel…the day I was enjoying my feeling…she was enjoying herself…she is broken….but thank God she is poring it out …for the first time she isn't hiding or stoping her tears to fall out…it hurts …hurts so much ….

He could'nt stop his tear nor himself..he hug her as tightly as possible…just to engulf every pain of her in himself…to assure tht he trust her more than himself

Her voice broke his thought

Nupur: tell the time

Mayank: what the hell….y every five mins ur asking time yr

Nupur: kaha na meri marzi..batao …mayank: fine 11.58

Nupur: so apparently I killed my best friend precious gem

Looked at him its 12.00 now....he nodded in yes

Nupur: happy birthday to me( he smiled)……..congratulations n celebration we wish u a happy married life( was surprised )….happy first wedding anniversary

He closed his eyes..n shake his head in disbelieve

Nupur: I just SO HATE THIS DaY….my life complete ruined after this day…she throw's the glass she was holding on the floor…a broken piece hurt her hand too…

Mayank: nups ..tumhara hath..oh God…yeah kya kiya..he rushed to bathroom bring the first aid box….she was staring at him

Nups y u always do this….tum hamesha us idiot ke saza khud ko kyun dayti hoo..y u hurt urself

Nupur: cause I know ur there..to relief all my pains

He look at her surprisingly .. do i have that place in her life

Mayank; nups thora jalay ga

Nupur chuckled … chalay ga

He was not in a mood to joke..he was freaking out..he was so scared to put medicine on her hands just think how painful it will be..slowly n with gr8 difficulty he start putting medicine on her hands….soothing it with his breath…she was numb....chills run through her,,,she loves his care affection… everyting abt him

Nupur: mein tum ko buhat tang kerti hoon na

Mayank: hmm buhat …per mjhy acha lagta hai….meri ek baat mano gi..plz…chup chap ja ker soo jao ab plz…

Nupur: oki

Mayank: good girl….he makes her rest on bed cover her with sheet …Good night…was abt to leave when she caught his hand

Nupur: u promised u will not leave me

Mayank: he was helpless…not because she was acting stubborn...because even his heart doesn't want her to leave in this condition..he set beside her ..she closed her eyes n in few minutes goes to sleep…he was in his thoughts….while gently padding her head with his hand …y a small cut on her hand gave me soo mch pain..y every time she is around me I feel like a 16 yr old cool dude..who can go out of the way just to see a smile on her face…what I felt on beech….why I felt so complete when she was in my arms..its because yes..it is..its not nearly sumthing like love…its love….he whispered near her ears…Ms Nupur bhuhsan I love You…bs all I need to know is wht ever u said today..whtever I saw in ur eyes is it love or not…its time that I stop hiding n fighting with my feelings and show u how much I love you n how important you are to me , to yourself and to this world

Edited by drfizaahmed - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
a very nice and sweet update..
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Posted: 15 years ago
fiza wooooow amazingn heartwrenching update somtime it was sweeeeeet part like mayur 1s confo in e car n d song beautiful n then there was nupur who broke down in front of mayu didn't hide anything mayu he's o caring love him
n i feel verry bad 4 nupur wat she's gone through herpas life
her husband 😡
thanks hun 4 d pm 🤗
Edited by samiralovemayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ooy fizza!!

gr8 yaar! finnaly mayank relaise his feelings now we are waiting for romance scenes in between them!😉


love
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
mindblowing
luved each n every part of the update
finally mayank confessed his luv
cont soon dear n tnx fr pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
what an update yaar......great update...feeling very bad about nupzi..her past ....poor girl has went thru a lot..but no worries..our mayu is there na..........so finally he confessed..very sweet..pls continue soon dear.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was so heart wrenchiong heart
nupur has gone through so much pain\that her husband left her
her mom died
hope they confess their love

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