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Posted: 15 years ago
it was just an awesome...simply supurb...iam speechless now to talk more.......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
great updates yaar.... truely weekend special.... thanks...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Soumya!!
your updates are soooooooooooooo gooooooooooooodd .. they describe the passion that 2 people in love should share but with that the physical tension that fuels that fire too!!
you are doing a wonderful job .. me all tingly and glowing .. maan and geet in love ...( and lust)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
Uz xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nikhatoo Maan......he was hurt......hmph! Ok, I feel bad for him but she went through the same pain and indifference for 4 years......huh......glad that he wants to fix everything but things don't change overnight......thoda toh bardaasht karna padega na......kambaqht ishq chiz hai hi aisi......🤣

Nice......Do continue soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Maan is too naughty to get her attention acted ...
cute he listen Geet and went to Mall.
why he is sad ? he didnot bother to pay attention on her for four years . Guys are guys . they cannot share their thing with any one for min .. i hope he does not get jealous of his son.

wow to hot scene at the end UFFFFFF me sweating
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Posted: 15 years ago
dat was hoT!!!!!

awsum....cant wait...plzzzzzzzz update sooN!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sizzling update.
But i feel bad for maan.
Poor guy is trying level best to make geet realise that he loves her.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanxxx for the pm.


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Posted: 15 years ago
hmmmmmmmmmmmm
i duno wat to say......................its rliiii tough for both............but the precap - omg i have a feeling things arent gna get better soooo sooonnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
excellent update, now maan knows what geet felt like all those times when he never acknowlegded their marriage (altho he never knew) so i hope he can understand all the pain he has given her better
last scene was soo passionate and well written
now i'm waiting and wondering about the next update, why is maan questioning her?
thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago



how r u dear.thanks for such a fab updates.weekends guzarne me kafi help ho jati he.
part 57

geet is too understanding.she is such a.



maan - umm!! pata nahi mujhe se judi har baat ko aasni se samjh
lethi hain...


maan and priya convo is


maan - are tumhe pata nahin hain...gussa to uske naak pe rehatha hain
ek bar uske college gaya tha mere buttons open the...u know how I
used have it college...(priya I used to hate it)
she walked in & just closed the buttons & glared at me..
priya - don't tell me..
maan - oh god sasha & flowers incident was even worse
she gave me the flowers on the stage..when I turned to give it to sasha..
the way she looked at me..OMG ...trust me..meri to himat hi nahin hui..
pata nahin kya kar de

maan - mera matlab haan..lekhin aise nahin..
waise bhi..I know she loves me..I can see that in her eyes..
my love is not dependent on her saying I love u..
mera pyar uske haan ka mutaaz nahi
probably even before she knew she loves me..I knew she did..
woh use ki pyaar ki kashish hi to hain..jo mujhe mera na chate hua bhi
use ke pass le jathi rahi hain..
aaj nahi to kal ..she will read it in my eyes..then she won't be able to
stop herself..they way I am not able to...stop myself

geet - maina kaha tha na..ice mat daloo..
aab hogaya na sur main dard..
she gives him the medicine & applies the balm on his forehead
mumering to priya..di yeh kisi ki baat nahi sunthe..
inko swiming ka baat dandha pina se sur me dard ho jatha hain
but nahin..kuch bolo tu ..gussa..ghurna suroo..
maan just enjoys her mumering & for some reason the pain to seemed soothing
looks at priya & winks
geet - aap ko hasi aarahi hain..
maan - nahi woh!!
geet - no more juice for u...dry ur hair properly..(she takes the towel & wipes)
maan kisses geets hand..she pulls it back & walks away..
maan tells priya with a winning smile - I told u...

part 58

part 58 is cute geet ne acha khasa maan ko irritate kar diya he

geet snaps out of the bed & says..aap ko mazak sujraha hain (yeh maan ajjkal kuch zyada hi shararti nahi ho gaya)
i was so worried for u..maan kisses her cheek & gets ready..

geet - aap ko knock karne kya zarroorat hain.

priya ignores her answere & walks to maan ..wat say..
maan looks at geet (who looked confused)..maan sanps..I am getting late
for office
priya - tum sach main paagal hoo maan!! that was such an good plan..
maan - priya please ..yah sab kuch jada ho raha hain
I don't like all this...geet is fine..she will take time to understand
my love..but I am sure she will..doing all this will only misleading her..

geet - aap bhi chaloo na..
maan - theek hain..get ready..then
geet gets excited & hugs him & kisses on his cheek..& runs to her room
maan touches his cheek & smiles..sach much pagali hain.. (shoooooo sweet)

geet and krish are

she smiles at krish & says friendship can't be defined with out you!!!
umm!!! wah mera Jr.Mr.Lover..bilkul sahi ja rahe ho..(krish is blushing pink..)
babaji lakin mera Mr.lover kya hoga??? use main bhi thodhi samjh dal do na..

geet comes close to maan and slowly puts the ring in maans pocket & says
- be good..mooka milthe he..give her the ring...
maan gets angry & turns his face ..geet runs to catch up with krish
Maan shouts at priya..yeh looo...pehn loo ring..
I told u...uska dimgha ulta chaltha hain...ise aacha to main office chala jatha..
priya - seriously yaar..she is impossible..

maan - kya hai!!(he snaps)
geet - ji kuch nahin & cuts the call
maan calls back...
maan - aacha ..kya hua bolo?
geet - nahin woh!! humko..woh!!
maan - where are u..
geet - 5th floor..fun zone...
maan - wait we are coming there..







Edited by cute-aly - 15 years ago

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