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Posted: 15 years ago
hi fab as usual. i like krish n geet 2gether. they r gr8 frnds. i feel maan is jelous of krish. geet tho gettin j seems unaware of her feelings.
waitin 4 nxt part eagerly.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi lovely people...thanxs for u love, support , motivation..out of word..just read on
krish - dad hamare sare paise khatam hogaya.. please card refill kara do.
maan - umm.

part 59

maan gave money to krish ..looked at geet with concern..she walked along with krish
maan pulled her back..& lifted his eyebrows & asked wat happened
she smiled & turned her head for a no...she noticed..his hold changing..
he had slipped his fingers entangling hers...and pulled her closer..
it was so comfarting..she wondered why...she was not sure why she was
disturbed at the first place & why his hold made her feel warm...
maans fingers..were resting comfartably..like they belonged their..
pooja, kavya & smriti walked in..& noticed geet
they ran to geet..geet pulled her hand away from maan
maan looked at her suprised & hurt...pooja hugged geet...
pooja - hi dear..after such a long time
smriti & kavya joined the hug..
geet really felt nice..it was much wanted distraction..at that point for her
pooja - haiiii... maan..u remember u came to my house that night..
in mumbai..
maan - yah offcourse ..(looked at geet..she looked uncomfartable..maan
knew wat he was seeing in her eyes was not jealousy now..)
pooja - yaar geet aaj kal tu sirf maan ke sath hi dikhthi hain
geet looked away in embaressment..maan was seeing geet turning cold
towards him..that really irrated, bothered him..
smriti - geet yeh priya di hain na..?
kavya - not bad..so u guys are togather now...told maan & priya
priya(wondered)..
geet - di woh actually..aap ka contact detail smriti ke sister na diya tha!!
krish walks in..
kavya - so he is karthik..
geet - krishna...
kavya - yah ..right ..krishna..
pooja - u guys make a wondeful pair..(geet looked away)
smriti - sweet family..
pooja - geet humare saath chalna..we are planning for a girls day & night out..
kavya - waise bhi..tujhe kabab mein hadhi todhi ban hain..
geet looks at maan ..his eyes were hurt..he looked away
geet - di main javoo..please..
priya - lakin
geet - please they are my best friends..we are meeting after quite some time
you guys carry on..waise bhi aab mera kya kaam..
geet tells krish...be good
pooja - chalna yaar
geet leaves....

maans eye filled up...& he hits the table in anger..
priya - maan just relax ...I never seen u get so emotional
maan - why was she so indifferent ...I some time feel ..I really don't know
this girl...she is a total stranger to me!!
I don't know wat she likes, dislikes,friends, nothing at all..
geet walks back..to maan tlooking into his eyes..reading his concern

geet - woh!! they don't know I am married..
maan looked away....
geet - maan mujhe !woh!! & she paused
maan hands over his purse to her..& walks out..(he wanted to be with her..but didn't know wat to do)
pooja comes & pulls geet away..

priya touches maans shoulder
maan - she exactly knew wat bothered me...
priya - how could she tell them u r her husband?
maan - why can't she?
priya - u were never there for her..then..
maan - but i am there now
geet - but she is still not sure..
maan - I am going to office..I shall send the car for u guys..
priya - maan..suno thoo..

maan tried calling geet but her phone was unreachable...

maan comes home early looking for geet..she was not around..he waited the whole evening ..maan could'nt sleep..he was restless..& disturbed with geets reaction..with the space between them..he was doing all he could do to get closer & things were drifting apart..
geet came back at 10 & was with krish ever since...
maan was sitting with his laptop on the bed
she comes back at 3am to the room..
geet - gives his purse (maan does'nt say anything)
wow disc main reception nahi tha..(maan looks disinterested)
ok..how was ur lunch with di?(maan continues to work not bothering to reply)
she picks up night dress & walks into the washroom & changes & comes back
she closes his laptop..aap ka lunch kaisa tha
he bites his teeth with a grin..keeps the laptop aside & closes the light &
pulls the spread to cover himself..geet slips inside the spread on the other end..
there was complete darkness & silence..she takes a long breath in &
slowly touches his leg with the tip of her toe..maan felt the soft tender
touch & was tickled..but he pulls back his leg...she again touches his
legs very softly..rubbing it slightly higher
maan turns back..& hugs her from back..tum mujhe aise tempt karo ghi
aur phir u will say I am forcing u!!! she starts breathing harder & deeper..
nahin main to sirf..aap ko mana rahi..& her voice fades as
his hands slide into her salwar pulling the strings & further deep in her
his lips biting her ears..she moans as his hand finds their way deep in her..
he unzips her kurtee & turns her towards him...& replaces his fingers with his..hard & hot..
she wanted to protest but his head lowered, their lips met and kissed her..
passionate, hot and demanding.. soulful and yearning..Sweet and tender.
Without volition, she found her lips parting... their tongues tangled and
geet in the masculine taste of him. ..making her feel so very alive....
his fingers entangled her fingers not letting
them express their reaction..he was moving softer ..to ease her & not the
aggressive self..she was reluctantly moving towards the same goal..
just driving him more passionate..soaring ever higher & deeper..
untill they finally reach the climax..maan kisses geet and says love u ..

I really do..don't ever leave me & go

precap..
maan twisting geets hand..questioning her😭

that was the weekend special..hope u liked it😳...delay because of soumya's ff..i was lost reading them...plz do tell me how u feel
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
RESERVED TILL I READ AND THEN GOING TO SLEEP.

MUSKAN,i owe u a thank you for this and super comments will come in the morning .

luv u take care enjoy the weekend👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update as usual
kya yaar...geet ki friends ko bhi abhi aana tha?
idiots...aisi friends ho to dushman ki zaroorat hi na pade....

felt bad to see maan so sad
thanks for updating so fast
please update soon
i know i am being greedy but i cant help it

today i am going to start my own ff actually a few of them coz i cant decide which one to write so i'll see which one gets the best response

thanks
bye
do read my ff
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Posted: 15 years ago

sizzling update..............fabulous................love the chemistry between geet and maan...........

thnxxxxx for such brilliant updates and making the weekends bearable....love u
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desigurl953

great update as usual
kya yaar...geet ki friends ko bhi abhi aana tha?
idiots...aisi friends ho to dushman ki zaroorat hi na pade....

felt bad to see maan so sad
thanks for updating so fast
please update soon
i know i am being greedy but i cant help it

today i am going to start my own ff actually a few of them coz i cant decide which one to write so i'll see which one gets the best response

thanks
bye
do read my ff

can't wait to read do pm me..
I guess all of them will be brilliant
thanxs
love
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful, update soon. I just cant have enough of ur ff....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: amritsar007

RESERVED TILL I READ AND THEN GOING TO SLEEP.

MUSKAN,i owe u a thank you for this and super comments will come in the morning .

luv u take care enjoy the weekend👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

thanxs a lot..
but sweet heart weekend is just setting in😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Muskan why you left your story in cliff..Now i have to wait until next part..poor maan..Now he knows how Geet go through this year...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update .. thanks for updating soooon 😊😊😊😊

felt sad seeing both of them hurt.. but Maan.. now he might have understood how bad she felt during Amristar trip...

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