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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Sizzling chemistry 😳 Loved every bit of it. fabulous update. I read 3 times, and going for another go 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
speechless.....girl u r too gud!!!


loved it!!!

update soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

Muskaan...We are specchless ...The day is finally come,...i read it again and again still its making me to read again...takes time to come out of X.rated Maneet's Land....Fantastic......

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Muskaan, i came across yr FF on Sunday...n hav been awake for 2days till 5am..😲...catching up....😆....finally dne!!!

Enjoyed the whole plot..n hw u hav progressed with the story.....i'm glad it's different to the show......
If u hav a PM list plz add me.....lukin 4ward to the nxt updte......yr a wonderful writer.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95

Miketa - thanxs dear

monu - thanxs..really nice to see ur reply

axita - just hold on..thanxs for support

smartnsmexxi - glad u liked the guilty part!!

hasii - have more intense coming on the way

anufa - thanxs dear

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anu - thanxs dear

sukklover- thanxs tama..BTW do u know any producer..just joking

Starry_night - thanxs dear

pickachu - glad u liked it

jennifer1993 - thanxs dear

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uzmam1 - thanxs

kneeduh2000 - thanxs dear

kurtee - plz get up..there is much more coming

jennifer111 - thanxs dear

thanxs guys...glad u all liked it
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Hi Muskan, You are killing me. After reading your post, I just had to calm down myself to write anything or to do anything as I could not handle the hot sequence you wrote. So I just end up with Soumya's post. Gal I have just entered my office and have a full day ahead of me to work before I can land into Maneets dreamland (or mine) and you people are merciless to write so good and expects me to comment on them also. Even she has written upto the same extent of hotness. Whatever you people were talking about hyperventillation, I have faced it in full today. having said this, I am looking for the next update very soon.

Fantastic update. I can understand the emotions of the both. He is bent head over heal to getting close to her. She has all the feelings for him but feel thta it is wrong from her part to express her emotions, which might hurt her 2 loving people (Maan & Priya) which she can't accept. She was ashamed of herself for letting out her secret of her feelings towards Maan during their short but fascinate Kiss>. She was carried away with his his heavenly kisses but reality dawned on her about her planning for Maan & Priya's engagement. She never thought of betraying her priya di or making her husband feel the guilt. Hence she had to tear herself from Maan's embrace.
Looking for the next one immediately.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
i just read ur whole ff can u please add me to ur pm list i love ur ff it's the best one i have read😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
thanxs darling..loved ur explanation..
soumy's update was so cute..sorry HOT😉
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: lifesucks123

i just read ur whole ff can u please add me to ur pm list i love ur ff it's the best one i have read😊

thanxs dear..glad u liked it..pm list updated
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Posted: 14 years ago

geet ran into the shower & stood under the water..maan tried to pull her back ..
was suprised to see shame & guilt in her eyes..

part 51

maan waited for her to come out..he could hear her cry & weep
it was killing him..he tried knocking the door but she did'nt respond..
geet stood there thinking about wat she just felt..she was so guilty
she wondered how could she ever initiate all that..how much she avoided
even thinking about maan..where this desire came from...wat was all this
rush of act of lust..She washed every part of the body that felt his touch
maan just opened the door forcefully & walked in..geet was drenched in her saree..
she was hatting herself..maan just hugged her tight & said..
maan - geet u are my wife dear..its ok..
geet - no its not ok..leave me..chodoo mujhe..
maan did'nt let go of her...she struggled really hard.. his hands were comfating her..one supported her head and the other slowly pat her back..stroking ..
maan held her tight & said..geet please calm down..
she kept on struggling..untill She fell week & helpless..
maan lifted her & took her to the room..took a towel & wiped her..he slowly moved her wet curls and cupped her face...wiped her tears with his thumb
she pulled the towel from him & wiped herself..her tears were falling..continuously..
geet - said I am sorry..main..woh!! I did'nt mean
and started to cry again...
maan closed her lips with his index finger & said please kuch math kaho..
geet felt the touch of his hand on her lips & felt the heat again running through her spine..
she ran out of his room...& smashed the door behind..she changed ..&
dried her hair & started getting ready for the party
maan pulled his hair backaward in pain & wondered why geet is not letting
him tell her how much he loves her...
maan got ready & went to the party..he sat with daadi enquiring about her health

Krish led geet into a large room dominated by a magnificent chandelier suspended from
the middle of the high ceiling. Maan, daadi & other guest were already there..
Maan was lifting a drink to his lips but as his eyes rested on geet, the glass slipped from his hand,
landed on the floor and shattered.
daadi - wat is wrong with u maan?
maan did'nt respond..daadi followed his view to notice geet
krish - hi daadi..& hugged her
But geet heard nothing as Maan's dark eyes collided with her own.
The way he was looking at her, it was unidentifiable she was gripped with an uneasy feeling..
as if she suddenly belonged to him, geet shook her head slightly.. then looked away from him,
finding her thoughts ridiculous.. She didn't belong to him, he was in love priya for heaven's sake
babaji yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain...Maan was lost in geet's beauty that was booming with that darkest shade of pink.. she was flawless, beautiful, fragile lady..the lady of his life. Her unsurpassed beauty had stunned him so greatly that he had dropped the glass...he smiled away..Her eyes had met his, did she read my thoughts, my open desire for her...

Everyone finally resettled and geet had to force her eyes from Maan's direction.
every time she glanced at him, he was peering at her and she felt self-conscious under his speculative gaze ..Maan was still engrossed in his own thoughts and his lingering glance was becoming a bit of an
embarrassment to geet, especially as his glance had not gone unnoticed by daadi maa.
maan's gaze deepened and the room suddenly grew silent. Geet had a distinct feeling that Maan was
walking closer to her..she turned & tried to walk away..he pulled her to the dance floor

Khurbhan huwa...guys..please relive this wonderfull moment..with this angle..
she tried to walk away with tears in her eyes...he pulled her back & moved close to her.

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his hand made his way through her bare waist & then on top of the part with saree..
pulled her back..(she tucked her stomach in & moved back breathing faster & faster .)
she was lost in that touch...he held her hand & moved along the music..
his body was directing, controling her from tip to toe..
she could stop looking into those eyes..filled with passion & love
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JLQg3SysCX8[/YOUTUBE]
she slowly let go of his hand from her waist..
that really hurt maan...he walked away in anger...


Precap
maan & geet fight..

hope u liked it..please do let me know ur response
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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