(MaanEet) Tere - Final Update on Pg 69-70 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I like ur ff the way u started it please add me to ur pm list if u may.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey miketa do add me to ur pm list lookin forwrd to this FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

amazing ud yaar....

silly me....dadi copied tasha....

eager to know geet's past.......

thnx for the pm......



Thank you so much... Geet's past will come out soon... after few entries...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kooliio

Amazing update!! Wonder what is geet hiding?? Can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon and thanks for the PM



You will get to know soon... what Geet is hiding... after some parts mostly likely four or five...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: jattionfire

Hey Miketa😃

Congratulations on your new FF👏👏
I am so happy to read the first part😃
It was brilliant⭐️
even though MaaNeet hate eachother 😡( i wonder), they are getting married
im soo excited the read the next part hehe😉
i was checking my inbox all day yesterday if i had recieved any PM from u😆
finally i did 😛 and i jumped in excitement😆
so geet is gonna wear maan's mom's dress😳,. awwww., tht sounds very nice😃
and gunno bhaiya was hilarious😆
i have never heard of this name before😛
maan is taking her to the temple😉,., lets see what happens next😍
thanks so much for the pm dear😳
bytheway,. im Kituu🤪,., from United States😊
with wishes and love😳
Kituu🤪



I never knew that you would be totally waiting for me to update... thank you so much... yes they hate each other par how long will they avoid each other... Yes, Geet is gonna wear Maan's mom's dress...

Thank you Kituu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

hey miketa do add me to ur pm list lookin forwrd to this FF



Yeah I will add you
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you to those who have pressed like button... Please do let me know if anyone gets confused or not... Always open for suggestions...

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Part Two....

Maan awaits for Geet to sit inside his car....

"By God! Yeh Dhust Dhanav is hard to understand.... In fact any moment he could explode his anger on me" Geet scolding herself before sitting inside Maan's car.

Maan looked at Geet with a grin & started driving his car....

Geet looking here & there instead of looking at Maan's eyes....

Maan: Geet... Geet I didn't know that you are dying to be my wife....

Geet looked at him....

Maan: I never knew that....

Geet: That what?

Maan stopped his car on the road... and the road itself looked deserted... She became nervous but doesn't show it...

Maan: That you are...

He moved closer and closer... slowly distance disappear between them...

Geet to herself: What's wrong with him? He hasn't token out his anger on me yet? This is strange. Maan Sir never behaves like this.... Should I ask him... What if he shouts at me? Par Geet you want him to shout at you or else how would you know he's alright meaning normal.

Geet cleared her throat: Are you okay? Sir

Maan slowly lifting his hand towards Geet's face... meanwhile Geet trying to move back...

Geet: You are scaring me? Should I call a doctor? You are acting strange today.

Maan grabbed her from the neck and brought his face closer to her....

Geet closed her eyes for a moment...

Maan whispers in her ear: I didn't know that you are dying to marry me (Geet open her eyes and looked at him with shock) if you have told me personally than I wouldn't have delayed Dadi for long time...

Geet: What are you talking about?

Maan: You don't know what I am talking about?

Maan is digging his fingers deeply into Geet's neck by pulling her closer....

Geet whispered: You are hurting me...

Maan: And what about the pain I am going through?

Geet: I never dream of hurting anyone and if I hurt you in some way than I am sorry.

Maan: You better be sorry because today I destroyed your entire cabin for a file.... Why couldn't you personally ask me for a leave instead of Dadi? At least I wouldn't have to cancel my meeting for the file.

Geet: Which file? Whatever files you needed for today and up coming days are already with Pinky. In fact I have explained her everything. Why don't you never seek anyones help Mr. Maan Singh Khurana?

Maan looked at Geet for a second.... and thought to himself: Why didn't I think about that? Of course Geet would explain her duty to Pinky instead of me or Adi or Sasha.... Sometime I feel like I've gonna go mad in Geet's preference.

Geet shouts in Maan's ear: What are you thinking? Can we proceed or do you plan to marry me right now in this car?

Maan rubbing his ear...

Maan: I am not deaf! Even not desperate to marry you.... In fact I wonder what did Dadi see in you that I didn't. Maybe her age in affecting her eyes.

Geet: You are right Dadi's age is affecting her sight that's why she notice something good about me that you couldn't. If you don't start driving in few minute than I'll walk out and find taxi on this deserted road.. You know problems are my best friend and you are my problems worst enemy.

Geet sort of laughed at her own joke while...

Maan starts driving while Geet's words echoing in his mind...

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Sasha sitting in the canteen with Tasha... Both are discussing about MK's engagement with Ms. Hoshiyarpur...

Tasha: I don't get what Ma'am seen in Ms. Hoshiyarpur?

Sasha: That's what I am wondering.... What she saw in her that she didn't see in me?

Tasha: Maybe her dressing sense.... or her attitude toward DD

Sasha: Whatever... she's wearing isn't called fashion but down-market. Anyways why are we bothered about it or should we be?

Tasha: Silly Me! Why should we worry because we know DD will come to you sooner or later.

Sasha smiled....

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Maan parked his car outside Ganesha temple....

Maan: Geet you go inside and break your fast i'll wait outside here

Geet: For the first time you are right....

Maan: What do you mean? I am right for the first time when I've always been right in your case Madam.

Geet smacked her head...

Maan: Now what?

Geet: You have a problem if I agree with you or if I don't agree with you. Anyways I was saying that Raavan himself should attend holly places like temples.

Maan shouting: Geet you are calling me Raavan. Do I look like a Raavan with ten heads?

Geet imagine Maan Sir with ten head sitting in front of him and starts laughing

Maan: Did I say something funny? Answer me

Geet controlling her laughter: I knew you were a Raavan, but I never thought you would look good with ten heads. The name Raavan suits you better than Maan Sir. So may I call you Raavan instead of Maan Sir? And glad that you agree with me.

Geet doesn't wait for Maan's answer and gets out of the car.

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Pinky & Adi arrive at Khurana Mansion....

Dadi saw them...

Dadi: Finally you guys come

Pinky: Sorry Ma'am par Maan Sir wasn't allowing us to come early without completing our task for the day.

Dadi: He can never change... Its his engagement and he's worried about his deals of the day. It won't matter if he takes some days off. What will I do with him?

Adi: Don't worry Geet will change Maan Sir...

Pinky: Of course humari Geet kitni pyaari hai.... Nobody can resist her.

Dadi smiled at Pinky and Adi before instructing them with the list of what need to be done...

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Geet stood in front of her Gunno Bhaiyya....had her eyes closed and prayed "please Gunno Bhaiyya show me the right path. I never can hurt anyone than why do you always have to make things complicated for me. I can't share my problems with Dadi because it will affect her health. And now he's back to make things more difficult for me. I know I've promise her to protect him but how can I hurt Dadi who gave me more love than anyone else other than the person who is part of my life. I could tell him everything, but I don't want to effect him at the moment with his exams going on.... Please help me Gunno Bhaiyya" Geet open her eyes to fine Maan Sir standing beside her with his eyes closed.

Panditji came and blessed both Maaneet together by saying "god itself wants to keep you together than why are you fighting each other. How much you keep fighting for these distance? It will only bring you together"

Geet just stood there while Maan left her alone after hearing Panditji's words...

Geet looked at her Gunno Bhaiyya "Now I know what I have to do.... Thank you for showing me the current path par on this path I don't want to loose him.... He means the world to me... Maan Sir is good person but we just don't get along with each other without bickering" she takes deep breathe and walk away after taking blessing from Panditji again.

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Dadi looked impressed by Pinky and Adi's effort in decorating the place into wonderful eventful night which could make the front page. In fact Khurana's parties are always on front page of every news paper.

Dadi: Ab you to also leave

Pinky: Haan Ma'am

Adi: Yes Ma'am

Pinky and Adi turn to leave when Dadi caught Pinky's arm...

Pinky: Yes Ma'am

Dadi: Be on time tonight with Geet

Pinky nods her head....

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Maan drop Geet at her place before driving away.... He looked outside the window while recalling each others of Panditji.... and remembers the moments he have saved Geet from each problems.

Maan: Why did that Panditji say me and Geet are made for each other? Much as we try to go way from each other destiny only brings us together. I am so unsure of everything now.... I am looking forward for this marriage now because I am in command of her life. She'll have to listen to me now with complaining about anything in life onwards.

He continues driving toward his destination.....

Maan: You are thinking too much about Panditji's words.... relax and enjoy today.... you are getting engaged Maan.... You are not ruining your life but hers in return.

Maan parked outside outhouse and walked inside....

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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Hey😃
thanks for such a sweet reply to my post dear😳
i loved this part as well😉
mmm maan was trying to get on geet's nerves😉 but he got on his nerves himself😆
poor him😆., geet is driving him crazy😳😉
wow pandit ji bravo👏👏,., great words right there⭐️
but im lil confused about geet's character😕what was she talking about?😲
i knoe you will reveal the truth soon😳
but i know it wont be revealed before the marriage😛
it can,. who knows,😳., depends on you writer ji hehe😉
thanks for such a wonderful update😳
wishes👍🏼
Kituu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update.... luved the maneet fight....do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice ff... plz add me inur pm list
it was funny Geet imagine Maan with ten head 🤣 lol

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