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Thank you for baring with me... Here is the long awaited part... everyone been waiting for...

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Part Fourteen

Sound of clapping broke Armaan and Riddhima apart from their dream world. Atul & Abhi came out with smirk on their face. Riddhima couldn't stand the teasing look so she ran and hide herself behind Nikki who was sitting beside Geet.

Nikki whisper "lucky girl" Riddhima pinch her and hide herself in Geet's arm while stealing glance at Armaan who winked at her.

Abhi: Now we had to open the event with the newly wedded couple. I hope humara Juju picked up some clues from our dashing lover boy Armaan Mallik who's known as the doctor of hearts.

Armaan smacked Abhi on his shoulder and everyone burst out laughing while Maan just looked annoyed...

Geet inside her mind "Abhi... your dead! You don't know this Dhust Dhanav's anger which stays on his nose and waiting for the moment to explode at anyone." Maan caught Geet looking upwards "Dhust or romantic... in your dreams Abhi"

Maan smirked as if... he heard Geet's thoughts to her Babaji....

Atul: Par Abhi... I'm bored!

Abhi: How can you be bored when the evening hasn't even stared?

Atul: Think!

Abhi: Um... Atul share your problem afterwards cause now the floor is taken by our dashing... young... lovable Tani Shergil.

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Tani closed her eyes and remembered some good moments she spend with someone close to her heart...

Girls surrounding her: O O O O O ...

Tani: Meethi Meethi Baatan Karke
Chand Mulaakataan Karke
Meethi Meethi Baatan Karke
Chand Mulaakataan Karke

Tani dramatically swirls herself around in circle before falling on the ground... in front of Prithvi's feet "Dilasa De Gaya
Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
O Rabba Mera Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
O Rabba Mera Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya"

Prithvi help Tani up "Meethi Meethi Baatan Karke
Chand Mulaakataan Karke
Meethi Meethi Baatan Karke
Chand Mulaakataan Karke
Dilasa De Gaya
Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
O Rabba Mera Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
O Rabba Mera Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya" Tani look into his eyes... as if they are trying to tell her something.

Tani broke away from the eye lock moment "O Sili Sili Raaten Katti Nahi Hai
Yeh Duuriyan Kyon Mit Ti Nahi Hai
Nazdeekiyon Mein Bhi Faasalen Hai
Betaabiyon Kyon Katt Ti Nahi Hai"

(Prithvi stun by the pain in her voice... in between Maan stealing glance at Geet without being caught, but whenever Geet trying to do the same she get caught by him)

Tani: O Rab Teri Mehar Jo Ho Jaaye
Meri Zindadi Bhi Sanvar Jaaye
Yeh Mera Ishq Nikhar Jaaye

Prithvi could not stop himself from catching Tani's wrist and making her twirl in circle...

Tani: Meethi Meethi Baatan Karke
Chand Mulaakataan Karke
Dilasa De Gaya
Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
O Rabba Mera Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
O Rabba Mera Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya

Both continued looking at each other for some time before Pinky came and took her away "Akhh Da Ishaara Chal Kar Lay Tu
Chori Chori Dil Ki Gal Kar Lay Tu
Akhh Da Ishaara Chal Kar Lay Tu
Chori Chori Dil Ki Gal Kar Lay Tu
Akhh Da Ishaara Chal Kar Lay Tu
Chori Chori Dil Ki Gal Kar Lay Tu" Prithvi's mind sang those words... which troubling his heart... he just wanted to hug her at this moment.

Tani put her head on Riddhima's shoulder "O Haale Jiya Mein Kaise Bataaun
Ab Toh Bichhauda Seh Nahi Paaun
Tum Hi Tum Ho Meri Dhadkan Mein
Meri Saanson Mein Meri Tadpan Mein"

Both Pinky and Nikki stepped in to change the mode "Main Na Jaanu Ki Gal Hain
Ho Pal Pal Mann Mein Hulchul Hain
Mere Iss Dard Ka Tu Hall Hain
Meethi Meethi Baatan Karke
Chand Mulaakataan Karke
Dilasa De Gaya
Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya
O Rabba Mera Dil Maahiya Lay Gaya"

Each couple are looking at each other... Armaan starring at Riddhima.... Abhi at Nikki... Maan at Geet... and Prithvi looking at Tani.... but her pain visualized in his eyes.

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"Um... that was very emotional" Abhi came out "don't you think so Atul" Abhi looking here and there for him "you are right... Abhi" Abhi frown seeing Armaan "but every relationship are filled with happiness dash sorrows"

Geet clapped her hands "Guys! Stop it" Everyone looked at Geet who stood up in anger. Maan trying to make her sit down but Geet ignored him and went toward her friends.

Armaan: What's wrong?

Geet: Kya hai? Atul is right! Its dam boring without any Masti. What happen to you Armaan? Remember you use to bring so much fun in boring lectures of Hitler.

Armaan recalling those moments with his father in law afterwards placed his arm around Geet's shoulder "oyee.. I am the same Armaan Mallik, but if we grove the stage on fire than what are the groom side gonna do" Voice behind the three "buddy... they don't have the guts in accepting our challenge"

Geet suddenly got wonderful visualize in her mind... where Maan is sitting on the stage with choori in his hands and start laughing.

Maan stared at Geet with his eyes and Geet quiet down her laugh....

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Vicky stood up "hey... who's side are you on?" he asked Prithvi.

Prithvi about to say something, but saw Tani coming down the stairs so winked at Armaan and came toward Vicky "of course on your side. I could never ditch you."

Vicky: Yeah... yeah whatever! Adi... Tasha.. ready guys.

Both of them nod their head "Adi or dance" Pinky spoke from behind with Tani on her right side "never"

Adi walks toward Pinky "Never challenge me girl... you never no when storm could come"

Pinky: Oh! Storm my foot.

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Vicky, Adi & Prithvi are snapping their fingers (Armaan playing the drums in fast beat) "Balle balle je soniya de rang dekhlo
bina dor di uDh di patang dekh lo"

Vicky wanted to take Tani, but Prithvi pulls her towards him... Adi takes Pinky so Tasha is paired with him "Aj munde hue enhan de malang dekh lo
bina dor di uDh di patang dekh lo"

Doing Bharagra and the girls push them "Ay kudiyan kudiyan, ay tikhiyan churiyan
kudiyan jawan hath na aawan

hoo (Spins the girls in the air)

ena pundiyan de maare hue tang dekh lo"

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Riddhima come with Nikki and take Geet with them... Atul and Abhi took Maan toward their room...

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Boys trying catching them "sat sri akal soniyo
sunaao sanuun haal soniyo

oh zaraa nach ke dikhaoo saDe naal soniyo
na soch sawal soniyon, ehdi kyun chaal soniyo" girls escaping from their grips and also sticking out their tongue to tease them.

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Geet come out dressed in the lenhga and the choli... Nikki taking out the accessories they'll need... Riddhima help Geet sit on the stool and started doing her hair...

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Boys twirling around the girls in circle "eh naara naara naara, eh tikhiyan tejh katara
bijili di nangiyan taara.n, oh taara taara taara
je kol ena de aaoge ta pyaar de chakke khaoge"

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Maan already brought down for the further rituals... meanwhile Riddhima placed black dot behind her ear and whispered "after tonight you'll begin a new beginning with your life partner and these moment won't last for long if we don't hold onto them." Nikki placed her hand on Geet's shoulder while she smiled.

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Vicky dancing with Tasha... who kept on looking at Sasha....

Adi twisting Pinky around in his arms...

Tani decide to leave the dance floor cause it was getting too much for her... but Prithvi caught her wrist from leaving and twirls her into his arms.

Tani's back hits Prithvi's chest and Prithvi whisper "within 48hrs you... yourself will come running into my arms and that is a promise" Tani glared at him "in your dreams"

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Geet brought down by Riddhima, Nikki and Pinky joined them "baage vich aaya karo" but suddenly she stop and look at Rahul who just came with Dev. Everything froze at that moment and their soul walking toward each other "jado chand chup jaave
tusi mukhda dikhaya karo"

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Tasha ditch Vicky and goes to stand by Sasha... and both Adi and Vicky dance with each other while Prithvi kept on tightening his grip around Tani... when she is trying to break free.

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"tu aagaya to bahaar aayi
haseen ho gaye nazare saare" Geet snap out of her eye lock with Rahul and walked toward the mandup "mala vich phul Tangeya
umraan lang chali aa.n
par joban nahin langeya" Rahul watch Armaan & Riddhima (actually out of Geet to Maan's family thought Rajveer would do the honor... but they don't know the importance both Geet and Armaan have for each other in their lives so he wanted Armaan himself as a big brother give Geet away under his pressure Armaan agreed) giving Geet's hand to Maan afterwards he pats her head... while Tani break free from Prithvi, but his words are echoing in her mind.

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Finally the pundit ask them to get up for the saat phere Maan begin with the first four phere and Geet behind him "Mangalam Bhagavan Vishnum
Mangalam Garudadhwajah
Mangalam Pundareekaksham
Mangalayatano Harih" with each step being completed Maan is asked to take vows in keeping his wife happy until death itself don't separate them.

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Rahul saw Geet coming forward the guy she is marrying meaning his friend Dev's brother "Mangalam Bhagavan Vishnum
Mangalam Garudadhwajah
Mangalam Pundareekaksham
Mangalayatano Harih" small tear escape from his eyes while Geet complete her phere....

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Pinky with Nikki distracting the boys from keeping eye on Maan's shoes... Riddhima with Tani stole the shoes without anyone catching them or you can say someone was watching their movement with smirk.

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Pundit lift up the sindoor container towards Maan... Maan pinched inside the red powder... slowly moving toward Geet forehead...

Geet look at Rahul who was standing in front of her and than she closed her eyes... in mean time Maan place the sindoor in her forehead.

Afterwards the pundit gave Maan mangalsutra to tie around her neck... Geet watch Maan stop for awhile than placed around her neck before that he whispered in her ears "you'll regret this moment through out your life... cause you haven't met the real Maan Singh Khurana".

Both look at each other with mixed emotions filled inside them... Rahul without anyone noticing left the building with tears non-stop streaming down his face.

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Both of them took blessing from Rajveer Uncle "Maan beta... whatever the world say about me and my love toward these girls, but I know deep down inside I am father of six girls who might not be my own par they mean the world to me. Like every father I want to see my Geet beta always happy in her married life and if she by mistakenly make mistake please forgive her." Maan assured him with his eyes and saw Geet hugging Rajveer Uncle.

Afterwards they went toward Maan's Dadi who kissed Geet's forehead "god bless you my child... always consider me as your Dadi too... not only Maan" Geet hugged her... Maan in his mind curse these rituals "a simple court marriage would have been easier than this dramatic ones" as if Dadi understood his thoughts "my grandson... don't you dare think that court marriage are easy way out of these rituals cause true Indian wedding's are incomplete out of these rituals. And they are not dramatic, but connected to everyone hearts by emotion."

Maan: Dadi

Dadi: Save it for later on...

Next Geet hug each one of her friends and Armaan being a bro asked Maan to always take care of her. Afterwards Maan looked for his shoes but couldn't find them.

Maan walked over to Vicky along with Geet cause they are tied together "where are my shoes?" Vicky looked horrified that he was suppose to keep eye on his bro's shoes cause their another bro Dev might be here but not involved in any sense.

Vicky: Bro... woh... woh

Maan: Woh.. Woh kya?

Vicky: They were here a while along but now missing (interrupted by the girls)

Girls (meaning Ridzy, Nikki, Pinky and Tani): cause we have them.

Girls are jumping and shouting while Geet covered her eyes with her hand while looking upwards "Babaji kyun... why do they like getting in trouble with the Dhust Dhanav. Please save them from his dangerous eyes cause he isn't close to the guys they hang around with... in fact I don't understand him the half time" Dadi notice Geet's reaction and tap her shoulder... Geet only gave her a-smile nothing more.

Nikki: Come' on... don't be that much stubborn in paying the prize

Maan: Maan Singh Khurana doesn't need to pay for anything and now give me my shoes.

Ridzy: Not so easy... pay or leave barefoot without humari Geet

Maan about to say something...

Vicky jumped in "come' on girls... just return bro's shoes and I promise to take you guys out" girls scream "no" while Prithvi watching this with smirk.

Vicky: Help! Why are you standing their with smirk on your face?

Prithvi came toward them and placed his hand on Vicky's shoulder also whispered in his ear "why should I when I'll get some tip out of it. So enjoy getting them back" winked at him than stood beside Geet.

After some time Maan gave up in defeat and paid the girls who were jumping up and down in excitement afterwards he got his shoes and Armaan with Atul washed his feet before slipping them on.

Rajveer smiled along with Savitri Devi...

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Maan was force to feed Geet out of his plate... in fact they both are force to eat out of the same plate. Geet slowly lift her hand up to feed him but stop mid way...

Ridzy: What happen?

Geet: Actually I forgot to do some packing for tonight's depart.

Armaan: What? Our flights in few hours. Not again...

Prithvi jumped in from no where "Mom... where are you going?"

Atul: You don't know sweetie.... we are going to Morena at your Sapna Masi place for lord Krishna's birthday celebration.

Geet smacked her head "thank you..... Atul" Prithvi looked at his Geet Mom with angry eyes "why wasn't I told about the Morena vacation cause I wanna go... can I?" looking with Puppy eyes.

Geet: If I say no your still gonna come so why ask.

"Thanks Mom" Prithvi hugged her than stop a minute "is Vicky also coming with us along with his bro"

Geet: I don't know cause I haven't asked them... yet

Armaan: Doesn't matter cause I already booked their tickets even Dadi.... So we'll meet in three minute over here than leave for the airport and Geet your bidaai will take place from here after we come back.

Prithvi: Wow! Vik let's go and pack your bags and mine... Mamu we'll meet you guys at the airport.

Prithvi ready to leave and Geet got up but pulled back toward Maan... Maan remove his scarf and gave it to Geet who walked toward Prithvi "ek minute... you are coming here straight after packing your bag"

Prithvi: Mom...

Geet: I don't want to hear no Mom okay... second thing I am allowing you to come there but doesn't mean you are going around the town alone without anyone that I don't know.

Prithvi: But...

Geet: No means no.... or you may go back to your hostel and study for your exam...

Prithvi: Fine... but you won't mind if I go with Armaan Mamu.

Geet warned Armaan with her eyes "of course buddy... you and me" Armaan told Prithvi afterwards they left. Next Armaan left for his room with Riddhima... Nikki inside Pinky's room and Abhi ' Atul in their room.

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Geet gets up to leave when Maan stopped her "why didn't you tell me earlier?" avoiding looking into his eyes.

Geet: Actually it was fixed in the morning and Armaan made the arrangement. I didn't want to but than Sapna would never talk with me anymore so I agreed. I know I should have informed you. I am sorry.

Maan: It's okay, but do I have to come?

Geet: I would like it... if you could come cause Sapna won't able to come since she's pregnant and they want to see the person I've gotten married too.

Maan: Fine... where is Dadi?

Geet: I think she must be with Rajveer uncle... I'll go and bring them.

Maan: No.. you can pack your bags than I'll come here to pick you up.

Geet nods here head...

Edited by Miketa - 14 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww

thank u sooooo much for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thank yu so so so much for the update i love every part pls cont sonnnnnnnnnn
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Originally posted by: Tishuu

awwwwwwwwwww

thank u sooooo much for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Welcome... I might update another part but not sure when...

Thank you...


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Originally posted by: Miketa



<font color="#0066ff">Welcome... I might update another part but not sure when...

Thank you...


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O plz do! I will luv u so much mre and respect u more =}. O n btw r u intending on bringin forth the rahul truth at ne point, and hw all of a sudden maaneet were due to wed while they dnt lyk each other. Nt nw tho, bt later cos we want mre maaneet rockingness atm x
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wow wht n amazing update luved it simply awesum
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Originally posted by: Tishuu

O plz do! I will luv u so much mre and respect u more =}. O n btw r u intending on bringin forth the rahul truth at ne point, and hw all of a sudden maaneet were due to wed while they dnt lyk each other. Nt nw tho, bt later cos we want mre maaneet rockingness atm x



That's why its better to clear some bitter memories before taking a step further. Just bare with me... Do you have any suggestion for a song dedicated to Rahul and Geet? Please let me know.
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Originally posted by: bshah856

wow wht n amazing update luved it simply awesum



Thank you... please forgive me if I missed Pm-ing you...

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