Maneet FF: You are always on my mind. AN on P 150 - Page 9

Heyyyy Polki! (now I know ur name n da game is over 😆)

hey .. this is one solid, power packed bit of writing!! congrats !!!

Originally posted by: pickle6586

hi honey,😛

i read ur update...!!!! it was simply superb. the meeting after 18 years was so perfect and the dialogues so perfect. 👏

👏omg i felt as though everything was happening in front of my eyes. 😃

i loved the scene where they walk towards each other after hearing each others name ...omg.... unbelievably good. it just could not get any better. i am falling short of words and hence u could find me repeating some words, but seriously speaking, i just cant think of writing anything here. i had to read the update so many times to satisfy myself and i still cannot get over it!!!!! 😛

then the way maan introduces himself to geeta, omg at that point i could have understood what he must have gone through and what geet must have gone through. it is so diificult, u know , when u know the person is very special to u and very close to your heart yet, u cannot express it, because destiny could not allow u too... i guess maan and geet were also in that situation.

maan having being more than a fatherly figure, simply introduced himself like any ordinary man and geet had to introduce him as her business associate when she and maan both know that their relation does not stop there, but goes beyond that...!!!

and then their dialogues at the restuarant, omg omg such pure and true love. while i was reading ur update i felt like falling in love, myself.. nothing touched me more than the expressions and feelings both were going through. the fact that geet is not ready to go back because of dev and maan not being able to stay away from her, wow wow owow honey, that part was so beautifully portrayed that it surpassed all other scenes. they did not have to tell each other, numerous "i love you's" or continue long eye locks or stay in each others arms, but their words said it all...!!!! fabulous...!!!

honestly speaking i did not cry when i read this part. i did not feel the need to. because the distances between them is only physical but their hearts, souls are together... and that's what matters the most.... i was awestruck at the beauty of their love and you portrayed it so
perfectly...!!!!

i'm glad they are ready to work out a more convenient solution! hopefully they work out a good one and geeta seemes to have realized that the man she met, Mr. khurana, was someone different and also special to her mother. hopefully she gets to know the story and brings them together.

update soon..!!! aww well, u would not be able to to do for the next few days.. well take your time honey.. i guess i could read this part several times..!!!! 😉

Soumya

Dear Soumya,

Aww, thank you, thank you so much for the long compliment. It was so nice to read that you liked my work. You are right the two of them didn't need to say numerous 'I love Yous' to reaffirm their love. Also we have to keep in mind that Geet is in her mid 30s at this point and Maan in his early 40s. Grownups don't say 'I love you' the same way as youngster 😃 You fit into a comfortable knowing what the other person feels so it is not necessary to keep on saying what you feel. I am so happy that you didn't feel the need to cry cause I wanted this part to be tear free, but I was not as successful with some of the other readers. I am just glad it touched them so deeply. As for the more convenient compromise we just have to see what happens. Geet may have just said that to console Maan, although I don't think she would do that but she is very controlling when it comes to Geeta. As for Geeta I just wanted to put a little seed of doubt in her head for now. She may forget it for the time being considering she is going to be really busy at Harvard. Again you just have to keep on reading and making your awesome comments to find out what happens next. I am trying to update everyday if that is possible.

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: desigurl953

Kya yaar...Khud hi Rola ke kehti ho ki comment karna mat bhoolna nahi to tum bhi rone lago gi...you're so mean you know?

I never cried this much before for a fictitious story,not even while watching Veer Zaara which is apparently my favourite sad movie....

I hate you for that....aw i want to strangle you and hug u at the same time
I don't think i can say anything else
your ff really touches me...
Where do you get such ideas....

Today,i shall bestow you with the name of The Tragedy Queen...you're a girl right...i mean i don't think boys can be so emotional....love you...bye...please continue soon

My lovely desigurl,

I really didn't want you to cry reading this part. Yes it was touching but what I had planned earlier was much worse. Trust me it was much much worse than what you read, I changed the track and edited the part so many times to make it less emotional. I changed the story for you girl. 😃 Next part I will be a positive one. So no tears for that one, ok. You gave this writer a huge compliment. It is amazing knowing that I my writing touches you so deeply, hopefully I can keep writing and entertaining you all for a while to come. Yes I am a girl.

Love,
Tragedy Queen

Originally posted by: amritsar007

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww..........Sweat........😊......well expressed emotions of both geet and maan.......😉

sorry didd not give any compliments to u before but this is awesome and very touchiong.
Keep it up and update soon 👏<div></div>

Dear Amritsar007

Thank you for all the tallias, however i appreciated your encouraging written comments even more. 😃 Thank you for calling my work touching. Hopefully all the future parts touch you just as much as this one.

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

Kudos to you dear...👏👏👏 it was beautiful..brought tears in my eyes...and yes honey,we Maneetians are indeed a greedy lot..so you better start typing your next "extra long" update ..Warnaa.....(In Maan's style)

Dear Tanya,

Thank you for the compliment. Sorry this post brought tears to your eyes, the next part will bring a smile. I was going to make the next part short, not as short as part 8 but I made it a little longer to keep all your greedy maneetians happy. 😃 And ....Warna kya? (me too in Maan's style) asking the question. 😆

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: kooliio

Mind-blowing update!!! Very emotional and touchy....loved it!! Hmm geeta is getting a little suspicious...lol that's good she can bring them closer 😉 ...hope she will get to know about their story soon...can't wait till I see them Together like a happy family...and I really loved this part
"He then drove away from Harvard like every other parent who had just dropped their child off."
And the spoiler sounds very interesting 😉 ...do cont.soon

Dear Kooliio,

Thanks for the compliment, am glad you loved part 9. Yes Geeta is a little suspicious but she may forget with her being busy and all at Harvard, then again she may not. You just have to keep on reading the future parts to see what happens. Also, I wanted them to look normal to the outside world when they left Harvard, just to show how their relationship had stood the test of time. There maybe issues but no one other than the immediate circle knows about them and that is what I wanted to show.

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: Miss-Riz

Hi this is the 1st tym I've read ur ff and Ive read all parts it's really good...please update soon and if u have a pm list can u add me plz :)

Dear Miss-Riz,

I am so happy that you read all the parts on your first discovery of my FF. That really touched me considering that my parts all are very long and it probably took you a while to read them. Thank you for giving me all that time from you day. Hopefully you will continue to read my FF and share your opinions on what you think of my updates as I post them. I have added you to the PM list.

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

That was touching...
Waiting for another super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super duper
long update.............
soon

Dear Lallulal,

When I started reading your comment I was really happy but then 'aap fhir sey bade demanding ban gaye.' Greedy, Greedy, 😉 demanding a super X 43 duper long episode. Shame shame. 😆. Well the next part was going to be short, not as short as part 8 but short, however how can I deny you greedy maneetians so I have made it longer. Now stop being greedy and share your opinions. 😊

Love,
Polki

Originally posted by: swetha10

Amazing update... emotions penned down exceptionally gud.. could feel the pain of the long separation they went thru n da happiness of seeing each other after a long gap... am totally speechless... do continue soon

Dear Swetha,

Thanks for the compliments. I am glad I was able to convey the pain and happiness they felt in Part 9. Hopefully you won't stay speechless for long, since I need you to comment after I post the next part. I will be posting it later on today.

Love,
Polki