Maneet FF: You are always on my mind. AN on P 150

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kooliio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#751

awesome update!!!

cant wait for the next part!!!

pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

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nikipuki

@nikipuki

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Posted: 15 years ago

#752

Polki,

You are an amazing writer. You definitely have a flair for writing. Have you thought about taking it up as a profession. You could very easily be the next Nora Roberts or Janet Evanovich 😊.

I chanced upon this FF this morning and thought 105 pages, cool lots to read and a couple of hours later I am waiting for the next update just like I wait for the next installment of Geet 😆.

My one comment on the story, you need to move it along. The characters are just in a status quo mode since the story started, Geet and Maan are still leading separate lives and Geeta is still in the dark. I sense that you are trying to move it along based how you ended the last update.

Now I'm going to jump back into IF to see if you have written any other FFs.

Niki

(PS love your Taveez diaries, they are hilarious)

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Poli.Geek

@Poli.Geek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo
🤗🤗Thank you for writing this. What a route to begin a new journey..........with one note hidden from Geet the outcome for this moment was fab!!! Sometimes it's better to be hidden nai......... but what the beautifull girl-woman planned hope she will take all once it's out.

You welcome😃 The journey is now going to go ahead in full swing. Am ready to bring the two together, am not sure exactly how many more parts but the process has started. That one note had to be hidden from her at the moment. Geeta is wonderful.

Hope you like the next update.

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Poli.Geek

@Poli.Geek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA
I've missed the last few updates simply because it's ben crazy for me. But I'm back :-) Will read and comment as soon as I can

No worries, the FF is not going anywhere read it whenever you get the time and let me know what you think.

Hope you like the next update.

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Poli.Geek

@Poli.Geek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: Lov26
Oh wow firstly thanks loads Polki for such a long update... really happy when i saw the length :-) though length does not really matter but when someone writes so beautifully, you just want to continue reading and hoping it does not end soon..

It is an amazing update, your idea of this wonderfully surprise birthday was great. Well planned and very well described, i was being to visualize whatever you wrote. When Maan was speaking to Babaji, i was like " i so wish this really does happen in the show" it would be too good . Loved it.

Am eagerly waiting for the next update.. :-)

Tghe last few weeks while Maneet were separated were brutal on many and I thought a nice long update would make everyones weekend. I am so glad that you all really liked the birthday surprises planned by Geeta.

My Maan is really mature, since the story takes place 19 years in the future, Maan is different not very much but he as matured. I don't think the current show Maan has gotten to that maturity yet. So I doubt Babaji talk coming anytime soon.

I hope you like the next update.

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Poli.Geek

@Poli.Geek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
awesomeeee!!!...

really appreciate geeta for making geet's birthday soo special and memorable!....

hats off to geeta!....

i hope now geet will lead her life the way she likes!...

continue soon!

Thanks thanks.

Geeta is great

Geet has to realize that it is her life and not her daughters.

Keep reading and commenting.

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Poli.Geek

@Poli.Geek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
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Speechless..n Breathless....... OMG....wat a hottttttttttttt update...oh god..u hv made my visual senses so very strong sweets...!!

Rocker of an update..n its fun to see Geeta setting up her own parents..😳

Great work dear...luv it..❤️

Tanu

You are making me blush now with you comment. I thought it was time again to give you all some hot under the sheets update. Maybe in a few more updates there maybe a repeat performance😳

Geeta is insane and she has no clue what exactly she is doing but I know Maan surely appreciates it,since he was smart enough to hide the first note.

Thanks for liking the update.

Hope you like the next update.

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Poli.Geek

@Poli.Geek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: pop77
wow Awsome part..Geeta made really good day for Geet & Maan..
Finally Devi & Kate meet Maan..I thought that Maan know Devi before..that reason Devi always friend with Geet..

Geeta change Maan..Geeta got all Maan's attitude...

Maan ask Geet to check her passport..

I hope Geet agree to go back Delhi or their company buying other company..other patner ask her to get Geet passport ready..

I am glad you liked the update. Geeta had some help but no true friend will demand credit when they do things from the heart.

Maan and Devi met before but never spoke to each other, it was when Geet when to drop Geeta off at Harvard for the first time and all the friends were protecting the two of them. Devi has met Radha's dad not Maan. During the birthday celebration was the first time they actually spoke.

Arre, bigde baap ki biggdi beeti hain, she too likes giving orders only she does it lovingly unlike Maan. But she had to get some of Geet in her too.

It wasn't Geet's passport...you just have to read the next update to find out the passport business.

Hope you like the next update.

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Poli.Geek

@Poli.Geek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: ayeshaaa.
SOo intense..the first part! :)) Soo romantic!

GEETA IS SOO SMART! just like MSK! omg! I LOVEE this updt soo so much! :D updt soon! can't wait for father&daughter to meet!

UPDT SOON! :)

sorry for a short comment! ;( busy!

Na its okay, at least you commented. It was nice to know that you liked the update.

I wanted to make the update special since so many were depressed with what was going on in the show.

Geeta is smart and nice plus she has an awesome friend who helps her all the time.

Hope you like the next update.

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Poli.Geek

@Poli.Geek

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Posted: 15 years ago

#760

Originally posted by: virgo_gurl
Just finished reading part 4 and OMG Maan is gonna meet them again yay i hope he does smth more than stalking😉
And im lovin it polki the story is getting more and more interesting!! btw i love the way u expressed Geet and Maan's emotions for Geeta that was so awww😳
And i love Geet's friends Katie and Devi they are true sweethearts!!
And Pinky and Adi married Yay me loves them together😃
Okay more comments will come later😳
Love ya🤗

Stalking will never go from his blood and it seems that Geeta may have that trait too...we still have to wait and watch (stalk) to see what happens with Geeta.

I hope by this update you have gotten a chance to read the FF in its entirety.

Hope I can continue entertaining with my FF