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Posted: 15 years ago
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TA DA!!!! M back ppl..........thank you soooo muchhh 4 ur wonderful comments.It really means a lot to me.So here comes the most awaited chapter.Happy Reading!!!😛


PART 4

Monday morning was refreshing and seemed like a promise,a promise to new life which can fulfill the dreams of every single person.Nupur was happy unlike the other day,she was happy and excited to know customer's response to her designs and was completely over the fact that Sheena was claiming onto her work.Mayank,on the other hand,was happy for his new project as well.He was discussing the upcoming project with the clients and his work was going smooth and satisfying.Nupur was busy arranging all the dresses for the exhibiton which would be open to public within another hour.The hustle and bustle in the exhibition hall was giving her the creeps.Calm Nupur calm ! You are the best,your work is excellent and everyone is gonna love it.She said to herself with her eyes closed.

Sh:Nervous!She said smirking.

N:Nupur opened her eyes and said Not really!

Sh:Don't worry.It happens!She said patting her shoulder and left.Nupur rolled her eyes and again concentrated around the hall taking in her every design and prepared herself to record the comments in her mind for each design given by the customers.

After almost an hour Mayank finalised the first set of deal with the clients and took their leave.

A:The clients were pretty fussy and annoying!What do you think Mayank?He said looking in Mayank's direction.

M:No Adhiraj!That was sensible.Its their money and we have to assure them they are not wasting it on us.He said pressing the button for the lift.

A:Ofcourse yes!How can I forget that no person can be wrong or at fault in your life.He said sarcastically.

M:Yes you got that right!He said in a bossy way to stop further comments from him.What's the other plans for today?

A:Right now you have to attend Sheena's exhibition.He said smiling in a mocking tone.

M:Oh goodness CRAP! Mayank said not liking this piece of news at all.

A:Ya exactly! But no other way.You have to go there.

M:I will go for 10-15 minutes only.Can't stand all this fashion things and talks. Mayank said in a bored tone.

Sh:Nupur exhibtion is open to customers and the green dress still isnt here!The tailor was to alter it and its still not done.Please go and check onto it and bring it here within 10mins.

N:I am going Sheena.I will be right back.Don't panic.Gosh woman you are making me panic too.Nupur thought.

She rushed out of the hall to the room where the tailor was altering the dress.On the other hand,Mayank entered the exhibition hall with his half a dozen employees following him.

Sh:Hey Mayank!Saying that she hugged him.

M:Hey Sheena!Nice dcor.Mayank said removing her hands from around his neck.

Sh:Dcor?You are supposed to comment on me.She said looking to him pointedly.

M:Not really!Mayank said ignoring her flirtatious nature.

Sh:But you are looking handsome as usual.She said winking.Black suit,formal look,you look sexy.

M:Where should we start from?He said looking around the hall again ignoring her comments.

Nupur collected the green dress and once again prepared herself for the exhibition.She was wearing a shocking pink churidaar with her hair half open.She looked to herself in the mirror and tried to analyse the changes in herself.Thiking she again drifted to her usual thoughts.Am I not beautiful?Am I not his type of a girl?She asked herself looking for the answers from the past 3 years.Gosshh Nupur EXHIBITION! Stop thinking about all this and concentrate.Thinking that to herself she rushed to the exhibition hall taking the green dress with her.

Sh:Thank you so much for coming here Mayank!It means a lot to me.

M:Its okay Sheena.I should leave now.Bye!Mayank said fed up of the over-expressing creature.

Sh:Bye Mayank and thanks again.

Rolling his eyes Mayank left the exhibition hall follwed by his employees.Nupur was moving fast towards the hall smiling truly and beautifully and turned towards the lobby which lead to the hall only to be collided by a person.She jerked forward and started swearing the person under her breath,abusing him with her full heart she turned furiously to make the person regret for colliding with her,THE NUPUR,only to be shocked on seeing the person in front of him.Mayank was also frowning waiting for the girl to turn and his expression were no less than Nupur's when he saw who the girl was.They kept looking at each other and Nupur slowly took a step backward only to be jerked again cause her dupatta was stuck in the front button of Mayank's coat.

C:Watch it girl.One of his employess said harshly.Nupur looked at the employee and clutched her dupatta to her chest.The employee moved forward to remove Nupur's dupatta from Mayank's coat

M:DO NOT touch that.Mayank said loudly which scared the employee and he moved aside confused.Mayank and Nupur were still looking at each other intensely.Mayank looked down to his coat and slowly removed her dupatta from his coat button taking in the feel and fragrance of his Nupur.Nupur was still looking at Mayank trying to figure out all the changes in him from the past 3 years within this moment.Still holding her dupatta Mayank moved forward slowly and placed the end of dupatta in his hand on her shoulder still not breaking the eye-lock.They were looking into each other intently only to be interrupted by Adhiraj.

A:Mayank???Is everything alright?We are getting late.He said confused to what was happening.Nupur came out of the eye-lock and her thoughts and turned rapidly moving towards the exhibition hall.What the hell just happened?Was it really him?She thought still shivering remembering the intensity in his eyes.On the other hand,Mayank was still standing there happy,excited,emotional and confused all at the same time.



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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

*Edited* 🤣

So happy to be first today 😃😆
Hinzie 🤗
It was brilliant. I so loved the way they met. And the way he shouted at the employee for her. 😍
The meet after so long truly was magical. 😳
I am smiling like an idiot after reading your update Hinu
Brilliantly written. I just feel too happy after reading it <3
Update soon Hinzie. I just can't wait. . 😛
Loads of love <3<3<3
Daania.
Edited by -Daania- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Hinu....🤗

Awwwsome update ...Loved it ..
Wow....Wat a meet .....the Eyelock ...it was so magical ...& I loved the intensity ....cant wait for the next part....

Beautifully written...Keep it up & do update soon...

Love ya...

P.S- Sheena is very chipku😡 ...usse Mayank se door hi rakh....🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Hani................🤗

By God kia likhti hai tu, i need to learn a lot from u...........😳

Update!!!!! It was simply out of world. U expressed Mayank and Nupur's meeting so beautiful yaar. I didn't want updateto end but khatam ho gayi............😭 I just read the previous parts yesterday and u updated today.................. Hugzzz for youuu for updating today...............🤗

I loved when Mayank said, DO NOT TOUCH.......... Nupur's dupatta, uff no one can touch it else my Mayank man, I love him, i love him, i love him............😳 I loved the intensity u showed in this part, and love the way u wrote, my heart beat was increased 😆. U are expert yaar............... 😉😆 and am not kidding.......

now just update next soon.............
kal kaisa rahe ga............????😆 ok chal kal hi update ker dena................😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
@Nidzy:Sheena ko mai mayank se kilometers miles dur rakhun gi dun wry......🤣

@Daani:Congrtaz 4 being first.....🤣.........love ur comment.....thnx 4 encouragement.

@Rabo: " i need to learn a lot from u" phainkne mai to tu xpert hai......🤣.........nd kal kaise update karun m gng to peshawar 2morow. 4 my sis khyber ka entry test........tough luck!!!😆......thank you so much 4 the encouragement........🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Mayur met...yay...
Keep tht sheena away....

I want Mayank to manaofy Nupur
Phleaseeee
Lovely update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
Haniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..............
superb update yaaaar....
loved ittttttttttttt......
Hayeeee finally they mettt....
fabulously wriittenn....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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keep sheena miles no hundreds of miles away from my mayu

i hope both realise abt he void created in their lives due to each others absence
lovely update
kya mulaqat thi BY GOD

update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
WOW... Mayur meet and eyelock... I so loved it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90

Hinu jst read da whole FF...u r sch a talented writer..fantastic piece of work...loved it..now jaldii continue krna :D...

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