Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87! - Page 63

wah wah vru ... I read all the 4 chapters and wow what emotions .... thank God that I read late... Narky separation main bardasht nahin kar sakti thi ... chalo achha hai jab tak maine padha tab tak sab sort out ho gaya tha ...feeling better nargis .... vicky is there for you in all thick and thin ..... he will be there... narky made up in their own way.... but kya positive hoga ??

Maabs bas ek raat ki dooriyan hain ..... kal shadi hai .... ab vru land mein kal kitne man days mein aata hai pata nahin😆

yeh mummyji itni complicated kyon hai ..... I am sure she is just pretending ...itni jaldi kaise maan jayengi .... vru phir se meri theory correct huyi .... yeh mummyji aur vicky dono is kaafi complex characters hain 😆

ahem ahem .... nups yeh kya ho raha hai ... chalo i am also in for it lets see vru arpur story mein kya likhti hai

fazadi ki story tragic hogi kya .... yeh religion barrier tell me about it .... maine khud todi hai ....par story mein toh happy hona chahiye na... kya khayal hai vru.... kucch idea chahiye toh main apni story bata doongi .... kaafi filmy hai 😆.... waise humari lekhika ke paas itne ideas hote hain ki meri shayad zaroorat nahin... phir bhi main hoon na

Arrey Neha...bata na apni story...we're all listening...

Originally posted by: jamoshi2507

wah wah vru ... I read all the 4 chapters and wow what emotions .... thank God that I read late... Narky separation main bardasht nahin kar sakti thi ... chalo achha hai jab tak maine padha tab tak sab sort out ho gaya tha ...feeling better nargis .... vicky is there for you in all thick and thin ..... he will be there... narky made up in their own way.... but kya positive hoga ??

Maabs bas ek raat ki dooriyan hain ..... kal shadi hai .... ab vru land mein kal kitne man days mein aata hai pata nahin😆

yeh mummyji itni complicated kyon hai ..... I am sure she is just pretending ...itni jaldi kaise maan jayengi .... vru phir se meri theory correct huyi .... yeh mummyji aur vicky dono is kaafi complex characters hain 😆

ahem ahem .... nups yeh kya ho raha hai ... chalo i am also in for it lets see vru arpur story mein kya likhti hai

fazadi ki story tragic hogi kya .... yeh religion barrier tell me about it .... maine khud todi hai ....par story mein toh happy hona chahiye na... kya khayal hai vru.... kucch idea chahiye toh main apni story bata doongi .... kaafi filmy hai 😆.... waise humari lekhika ke paas itne ideas hote hain ki meri shayad zaroorat nahin... phir bhi main hoon na

haan meine padha tha..uss larki ke thread par tumne likha tha that your hubby is a christian..would love to hear..

i donno about tragic..may be it will be...i am not sure...stories should ideally end on happy note..but sometimes..kismat saath nahi deti..

and sometimes love is not enough....but...i think they will face lot of issues..unlike arpur and narky..

and lets see how they brave it or they crumble under pressure and sacrifice what they have..

ayesha..i am sorry..i am trying to really work out who really reads my story and trying with difficulty to send pm to only those who read..i missed you somehow..and once i had missed Abs..so blame it on my sieve brain which is dyslexic..and i cant see right when i click...

i shall remember...

nups, abs, nags..rev.. param

thanks love...all of you...keep me going on this story

Abs phir ek idea..de diya mujhe..tune...i shall send faz and adi to france...

uzma and vinitha..thanks girls..

am so glad you like it..

will try and update soon..though i am kinda..stuck with trying to pack for india...household chores... guests that seem to be there on daily basis..and last but not the least...Maan..

trying to juggle every thing..and failing miserably...

not to mention..3 idiots thread.where i am not much because of this very reason..i am out, cooking, cleaning, shopping..dont ask what
i stay awake till 2 everyday thinking of writing..and end up doing something else..

neha, apni story batao...we love luvstories...

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

nups, abs, nags..rev.. param

thanks love...all of you...keep me going on this story

Abs phir ek idea..de diya mujhe..tune...i shall send faz and adi to france...

Yeah, I mean pack them off to France, as if they stay in India there will issues and danger to their lives as :

1. Faz hails from Lucknow and too from a nawab gharana, so her family will be against it
2. Her family being aristorcratic will have many connections....which may be used to hurt Aditya (I & Maan will do our best to protect Adi, however we can't be 24/7 with him)
3. Possible rioting...
4. Adi's family being against Faz as well because she comes from a diff community and they would also fear her powerful family doing harm to them.


Yeh lo typical masala for a bollywood story....Meri maano toh chupke chupke inki court marriage karwaake inko posting ke liye France bhej do....And from there they can tell their respective families that they are married!!!!

Originally posted by: -sann-

neha, apni story batao...we love luvstories...

khatre ki ghanti....kiske liye?? maabs, narky , arpur ya fazadi....😕

babajee humko darr lagti...😕

but andhi aaye ya toofan, hum saath saath hai...

Nupsie, har ek ke liye khatre ki ghanti bajegi...only different ring tones for each couple!