Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87! - Page 52

Emotion packed 3 updates- It brought terars in my eyes and fear for the future!! Whats gonna happen to Nargis and Vicky? Why is Poonam more possessive of Vicky - Why did she accept Abs more readily - U answered all these questions beautifuilly and then also kept our apprehensions alive without giving out much 👏👏👏.... U have become a pro in doling out intense emotional dramatic updates.. Eagerly waiting for the next one now!!

The real culprit is Vicky...his behaviour causes Mummy ji to think he is distancing himself from her and the she blames it on the latest development in his life....which is Nargis Sheikh!

wow love it yaar just read all the updates in 2 days and awesome writing!!! cant wait for the next part!!

Hum intezaar kareinge ki kayamat ho aur update aaye,
hum intezaar kareinge ki qayamat ho aur update aaye...
Khuda kare ki qayamat ho aur update aaye...

Mehndi hai rachne wali
Haathon mein ghehri laali
Kahe saakhiyaan ab kaliyaain
Haathon mein khilne wali
Abs ke mann ko jeevan ko
Nai khushiyaain hai milne wali

Lo ab bechari hone wali dulhan ko hi gaana pad raha hai...yeh lekhika madam ji toh meri shaadi jaane kis century mein karwaigi!😆 Vrushali dear, by that time, Maabs will have God knows reincarnated how many times!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Hum intezaar kareinge ki kayamat ho aur update aaye,
hum intezaar kareinge ki qayamat ho aur update aaye...
Khuda kare ki qayamat ho aur update aaye...

Mehndi hai rachne wali
Haathon mein ghehri laali
Kahe saakhiyaan ab kaliyaain
Haathon mein khilne wali
Abs ke mann ko jeevan ko
Nai khushiyaain hai milne wali

Lo ab bechari hone wali dulhan ko hi gaana pad raha hai...yeh lekhika madam ji toh meri shaadi jaane kis century mein karwaigi!😆 Vrushali dear, by that time, Maabs will have God knows reincarnated how many times!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i am half way there..but...will only write..later..in the evening..

Originally posted by: rushtrip

i am half way there..but...will only write..later..in the evening..

wow .... what action packed updates ... firstly it was the reunion of the mother and sons which brought tears to my eyes.... it was so emotional

secondly, I loved the fact that Vicky is so very into Nargis and needs her .... that scene was awesome ..... so passionate yet emotional .... finally he is putting his guards down and opening up to Nags .... this is definitely going to put their relationship to another level

thank god that abs passed with flying colors .... but why this seed of doubt for Nags .... do we see as a difficult phase for Narky.... I am so scared what is there in your mind Vru? somehow I feel that the characters of Vicky and Poonam are almost the same ... both of them do not want to confront their fears and weaknesses instead they try to avoid them by their own avoiding mechanisms.... Vicky doesn't want to give in so that in case Poonam goes back to her own self destructing mode he could come out of that fast.... he is very happy to see her back .... but at the same time he is so skeptical as well

Poonam was emotionally attached with her hubby that's why could not bear his betrayal and went to the self destruction mode. Vicky is also like her first he tried to avoid getting into a relationship and now that he is into one .... he too is very emotionally attached and cannot take the separation from Nags .... so Mummyji pls try and understand or u might lose him forever.... do not try to separate Narky

I hope I got it right Vru ... or am I reading too much between the lines??

on a lighter note @Nags I am with you ... sab kucch theek hoga.... jaise Abs ko daadi ka samna karna pada tha waise hi tumhe Mummyji ka .... I am sure once she meets u .... she would be bowled over by you

Vru ab toh Maabs ki shaadi karwa do.... jaldi se .... ab intezaar nahin hota .... na Maabs se na hum se 😉

@abs and @nups tum dono ki jugalbandi ka toh jawab nahin .... har baat ko kaise melodious banana hai yeh toh koyi tum dono se seekhe😆