Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87! - Page 48

Ah Vrush, you rock two updates so quickly!!!! Achha theek hai...i won't ask for any updates till Monday! Main kuch nahin bolongi.
Another great update where we see Vicky struggling wanting to be positive, yet scared of being hurt again...Zeno has her unique way of calming him down...however it does the job!😆

Wow, Maan is giving the push to Vicky to have Nargis meet their mom!

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Ah Vrush, you rock two updates so quickly!!!! Achha theek hai...i won't ask for any updates till Monday! Main kuch nahin bolongi.
Another great update where we see Vicky struggling wanting to be positive, yet scared of being hurt again...Zeno has her unique way of calming him down...however it does the job!😆

Wow, Maan is giving the push to Vicky to have Nargis meet their mom!

Ah some fireworks..can be expected..and with Vicky and Nargis..they have mastered the art of communicating..not just with their bodies but with words too..they have a unique understanding..

i hope to see that between you and Maan as well...

@nups...no need..we understand...

i get what you are trying to say..you all do the same with me..i am sure there are tons of mistakes in my work

i really loved the update. You have perfectly delivered the emotions between sons and mother. And in your ff you actually portray vicky and nargis relationship with all kinds of emotions which i like the most. I love to see more of vicky and nargis. I feel happy by reading regarding them.

Wow Vrush...2 chapters in one night!!! OMG what explosive updates....kya kahoon....loved the heartfelt tearful reunion of the sons with their mom!! Very well written....each emotion expressed in its most raw form....you are a magician with a pen (kaybard)!!! Please do take a bow!!!👏👏 Then in chapter 2...you expressed Vicky's despair, and joy so well.....he is so happy yet so reluctant...for obvious reasons, to embrace this happiness with his mom fully....lest he be left hanging again. And truly for Nargis....what a humbling feeling to be wanted and needed by a man like Vicky. Now that Maan Veerji has put forth the order....i guess i better prep myself to meet saasuma.... Hailla....muje bachelena!!!!

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Wow Vrush...2 chapters in one night!!! OMG what explosive updates....kya kahoon....loved the heartfelt tearful reunion of the sons with their mom!! Very well written....each emotion expressed in its most raw form....you are a magician with a pen (kaybard)!!! Please do take a bow!!!👏👏 Then in chapter 2...you expressed Vicky's despair, and joy so well.....he is so happy yet so reluctant...for obvious reasons, to embrace this happiness with his mom fully....lest he be left hanging again. And truly for Nargis....what a humbling feeling to be wanted and needed by a man like Vicky. Now that Maan Veerji has put forth the order....i guess i better prep myself to meet saasuma.... Hailla....muje bachelena!!!!

like i said..i do it when i put my mind to it..
another fact is that umang is still working at the client...
am hungry no lunch...no dinner yet...just typing away he has just gone to taco bell and i hate it..to get something at this late hour...

ha ha...chalo..bhook kuch to kaam aaya...updates likhe..

kal to mushkil lagta hai..

Originally posted by: vinithaa

i really loved the update. You have perfectly delivered the emotions between sons and mother. And in your ff you actually portray vicky and nargis relationship with all kinds of emotions which i like the most. I love to see more of vicky and nargis. I feel happy by reading regarding them.

Ah vinitha...yes..this story is about...Vicky and Nargis is it not..and yes..i plan to devote more time to them..for next few chapters..others will be there but more from their perspective...

hope you all enjoy that change i plan to bring..tho..things happen on their own..,mostly..i plan..and my fingers..actually do something else...

awesome vrush... the mother sons reunion brought tears to my eyes... awesomely described scenes in both updates.... i can actually visualise everything that u wrote..... keep writing gal....

Vroom,