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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: kirti123

such a cute part
loved mayur friendly reunion
thanks for the pm
😊




thx kirti... 😳




mmmh am waiting dear 😛




thx dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

hey Jenny just love love love the concept !!!!

sachi mein have no wordzz for it !!
so MayUr together in collage n then later Mayu marrying Gunjan
n Nupur loves him !!!
goshhhhhh amaizng concept na !!!!
can't wait to read more!!
this SS is soo interesting !
-Lina-

thx lina...no gunjan is mayus sis...but mayu gonna be engaged with dia...
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jeni
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: arunabehere

good you clarified that you are updating tomorrow

Intelligent Girl
I loved the update Jeni
Hope to see next part Tomorrow *Waiting*

yup updating today...😛thx for mentioning me to be a inteligent girl...atleast u told😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: .rumki.

Love it.
Must update 2moro

sure am updating now dear...

Originally posted by: maloo19

hi jeni awesum updates

loved both parts
but plz try to make a happy ending
Marium

thx marium...yup i guess i will not do which u hate read right...then wait for my ending...😆

Originally posted by: daniella05

wow awesome concept and lovely updates
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

thx dear....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

jeni i was caught up with school work and then my cousin came
but now i'll be regular
no longer will be mysterious
u are special i don't make u feel that
luv ya
mahima

mmmh remember i will checking this words as u told u will not be mysterious any more...let me see how truthful u r...😃
mmmh i cant argue on that special part once again u no i wont give u up...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

another update

wow jeni
that's a good going
i love this part
mayur reunion was so cute
everything was amazing
mayur talks were cute
loved shilpa and gunjan
mayur hug was mindblowing
continue soon
luv
mahima


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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

jenni dear sis i will read soon and will comment too yaar day dreaming is impossible but i love to dream about my dear friends update

dear i will update soon my ffs but u wanna comment....😉 loves jeni😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98

Chapter three- process towards...😉

Bhaya you say… why were you guys fighting, I want the reason…

Nupur did we fight mayank asked showing his dimple to nupur…what is gunjan saying either..you could understand?

noding her head with mayank nupur turned to gunjan asking when did we fight…!

Then you behaved like a strangers while entering..and now…😕

Cool let me explain nupur opened her mouth seeing gunjan being collapsed, but mayank closed her mouth with his hands without letting out nupur proceed further..Saying" if say then I will kill you…"

She bit shuddered of his sudden nearness tried to manage taking his hands over her giving assurance of not saying about that…

gunjan simply ignored from asking further went to apply make up as she couldnt understand anything...
now as both friends were left alone, nupur asked
Mayank say how is sammy?

He is fine nupur… will be coming soon…

Nice am waiting to see him…hope you guys will not....

ssshh stop...he never allowed to continue her as he know were she will go and finish the talk...
Well you both better stop boring...about old memories…now am feeling very much hunger so lets go…

Yup me too feeling hunger said holding his stomach...

Come nah then why to stand here let us go and have something said nupur smiling at both

One problem is there mayank said not finishing the sentence…

What better say it faster gunjan lost her patience asked bit irritated…

All went for shopping so no one to cook food….

What about devki ji Bhaya…she too went ah? how irritating am much hungry enough...how could mom do this...😛she went on

now enough gunjan let us think on some better solution...better blaming on ur mom
He nodded as yes accepting with nupz said better…let us go to restaurant as mom told...
Its too cold am not gonna land anywhere with this climate…gunjan showed a arrogant face

Okay then let us cook on our own follow me she said to both went to kitchen saying me too feeling much hungry…nupur tried to showed a hurry instead of wasting time chatting...

Mayank looked at both doing something he never entered kitchen asked for one more time are you sure you can really cook...i mean it would be better to eat huh he asked in a doubt...

Nupur find out the wheat flour and placed it in a bowl and started crumbling it pouring water and oil with it not answering mayanks question..gunjan took charge of cutting vegetables said bhaya you better taste her dish and then talk...she said proudly...

mmmh thats what am here 😆 i will taste and say that gunjan…mayank was watching sitting on the desk nearer…

Nupur may i help you in mixing that he said jumping out from the desk was about to hit nupur holded her shoulders for a support making her slightly shake her hands making it split all over...she was angry at mayank doing it he who havent noticed his mistake tried to put the hands in the mix in sudden while nupur holded his hands angrily,both looked at each other for some long time... while gunjan called nupur I done with cutting..nupur who got her sense scolded mayank stop doign things ulta better sit simply it is gonna be a good help...

i thought to help he looked with sad face just then noticed the split...oops am sorry i didnt noticed it..i will clean it now itself
better sit there mayank...she said moving in front blocking his way glaring at each other...
She managed to come out of their world ...couldnt help staring at mayank…she looked at the shadow of mayanks hands moving towards her face making her heart beat to raise in sudden…she slowly raised her eyesbrows were mayank slowly touched her face wiping off the wheat on her face…

both smiled… started to concentrate on her work while mayank helped pouring water as per nupurs instruction

as she finished with chapathis....She prepared chapathi curry were mayank stood closer to her watching her cook curiously, she took the pan poured the oil as it was ready turned to gunjan to get onions which she was cutting suddenly hit on the mayank who was standing nearby...am sorry she said in sudden while mayank stared at her smiled at her made her remember stove is on...which nupur called out gunjan to give her the mushrooms…she throwed the mustard seeds onions tomatoes and fried..added mushrooms... bit being crimson red of mayank being so closer watching her...cook as a world wonder... She closed the pan adding the salt in final...said atlast food is ready...just 10 more miutes... she once again turned to move but his time she being precautious said mayank to move with action still not willing to meet his eyes…went to wash the dish..
gunjan opened the pan smelled it showed mayank see how nice it smells...
nupur washing the vessels...said add little water to it gunjan...😉
she heard mayanks voice so close…he was standing there too closer at her backhe brought his two hands around her waist still not touching her still , she was left out of breath…with new kind of feeling occupying her in sudden...she flushed out...looked at mayank ..his lips was few inches away from her…he raised his eyebrows like what ? why she is staring at him in different way…she came to her own sense…asked slowly what do you want…?
I want to take that ,…mmmh what do say that…

Hot pack she told…placing it in his hands…

All three enjoyed their food were nupur was the one felt different feelings occupying her..….

To be continued…

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
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jeni i m suffering frm ophthalmaia
So cant read it now
i'll edit later

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i read part 2
wil read part 3 later....!!!

sorry...... 😔
Edited by mjhtnupurmayank - 15 years ago

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