mayur ss - As Time Goes By..! part 4! - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
Dnt do this
I dnt want Nups Heart to be broken yaar
Mayu is getting engaged n she is developing feelings for no plzzzzzzzzzz
Liked the way she cooked n all
Nups is smartie n fast here😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi jeni sorry 4 d late comment

it was amazing update thnx 4 d pm hun
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Posted: 15 years ago
Jeniiiiiiiiiiii
plz bata mujhe- r u ok na?
tujhe kuch hua tou nehi
yar plz tell me how r u????????
tere atabiyat itna bigar kiase gaya?????????

Buy GOD u gave three update - aur wo bhi itne kam samay main.
i m really worried abt u.

kuch tou hua hai???????

anyways jeni janaaaaaaaaa

i'll tell u- how was ur update after reading it.
now mom scolding me - so i hav to go.

(oh abt my eye condition- now its little bit fine than earlier.)



Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Out of words jenni

How can you write such sweet updates

It was the cutest update ever

Mayur were so cute

Feel in love with them instantly

Love Nupur's growing feelings for Mayank

Waiting for feelings to develop in Mayank

Gunjan was very sweet

Continue soon

Love

Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago
updating in evening..!only 2 parts left...! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Bechari Nupur 😒
Why Mayank is behaving this way??I mean coming closer to her and all...
I guess let Samrat join them and mingle with Nups... Probably then some feeling will develop in Mayus heart too.... Waiting for that😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
@samu - plz take care...dont get into more troubles...atleast a week take rest buddy...
@pooja -u both soon get well and comment am waiting dears...!
@faru- plz dont get this much shock...am absolutely fine...better get well sooner and comment...as am going on updating...ur not reading...!i know the reason so i have left u...!
thanks to all my friends who had left your beautiful comment...i have no time to reply u all in personal...as i wanna update all my ffs today...and also i have planned to end this ss as am going to hostel i cant be continuing....
love u all
jeni
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Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter four-A cute realization

Nupur you still not got ready huh…mayank came irritatingly inside the room without even bothering to give a knock

nupur who lying there holding a book on her hand stood awkwardly looking for her duppatta which she had hanged hanged on….

Am sorry , I should have knocked apologized seeing her friend taking her duppatta and placing around her in quick...he said looking somewhere

It's ok , I should have locked the door…

Now better get ready na….he said

Mayank, but I told to gunjan that am having headache so….

If u sit alone in the room you will get more sicker…see all went there me alone staying here to take you…

What about gunjan…?😉

Arey all means she too had gone with them…now if you're not feeling well then we will go to doctor come…gave doubting look on the mills & boons she is holding😆

She tried hiding the novel…continued Oops mayank you are really crazy… but am saying na I will be alright sitting alone…

Sitting alone reading mills & boons he raised eyebrows …honestly nupur you could never lie...that too me...impossible...your eyes speaks the truth... remember that…!

its your family celebration so..how can i…she dragged

Mmmh that's the reason your lying…he said curving his brows..once again

Anyways mayank you go….he knows she will never give up that easily so without giving a thought he dragging her towards the bathroom left her in front of the door to go and get readyshe stood there adamantly not moving even an inch... mayank just holded her hands took her towards the shower…making her get wet in complete within seconds..he too got wet along ...her dress were revealing her body curves, making her go shy towards his nearness…

both stood there looking into each others eyes passionately searching for some answer...when mayank came more closer towards her making her move backwards..seeing her reddish cheeks he bent closer...slowly said in her ears see we both had taken a bath now...once again i should change my dress.....
he moved back said bit louder not catching her shyness continuednow listen…mmmh better get ready soon else…he said mockingly moved out locking….not finishing his sentence

First time nupur realized mayank getting so close towards her heart as she couldn't ignore his words nor…she stood there under the shower with a kind of fear…she couldnt restrict mayank if there happens to be someone then for sure she would treated in diiferent manner...

Is she in love with her best friend….

love she repeated to herself....

but he is the one going to be engaged…

how can I love him?

Slowly her tears flipped as she couldn't stop herself from tears rolling at her fault..…she had made a bigger mistake coming here…..that too falling in love with her best friend ,how ridiculous…!

her voice shaken saying what if mayank comes to know about her heart…

he will definitely start hating her…

Now should she leave from there..would she able to pretend smiling seeing him with dia…😛

Once again there came making her realize her that she was still standing under the shower....she started closed the shower stood there shivering not willing to face mayank😉 ...

mayank knocked one more time saying come faster, get this dress else you will get ill for sure…!already your standing under the water for longer time...its cooling place...so dont take much time...

His caring tone making her go more weaker towards him…now she had two chances…

One to just catch her breath and stay here for his engagement…

Second to go away from ooty…and him….

She never gave herself an option of opening her heart too mayank…!

to be continued....

loves

jeni😳

yet one more part to go on.....!😉



Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hay nic updt yar do cont soon 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Jeni,

here I am....

Ok.... now whats this yaar??? you are gonna end this ss so soon.....

Well.... I had left a message for u in fb.... Did u read it???

Anyways, AMAZING update.....
Mayank Nupur under the shower TOGETHER???? *sigh* *dreams* *gosh*..... *Naughty girl Jeni*....... ha ha ha...... Was Mayu oops Mayank wearing his black shirt haan???

Hmm...... So, it looks like Dia is gonna come directly for engagement in the last part..... Because u dint mention about her now.... Bechari.... By the time she comes Mayank is already someone else's......ha ha ha....... Ohhh No no Jeni..... dont even think about changing the ending..... Now toh I have given assurance also so pakka HAPPY HAPPY ENDING....... samjhi???

Okay then..... Do continue soon.... Will be waiting.....
Keep in touch.....!!!!
And have a HAPPY and rocking hostel life....!!!
Take care....


POOJA.... 😊

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