~Love is madness~ MoNaya FF- Part5 updt pg28

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

Marvellous part I loved it complete Mohit and sanaya are really adorable

Emotions were potrayed very beautifully but more then emotions I like the description of morning u gave in begining I just loved it feel like I am there to feel the morning song

Do continue soon and do pm me next time for sure

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Ragini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Rachna, thanks so much for your comment hon 🤗 yeah i was just PMing everyone right now 😆

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Ragini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: -MohitzPari-
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🤣

OMGGGG u made me speechless once again girl🤗🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪
so beautifully written!!! how can u think of this yaar???🤣...its so hard!!!! to come up with a all new story...so diff and unique!!! so Monayalicious man!!! I could imagine each and every scene!!! and even the clothes...black and white☺️☺️☺️☺️ PERFECT man!!! loved it!!!!!

U have a great talent ragi...use it as much as u can!!! m saying this for real hun...not everyone can do this!!!!

awwwwww u dedicated it to me🤗.............love u so much!! par I didn't know u still feeling lonely😲😆/......m trying my best to make u not feel so 🤗🤗

muahhh...and waiting for the 4th one..GOSHH..never end this FF🤣🤣

OMG OMG Ur the first to comment 🤗🤗 haaaaaaayee love you so much bhai 🤗 ya jaana, no matter how much u talk to me everyday i still have this loneliness :( 😆 im know im weird, awwwwwww so glad u like it 🤗 i knew u would love the colour combo amazing ☺️ and why i write so welll😆 coz of my love for Monaya and secondly i have stayed in a hostel in shimla, only difference is, tht was a girls college and this ones co -ed 🤣

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: -Ragini-
Rachna, thanks so much for your comment hon 🤗 yeah i was just PMing everyone right now 😆

Oh to maine pm milne se pehle hi parhke comment kar diya good good mujhe laga tune mujhe pm nahi kiya

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Natasha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

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I am lost in MoNaya's dreamland 😍 Mohit in Black ☺️ I can imagine him ... Man he looks hot ... Me drooling 🤪and now Sanaya is gonna apologize 😳

Amazing update Ragz ... continue soon :D

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Doyel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

wowwwwww.... i simply can't help drooling...... 😍 amazing ragini..... 🤗

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aashi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

hey ragini superb part yar loved it to the core 👏 really u described monaya's pov so well 👏 now really can't wait for apologize of sanaya and fun please do continue soon 😳 and thanks for pm

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Ragini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Awwwhh thanks soo much Shreya and Aashi 🤗 means a lot girls 🤗

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Sayani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#139

Awwwwwwwwww Ragz...😍😍😍😍😍
I m In MoNaya's Dreamland...
Lost in Mohit's eyes..🤣
OMG...Ragz..what an update..U can create Magic Ragz...
Each and every Line..each and every description was wonderful and beautiful...
Mohit is so crazy and Naughty..aww..I So Loved Him..
and U have Killed me by describing Him in Black Shirt...🤪🤪
He Look so Hot in Black..Haila...i CAN iMAGINE HIM...🤪🤪🤪
Blush☺️
And Sanaya is showing so much of Attitude...Itna Cute sa boy ko koi attitude dikhata hai kya?LOL🤣🤣

Loved their nok-Jhok...
'You Boys are always the same'...Run Baby Run🤣
Otherwise Mohit will follow You..
Awesome Update Ragz...
cant wait for the next..

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Saniya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#140

OMGOMGOMG Ragz FINALLYYYY, Goshh I Was Getting Craaazyyyy To Read Part 3 ! RES

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OHH EMM GEE !!! Ragzieeeeee 🤗, today i have to admit that you are the best writer in this forum 🤗, time and again you have made me speecheless i have no words to describe this FF ! This was SO MoNayaLicious ☺️, were the hell do you get these ideas from ?

Im lost now in MoNaya's dreamland 😍, cant help myself but drooool 🤪! GOD Mohit in B l a c k ? ☺️ .. What are you doing to US ?? And Sanaya in white 😍, Goshh Black & White 😲☺️ am going mad now all cuz of you Ragz 🤣 ! Awww poor Sanaya she feels alone although she has family 😒 !

i LOVED Mohit's atittude 😎 .. He rocked there poor Sanaya 😆 ! These two are SO perfect for each other man 🤣, now she felt guilty and shes going to apologize 😳 ... OMG cantt wait anymore, you better update the next part way to SOON 😈 ! This was SOO B e a u t i f u l 😍 !

You made my dayyyy 🤗, Thanks ALOT Mwuuuahhh x

Edited by MoNayaKiDeewani - 15 years ago