Originally posted by: -shabnoor-
Hey Ankita,
Glad to receive a reply from you !!
Yeah to be true...there were some chapters that were hard to understand at first then I kept myself at your place and the decoding became easy...
According to me it din lack any consistency, it was a vague writing and a vague writing has it's own beauty !
Not many attempt it at first place but who do ...do it beautifully ! Yours reflected that :)
Yeah I could sense the hurry...but then you didn't even drag it, if you would have then maybe it would not hold the same place in my heart....but then leaving a work incomplete even makes me cringe....my one FF is pending....yet I don't get time to complete Inshallah I'll do it soon :)
Wow ! must say as a first FF it was brilliant !! the song selection...description and all was perfect !!
As far as how many MG FF i've read...not many touched my heart coz it was the same story kinda of ...even this was similar...but the presentation was different...
Dunno if you've noticed or not I rarely comment on MG FF's but I had to on this one coz I like it :)
And coming to my FF....OMG what should I say; maturity ?? I feel my FF is very vague and I fear people might lose interest in it....
and I don't feel ur FF lacks maturity dear....😊
but I would still say Merci Madame for liking my FF :)
Do write more stories I would love to read them....and yeah I don't go by the couple I read the story only if I like it then be it MG AR or even MN...... :)
-Fatima
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