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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-



Hey Ankita,

Glad to receive a reply from you !!

Yeah to be true...there were some chapters that were hard to understand at first then I kept myself at your place and the decoding became easy...

According to me it din lack any consistency, it was a vague writing and a vague writing has it's own beauty !
Not many attempt it at first place but who do ...do it beautifully ! Yours reflected that :)

Yeah I could sense the hurry...but then you didn't even drag it, if you would have then maybe it would not hold the same place in my heart....but then leaving a work incomplete even makes me cringe....my one FF is pending....yet I don't get time to complete Inshallah I'll do it soon :)

Wow ! must say as a first FF it was brilliant !! the song selection...description and all was perfect !!
As far as how many MG FF i've read...not many touched my heart coz it was the same story kinda of ...even this was similar...but the presentation was different...

Dunno if you've noticed or not I rarely comment on MG FF's but I had to on this one coz I like it :)

And coming to my FF....OMG what should I say; maturity ?? I feel my FF is very vague and I fear people might lose interest in it....
and I don't feel ur FF lacks maturity dear....😊
but I would still say
Merci Madame for liking my FF :)

Do write more stories I would love to read them....and yeah I don't go by the couple I read the story only if I like it then be it MG AR or even MN...... :)

-Fatima




Thanks a lot Fatima, this is good for my ego!😆
I actually dont read any AR or Mayur FF's....Except yours or maybe those which my friends write or recommend.MG take the cake for me cuz I really like the cast and initially I liked the story too.
But a good read changes that!I think that its hard to imagine the characters in any other way than what we see in serials and maybe that is the reason for my distaste for both of Mayur and AR ffs.
Exception to this is when I read FF's in which the characterization is different or the story is.... :D
As for your FF...I like the vagueness, because realiy is that way too...as in we dont get time to analyze much...People wont loose interest here because they will relate to this vagueness like me...I think.
Yeah I will definitely write something but not soon I think.
btw I read have read all your poems and I love them specially Dishevel and iridescent life :D
Edit :Notice how many times I use the words I think! #4
Edited by crazilycrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Loved ur Epi

It was fab
The way u defined theur relation Maan trying to sneak out Geet frm party n that doc scene all was fab

Thanks a lot Afsha!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi783

the updates were fab😊

Very well wriiten!!!

You've finished this FF😭
Wish you could continue!
Do PM me if you plan to start another FF😊

Thanks a lot Shifali.I will PM you if I write another FF which I am not very sure about :D
As for continuing it...well I never had a story line for this...this FF is just a string of random posts according to me....😆
Thanks again
cR
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ansah

hey...that was really awesome..i really loved it..

do keep writing...another fanfic soon

Danke schon Ansah! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Jes75

OMG that was awesome Ankita ....simply awesome .....to speechless.....dunno what else to say ...great going girl .....

Thanks a lot Jes.... :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: uzmam1

Ankita,

loved it!!
so happy that they have moved along had not one but 2 children and that Maan feels so much contentment!!
great read .. brilliant job!!

Thanks a lot Uzmam...I am glad you liked it :D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pickachu

Beautifullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.

Loveeeeeee ur ff.
Veryyyy well written.
What a sweettttt ending!!!!!!!



Fatima

Thanks a lot Fatima...the happy ending was garunteed wasnt it?The title suggests as much...it had to be fairytale like😉
cR
Edited by crazilycrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: t-mayur-sajan-j

Hey
just came across ur ff
I have no words I mean u've left me speechless
ur ff is just amazing, meaningful, just great
loved it
jasmin

Thanks a lot yaar,you read the whole thing at one go?Wow :)
anyways...thanks for appreciating :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Just amazinglily beautiful. It is so calm, so peaceful, so serene and at the same time shows so much love, passion, compassion, unity, togetherness.😊👏👏👏😊
It was overflowing with emotions.
Simply amazing.❤️❤️❤️
Have you thought about writing professionally?
Thanks for the FF - It was indeed a fairytale.
Love
Rachana
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aarmanshilpa

Hi,

Just amazinglily beautiful. It is so calm, so peaceful, so serene and at the same time shows so much love, passion, compassion, unity, togetherness.😊👏👏👏😊
It was overflowing with emotions.
Simply amazing.❤️❤️❤️
Have you thought about writing professionally?
Thanks for the FF - It was indeed a fairytale.
Love
Rachana

Hi Rachna,
Thanks a lot for your lovely comment.I never know how to reply to posts like these,except with a lame thankyou.It never covers up what I feel but still.
And about writing professionally you say?
Well I still think I have a long way to go before doing that.
Thanks a lot again for your comment. :D
so long
cR

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