ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144 - Page 48

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Posted: 14 years ago
omg i love da update
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
It's great nice n so cute love it!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
when u update dear I m waiting full weekend for u next part as u said u was updating in weekend but u not updated yet? u r bussy😭😭😭😭😭
whenever u free plz update the next part cant' wait I m mad with u ff hope u will understand me😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
he indeed is a sweetheart....my sweetheart 😉
anyways nice chap nida.....upd shoon
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Posted: 14 years ago
"Mein update ke liye request karoun
Mujhe haq hai
Piyaaaaa Piyaaaaaa
Piya piya bole mera jiya " 😆
Weekend is finished hun, when will u update 😳
Love,
Humera 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ahem Ahem..HeLLoo..howz u all..hehehe..all is well??..hope it is..sorry for breaking my promise about updating in weekendz..but got realli bz..and yet sick..but now all is fine..and guess watt...omg..no no i didnt meet MAAN! 😒..lol..thats random 😆..but u knw wat..therez a surprise for ya all😳..guess guess..therez a VM that i made on the scenes in ma FF..which are similar..wid the show..but the story line is different..so imagine Maaneet..as they are in my FF..not the 1 in the show..and ignore if they are wearing different clothes..in the same scene..coz u knw na..i edited..but i think the 1st vm is the disaster..😆😒..coz first vm on FF..so lets give me ur views about that..PLEASE..and dont be too formal..u can criticize..i wont mind..it wud actually help me..so dont hesitate..and do comment..and wanna thank all of ya who have commented..love ya allll..mwaa..thankss..TC
~Chap 18~

Hey Geet!..u knw that's my fav scene..he sed while watching the movie..but there was no response..and Maan noticed it..he turned back to see y Geet isn't replying and saw Geet was asleep..for a second he beamed looking at her.."the movie must be torture for her..thats y she fell asleep" he thought..then he noticed her head was keep slipping down frm the pillow..he got up..he noticed her hair lock was caressing her cheek..enthralled by the moment..he leaned down..and was gonna touch..but suddenly moved away..thinking wats wrong wid him..then he put the popcorn bowl on the side table..and set the pillow in the rite position..but it fell..and again her head slided down..he again tried..but the pillow was keep slipping down because of the slippery surface of the leather sofa..Maan sighed frustratingly..he sat next to her and slightly moved his shoulder forward..Geet who was asleep..put her head down and rested..Maan hesitantly looked at her..Geet wrapped her hand around his shoulder..and pulled him even more closer..for a second Maan thought she was awake..he looked away..but when Geet calmed down he also settled himself down on the sofa..and replayed his movie..but for sum reason cudnt focus on it..may be it was the closeness..he stopped the movie and leaned back on the sofa..he stared at her..till his eyes automatically closed and ..in a little time he too fell asleep..

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It was 6:02 pm when Geet woke up..she slowly opened her eyes..the room was dark..but the rays of the setting sun was showering through the window ..she smiled and tried to get up..but something didn't let her..she confusingly looked around her and got super shocked to see Maan just right next to her..very close..his hand was wrapped around her waist..and he was asleep..wid his head down on her shoulder..she sat still in shock for sum moments..and then again looked at Maan..she slightly moved away his head from her shoulder .." so cute"..she thought shyly looking at him..then the other second realized what is she thinking?.. She quietly lifted his hand and tried to move it..when Maan made his grip more tighter..and pulled her more closer..

"He must be thinking im a pillow"..she thought nervously

Geet kept quiet for sum minutes..but then she lost her patience..

Ahem..Ma..Maan" she sed in a low tone..to wake him up

"Maan..utho na plzz.."..Maan who was asleep now slowly opened his eyes..and looked at Geet..then he slowly moved away his head..

"Kya huwa??" he sed looking at Geet..

Geet looked down at his hand..telling him to move away..Maan looked down too..and realized he was holding Geet..he quickly moved away his hand..

"im..im sorry"..mujhe pata he nahi chala maine kab.." he tried to clarify..hesitantly

Geet: its ok Maan..i understand..maine tumko aaj sonay nahi diya..i knw tumhari neend poori nahi huwi thi..meri bhi nahi huwi..acha hai..hum dono so gaye..she sed friendly

Maan looked at her and then smiled.."yeah..so hows ur toe now..?"..He asked looking at it..he noticed there was a little swollenness..but the bandage wasn't red..which meant there was no bleeding

Geet: I think its ok..but still hurting!

Maan: yeah..i understand..it must be hurting

Geet: Maaaan..she sed hesitantly..

Maan looked at her..he noticed if she was trying to say something.."haan..Geet..bolo..kuch kehna hai..u need something?"

Geet nodded.."woh Maan..mujhko na..bath..bathroom jaana hai!..kya tum plz mujhko.. that all she sed tentatively

Maan understood..he got up.."no problem Geet..i will take u there"

Geet looked at him gratefully

Maan gently put her foot down on the floor..which was on a pillow ..on the little..tiny table..

Then he supported Geet..and helped her standing up..by holding her hand..then put his other hand around her waist and helped her walking and keep her from falling down..

"bas..now I will manage" Geet sed after reaching to the bathroom..

"Are u sure?..i mean..it's ok..if u need some other help"..he sed looking down at the floor

Geet chuckled: no Maan..its ok..tum yahee rehna..agar main andar gir gayee..then I mite need ur help..other than that..i will manage..

Maan: ok

Geet smiled and entered the bathroom..

Thankfully Geet was alrite..and came back..she insisted to go to the kitchen..and Maan helped her and took her there

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"Meri chai main Sugar 2 teaspoon plz"..Geet told Maan..who just made her a cup of tea..and a cup of coffee for himself..he gave the tea to Geet

Geet: thanxx..she sed taking the cup..

Maan: anytime mangetar!..

Geet chuckled in response.."Maan..aaj mujhe aisa lag raha hai..jaise humaree friendship aur gehri ho gayee hai.." Geet sed to Maan while taking a big sip of her tea..

Maan too took sip of his coffee: kya matlab??

Matlab..Matlab mujhe bhi nahi pata..lekin I feel..that now we are really close..she sed looking in her cup..while sitting on the kitchen counter..

Maan looked at her..and then smiled..he came and sat next to her.."yes we are very close" he sed naughtily

Geet chuckled: "aise wala close nahi Maan!

Maan also laughed.." acha..aur kitna close hosaktay hain Geet..tum aur kaisay close hona chahtee ho? he sed staring at her..moving close to her..

Geet slightly hit him on the shoulder.." Maaaan!..i mean..u knw..not physically..but emotionally..mentally..u knw wat I mean"

Maan smiled: I knw Geet..but tumko Aaaj kyon yeh feel ho raha hai..pehlay hum close nahi thay kya!?

Geet: hmmm..thay..lekin aaj kuch khaas mehsoos ho raha hai..i mean..aaj hum dono ne kitna openly aik doosre se baatien keen..nahi??

Maan: sirf maine ki..ok..tum to bas mujhko sun rahee theen!

Geet: haan..lekin meray paas kuch batane ko tha he nahi?..aur tum ne kuch poocha bhi nahi!

Maan: acha..to ab batao!..tum jahan par rehtee theen..wahan zyada acha lagta tha..ya yahan zyada maza aa raha hai!

Geet:hmm..ofcourse..main wahan rahee hoon..soo..

Maan: matlab tumko yahan acha nahi lagta?? He asked disappointly

Geet: Maaan..let me finish..

Maan still didn't change his disappointed expression..

Geet: Mera matlab yeh hai..k ofcourse that place is special..coz I actually grew up there..lekin mujhe yahan itna maza aa raha hai..jitna maine kabhi expect bhi nahi kiya tha..and u knw wat..it is coz of u..i never thought k mujhe yahan aik itna special frend milay ga..

Maan smiled and looked at Geet.."acha..so u calling me special..??" he asked as if he was making sure

Geet: nahi..main Salman khan ko special bol rahee hoon..Ofcourse Maan..its U!

Maan: acha..he looked at her..and then looked down at his hand.."Geet!..wahan bhi koi special hai kya?"..he asked looking down..just didn't knw the exact reason y he asked..but just cudnt stop himself from asking..

Geet: kahan?

Maan..still not looking up: Jahan tum pehlay rehtee theen!

Geet looked at him..and kept staring at him..till he looked back at her

Geet smiled: Kyon??

Maan looked away.."Nahi bas aise he..its ok agar tum nahi batana chahteen"..there was a serious expression on his face..he stood up..put his cup in the sink..

Geet: hmm..hai na..

Maan looked at her in surprise..almost unbelievably

Geet: kya huwa..itna shock kyon ho rahe ho!?

Maan trying to hide the awkward reaction: nahi..main aur shock.. nahi..to

Geet chuckled: ok ok..but u knw wat..i really miss him..sachi..she sed looking at him

Maan now trying to hide his anger..he felt kinda envious..and didn't like the feeling very much..

Maan now looking at the floor in anger.."acha..to usko he kyon nahi banaliya mangetar!"

Geet: ohooo!!..acha..itna possessive hona achi baat nahi hai MANGETAR!

Maan: HA!!..possessive..woh bhi main..tumhare liye..r u kidding!

Geet chuckled: acha..to phir itna ghussa kyon aa raha hai tumko

Maan: Mujhe..Ghussa??

Geet nodded

Maan: Geet..mujhe bilkul bhi ghussa nahi aa raha!

Maan tumko Ghussa aa raha hai!"..she teased while getting down frm the counter carefully

Maan ignored.."Mujhe nahi pata tha..k tum itna ghussa karogai..she teased while walking toward a small kitchen table..where Maan was standing

"Itna ghussa sehat k liye acha nahi hota maan!"..this time Maan lost his patience..and grabbed her harshly by her arm..ignoring her injured toe..Geet wasn't expecting this at all..she was in his embrace..Maan's reaction caused pain in her toe..

Maan didn't say anything..his eyes spoke that he wasn't in a mood..

Geet kept looking into his eyes..and he kept looking into hers..

" hey Maan..serious kyon ho rahe ho yaar!..main to mazaq kar rahee thee..i knw tumhain ghussa nahi aa raha tha..main to bas aise he..tumko tang kar rahee thee..aur mera special ..she was clarifying in a low tone..when Maan interrupted

Maan: yeh Mangetar wala drama uss k saath kyun nahi kiya..agar woh itna he special hai to..

Geet: Lekin main usse kaise boltee..

Maan: Kyon..Kyon nahi bol sakteen theen usko..he asked angrily

Geet: woh hoga to bolongee na..mera koi bhi special nahi hai yaar..i was just kidding..i was lying.

Maan was now quieltly looking at her..

Geet: lekin tum itna hyper kyon ho rahe ho..kahin tum mujhse pyaar..she teased

Maan who was lost looking into her eyes..noticed her hair was caressing her cheek again..like before..

He slightly raised his hand.."Geet main tumko kisi k saath share nahi karsakta..mujhko tumse..tumse pyaar honay laga hai! He sed in a deep voice gently moving the lock behind her hair..

Geet was shockingly looking at him..her heart was leaping in her chest..she felt like she can't breathe anymore..she was standing still in his embrace..when Maan got away..burst out laughing..which again shocked Geet..

"WoW..wasnt that Filmi..just like other heros..he sed cracking up..

Kaisa laga Geet..tung sirf tum he nahi karsaktee..main bhi karsakta hoon na!..he winked and again laughed

Geet was mad.."yeh kaisa mazaq hai Maan..she complained angrily..Maan who was laughing figured out that she didn't like it that much..

Kya matlab kaisa mazaq hai..tum jaisa bhi mazaq karo ok hai..main karoon..to tumko acha nahi lagta..he complained

Geet was quiet..she didn't like the stupid joke at all..for a second she thought he was actually serious..maybe he was..thats wat his eyes sed..thats y her heartbeats were racing million of miles in a second..Geet was totally annoyed..she was about to leave..when Maan moved for help..

"No its ok..i don't need ur help"..she sed upsettingly

Maan: no..i will help u..cum..he moved forward his hand..and was about to take her hand..when she moved away..

Maan sighed: Cum on Geet..mazaq tha..main itna bura hoon..k tum mazaq main bhi meray saath judna nahi chahteen!

Geet irritably: shut up Maan!..enough of that..u knw its nothing like that..lekin plz..tum pyaar ko le kar aur hum dono k baare main koi mazaq nahi karo gai!..

"Ok Mangetar..Sorry!..Khush?!" he asked friendly looking at Geet

Geet looked at him..and then slightly smiled..but still sumwhere in her heart she was feeling strange about this

Maan offered his hand: "Now can I help?" he asked friendly

Geet: u sure u want to?

Maan: I would love to Mangetar!

Geet smiled..and put her hand into his..

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And Guyss Here is the Surprise that u all are waiting for 😆😆

i hope u all enjoy..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QJlw5SxMOyk

Edited by NZ_rockx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant....this update came in as a surprise....I just love this FF of yours and wanted to be the first to comment....😃....but can I request you to make a longer update?? I know I am too greedy, but it is not my fault, it is your FF which is making me more greedy and want more of it....
Edited by priza - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priza

brilliant....this update came in as a surprise....I just love this FF of yours and wanted to be the first to comment....😃....but can I request you to make a longer update?? I know I am too greedy, but it is not my fault, it is your FF which is making me more greedy and want more of it....


awww..hehe..thats realli sweet..i understand..and im veryyy happy..so u liked the update..yes sure..i will make the weekend update longer than that..and no probz..i dont mind u being greedy..😆😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ah, first Maan gets possessive, then Geet gets touchy on th subject of love!
What could that possibly mean? 😉

Thanks for the PM and continue asap ⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

Ah, first Maan gets possessive, then Geet gets touchy on th subject of love!
What could that possibly mean? 😉

Thanks for the PM and continue asap ⭐️


haha..yes yes..wat can that actually mean..🤓
"Aqal mand ko ishara he kaafi hai" 😉😆😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update wow wow what can say pls cont soon i wiil be waiting seeeeeeeee

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