Mayank-Nupur 'Hamrahi' Part 8 Pg 32

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Tasheen

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Thank you soooo much everyone for liking the concept and for your support to start this ff
well the first part will be up soon

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Nice concept. Sounds like this will be a really good FF. Looking forward to Reading it. Please update soon and please add me to your PM list.

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Tasheen really nice start...so what is that your waiting for do start updating continually nah... 😳 😳 😳 that too specially on mayur...so am waiting for ur upd...

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afsha

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Nice concept n CS

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superb
when u update d next part pm me

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nice start

cont soon

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Sujata

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nice concept, CS r very good, sound nice. plz pm me whenever u update :)

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Tasheen

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Hello Friends
Hope you all are doing good

Thank you so much to all of you for liking the concept
I know you were be waiting for me to update
so here your wait is over and Part 1 is up

It is a short part, as I've just started na
So friends I need your feedback how was it

So please hit the like tab and comment if you like the part 😳

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Tasheen

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Hamrahi (Part 1)

They were sitting in the ground at their usual place when she looked up keeping her eyes off from the notes and she still at her place, but just for a moment, next moment she started collecting her notes to this Gunjan asked setting her specs on the nose, "What happened?"

"Don't ask me anything just come with me" She answered getting up and peeked once again at the place, he was still standing there, she stepped forward and Gunjan followed her

"What's your problem? Tum aik jagah pe kyun nahi ruk sakti" Gunjan said getting irritated

"Mujhe aik jagah rukne se koi problem nahi hai agar woh mere peeche ana chor de" She retorded looking back

"Woh kaun?" Gunjan didn't get it

"That crazy Monkey of 4th semester" She growled, "Pata nahi kyun mera peecha kerta rehta hai"

"So what's the big deal! agar woh tumhara peecha ker raha hai toh just ignore him" Gunjan dragged her to the mass communication department

"That's what I am doing, Thank God he is not in my session .... I mean you noticed him the way he stared at me ...... it's so .... I mean ... so .... it was ... urghh ... I can't tell you" She failed to get the proper words and there Gunjan caught her

"Ohh Look look hmmm" She said teasingly

"Shut up Gunji .. Now please you don't start, there is nothing like you are thinking, he is a crazy man aur main abhi itni pagal nahi hui ke uss ke barre mein sochoon" She snapped not knowing that the 'crazy man' overheard her

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He was dribbling the basket ball while her voice was ringing in his head

"The way he stare at me urghh"

"Crazy Monkey"

"He is a crazy man aur main abhi itni pagal nahi hui ke uss ke barre mein sochoon"

"He is a crazy man"

"Crazy monkey"

"Crazy! Crazy! Zrazy!" He shot the ball to the basket and keep his hands on his ears to stop the voices

"I am crazy huh ...... you don't know me ... Now I'll tell you how crazy I am ... tomorrow you will witness my craziness" He smiled wickedly

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It was all started two weeks ago when he saw her first time. An inter college debate competition has been organized and she participated in, although she was junior to him but he liked her confidence, her convincing power, her attitude, In whole he liked her. He reached every place wherever she goes. he knew that she irritated with it but it was not in his hands, he feels some kind of attraction to her which drives him to her. He never wanted her to feel in the same way but he did not know that she think about him in that way. it hurted him and now he decided to confront her

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