Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1.. - Page 69

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Part 47....

Maan wakes up to a beautiful mrng........he then recalls the night where his life changed completely but he cnt figure out as to whether this is really love or not as dis is his frst tym.....he cnt figure out wat to do...how to go through the test to experience dat it is love and this is love which will change him...how to confirm ..he dsnt knw nethng...so he decides to do sumthng........

Maan: kal raat...kal raat meri zindagi hi badal gayi....maine kabhi sapne me bhi nahin socha tha ki mujhe....mujhe pyaar hojaega....woh bhi geet jaisi ladki se...........jiske saath wo pehli mulaaqat mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai........

he remembers his all d meetings he has had wid geet....he smiles but gets confused dat is this actually love as dis is his frst tym...

Maan: par aise kaise pyar hosakta hai.....mujhe toh pata bhi nahin he ki pyar hota kaise he....kaise.........kya karoon?...kya karoon aisa ki mujhe pata chaljaye ki mujhe jo hua he woh pyar hi he...par kaise?.............haan inn sab maamlo me geet expert hai...geet se poochta hoon...........hmmm

he is abt to get up to go to geet wen he stops...makes his eyes big ans sits down...

Maan: maan...kya tujhe pagal kutte ne kaatliya he kya?..........jisse pyar hua he main ussi se poochne jaraha hoon ki hello ji...kya aap mujhe bata sakte he ki mujhe pyar hua he ya nahin...plz...aapki bari meherbani hogi....dumb maan...ullu kahinka..geet yeh sab jaanne ke baad ki mujhe kisi se pyar hogaya hai woh toh hass degi aur mere yeh batane ke baad ki mujhe usse pyar hogaya hai woh apne jooti se meri solid pitayi kardegi...nahin baba nahin.....kuch aur sochna parega........haan!!!

there is a call in maan's room dat their breakfast is ready.he gets ready..maan decides to call geet for breakfast...maan is walking towards geet's room which is next door.....geet is still fast asleep......maan gves repeated knocks on d door and shouts...

Maan: geet...geet...geet kya tum andar ho...chalo jaldi se taiyyar hoke bahar aao...humara breakfast ready he aur mere kamre me he ..chalo jaldi aao....

when maan gets no response he gets tensed...but then figures out what geet myt be dng....

Maan: hmm...zaroor kumbhakaran ki tarah sorahi hogi....kitna soti he yeh ladki....lagat hai sabse zyada sone ka record geet ne hi toda hoga.........!!!...geet..geet...utho....dekho hum meeting ke late hojayenge.............

Mana keeps on knockin wen geet suddenly wakes up wid sleepy eyes.......she ws sleeping wid her blanket on her face...she looks quite funny wen she wakes up...hair all scattered arnd her face..she wakes up and sits absolutely upright...hair all over her face and still sleepy....geet listens to d knock of the door and says to herself...

Geet: arey yeh subha subha alarm clock kahan se aagaya....neend kaun kahrap karraha he....

geet takes d blanket and puts it over face and goes off to sleep ...she hears d knock dis tym wid maan calling her...she gets up again in d same way....

Geet: hmm...ab main samjhi.....maan sir ke alawa mujhe mujhe aur pareshan karne ke liye aur koi paida nahin hua he....main kaise bhoolgayi ki alarm clock ke saath maan sir complimentary gift he...kya inhe neend nahin aati...obviously ullu ko neend kaise aasakti he....main sojati hoon...

geet again drools off to sleep...maan gets irritated...

Maan: geet...jaldi se taiyyar hoke bahar aajao...humein nashta karke meeting ke liye jaana hai...!!!

Geet: uff ho maan sir bhi na....jake darwaza kholdeti hoon aur andar aane deti hoon...itni baar knock karnge toh poore Amritsar ko pata chaljaega ki main sorahi hoon...

geet walks in a sleepy manner...extremely funny...opens d door...to maan's relief...........

Maan: thank God geet...kum se kum tumne darwaza toh khola...arey yeh kya tum abhi tak taiyyar nahin hui........abhi tak night suit me ghoomrahi ho........

geet who is extremly sleepy.....smiles funnily at maan and keeps d door open for him to cum inside...maan finds it extremly weird........he comes inside....he is talking to geet but geet again jumps to d bed and goes off to sleep........maan who is busy talking to geet lookng at d odr side is not aware dat she has gone to sleep...

Maan: geet aaj ki meeting bohot hi important he....jo plans tumne taiyyar kiye he woh

he turns to the odr side and to his shock geet is still sleeping.....

Maan: geet....geet tum phir se sogayi....arey utho humein jaana...

geet under d blanket talks...

Geet: sir sone dijiye na....mujhe bohot neend aarahi he....

Maan: geet hum yahan pe holiday karne nahin aaye he.........kaam karne aaye he.......

Geet: maine kab kaha ki hum holiday ke liye aaye he....mere itne bure din bhi nahin aaye he ki mai aapke saath holiday pe aoon....plz..

Maan: bakwaas ki goli khati ho kya jo har baar bakwaas karti rehti ho tum.....geet humein abhi meeting pe jaana hai...plz ab utho...bohot hua tumhara....client zindagi bhar tumhara wait nahin karnewala he ki kab geet madam utegi aur phir woh meeting karenge....!!!..geet do ghante me humari meeting he..jane me hi ek ghanta lagta hai....upar se traffic alag......chalo get up...

Geet: main nahin uthungi.........mujhe thodi der ke liye aur sona hai........

Maan: aur tumhara thodi der kitna he geet?

Geet: yehi koi adha ek ghnata bas...

Maan: kya?...adha ek ghanta bas...........geet dekho ab utho varna main..

Geet: varna kya......zoo me bhejdenge.......?

Maan: zoo?..main tumhe zoo kyun bhejunga geet?...

Geet: haan...kyunki aap bhi toh wahi rehte he na....jahan boss wahi secretary...

Maan: very funny...geet agar tumhara stand up comedy khatam hogaya ho toh plz...jaldi se utho aur taiyyar hojao...

Geet: nahin uthungi...bilkul nahin.....utha sakte he toh utha lijiye....

Maan: achcha....mujhe challenge....

maan goes and gets a bucket of water and splashes it straight on geet...geet wakes up to the horror of her life...she literally cnt figure out as to how did this happen ..maan cud never do such a thng...she exclaims

Geet: huh....tsunami aagaya...tsunami aagaya....main behjaungi...bachao bachao...!

Maan smiles heartily...

Maan: geet yeh chand minute ka tsunami mere wjae se aaya he.....woh bhi iss bucket se.......

Geet: kya?...aapne?...aapne mere upar paani pheka?....aapki itni himmat?.....aapne aisa kaise kiya?

Maan:haath se aur thoda sa dimag lagake...tumhe samajhe me nahin aayega... wow...finally geet bk to normal...kyun udd gayi na sari neend...?...woh kya he na bade bade deshon me aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti he.....

Geet gets up all wet...looks at her self.....feels cold...

Geet: choti baat..?...yeh aapko choti baat lagti he....ek toh itni thand aur aap upar se ...paani...aapko koi aur tareeka nahin mila?

Maan: kyun?...tum bhi yehi karti na...shayad isse bhi bura.........yeh toh phir bhi insaano jaisi harkat thi....

Geet: aap jaan bujhkar aisa karrahe he............purana badla na...isilye aise pagalo jaise harkate karrahe he!

Maan: dekho geet....kabhi kabhi geet banne ke liye pagal banna parta hai...

Geet: huh?...aapne mujhe pagal kaha?main pagal nahin hoon..........

Maan: har pagal yehi kehta hai.....koi nayi baat nahin he...aur waise bhi geet...tumhara pagal nahin hone ka matlab he jaanwar bina zoo....

Geet: haan haan...aapko zoo ke alawa aur kya soojsakta hai....of course...main samjh sakti hoon sir aapko apne purane ghar ki bohot yaad aarahi he....hota hai sir hota hai...!

Maan: dekho geet time waste mat karo...aur jao nahake taiyyar hojao...

Geet: aur nahane ki zaroorat he kya?....aapne already nehelvadiya...

Maan: very funny.......jaiyye jaake naha lijiye ...paani aapka intezaar karraha he...

Geet gives a sarcastic smile and goes to take a bath, taking her towel and her clothes.........b4 gng she warns maan....

Geet: yeh mat samajhlena ki main bhool jaungi..iss pani ka badla toh main lekar rahungi...geet ke surprise attack ke liye taiyyar rahiyega...............

Maan: pehle jakar nahalo.....baad main iske bare me baat karenge....

geet goes on to take a bath and is singing loudly ..some bollywood numbers..at which maan amkes a weird face...

Maan: yeh geet.....uff...kahan se karti he aisi pagal panti harkatein...?

Geet is singing....loudly...maan puts his fingers in his ears.........

Maan: geet thoda aur jor se gaogi toh tumhari aawaz Mumbai tak zaroor pohochjaegi.......

Geet: uff ho...inki problem kya hai........kyun sir......aapko mera gaana itna pasand aaya...!

Maan: haan haan...isilye toh rui dhundraha hoon....

Geet: very funny.........!

geet finishes taking her bath.......she cums out of the bathroom singing,dancing...maan gves a stare at her.....at her freshness...

Maan: arey waah maan..teri toh aaj sach me gud mrng hogayi........!

suddenly geet slips thru d water and falls ryt on maan.....maan falls bang on the bed.....geet on him....drops of water frm geet's hair falls on maan's face....maan and geet lost in each odrs eyes ...maan slowly removes d water drops on geet's face slowly.......geet again feels strongly in the moment............suddenly they both cum out of that........maan makes a sound as if he has hurt his back.....

Maan: aau....ouch...

Geet still on top of him: kya hua?...chilla kyun rahe hain?

Maan: arye kamar me chot laga...

Geet: kaise...?

Maan: ab agar itna bhari samaan mere upar girega toh chot toh lagegi na!

Geet: main aapko bhari lagti hoon.......

Maan: geet tum plz mere upar se utho...

geet gets up....in a huff...

Maan: uff baba....ouch!...(holds his back)...

Geet: kya main itni bhari hoon?

Maan: geet tum sirf bahar se patli ho....asal main kaafi bhari...u knw!

Geet:toh aap agar itni kum umar me buddhe hogaye he toh yeh meri problem nahin he...waise toh bare he man bane ghumte he...ek ladki ka weight nahin sambhal paye...digraceful sir........!

Maan: oh really...main yahan weight lifting competition nahin karraha hoon samjhi geet....woh tum achanak aake girgayi mujhpe.........!!!

Geet: haan toh me dance aur gaana garahi thi!

Maan: haan of course tumhara live concert suna maine.........tum toh itna achcha gaati ho ki saare singers ko aapne singer hone par sharam aati he...!

Geet: main kya karoon sir ...ab meri awaaz itni achchi he...

Maan: theek he geet...ab agar tumhara full time taareef khatam hogayi ho toh jaake nashta karle...!

Geet: uff ho sir...aap jao na...aur waise bhi aap mere kamre me kya karrahe he...maine aapse kaha tha na ki main taiyyar hoke aarahi hoon...

Maan: woh kya hai na geet mujhe tumpar bharosa nahin he...kya pata ki tum khidki se kudkar bhagjaogi........!

Geet: hahhaa very funny...mr .khurana...ab aap jaiyye aur plz mujhe theek se taiyyar hone dijiye......!!!

Maan gves her a glance and goes to his room...the breakfast is laid out in the balcony of his room.....maan sits down for breakfast wen geet cums in.....she cums straight to the balcony and takes her cup of coffee and rests on d balcony admiring the beauty outside...

Maan: geet tum yahan aake bethti kyun nahin...bethke nashta karo....!!!

Geet: kyun?...aapko ab mere khare hone par bhi problem hai.....arey mer pair hai....mujhe khade hona hai toh khadi rahungi aur bethna hai toh bethjaungi....

Maan: theek he....

geet finally sits down and has her breakfast....she munches on d food while maan looks on at her.........geet is literally gobbling the food........maan sees at her wid a surprised look as to why is she behaving like a monkey...

Maan: geet..geet yeh kaunsa tareeka he khana khane ka?....itni bhook lagi he tumhe?....sara khana ek saath muh ke andar?.

Geet:(while eating)..uff ho sir...yehi toh mazaa he khane ka.......aur aapko meri har cheez se problem kaise hosakti he...khate peete ghar ki ladki hoon....aur waise bhi aapke waje se hi main itna sara khana muh me thoosrahi hoon...

Maan: meri waje se?

Geet: aur nahin toh kya?..........aapne hi toh kaha tha ki aapko jaldi meeting ke liye jana hai...

Maan: haan par dheere dheere...itni jaldi bhi nahin he........!!!..tum chup chap dheere se khana khao.......

Geet is eating and maan decides to try to ask abt how to confirm love ........but is a lil apprehensive........he decides to gve it a shot....by nt gvng a hint to geet dat he is actually in love...................

Geet who is drinking juice while maan asks d question.........

Maan: achcha geet ...ek baat batao..............yeh pyar kaise hota hai?

Geet who is bowled by d question spills out d juice and starts coughing....maan gets tensed and runs for her help............

Maan: geet tum theek toh ho na?

Geet: haan sir....par yeh aapko kya hogaya?

Maan: kya?

Geet: yeh subha subha kaise sawaal poochrahe aap?...subha subha kya peekar aaye he?

Maan: shut up geet...aisi koi baat nahin he...aur waise bhi main peeta nahin hoon....

Geet:toh phir yeh kaisa sawaal he?......pyar ke bare me aur woh bhi aap?..aap kabse pyar me interest hogaye?...

Maan; kyun?...mere seene me dil nahin he?..main pyar ki baatein nahin karsakta?

Geet: nahin...aapke seene me dil nahin volcano he...jo zaroorat parne par tanda rehta hai aur uske baad itna zor se erupt hota hai ki kya batao..

Maan: shut up geet!...

geet and maan sit on the dining table and talk............

Geet: sir chakkar kya hai?...kahin aapko pyar?

Maan: no geet...upp aisi koi aat nahin he....woh main kal raat ko ek film dekhraha tha .........usme ladke ko jhat se pyar hojata hai aur usse yeh confirmed pyar hi lagta hai..par geet aise kisiko bhi kisise pyar hojaega..koi signs toh honge na yeh confirm karne ke liye ki hum uss insaan ke saath poori zindagi bitana chahte he....par uske baad me sogaya aur pata hi nahin chala...

Geet: aap aur rrat ko film?

Maan: english film...

Geet: angrez chale gaye maan sir ko chodgaye

Maan: shut up geet ...aur batao...

Geet: haan..pyar confirm karne ke liye 5 signs hote hai according to me..agar insaan ye 5 signs experience karta hai toh uss insaan ko pakka pyar hojata hai...

Maan: achcha?,,,kya he woh?

Geet: aapko jann me itna interest?

Maan: seedhe seedhe batao.........

Geet: pehla step....jab uss insaan kopehli baar apna pyar mehsus hota hai tab woh pehli b aar gaana gata hai..khushi me.....baarish me bheegta he......yeh tha pehla step...dusra hai ki jab bhi woh apni aankhen band karega usse hamesha wohi dikhayi degi......aur koi nahin....jaise jab bhi hum aankhen band karte he humein Bhagwan dikhte he aur hum unhe yaad karte he waise hi wohi humara Bhagwan banjata hai humara sab kuch..........step no3 ....har jagah pe wohi dikhegi..har insaan...........me...step no4....laal rang se pyar....laal gulaab....se pyar..........pyar ke feeling se pyar.........aur last step hota hai ki uss insaan ke liye aapne aap se zyada chahna..uski har ek baat usse achcha lagna..............usse har musibaat se bachana..usse apni zindagi samajhna.....uske liye aapni jaan ko uske naam kardena...agar ek insaan yeh 5 step poore karleta hai toh usse uss insan se pakaa pyar he.....

Maan: pehla step toh maine paar karliya hai....!..........ab agr dusra aur baki steps main experience karloon toh shayad mujhe sach me geet se pyar hogaya hai....

Geet: huh?...kuch kaha aapne?

Maan: upp nahin...geet chalo chalte he meeting he....

Geet: par....

maan: chalo geet....

he pulls geet and they both sit in the car and leave for the meeting...they reach d place where they have a meeting .....geet and maan are waiting for the clients to come.....

Geet: sir ..sir...

Maan: kya hua geet?

Geet: woh aaj shaam ko hum kya karrahe he?

Maan: matlab?....rest...aur kya?

Geet: rest?....haan haan hum itni door se rest lene hi toh aaye he

Maan: toh kya tumhe site seeing karna hai?.....

Geet: haan!

Maan: woh bhi shaam ko..jab kuch dikhega nahin...

Geet: arey sir....!....toh phir kal subhe?...waise bhi kal koi kaam nahin he..hum Babaji ke darbar me jayenge....Golden Temple...?

Maan: haan geet chalenge............!!!

geet and maan are waiting wen finally the clients cum....the clients think that geet is maan's wife....as they have never seen geet.and also seeing their close interaction..and they look perfect too...!!!

Client: hello...mr.khurana.....hello mrs.khurana...

Geet and maan: mrs.khurana?........

Geet: kaun mrs.khurana?........

Client: aap aur kaun?

Geet: main?....hello...main....maan sir suniye!..(murmurs into maan's ears)...yeh gadha sarphira aadmi kya kehraha he?.mrs.khurana kyun..?

Maan:(murmurs too) geet tameez se baat karo ...client he humare...aur mujhe nahin pata hai ki woh aisa kyun kehraha he?

Geet: haan haan...aapko bara dard mehsus horaha he iske liye....agar client nahin hota na toh iski main aisi chutney banati na ki

Maan: nahin geet..plz..aisa mat karna...ruko main abhi confusion door karta hoon...

dekhiye... Mr. Singh....aisi koi baat nahin he.....hum

Client: kamaal he Mr. Khurana aapne shaadi karli aur bataya nahin!

Geet: shaadi aur yeh.....??...waise kiske saath?

Client: aapki aur inki?

Geet and maan look at each odr surprised.........maan and geet shout: SHAADI?

Maan: nahin Mr. Singh...humari shaadi vaadi nahin hui he.....

Client: toh hone wali he?....ek hi baat hai

Geet: yeh ab tak humein shaadi shuda samjhraha tha....hey Bhagwan...!

Geet: dekhiye humari koi shaadi vaadi nahin hui he aur nahi hone wali he...aur nahi karne ka koi iraada he..main inki company ki chief architect hoon...aur unki personal assisitant bhi!

Maan: haan,,,,aur kuch nahin...

Client: oh im extremely sorry......

Maan: meeting shuru karein!

they start d meeting and geet's presentation impresses everyone including maan.......the deal is signed........their work is done..............

geet and maan leave for the hotel.....on the way geet suddenly in the car decides to stop the car midway and persuades maan to take a walk together..............

Maan agrees...nearby..on a lake side they go and walk....miles............!

walking and walking maan and geet share their wishes... they both share this convo while sitting down beside the lake......

Geet: achcha sir...aapki sabse bari wish kaunsi he...ek aisa sapna jo aap poora karna chahte he?

Maan: ki mujhe woh khushi mile...jo mujhe kabhi nahin mili?

Geet: kaunsi khushi?...

Maan: hai ek...waqt aane par bataunga

Geet: sir abhi bataiyye na....plz..........baad me waqt kahan milta hai..

Maan: miljaega.......achcha tumhari wish batao!

Geet: meri?...waise toh bohot saari he...lekin ek bohot gehri wish he......har ladki ka sapna dulhan banne ka.............laal jore me...haatho me gehri mehendi...ungli me heere ki anguthi....maathe par sajaya hua mangtika....gale me haar...haathon me choora....pairo mein payal...sab kuch.........!!!..dulhan banna...aur ghori pe savaar mera dulha aayega............jo mujhe aapni zindagi banakar mujhe lejaega............bohot pyar karega............!!!

Geet has tears out of her eyes wich maan gets to see and realises how important these emotions are too geet....maan removes geet's tears wich makes gete realise that they do share a strong bond..........a very strong bond...a force wich is drawing them together.........!!!

Maan: aisa zaroor hoga geet...insaan jo sachche dil se chahta he usse wahi milta hai............aur tumhara dil sachcha hai geet..........

Geet: par sir itna pyar karnewala aajkal milta kahan he?

Maan: milega geet...woh bhi milega tumhe............

Geet: really sir?

Maan: hmmm....

Geet smiles.. .......they see the setting sunset together and enjoy the moment.........they sit in the car and while driving maan realises geet has fallen asleep.........they reach the hotel...and maan picks up geet on his arms who holds maan tightly as if never wanting to leave him...........maan makes geet sleep in her room...............maan looks at geet giving her a loving glance and goes away from dere weh hears geet saying in her sleep...

Geet: maan sir aap bohot achche he..........bohot achche insaan he aap.....!!!

maan smiles at dis and wiches geet a good night and goes to his room ..he too aftr sum tym goes off too sleep as the night sets in...geet dsnt have dinner as she was tires and fell asleep...maan dint not wnt to disturb her sleep by asking or dinner as she ws sleeping peacefully.........maan too without having dinner goes off to sleep as geet dint have dinner......they both go to sleep waiting for the next mrng for their outing.........!!!!!

nice update! Thanks for sharing!
Loved it!

Awe how sweet maan wants to confirm if he has fallen in love and is going to use geets 5 steps principal and awe geet dream to be a dulhan was really emotional anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

lovely update.. thannks for pm.. was waiting for an update..

Awesome...Awesome....Awesome........loved it to the core...!!!

amazing update.. luved it.. continue soon