Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1.. - Page 64

Awesome..... But when geet gonna realize her love 4r him.

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Part 45....

Its morning....geet is fast asleep and maan too is sleeping....the train suddenly gives a jerk and then maan wakes up.....d sunlight faintly is falling on geet's face .....maan wakes up and sees dat geet is sleeping like a princess on his shoulders.......some strands of geet's hair are falling on her face ....maan notices dat ...he slowly , very lovingly removes geet;s hair......geet keeps on holding to maan and is sleeping comfortably but the sunlight which is falling faintly on geet's face is disturbing her...maan slowly raises his odr hand and covers up the light falling on her face.......geet feels highly comfortable....maan tries get up but is unable to as geet is holding on to him.....so decides to slowly get up widout disturbing her and makes her sleep on the pillow.....comfortably he makes her sleep and puts his hand thru her head.....maan removes his hand from geet's and then raises up to go away but suddenly geet holds his hand from behind ....she says in her sleep...

Geet: sir.......plz...mujhe chodkar mat jaiyye....agar aap chale gaye toh main kiske saath ladai karungi....aap...

Geet dsnt complete d sentence..maan feels awkward in what geet said and then smiles...he moves close to geet's face and says..

Maan: main kahin nahin jaunga geet...main yehi pe hoon..............!

Maan goes to freshen up for the mrng and comes bk soon....comes bk and sees to his surprise dat geet is nt dere...he gets tensed......he looks everywhere fr geet wen suddenly he sees dat geet is standing next to d door...feeling d fresh breeze............she is standing leaning to the door and removing her hair....maan runs to her and says....

Maan: uff ho geet...tum yahan pe ho?...mujhe laga ki!........geet tum har baar itne jhatke kyun deti ho...kahan chali jaati ho tum?

Geet: arey aapko kya laga ...main train se utarkar bhaggayi?

Maan: uff ho geet...mera matlab aisa nahin tha....!

Geet: achcha achcha theek he.....btw sir gud mrng...!

Maan: gud mrng geet..(smiles)......

Geet: kal raat ko achchi neend aayi na?

Maan: hmmm.....waqai me ...sach me....zindagi ki sabse achchi neend aayi........!

(looks at geet)....

Geet: arey waah sir...!...aap toh sach me achchi baatein karrahe he!...woh bhi subha subha...!

Maan: toh tumhe kya lagta hai main achchi baatein nahin karsakta kya?

Geet: nahin nahin aap achchi baaten karsakte he!...aisi baat nahin he...!

Maan: haan...ofcourse main achchi baatein karsakta hoon....jaise subha uthke wish karna........smile karna...aur wagera wagera.....

Geet laughs...

Maan: tum hass kyun rahi ho?

Geet: sir....aap aur smile?....subha uthke smile?

Maan:kyun?...abhi toh smile kiya tha maine...!

Geet: haan lekin woh toh bohot kum...........

Maan: arey toh kya main pagalon ki tarah subha subha hasna shuru kardoon kya?

Geet: haan...kyun nahin....zaroor...........hasna ar smile karna sehet ke liye bohot achcha hai..............!!!...one smile a day keeps the doctor away........try karke dekhiyega.....zindagi badal jaegi....!

Maan: achcha?....sach me?...

Geet: hmmm....geet ka advice he...kabhi bekaar nahin jaata...!

Maan: achcha theek he baba geeteshwar...aapka advice sar aakhon par...!....

Geet laughs....and maan looks at her lovingly................

Maan: ab geet agar tumhara subhe ka pravachan khatm hogaya ho toh jao jaake fresh hojao..........hum apni manzil tak bas pohochne hi wale..(while saying dis he looks at geet wid love in his eyes)....

Geet: achcha....yeh toh bohot achchi baat he!.....abhi gayi aur abhi aayi!

geet goes and freshens up and cums bk....maan and geet have their breakfast........both change and get ready to reach Amritsar .......aftr breakfast geet cums p wid anodr plan to make their final destination exciting ...

Geet: sir....sir....

Maan is sitting quietly lookin outside d window....

Maan: kya hua geet?

Geet: chahliye na sir...kuch karte he?

Maan: ab kya karna he tumko?...aur kya karna he tumko?..............tumhare kuch karne ka matlab kya he geet?

Geet: uff ho sir...chaliye na kuch masti karte he na....ab toh thodi der me bas pohochne wale he....kehte he ki agar manzil ko apne paas jaldi bulao toh manzil jaldi aajati he!....

Maan: geet...yeh tumhe masti karne ki jagah lagti he?

Geet: haan kyun nahin....safar me hi toh sab masti-mazak karte he.....aur waise bhi aapne toh kabhi kiya nahin hoga....kyunki aap toh boring ke boring hi rahenge........!

Maan: main boring hoon?.....

Geet: aur nahin toh kya?....aapko masti ka matlab bhi pata he?...

Maan: toh ekbaar try karke dekhlo!

Geet: toh theek he.......ab aap dekhiye ki geet kya karti he!

Maan: yeh geet bhi na!

Geet stands near d door and starts singing.....to njoy their final lap of their journey ...to celebrate their friendship....

Ruki Ruki Thi Zindagi
Jhat Se CHal Padi
Hui Khushi Se Dosti
Mazaa Le Le Le Har Ghadi
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa Hey Hey ] Geet
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa Hey Hey
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa

Ruki Ruki Thi Zindagi
Jhat Se CHal Padi ] Maan
Hui Khushi Se Dosti
Mazaa Le Le Le Har Ghadi'

Kal Tak Na Koi Kahani Thi
Na Koi Raja Tha, Na Rani Thi ] Geet

Hmm, Kal Tak Na Koi Kahani Thi
Na Koi Raja Tha, Na Rani Thi ] Maan

Ye Aaj Kya Ho Gaya
Ek Pal Mein Sabh Kuch Mil Gaya ] Geet
Saamne Manzil Khadi

Ruki Ruki Thi Zindagi
Jhat Se CHal Padi
Hui Khushi Se Dosti ] Maan
Mazaa Le Le Le Har Ghadi
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa Hey Hey
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa Hey Hey
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa'

Jaado Yahan Aisa Ho Jaaye
Ye Pal Yahin Aaj Ruk Jaye ] Maan

Jaado Yahan Aisa Ho Jaaye
Ye Pal Yahin Aaj Ruk Jaye ] Geet

Tu Jo Kahey Main Sunoon
Main Jo Kahoon Tu Suney ] Maan
Lad Jayee Baaton Ki Ladee

Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa Hey Hey
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa Hey Hey ] Geet
Ee Ii Ee Aa Aa Aa Aa

Ruki Ruki Thi Zindagi ] Maan

Jhat Se Chal Padi ] Geet
Hui Khushi Se Dosti ] Maan

Mazaa Le Le Har Ghadi' ] Maan

Geet and maan njoy their time out and they feel extremely happy.......they laugh their hearts out....

Geet: wow sir...aapne toh kamaal kardiya!

Maan: dekha...main sab kuch karsakta hoon...!...

Geet: dhanye he aap!

Maan: ab chalo....thodi der me hum pohoch jayenge....!

Geet and maan pack up their things and geet and maan finally reach their destination...AMRITSAR.......geet wraps her warm clothes arnd her and maan too wears his warm clothes..!

Geet: dekhiye sir...agaye humare Babaji ke sheher me...!

Maan: hmmm

Geet: dekhiye isse kehte asli thand.....!....huh...hum jamjayenge....!

Geet and maan arrive and step on the platform..........geet is njoying d cold while maan looks arnd searching for sum1.......!

suddenly a man cums and lifts geet's bags and maan's..........

Geet gets furious thnkng dat he is a thief....poor man!!!

Geet: oye.....kaun he tu?....yeh kya karraha he tu haan?

Man: samaan utharaha hoon...!

Geet: ahahhaa...aur tujhe kya lagta he main tujhe uthane dungi...din dahare chori karte hue sharam nahin aati tujhe huh...?.....

Man: madam chori?....main chor nahin hoon...

Geet: achcha....har chor yehi kehta hai ...ki woh chor nahin he.....tujhe pata bhi he tune kiska samaan uthaya he.....maan singh khurana aur geet bakshi ka...waise inka samaan toh phir bhi jaane do.....tune mera samaan choone ki himmat kaise ki......geet bakshi ka!

Maan: geet...dekho...meri baat suno...yeh...

Geet: maan sir...aap isse door rahiye...aise logo ko kaise seedha karte he mujhe pata hai......chori kana toh kya...chori ki spelling bhuljayenge...!

Maan: geet yeh chori nahin...

Geet: kyun?....aapko itni kyun chinta horahi he iski....aapka rishtedaar he kya?...dekhiye sir aap isse door rahiye...mujhe handle karne dijiye...

Maan: aaj maragya yeh....geet iska fruit salad banadegi....!

Geet:mera samaan chori karega....woh bhi mere saamne.....sharam haya kya bechkar aaya he...aaj na tujhe asli mazaa chakhati hoon....

Geet takes out her jooti and starts beating up the man......maan tries ti stop her but only in vain as geet is geet...........maan suddenly stops her saying...

Maan: geet...yeh kya karrahi ho tum?...yeh koi chor nahin he...yeh mere guest house ka care-taker he...chotu..aur tum ho ki isse pite jarahi ho..pehle poori baat toh sunliya karo..!

Geet is surprised...!

Geet: care taker...?...toh pehle batana chahiye tha na ki aapka care taker lene aayega humein....khamaka pitva diya isse...!

chotu gets up in pain.....maan tells him to go bk and take sum rest....d ppl arnd help him...

Maan: geet tum kisiko bolne ka mauka dogi toh na...khamakha bina kuch soche samjhe logo ko peetne lagti ho tum...ab bechare ko aur kitni chot lagsakti thi...

Geet laughs...

Maan: ab hass kyun rahi ho tum?

Geet: sir aise situations me na bari hasi aati he mujhe...

Maan: yah phir kisiko peetke...ab chalo...humein guest house pohochna he...

geet and maan keep their luggage and set off for their guest house......

they reach and its a beautiful wooden villa wid an extraordinary lawn.....flowers......butterflies and filled wid tress...geet feels ecstatic to see it...!

geet asks maan: yeh aapka guest house he sir?

Maan: haan....

Geet: yahan baaki log rehne nahin aate he kya?

Maan: nahin...

Geet: yaani yeh poora ghar humara he?

Maan: haan...!

Geet: wow sir...!....u r d best...mujhe na aise ghar bare pasand he!

Geet is extremely happy which makes maan happy too!

Maan: achcha geet ab chalo..andar chalo...

maan shows geet her room...and maan tells her dat if she has any problem den to tell him as there r many ppl out dere to help ....

geet and maan settle in their room.......now its time for maan to tell geet abt d compensation wich geet has to pay for loosing d game in d train........!

its evening and geet is outside njoyin d lawn and its beauty....maan seeks dis opportunity to go inside geet's room and keep her gift wich is what she is required to do....maan goes in and keeps d gift inside...geet cums bk to her room....she slowly falls on the bed and sees a big packet of gift kept aside her...she thinks what it cud be!

she opens it and sees a beautiful red saree inside wid black motifs worked arnd d border...geet cnt understand as to who kept dis and why.....!

Geet: yeh saree?...yeh yahan pe kisne rakkhi?.

she sees a letter attached to it..which reads....

Geet,

aaj maine guest house me ek choti si party rakkhi he....jisme kaafi log aayenge...its a bonfire party.....aur aaj tumhe party me yeh red saree pehenkar aana hoga...aur haan tum mana nahin karsakti kyunki yaad he maine train me game jeeta tha.....yeh ussi game ka compensation he...haarne ka compensation....jeetne wale ko uska prize nahin dogi tum?...theek aath baje taiyyar hoke neeche aajana........i'll be waiting geet..........main bhi toh dekhoon ki akhir geet bakshi me dum kitna hai..

Maan Sir...

Geet dsnt understand as to why did maan did this........

Geet: yeh saree aur woh bhi maan sir ne mere liye?.....haarne ka compensation yeh?.......mujhe laga tha ki woh mujhse meri har harkat ka badla lenge kisi aur tarike se..ab yeh kaunsa tarike he....!..unhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe saree pehenni nahin aati?..ofcourse geet tujhe sab kuch aata hai..........par saree...iska kya matlab hosakta hai......yeh maan sir bhi na......waise bhi saree hi toh pehenni he...chal geet..jaldi se taiyyar hoja...

Maan in his room: geet aaj tumhe dekhkar mujhe mere saare sawaalon ke jawab miljayenge....jo kashmakash mere dil me he woh shayad aaj solve ho hi jaegi...mujhse aur intezaar nahin hota geet....kyunki shayad aaj ki shaam meri zindagi badal de...

Geet goes to get ready and maan awaits desperately for the evening....!!!!!

arey geet kabhi toh kisi ka sun liya karo..............bechara chotu............well geet in saree.........par maan kya soch raha hain............ussey kya jawab milne wali hain.....................

HMMMM..........

that was really nice update cant wait for the next one plz cont soon

Lovely update...hmm suspense is nice.....