Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1.. - Page 66

Originally posted by: kellz

wht does the saree look like/

O GOD YE GEET KAB KYA KAR DE USE KHUD KO BHI NAHI PATA....................... LOVED THE UPDATE..... WAITING FOR BONEFIRE. WITH RED SAREE. WITH MAAN EMOTIONS TO COME OUT..................... 😉AB HUM SEY BHI OR INTZAAR NAHI HOTA.................

Part 46....

Geet is getting ready while maan is getting ready....dere is a phone call on geet's phone wich is of dm's....geet informs her dat she has safely reached and is ok.......she keeps d phone and goes on to get ready...geet looks like a princess....geet wears a saree , a red saree decorated wid black stone motifs arnd d border, wich has been gven by maan...shewears it wid a red sleeveless blouse.......she wears lil black earrings...a watch on the right hand.....high black stilletoes.....geet has straightened her hair and put her hair on one side........she is just looking mesmerising,.....

Maan too on the odr hand dressed in a dashing black suit...looking handsome as ever.......maan cums out to the lawn....d lawn is decorated beautifully.... wid d fair in the centre...everythng is perfect but maan's eyes are searching for only geet, geet and geet....maan wants to just see geet........maan goes down to the klawn and is looking aftr d arrangements but his eyes r all set on the door thru which geet will cum.......maan is prepearing for the party, attending guests when suddenly he hears a walk....d cold winds are blowing....and maan slowly looks to the odr side......geet has finally arrived.....when maan looks to the other side, his life changes completely...his world experiences a new feeling altogether...for the first time he realises dat sumthng is between him and geet wich is mre than friendship...maan cudnt cntrl his feelings...he automatically becums romantically drawn towards geet.....geet who is looking no less than a fairy is walkng down d lawn and all eyes r set on geet....maan is slowly walking towards geet and geet is looking at maan too...walking down towards him...walking and walking they cum together and look face to face ...into each other's eyes.....geet looks at maan differently whereas maan cannot believe what he is seeing.......at thi time of night maan forgets himself...he totally metamorphosises into geet's maan tonight.......

during d eye lock maan and geet do not exchange words but talk in their minds...

Geet:dekha sir...uradiye na aapke hosh....!!!..lagrahi he geet bilkul pari...!

Maan:geet...aaj tumse nazrein hatane ko jee nahin karta.....geet...aaj yakeen hogaya humein koi dor banti he...koi khaas rishta hai humare beech me jo dosti se kayin barkar he lekin uss rishte ka naam kya hai yeh nahin pata...par mujhe yakeen hai ki iska naam jo bhi hai woh naam Rab ke barabar ka hoga....!

Geet clicks her fingers in front of maan...

Geet: maan sir....kya hua?....chauk gaye na?...

Maan: haan bilkul...

Geet: woh toh hona hi tha...itna asaan sa kuch karne ke liye kahenge toh yeh toh bayein haath ka khel hai...!

Maan: really geet tum kuch bhi karsakti ho....

Geet: ab main party enjoy karoon...?

Maan: haan jao...!

geet goes to enjoy...

Geet: eh chotu ...idhar aa sunn...

She is teasing chotu......and laughing...maan looks at her thruout....just cant take his eyes off her.....!!!

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya

Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya
Bheed mein logo ki woh hain wahan
Aur pyaar ki mele mein akela Kitna hoon mein yahan


Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri ore chale

Geet is enjoying ...maan looking at her....now its time to sit arnd d bonfire......geet sits down and maan sits on d opposite side of geet....so dat he can look at geet all d time.....amidst d warmth of the fire maan is looking at geet who is unaware dat maan is looking at geet......d song continues....

Shuru ho gai kahani meri

Mere dil ne baat na mani meri

Shuru ho gai kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na mani meri

Had se bhi aaghe yeh guzar hi gaya
Khud bhi pareshan hua
Aur mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri ore chale

d bonfire party begins.........all d people arnd cant decide what to play and pass their time out well and enjoy themselves.....geet , as usual, cums up wid another idea...

Geet: hum passing d pillow khelenge...ek pillow pass karenge aur jiske pass pillow stop hoga usse jo kuch karne ke liye kaha jaega usse wahi karna parega.....theek he?

all agree.....they start playing....d game is on....everyone is playing and one by one evryone is loosing finally leaving maan and geet at the winning end...either maan or geet will win...geet decides dat dis time she will win....she decides to trick maan and distract him in order to win.....maan decides not to get distracted...........he also wnts to win ....

Geet: haa haa sir..ab aaya na ooth pahad ke neeche....ipichli baar haargayi thi lekin iss baar toh main hi jeetungi...iss baar aapko main haarake hi rahungi...geet tujhe iss baar jeetna hi hoga varna agar tu iss baar haargayi toh yeh tujhe kalapani bhejdenge...

Maan goes and sits beside geet facing her....he says...

Maan: geet...main toh hamesha chahta hoon ki tum jeeto lekin kya karoon tumse jeetne ki aadat hogayi he....iss baar bhi main hi jeetunga....bas maan focus on d game...geet se bilkul bhi distract mat hona...mujhe pata hai yeh itni asaani se tujhe nahin chodegi....kuch na kuch toh yeh zaroor karegi.... dnt get distracted...

They start playing.....geet and maan keep on passing d pillow...geet tries her level best to keep maan distracted from the game but he dsnt get distracted....geet gets irritated...

Geet: yeh maan sir na chattan se bane he kya...distract hi nahin hote.....kitna koshish karti hoon kuch ho hi nahin raha hai...kuch bhi kar geet inko aaj tujhe haraan hi hoga...c'mon geet....idea soch geet...soch...kisi film se leni paregi....haan milgaya...hum aapke hain kaun me bhi toh aisa hi kuch hua tha....bas milgaya idea...balle balle...ab tera kya hoga maan sir...?

Maan: tum laakh koshish karlo geet aaj tumhara koi bhi paitra mujhpar kaam nahin karnewala...keep trying geet...

they continue playing wen suddenly geet sees d pillow in maan hands....she uses d opportunity and winks at maan wid odrs not noticing it....d music stops and d pillow remains in maan's hands.....maan is startled as he looses and geet win finally...geet is so haapy dat she gets up does a bhangra jig and rejoices her win...

Geet: yeah...main jeetgayi..main jeetgayi...maan sir haargaye...!!!

Maan gets up and is bewildered...he tries to figure out wat had actually hapnd a while agoa nd how did geet win wen he ws on d verge to win...he recalls and alleges geet of cheating...

Maan: geet...tum nahin jeeti .....tumne cheating ki....tum cheating karke jeeti ho...

Geet: kya?...main aur cheating?...maine koi cheating veating nahin ki...smajhe aap?

Maan: of course tumne ki hai...jhooth mat bolo geet..

Geet: kya?..jhooth?....aap sab dekhiye meri shakal...main itni achchi ladki main kabhi cheating karsakti hoon kya?....aur jhooth?...jhooth se toh mera door door ka koi rishta nahin he....aur yeh mujhpar cheating ka ilzaam lagarahe he...

Mana: ahahahaha....bhoot bana Bhagwan....sharam nahin aati geet cheating karte hue....tmaaners seekhi nahin he tumne toh Bhagwan se kuch udhaar leke aajati...aur tum toh aise baatein karrahi ho jaisi tum kabhi cheating nahin karti....!

Geet: achcha...manaa ki maine cheating ki...toh kiya kya maine...boliye...kya kiya hai maine...?...main bhi toh sunoon....

Maan:upp...tumne....tumne...

Geet: tumne..kya?...aage bhi to boliye...?

Maan: tumne woh...

Geet:aarey jaldi se aagey bhi toh boliye varna subha hojaegi...

Maan sir..kardiya na aapko clean bowled...!!!

Geet: dekha na inke paas koi jawaab nahin he....iska matlab yeh kahaniyan banarahe the kyunki yeh haargaye he...isilye..kyunki yeh hamesha jeetna chahte he....!!!...uss din bhi train me yeh jeete toh tab koi cheating nahin aur ab jab main jeeti hoon toh maine cheating ki....huh...gabbar singh kahin ke...

geet and maan confront face to face and get on wid their usual fight.......

Maan: kya kaha tumne?...

Geet: behre he kya aap?...theek se sunayi nahin deta kya?

Maan: geet dekho..tumne jo kiya hai woh chup chaap admit karo...

Geet: achcha...aapko main kya bevaquf lagti hoon.....aap bhi na sir...!

Maan: geet dis is not fair...main tumhe na...

Geet:all is fair in love and war mr.khurana aur kya karenge aap..haan... kya naukri se nikaldenge...nikal lijiye....mujhe koi faraq nahin parta ...par aapko parega....ek employee kum matlab aapke aadhe kaam kaun karega....?

Maan: tumhe toh main dekhlunga...

Geet: meri bhi toh wahi tragedy he ki mujhe bhi aapko roz dekhna parta he...!!!

Maan: geet...u...!

Geet: c'mon maan sir...aap haargaye he..usse accept karlijiye.....have some sprtsman spirit sir...yehi kaha tha aapne mujhse train me?..

chaliye ab yeh sab chodiye...maan sir haar maante he....aur ab hum unse kuch karne ke liye kahenge...

Maan: margaya maan....ab geet zaroor koi pagalwali harkat karne ke liye kahegi...

evryone suggest ideas but geet cums up wid an idea...

Geet: maan sir hum sabke saamne gaayenge aur dance karenge woh bhi yahan ..kisi bhi ladki ke saath......mujhe chorke...

Maan: kwhat ?...kisi ke bhi saath?...what do u mean geet?...main aisa kaise karsakta hoon....never....

Geet: kyun..aap toh the maan singh khurana hai na...aap toh kuch bhi karsakte he na...

Maan: ok geet.....

dance aur gaana ek saath...mere saare clients bhagjayenge...!..yeh geet bhi na...!

just abt when maan is abt to start it starts raining heavily.....everyone run into their rooms....d party spoils but not for maan....geet is abt to run inside when geet is stopped...maan stops her holding her from d pallu of her saree...they r all wet.........geet , taken aback, turns from nehind, looking at maan...maan pulls her from d pallu of her saree....wraps it arnd her and whispers in her ears romantically....

Maan: kya hua geet?...mujhe apna punishment poori karne nahin dogi ?...tumhe chahiye tha na ki main gaana gaoon aur dance karoon....toh tum dekhna nahin chahogi...

Geet: sir...aapko kuch karne ki zaroorat nahin he....please sir bahaar bohot thand he upar se baarish...andar chalte he sir...

Maan: no geet...maan singh khurana kuch bhi karskata hai geet...

Geet: par sir...

Maan: ssshhh...quiet geet....kuch mat bolo...bas dekho....!

Maan starts singing, obviously in tune and wid a superb voice....dances wid geet..which was not normal dancing..sumthng different from what he has done before...he has never danced wid geet like dos wid geet before....so intimate and so close in proximity....geet also feels sumthng very special within but cnt figure out as to what has happened to maan....

maan sings........they dance as if they r alone in d world and time is endless....in the rain...getting wet together....

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun


Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu
Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane
Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla....
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota.....
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane
Sine Main De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha????
Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera

Teri Yaado Main Rahoo
Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi
Teri Aankho Main Milu

Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo
Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun

after d dance, maan draws geet closer......geet looks into maan's eyes.........they r too close........they forget all their inhibitions and are lost into each other....they close their eyes....when suddenly geet opens her eyes and realises what is he doing.........she leaves and runs from dere...turning back and looking back at maan........maan is happy...extremely as he finally finds answers to his questions........he realises d special feeling in him......maan opens his arms wide.........looks up to the sky...closes his eyes..falls on the ground..declares that he got his answers....when he closes his eyes , he can only see geet , geet and geet....

he says

Maan: mujhe tumne iss pal mein mere saare sawaalon ke jawab dediye geet.........geet main tumse PYAR KARNE LAGA HOON....HAAN GEET..I THINK I 'M FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOU........!!!

Geet:(aftr running and reaching her room)....shuts d door..and leans on d door...breathing heavily...all wet....

Geet: yeh kya tha?...abhi kya hua mere aur maan sir ke beech me...oehli baar maine yeh mehsus kiya ki maan sir mere dost se kuch zyada..nahin nahin......par kuch toh tha iss pal me ....pata nahin kya......

Geet changes and cums....and is drying her hair with the towel.......sits down wid knees folded thinking only about maan...on d odr hand...maan is lyin on d ground of the lawn..getting wet...enjoyin and feeling his new feelings towrds geet............!!!!!

THANKS FOR FAST UPDATING LOVELY.......... ONCE AGAIN GOOD JOB