Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1.. - Page 55

Created

Last reply

Replies

900

Views

412.7k

Users

158

Likes

3.4k

Frequent Posters

swthrtdevisha thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 2 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago

Part 40...The Date Sequence❤️


Maan and geet are sitting by the pool side '.they both are sitting and looking at the moon and talking wid deir hearts open'.

Geet: sir'aapne kabhi chand ko gaur se dekha he?

Maan: shehero me aasman theek se dikhayi nahin deta'.chand ko gaur se dekhne ka waqt kiske paas he?

Geet: yehi toh problem he na'.aajkal log aapne kaam me itne busy hojate he ki aasman me theek se dekh nahin sakte'sir pata he'meri mummy ji kaha karti thi ki chand ke paas humare har problem ka solution hota hai'

Maan: kya kehrahi ho tum?...kasie milta hai solution?...agar aisa hota toh sabko sabke problems ka solution miljata'!

Geet: kaise milega solution agar aap chand ko theek se dekhkar apni problem nahin batayenge toh'pata hai'woh sab janta hai'humare saare problems ka solution ka he uske paas'pata hai kyun?

Maan: kyun??

Geet: kyunki woh Babaji ke itne kareeb jo he'.hum unhe apni problems batate he aur woh unke saath communicate karte he 'bas humari problem solve hojate he kyunki kabhi kabhi Babaji busy hote he'.

Maan laughs'

Maan: yeh kya kehrahi ho geet'aisa hota hai kya?...matlab agar Bhagwan se baat karni ho toh aise hi karsakte he'chand kya Bhagwan ke mantri he?

Geet: arey main sach kehrahi hoon'kabhi try karke dekhiyega'aisa sach me hota hai..aap yakeen nahin karna chahte toh mat kijiye lekin yaad rakhiyega ki ekdin yehi problem aapko aapke saare problem ka solutions dega'dekhlijiyega kaam hota he ki nahin'..

Maan: achcha achcha theek he'kabhi zaroorat pari toh zaroor try karunga'waise geet poochna toh nahin chahiye lekin phir bhi poochraha hoon'.kya poochoon?

Geet: haan sir poochiye na'

Maan: tumne kaha tha ki tum bhatinda se bhagkaar aayi thi kyunki tumhare gharwale tumhari zabardasti shaadi karvana chahte the'..lekin tumhare ghar me aisa koi nahin tha dai ma ke alawa jisne tumhe support kiya ho yah phir jiski yaad tumhe sabse zyada aati he'?

Geet stares at maan and slight tears aapears in her eyes as she remembers sum1 frm it'.maan gets slightly moved as to wat he asked dat made her so upset..

Maan: sorry geet'mujhe yeh poochna nahin chahiye tha'im really sorry'!...

Geet: nahin sir aap kyun sorry kehrahe he'.bas kisiki yaad aagayi'!

Maan: kiski?

Geet: meri biji ki'biji'meri dadi'!

Maan: achcha'!

Geet: sir pata hai dai ma ke alawa meri biji ne meri khub madat ki mujhe bachane ke liye'.woh mujhse mere parivaar me sabse zyada pyar karti he'mujhe unki bohot yaad aati he'par dekhiye na meri majboori'main vapas bhi nahin jasakti'. jaungi toh vapas lautkar nahin aapaungi'!

Maan: geet..tumne ek din kaha tha na ki tumhe kisiko yaad karne ki zaroorat nahin parti..kyunki jinhe tum pyar karti ho woh tumhare dil me base he?...toh jab bhi unki yaad aayegi toh bas apne dil pe haath rakhlena unki yaad aajayegi'.aisa lagega ki woh tumhare paas he'!

Geet looks at him as she was moved by wat he said'.she looks at him...nd says'

Geet: sir'aap waqai me bohot badal gaye he'yakeen nahin aata ki aap wahi maan sir he jinke saath maine shurvaat se ladai ki thi..!...

Maan: yakeen toh mujhe bhi nahin hota he geet(looking at her)'.ki hum kabhi iss tarah bethkar baatein karrahe honge'!aur waise bhi badal na toh mujhe tha hi'aftr all geet bakshi ne jo training di he'!

Geet and maan share a laugh'.maan looks at her innocent laugh and smiles..

Maan: achcha geet ek baat batao ki kya tumhe sach me lagta he ki tumhari ddlj jaisi love story hogi'?

Geet: haan bilkul'

Maan: aisa sach me hosakta hai'?

Geet: arey maine aapko kaha na ki haan aisa hosakta hai'mera manna hai ki agar aap dil se kuch chaho toh wahi aapke saath sach me hota hai..mera toh bachpan se khwab he ki mujhse jo pyar karega woh bilkul raj jaisa hoga'.meri love story ekdum ddlj jaisi hi hogi'mere liye koi aisa ladka hoga jo mujhe sabke saamne se uthakar mujhe ek aise duniya me lejaaye jahan sirf pyar ho''.

Maan listens to dis and smiles'

Geet: sapno ke duniya me jaungi me'..aisa ladka chahiye mujhe'..

Maan: geet'.tumhare jaisi ladki maine aajkal nahin dekhi''.aajkal ladkiyan kitni practical hogayi he'pyar ke bare me sochne ki kisko fursat he lekin tum geet apni hi duniya me rehti ho'isiliye toh geet tum itni special ho'!

Geet :sir'aapko lagraha hoga ki yeh geet bilkul pagal hogayi he'kaise baatein karrahi he ekkiswi sadi ki ladki hokar..

Maan: nahin geet'yeh toh tumhari mann ki baat thi'aur apni mann ki baat kabhi apne mann me nahin chupana chahiye'kyunki humara mann bohot hi chota hota hai..itni saari baatein apne andar nahin rakhpata hai isilye mann ki baat kehdene me hi samajhdari hoti he'

Geet: baba re sir'aap toh philosophy ke teacher hogaye'.mere saath rehte rehte aap bohot hi samjhdari ki baatein karne lage he'hmmm!

Maan: tuh kya tumhare kehne ka matlab yeh he ki pehle main samjhdar nahin tha?

Geet: ab agar aap apne muh se khud kehrahe he ki aap nahin the toh main kya kehsakti hoon'maine toh yeh nahin kaha ki aap pehle samjhdar nahin the'.maine toh yeh kaha ki aap samjhdar hogaye he'

Geet laughs'.maan too smiles widely..

Geet: par ek problem he sir'

Maan: kya?

Geet: aap apni kahi hui baton par yakeen nahin karte..unko mante nahin'

Maan: kaunsi baat?

Geet: wahi mann wali baat?...ki mann me kuch nahin chupana chahiye'sab kuch kehdena chahiye'

Maan gets a lil perplexed at wat geet said..

Maan: kya kehdena chahiye geet?...

Geet: aapke bare mein sir'

Maan: mere bare me?...geet'kaisi baatein karrahi ho tum'sab kuch toh janti ho tum mere bare me aur janne ki kya zarorat he'aur waise bhi mere bare me aur janne ki koi zaroorat nahin he kyunki janne ke liye aur kuch baki nahin he'

Geet: achcha'.aapko pata hai'aap jhooth bilkul nahin kehsakte'aur khaas karke mujhe'mujhe jhooth pakarna yunhi aajata hai'.aur aapko nahin lagta he ki aapko apne dost se kuch nahin chupana chahiye aur waise bhi main aapke bare me kuch nahin janti'aapke naam aur kaam ke alawa kuch nahin'itna toh haq banta he na ek dost ka ki main aapke bare me kuch jaanoon..

Maan gets up and turns facing his back to geet and slight tears appear in his eyes'.a strange kind of anger appear on his face'

Maan: kaise baatein karrhai ho geet'jhooth aur main'jis maan singh khurana ko khud jhooth se nafrat he woh tumse jhooth bolega'aur main tumse kuch nahin chuparaha hoon geet'au raise koi baat nahin he jo tumhe janni chahiye '.samjhi tum?

Geet: achcha'geet bakshi se jhooth?...maine hamesha yeh notice kiya hai ki jab bhi main aapko aapke parivaar ya pichli baton ke b aar eme poochti hoon toh aap mukar jaate he ya phir taal dete he..poochti hoon toh aap yeh bhi jawab dete he ki aapka kpi parivaar nahin he'aisa kaise hosakta hai ki ek insaan ka koi parivaar na ho'

Listening to dat maan all the more gets angry'he cant cntrl himself and his feelings'

Geet goes on to say'

Geet: maine apne bare me sab kuch bata diya ..aap kyun nahin kehsakte'aur aisa kaise hosakta he ki aapke koi nahin he duniya me'koi toh hoga na'ma, baap yah phir behen bhai'?..aisa toh nahin hosakta he ki aap bin ma-baap ke paida hogaye''aapka koi toh hoga na sir'bataiyye na sir'aapki maa hogi'papa honge..

Maan cnt cntrl nemre and bursts out at geet'

Maan: NAHIN KEHNA MUJHE APNE MAA KE BAARE ME AUR NAHI MERE PAPA KE BARE ME'NAFRAT HE MUJHE UNSE'SUNA TUMNE(holding geet's shoulders)'.NAFRAT'NAHIN KARNI MUJHE UNKE BARE ME BAAT'JAB BHI UNKE BARE SOCHTA BHI HOON TOH KHOON KHAUL UTHTA HE MERA''..SAMJHI TUM'

Geet gets petrified wen she looks into maan's eyes'she had never seen so much anger in his eyes before'..she hardly cud speak aftr hearing wat maan said,,,she speaks and fumbles'maan leaves her shoulder but looks into her eyes..geet tries to speak up'.

Geet: kkkya?...nafrat?...apne maa baap se nafrat'.aisa kkaise hosakta he?

Maan: haan nafrat'nafrat he mujhe unke naam se bhi aur zikr se bhi'nahin sehen karsakta me'samjhi?...

Maan tries to walk away'but geet stops him by cumin in his way and stops him'

Geet: rukiye'aap aise nahin jaasakte he mere sawalon ke jawab diye bager..aisa kya hua tha aapke saath ki aap apne maa-baap se hi nafrat karte he 'dosti ki he aapne'dost ka farz nibhaiyye'jab tak aap batayenge toh main aapka dard kaise batungi'abhi toh aapne kaha tha ki mann ki baat kehdene se halka hojata hai toh kahiye na sir'aisa kyun he aap apne apno se hi nafrat karte he?

Maan: please geet..plaese'mat pooch mujhse jaane do mujhe'mujhse nahin kaha jaega..kahunga toh purane zakhm taaze hojayenge'please unko mat khuredo..

Geet: sir'gum batne se kum hoa hai'ek baar batakar toh dekhiye'saare dukh khatam hojayenge'main promise karti hoon ki iske bare me main kabhi kisiko kuch nahin bataungi'please sir'mujhe janna hai'.please'!

Maan: theek he geet'.main bataunga'chalo mere saath'.!

The scene shifts to the pool side where they wre sitting and maan narrates his story'sitting wid geet'..

Maan: geet..main Mumbai pehli baar aaya hoon'.pehle kabhi aaya nahin tha'.main Mumbai isilye aaya tha taki main apne family problems se door rahoon'geet main Delhi me paida hua tha ..mere parivar me main, meri behen, meri maa aur mere papa the''..par unn jaise maa-baap ko maa-baap kehte hue sharam aati he..ek aise maa-baap jinhone mujhe aur meri behen ko pareshan karne ke liye koi kasar nahin chori'geet'main aur meri behen bohot chote the tab se hi humare maa-baap ke beech me har waqt choti choti baton ko lekar jhagda hota tha..kehne ko toh unhone love marriage kit hi lekin maine kabhi bhi unke beech me pyar jaisa kuch dekha hi nahin'isiliye geet pyar se main nafrat karta tha kyunki pyar ne hi mere parivaar ko bikharkar rakhdiya'.roz mere ghar me pagalon ki tarah ladaiyya hoti thi, jaanwaro ki tarah mar-peeth'thaggaya tha main..humein hamesha inn sab cheezon ka saamna karna parta tha'main aur meri behen kabhi bhi ek khushhaal parivaar dekhnahin paaye..lekin humein bara kiya humari dai jaan ne..jinhe humein pyar dena aur karna sikhaya'jinhone humein bara kiya'humein khud apne pairo par khade hona sikhaya'mujhe aur meri behen ko maa-baap se bhi saga pyar kiya'bohot pyar karti thi woh mujhse'main aur meri behen ..hum dono unhe hi apna sab kuch samajhte the'.apni duniya samjhte the'.lekin huari khushiyon ko kisiki nazar lagayi thi'ek daijaan hi toh thi jo humara parivaar tha lekin woh bhi humein zindagi bhar naseeb na hua..

Geet: kya hua tha sir?

Maan: soch kar hi mera khoon khaul uthta hai'kaash main hota wahan pe'.main apni boards ki taiyyari karraha tha'mere exams ke kuch din pehle daijaan ki beti humare saath rehne aayi thi'woh bhi padhne aayi thi'lekin mere maa ko yeh sa dekhkar jalan hoti thi'hum bohot bare khandan le log the 'humara delhi me ek bohot bari haveli he'.khandani rais the hum'.aur meri maa ne mere papa ke saath paiso ke liye hi jhoothe pyar ka natak kiya aur apne jaal me phasaya'.isilye paiso ka jhootha ghamand unme hamesha se tha''.isilye woh daijaan aur unki beti ko bhi kabhi ghar me bardasht nahin karsakti thi kyunki woh bare ghar se nahin the'lekin uss aurat ko kisiki khushiyaan kahan bardasht hoti thi'ek din main jab exam dene gaya that oh maine vapas aakar jo dekha woh dekhkar meri duniya wahin khatam hogayi'pata chala ki uss aurat jo badkismati se meri maa thi unhone daijaan ki beti bari khadi-khoti sunayi'aisi baatein use kahi jo ek ladki kabhi nahin sunsakti thi'unhone toh unke charitra par hi ungli uthadi'..yeh sab uss ladki ko bardasht na hua ur daijaan ki beti ne atmahatya karli..apni jaan leli''.daijaan ki duniya toh wahin pe tootgayi(maan has tears in his eyes)'.woh apne beti ke maut ke gum ko bardasht na karsaki aur unhone ne bhi apni jaan leli'''marchuki thi woh..jab tak main aur meri behen vapas aaye tab tak bohot der hochuki thi''mere sar se ek maa ka saaya chalagaya'.hum dono khaas karke main tootgaya'mere dill me ek aag si lagi thi..ji karraha tha ki wahin pe main apne daijaan ki maut ka badla lekar wahin pe saara kissa khatam kardoon lekin nahin'uss aurat ne humari zindagi ko narak banae ke liye koi kasar nahin chori'daijaan chalu gayi aur hum akele hogaye..maine apne choti behen ki zimmedari apne sar pe leli kyunki main sab kuch toh khochuka tha lekin main apni behen ko nahin khosakta tha..apni uss maa ke haathon pe kabhi nahin aur baap..woh toh apni hi duniya me rehta tha..unhe kisi bhi cheez se koi farq nahin parta tha''kuch din baad papa ki maut hogayi aur meri maa ne apna tamasha aur badha diya..unhone dusri shaadi karli'.aur humare sautele baap aur bhai lekar aaye''.jo meri maa ke dusre pati ke pehle bachche the'''meri maa ke zulm kuch kum nahin the ki unhone bhi humara jeena haraam kardiya'.wohlog toh humari khushi dekh hi nahin sakte the''.isilye unhone koi kasar nahin chori'humse humare naam par jaydaat cheenne ke liye unhone har mumkin koshish ki aur humein daulat chahiye bhi nahin thi'.lekin humpar roz zulm hote rahe geet aur hum use bardasht karte the'ekdin humari bardasht ki had paar hogayi'hum ghar chodkar bhaggaye aur sab kuch chod diya'

Geet's eyes get watery and she has tyears flowing down through her eyes'she cnt believe dat all dese thngs happened wid maan'

Geet: sir..phir kya hua?

Maan: daijaan ke b aad mera dil patthat ka hogaya..pehle bhi mujhe pyar par bharosa nahin tha aur dai jaan ke maut ke baad toh pyar naam se mujhe nafrat hogayi thi..apni behen ke saath mhum anaatho ki tarah ghumte rahe'ek athara saal ka ladka aur chauda saal ki ladki akele ky akarte'lekin humne haar nahin'humne bura se bura waqt dekha geet par haar nahin maane 'maine bohot mehnat ki aur aaj main jo hoon woh tumhe dikhai deraha he geet'.apni mehnat se main bohot bara aadmi bangaya hoon ki mujhe ab kisi bhi daulat ki bhi zaroorat nahin'main uss daulat ko bhi kharid sakta hoon jiske waje se meri zindagi ko barbaad kardiya tha uss aurat ne'itni daulat hogayi he ab ki mujhe kisi aur ki madat ki koi zaroorat nahin he

Geet: aur aapki behen?...woh kahan gayi?

Maan: use maine padhne ke liye London bhejdiya'.aur maine akele delhi me apne liye ek ghar kharid liya'apne haveli se bhi bara'ab mujhme itni taqat aagayi thi ab main woh zulm sehne wala maan nahin raha..ab mere paas itni taqat thi ki ab main kuch bhi karsakta tha..

Geet: aur aapke woh parivaar ke log'woh aapke paas vapas nahin aaye''..?

Maan: haan aaye'unhe toh mere paas aana tha'daulta ke bhooke jo the' woh aurat aur mere woh sautele bhai'.woh mera sautela baap..sab vapas aaye..jab unhe pata chala ki main itna bara aadmi bangaya toh woh mere ghar bhi dhundte dhundte pohochgaye'kyunki unhone mere papa ki saari daulat ko khtam kardiya'saari daulat khatam hone ek baad woh log aaye meri daulat par apna kabza jamane'lekin main apni mehnat ki daulat par kisiko haath bhi nahin lagane deta'woh vapas aaye aur unki nazar meri daulat par thi'maine unhe apne saath rakhne ka faisla karliya taki main unko unki kiye ki sazaa desakoon'maine unke saath wahi kiya jo unhone mere aur meri behen ke saath kiya tha'.maine apne daijaan ke maut ka badla liya'unpar itne zulm kiye ki woh apne naam tak ko bhi bhulgaye'.unhone mujhe maarne ki bhi koshish kit hi meri daulat ko haasil karne ke liye..par unhe maine range haathon pakar liya aur unhe jail ke salaakhon ke peeche pohochadiya'abhi bhi umr qaid ki sazaa katrahe he woh log'.maine aapna badla poora kiya geet aur daijaan ki aatma ko shanti dilaayi..unki aur unki beti ko'..uske baad me 2 saal ke liye Toronto chalagaya aur vapas aagaya'. isiliye geet main itna chupchap rehne wala aur kathod di rehta hoon taaki kisi me aur taqat na ho mujhe taqleif pohochane ki'isse pehle ki koi mujhe taqleif pohochaye main unhe sazaa dedeta hoon '.

Geet's eyes are filled wid tears'.aftr hearing dis painful story'.

Geet: aur aapki behen..Woh abhi kahan he?aur uska naam toh bataya hi nahin aapne?

Maan removes his tears and looks back at geet'.

Maan: woh aaj bhi London me he..apni baaki ki padhai poori karne ke liye'bas khatam hi hone wali he usli padhai..roz baat hoti he use..ya toh phone par yah phir e-mail se..aur uska naam Mihika he'Mihika singh khurana..!

Geet starts crying..and maan seeing dat gets worried'

Maan: arey geet tum kyun rorahi ho'.arey maine kaha tha na ki main yeh sab baatein'.

Geet: nahin sir'mujhe yakeen nahin hota ki aapka dard itna gehra he'aapka bachpan infact aapki poori zindagi itne dard me guzri he aur main na jaane aapko kya kya kehti thi ki aap patthar dil he aur'.yakeen nahin hota ki koi sagi maa apne hi bachchon ke saath aisa karsakti he

Maan: nahin geet..koi baat nahinwaise ek baat kahoon..yeh sab kehne ke baad mera dil bohot halka hogaya'

Maan removes her tears as well as his'he tries to cheer up the atmosphere again'

Maan: achcha theek he..yeh sab bhool jao aur yeh batao dosti ka farz nibhaya na?...

Geet: hmm..ek sachche aur achche dost ka..

Maan: uff ho yeh sab aansoon-vansoon chul jao'.geet bakshi ke chehre ko yeh sab suit nahin karta..tumhari chehre par sirf hasi aur khushi achchi lagti he..aansoon nahin'aur hum yahan kuch achche yaadgaar pal bitaane aaye the na..toh wahi karte he na..chalo aaj hum sabkuch bhulkar nachte he 'gaate he..masti karte he..bilkul geet style'!

Geet: theek he'chaliye'.

Maan and geet are walking towards the lawn and its suddenly starts raining heavily'

Geet: wow'baarish''aaj toh sach me bohot mazaa aayega'''..

Maan: haan geet 'aaj iss baarish me hum apne saare gum dhodhenge''.

Maan and geet are enjoying the rain wen maan looks at geet'mahii plays and maan feels sumthng really strnge'.a strong emotion in his heart drawing towards geet'''.maan tells geet'

Maan: geet'ek baat kahoon?

Geet: kahiye na sir'

Maan: tumhe apne bare me saari baatein batane ke baad u knw wat..?...i feel good'''!

Maan walks down to the other side smiling feeling free'he starts singing'

Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Ik daastan nayi purani
Chori chori yeh kahani chali hai
Theheri thi jo tere aa jaane tak

Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Ek daastan nayi purani
Chori chori yeh kahani chali hai
Theheri thi jo tere aa jaane tak

Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good

Har disha rastaa naya
Har kahin raahein nayi nayi
Meri raahein tujhe paake
Tujhpe hi tham gayi
Humsafar thi magar tu hi
Manzil ban gayi
Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Yeh raastein likhte jaaye bas

Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good

Roshni aisi mili
Raat ka chehra khila yahaan
Andhero se gile the jo
Maaf woh ho gaye
The jo maile sheeshein dil ke
Saaf woh ho gaye
Teri meri teri meri kahaani
Jaise raat ko subah mil jaaye bas


Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Tu hi jeenay ka hai bahana
And I dont know why
But I feel good
Tere aane se maine jaana ke
Har safar ho gaya suhana
And I dont know why
But I feel good

maan and geet enjoy their song'.aftr d song and getting wet'.maan and geet cum back dried aftr d rain is ovr'..

Maan sees geet drying her hair wid speckels of water falling on his face'maan looks at geet's pretty face and admires it thoroughly'.geet while drying her hair looks at maan and says'

Geet: sir kya hua? 'aise kyun dekhrahe he?

Maan:upp kuch nahin'ab ghar chale'kaafi der hogayi he!

Geet: theek he'chaliye'par ek baat bataun sir 'mujhe bohot thand lagrahi he'

Maan takes out his coat and gves it to geet to wear it..geet looks at maan and smiles at dis gesture of his'maan too smiles'he says..

Maan: ab chale?

Geet: haan chaliye'!

Maan and geet sit in the car and leave'maan drops geet home'.geet gets down of the car'

Geet: bye maan sir'.gud nyt..!

Maan: bye geet'gud nyt'!

Geet is walking towards her home wen she turns back and runs and hugs maan'unexpectedly'maan is taken aback'..geet hugs maan wich he never expected'maan cant control his heart and emotions'his heart beats fast and in a fit of emotions he too hugs geet'they share a close hug wn geet realizes its too late'she says..

Geet: sir'yeh aapke liye aapka tofa tha'meri zindagi ke sabse achche din ke liye..usse itna special banane ke liye'sach me main isse kabhi nahin bhool paungi...thank u sir'ok bye sir gud nyt'!

Geet goes back home and maan smiles and says..

Maan: aaj ka din special isilye tha kyunki isse tumne special banaya he'kyunki tum mere liye bohot special ho'aur main bhi isse nahin bhool paunga'..!...bye geet..!

Maan sits in the car and leaves'!

(btw guys'maan to realize his love for geet soon')

Edited by swthrtdevisha - 13 years ago
kellz thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
i was thinking the same thing maan is in luv
wajiha-1 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
luved it sooooooooooo much
superb.... awesome update...
continue soon

rsroopali thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww luved ur update
nvr thought maans life would b filled with sooooo much sadness
bt happpyyyyyyyy tht he got a frnd like geet
&excited abt maan realising his luv for geet😃
pickachu thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome!!!!
Veryyy nice part!!
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
Rocks.Dhara thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update......and thanks for PM dear 😊
angelinc thumbnail
Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
hi i'm new here and a silent reader of your ff please add me to you pm...........and one thing about this part it was brilliant i almost cried for 15 minutes after reading this its so touchy you've done an excellent job the way you've brought out maan's emotions is simply great...........

wonderful totally wonderful.....................


i'm so touched honestly i am........................
JRia thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago

hi

nice part
loved the date sequence from the start
this part had a tad bit of saddness written all over but then as the saying goes " everything that ends well is good"
and ur ending was superb
swetha10 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
nice update.. really sad abt maan's life.. guess he is in luv.. do continue soon
sweet cherry thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 3 years ago

The plot of this story is inspired from the Hollywood movies Beastly 2011 movie (which in itself is an adaptation of Beauty and the Beast) and...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli · 5 years ago

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".