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Posted: 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
When are you updating yaar?
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 25

Maan is walking into geet's living room and seeing geet's beautiful house arnd and sees geet's pictures wid her dm and her sis and frnds...he looks at it and adores it...he says dat geet is lukin adorable and cute ...he smiles at looking at them wen he realises that he needs to mke nimbu pani for geet...maan goes into the kitchen and sees d kitchen arnd properly.he sees dat evrythng has been absolutely kept in place...he takes out the lemons and water from the fridge...he cant find d knife unfortunately...he decides to ask geet abt it...

Maan: arey yeh knife kahan rakhi hai...??...geet se poochna parega...

Maan knocks at geet room's door...

Maan: geet...geet...

on not getting any response from inside, he sees the door is kept open and gets inside...

He gets into the room and shouts...

Maan: geet..geet...mujhe lagta hai fresh horahi he...

Geet responds...from the bathroom...

Geet: ji sir...sir main abhi aarahi hoon...(in her mind)...arey yeh toh kitchen me jane wale the na...yeh abhi mere kamre me...pata nahin zaroor kuch kaam hoga...

Meanwhile maan is lukin at geet's room carefully...d photographs, trophies won by geet...her room reflects a world of her own...maan is walking arnd wen geet cums out aftr a bath.maan turns arnd...geet in wet hair cums out in her white pyjamas and short pink kurti...maan turns and becomes sunned...lil drops of water dropping from geet's hair..geet is looking down...maan literally just stares at her...maan simply gets lost in geet's beauty...wid wet hair she looks even more beautiful...geet takes her towel and starts drying out her hair wen drops of water fall onto maan's face...maan turns hi sface to d odr side and then he looks at geet lovingly...absolutely lovingly...he feels some strange kind of attachment towards her...geet is busy drying her hair wid her towel wen maan slowly starts walking towards her...geet walks towards her mirror and dsnt realises dat maan is just behind her...she is busy drying up her hair wen while maan is just staring at her...(mahii is being played)...maan stands behind geet unable to say nethng to her and jus living that moment wen some of geet's wet hair passes like a wind through maan's face...maan turns his face thru d odr side and closes hi eyes and feels d moment ...he feels that paasin of geet's hair as he has never experienced before...suddenly geet's question brings him bk to reality and he moves his steps backward...geet asks while looking into the mirror ...

Geet: ji sir...aap kuch kehrahe the ...aap toh kitchen me nimbu paani banane gaye the na...??...kya hua?

Maan: upp...woh...mujhe kuch pooch na tha...

Geet turns bk towards maan...

Geet: haan sir boliye na...

Maan: haan woh knife kahan rakhi he ?...mil nahin rahi he...

Geet: kyun?????

Maan: woh mujhe kisi ka khoon karna he...

Geet: huh...!...sir aap murder bhi karte he...kahin mera khoon toh nahin...(geet ves a slight laugh)

Maan: geet please...chup raho...bakwaas baatein baad me karna...pehle batao ki churi kahan rakhi he...??

Geet: sir aap bahar jaiiye...main aapko aakar dikhati hoon...

Maan: arey tum batao na...main khud dhundlunga...

Geet: sir main aake batati hoon na...kitchen uthal -puthal hogayi toh dm toh mujhe mardalegi...ab aap jaiyye...

Maan: theek he...

Maan leaves the room and closes the door...cums out and smiles...walks towards the kitchen...

Maan gets indulged in pouring water into the glass wen geet cums from behind...

Geet: sir...(she taps on his shoulder)...

Maan turns bk...towards her...

Geet: sir...aap hatiye...main aapko dikhati hoon ki churi kahan rakhi he...

geet opens d drawer under the stove and opens the right drawer...takes out the knife and points it out at maan who is just behind her...

Geet intotal filmy style points out the knife at maan...maan get slightly scared and moves backwards...

Maan:geet yeh tum kya karrahi ho?...yeh knife hai...pen nahin...isse chot lagsakti he...meera khoon karne ka iraada he kya?

Geet: (she gves a slight laugh)...haan he toh sahi lekin woh bad me karungi...abhi nahin...uske liye full fledged planning chahiye na...hahahaha...

Maan: very funny geet...ab knife do...

Geet walks behind maan and stands beside him while he is busy cutting d lemons...geet says...

Geet: sir aap kaat nahin sakte toh laiyye main khud karlungi...

Maan: nahin...main karlunga...

Geet: arey sir dijiye na...

Maan: tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe yeh sab nahin aata...kya sirf ladkiyon ko aata hai kya?...mujhe sab aata hai geet...

Geet: ok...toh kijiye...

Geet is staring at maan...wrking...

Maan looks at her and says...

Maan: wat...?...arey main karlunga...tum jao aur betho...aaram karo...tumhari tabiat theek nahin he...maine bola hai toh main zaroor karunga...

Geet: par sir...

Maan: par var kuch nahin...tum jao...jab banaunga tab taste karke batana kaisa hai...lekin ab tum jao...

geet is abt to leave wen maan while cutting d lemons cuts his finger because he ws looking at geet...maan shouts...

Maan: ouch...

geet turns bk and runs to help maan...she takes maan's fingerin her hand which is bleeding profusely...she shows huge concern towards his cut...

Geet: maine aapse kaha tha na...ki dhyan se kijiyega...dekhiye kya hogaya...katgayi na ungli aur dekhiye kitna khoon behraha he...uff aap bhi na...itni zidd karte he...

Maan: arey geet kuch nahin hua he...theek hojaega...

Geet: arey kaise kuch nahin hua he...uff itna khoon..aapko dikhaye nahin derahahe kya?...ab main kya karoon?

Geet seeing dat blood is flowing continously from maan's hand ...she sees no option odr than putting d finger in d mouth...she puts his finger in her mouth to reduce blood flow...d moment geet does dat...maan shockingly looks at geet...he closes his eyes and feels dis feeling as if chills run down his spine...his heartbeat increases rapidly...he says in his mind...

Maan: yeh mujhe kya horaha he...zaroor kuch toh hai joh me andar mehsus karraha hoon..jab bhi geet mere paas hoti he pata nahin mujhe kya hojata hai...

Geet takes out d finger from her mouth...she says...

Geet: sir...ab theek he?...rukiye main first aid box leke aati hoon...

Maan makes her stop...

Maan: ruko geet...(holds her hand)...main theek hoon...mujhe aadat he...

Geet: par sir...

Maan: please geet...main theek hoon...ab tum jaake betho.main nimbu pani leke aata hoon...

Geet(in her mind)...:inhe achanak kya hogaya?.yeh toh nimbu paani banane ke peeche aise pargaye he jaise billi ke peeche chuha...

Geet leaves from dere...geet is sitting in her living room sofa wen maan cums and gves her d lemon juice...

Maan: geet...yeh lo...nimboo pani...ise peelo...tumhe achcha lagega...aur haan peeke batana ki kaisa he?

Geet drinks d juice and says...

Geet: hmmm sir achcha he...

Maan: dekha...main bana sakta hoon...

Geet: sir ek baat bataiyye.aap mechanic he...doctor he aur cook bhi ...wow!

Maan: shut up...aisi koi baat nahin he...

Geet is drinking d juice wen maan looking at geet's photographs...

Maan: achcha geet...yeh tasveer me tumhari behen hai?

Geet gets up to answer...

Geet: haan sir...uska naam antara he...

Maan: achcha...

Geet: sir aapke ghar me kaun kaun hai?

Maan at dis question gets extremely angry...he shouts...

Maan: mere ghar me koi nahin he...koi nahin he mere parivar me...

Geet: arey isme chillani wali kaunsi baat hai?...main toh bas poochrahi hoon...

Maan: toh aise sawaal mat poocha karo geet...

Geet: theek he...par aapke ghar me koi to hoga...yahan desh me nahin toh videsh me toh hoga na?

Maan: geet.maine tumse kaha na mujhe aise sawaal achche nahin lagte he...please...

Geet: uff ho...theek he...nahin poochungi bas...btw sir tym kya hua he?...

Maan: sare aath bajrahe he...kyun?

Geet's face on hearing d tym opens wide...

Geet: sir...office?...

Maan too becum shocked

Maan: arey haan...office...ke bare me toh bhul hi gaya...dekho geet tumhe office aanae ki zaroorat nahin he...

Geet: main aapki baat karrahi hoon apni nahin...aapko late hojaega...aur main office kyun nahin jaun?

Maan: kyunki tumhari tabiat theek nahin he geet...

Geet: sir maine nimbu paani peeli na.ab theek hoon...

Maan: nahin geet...tum nahin aaogi...

Geet: theek he toh ek kaam karte he...agar me 10 baje tak office nahin pohochi toh aap samajh lijiyega ki main office nahin aaungi...

Maan: theek he...main abhi ghar jaata hoon aur tum apna khyal rakhna...

Geet: sir aap bhi...aapki chot...

Maan: hmmm

Maan saying dis leaves from geet's place...Geet on d odr hand...thinks...

Geet: arey ..main toh sir ko thank u aur sorry kehna hi bhulgayi...kitna kuch kiya hoga mere liye aur maine unhe kitna kuch kehdiya hoga...mujhe unhe sorry aur thank u kehna chahiye...kuch alag style me...

Geet goes to her room...

Maan on d odr hand while opening his car looks bk at geet's house...remembers last nyt...and d tym he spent in her house...

Maan: main kal ke din ko kabhi nahin bhulpaunga geet...par ky ageet office aayegi...main chahta hoon ki woh aaye aur nahin bhi...uff...main chalta hoon...

Maan leaves from dere...

Edited by swthrtdevisha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

fabulous update......

so good to see maan's caring side................
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Posted: 15 years ago
just tooo gud....😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thats Awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it
Loved this line sooooooooooooo much
sir ek baat bataiyye.aap mechanic he...doctor he aur cook bhi ......wow!😆😆😆
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved how they're both so concerned for each other...love it...thanks for the update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow... i luved d careful nature of maan 2wrds Geet...
he z best in everything.............hmmmm...
continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely.... I love Geet's lines... She is funny...
do cont. soon...

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