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Posted: 14 years ago
MEGGS! You updated! Finally...*sighs shaking head*
Gosh...sooo cuttteeee.... Awwww Kripa fought for him. That was so sweet and scary. I lubb Kashish. She cares about Kripz so much. Damn...it was so sweet of Sujal to save Angad. What a nice guy.
Awwwww Angad owns Kripa now. How sweet is that? I loved Sujal's thoughts. They were hilarious. Especially the claiming part. I was laughing.
Oooo hehe....i loved Angad's reaction to the Grewals being vamps. Amazing....so have you decided who will be Angad's sister? My vote goes to AR...btw.
Now....i was actually crying at the part where Angad leaves. Gosh, you're writing was so amazing. So emotional.
The last part, where Angad tells her he loves her...made me smile like an idiot. I hope Sujal still cares for Kripa and i would hate it if Kripa would stop seeing the Grewals now...that would be upsetting.
I'll be waiting for the next story to start. Thanks for the PM hun.
*Jot*
PS. Just read the epilogue. Beautiful. Amazing job done. Like i said before, I love Kashish's character and Angad is such a sweetheart. Kripa is lovely. She is soo amazing. Sujal is also great. Love them all. Wonderful ending.
Edited by Angel-Jot. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice ending
luved it
make it ak fic
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Posted: 14 years ago
I want to clarify to all my readers who have read character description for my next ff that the couple cannot be SK or AK as the heroine is Angad's sister..
This is a series of related ff's so the couples cannot be repeated
i hope u all understand and if sk and ak are ur 1st choises then pls give me ur 2nd fav couples name..
meghna
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Posted: 14 years ago
meghna i think AR pair would be nice..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohkay......so Puppy Love is over....and I loved the way the character's shaped up!! Sujal saved Angad....and I liked the way he listens to Kashish....hehe. And here Angad is now Kripa's REAL Master....however I will always adore Sujal n Kripa's bond....and the speech by Sujal at the end was nice....and again Angad's apology to kashish was nice as well. Really loved all the characters....as they stood on their grounds really well.

As for as the new fic goes....couples cant be repeated....so I think AR will be a gud choice....go ahead wid it dear!!
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Nice one !!

PM me if you decide to write an SK FF sumtime !!!
Luv,
Vandu


thankyou.. sorry no sk for a while.. but minor sk roles in the next one


Originally posted by: spvd

wow this is completely a fiction...................
nice ending dear.....................
all's well finally.......................
the new story looks interesting......................
SK paranormal story, then AK paranormal story, now AR paranormal story.........................
lovely....................
nowadays like AR so give it a try dear.................



thankyou😃i am glad u liked it it was put together hastily and i had no idea how to reveal angad's identity . and kripa's to angad..
i am glad u want a ar.. will start around dushera or diwali with biiiiigggg parts...


Originally posted by: Angel-Jot.

MEGGS! You updated! Finally...*sighs shaking head*yes i know...lol

Gosh...sooo cuttteeee.... Awwww Kripa fought for him. That was so sweet and scary. I lubb Kashish. She cares about Kripz so much. Damn...it was so sweet of Sujal to save Angad. What a nice guy.
..yes... he is veruy nice and i dont want anyone to hate sujal even if he comes acros a bit cold in this ff
Awwwww Angad owns Kripa now. How sweet is that? I loved Sujal's thoughts. They were hilarious. Especially the claiming part. I was laughing...i tried to make it funny so gud u laughed..😃 didnt know how to put an end to this one... the right scenario took a while to come to me
Oooo hehe....i loved Angad's reaction to the Grewals being vamps. Amazing....so have you decided who will be Angad's sister? My vote goes to AR...btw.
Now....i was actually crying at the part where Angad leaves. Gosh, you're writing was so amazing. So emotional...thankyou thankyou...😳😳
The last part, where Angad tells her he loves her...made me smile like an idiot. I hope Sujal still cares for Kripa and i would hate it if Kripa would stop seeing the Grewals now...that would be upsetting...u read the epi.. so u know the anserss.
I'll be waiting for the next story to start. Thanks for the PM hun.
..ur welcome😊
*Jot*
PS. Just read the epilogue. Beautiful. Amazing job done. Like i said before, I love Kashish's character and Angad is such a sweetheart. Kripa is lovely. She is soo amazing. Sujal is also great. Love them all. Wonderful ending...cant thank you enough for all the praises.. now i am raringt o go for the next ff. thanks for the encouragement






Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

nice ending

luved it
make it ak fic



sorry guys cant do...but thank for reading this one😊


Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

meghna i think AR pair would be nice..😊



really?? aww thanksss😃😃😃😃


Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Ohkay......so Puppy Love is over....yup..and I loved the way the character's shaped up!!..thank god.. it was difficult to make everyone look good and yet make them fight... Sujal saved Angad....and I liked the way he listens to Kashish....hehe...ultimate how of how much he doesnt want him dead for kripa's sake And here Angad is now Kripa's REAL Master......more like a mate than a master...as sujal explained to all the vamipres later in epiloguehowever I will always adore Sujal n Kripa's bond....and the speech by Sujal at the end was nice....and again Angad's apology to kashish was nice as well...yeah the epi was to clear up he loose ends and the flying emotions... Really loved all the characters....as they stood on their grounds really well...thankyou so much for saying tht , made my day😊😊😳😳

As for as the new fic goes....couples cant be repeated....so I think AR will be a gud choice
..ohhh thankyou thankyou..thankyou...😃....go ahead wid it dear!!



thankyou all for reading my puppy love and giving me such wondeful replies and all thereaders who didnt have time to comment but did press the like button.. thankyou too... its nice to se the no of likes on my post..
i hope u all stay tuned for my next ff... it will be a diwali dushera bonus i guess...😉😉

luv u all
meghna
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏hey meggs sorry 4 late reply now a days i m busy busy .
superb update i really really enjoyed it and every thing is so perfect i can easily said u did truly gr8 job the way u describe each and every character importance is so amazing i love sujal and kripa bond ,sujal saved angad life each and every thing is superb over all fantastic end .
4 ur new FF i prefer AR.
hey sorry i can't comment i detail caz of my studies but i will comment u later so don't be upset. waiting 4 next .and thanks 4 pm. good job.👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

👏hey meggs sorry 4 late reply now a days i m busy busy .totally understand ur problem dear.. so its ok.. as long as u keep them coming.. lte or quick, small or big.. it doesnt matter😃

superb update i really really enjoyed it and every thing is so perfect i can easily said u did truly gr8 job .thankyuou 😊😊😊 the way u describe each and every character importance is so amazing i love sujal and kripa bond ,sujal saved angad life each and every thing is superb over all fantastic end ..i am so glad u liked it.. i didnt want anyone to hate any of my main charecters even if they fought each other..
4 ur new FF i prefer AR..alright!!👍🏼 its done then!! around dushera and diwali i'll post big parts..
hey sorry i can't comment i detail caz of my studies but i will comment u later so don't be upset..ok sweeti i understand and thanks for the couple name😊 waiting 4 next .and thanks 4 pm. good job.👍🏼



thnaks for thew comment dear😃and i am glad u liked the ff
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Posted: 14 years ago




The FaLLen Angels


Index


char Intro, prologue......
pg 24 -The Angels

a summery of previous stories for new readers......pg25
Characters till now...........................................................pg27

Chapter 01.......................pg 25 -The Fallen
Chapter 02.......................pg 26 -Pride.

Chapter 03.......................pg 26 -Gluttony.

Chapter 04.......................pg 27 -Sloth.
Chapter 05.......................pg 27 -Avarice. Part I
Chapter 06.......................pg 27 -Avarice. Part I
Chapter 07.......................pg 28 -Lust and Wrath. Part I
Chapter 08.......................pg 29 -Lust and Wrath. Part II
Chapter 09.......................pg 30 -Just Lust
Chapter 10.......................pg 31 -Deaths Angel
Chapter 11.......................pg 33 -~Envy~ jealousy
Chapter 12.......................pg 34 -Realizations
Chapter 13.......................pg 35 -Redemption
Chapter 14.......................pg 36 -The Break Down
Chapter 15.......................pg 37 -Forever Fallen- LAST PART



MY PM LIST for this ff
spvd, dazzling_glory, AbhiNikiLuver, ...anshu..., pinky901, Angel-Jot., Surya.Ravi, moonlight2630,
Edited by meggs - 14 years ago
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The FaLLen Angels




..Prologue..

The Angels

Some 2-3 months before Angad and Kripa's wedding ceremony…

A scene at Ridhima's veterinary clinic… A woman had just barged in to her office begging her to save her dog- max's life.

Ridhima had sent the girl out along with her brother to peacefully operate on the dog.

After the operation completed, the office door opened and Ridhima stepped out. She saw them standing close to each other. She always had a bad timing according to Angad.

"He's out of danger. Though do you know why he would be swallowing barbed wire?" Ridhima asked not really wanting a reply.

Kripa shook her head and thanked the doctor profusely. "…. Oh I don't know what would have happened without u… You r like a god! Saving lives"

"It's my job. You paid for it. Nothing personal. You don't have to thank me like this and I am no god!" Ridhima snapped and walked away, ticked off at Kripa's words.

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At the same time, somewhere in the heavens high above us…

The man sat in his office and glared at Armaan, then spoke in his strictest tone, "You r not god!! Damnit!! Stop acting as if you are! When you are ordered to stand down and stay back, you bloody well stand down and stay back instead of going on to attack. I don't care if it ended the fight quicker, it also got you 2 broken ribs. You'll die at this rate fool!! How many times do I have to tell you to stop being so reckless…."

As the superior behind the desk continued his ranting, Armaan raised his hands to his ribs for damage check, merely bruised now.. 2-3 hrs more, they'll be good as new..

"Are you even listening to me?!!" The man shouted half standing up, his face red with frustration and fury.

"Not really… you say the same thing always… what's it been now… 10 yrs? It hasn't stopped me. I have been same as ever and the risks haven't killed me as yet. And even if I do die.. What's it to you? As I am obviously not one of your regular fighters, who actually do die now and then…" Armaan drawled lazily and looked outside thoroughly bored.

The superior already red with anger, stood up in rage and shouted "Armaan!!! I will-".. Only to be interrupted by another person walking in. His own superior. One of the angels...

"Sir what are you doing here.." the superior stuttered from behind the desk and Armaan slowly swung around to observe the angel. If his superior was the mad raging bull, then the angels were like the irritating preaching fairies, who had never lifted a finger in their whole lives.. Armaan despised them and their laid back nature. If they were so mighty and powerful then why not lend them some help to fight off the hell demons?

"I was ordered to deal with the insubordination here. Young warrior, do you not want to live? Do you thrive in risking your life unnecessarily?" the angel asked Armaan directly, ignoring the superior.

"I am not your young warrior, all your other warriors admit it. I don't risk anything, I am not easy to kill. If I can save a warrior life or two by being the way I am.. Then what's the harm in it?"

"What if we were to lose you due to one of your impulsive foolishness? True enough aren't one of ours, but you are still a warrior. No, this has gone off long enough. Warnings don't work on you and neither does punishment of any kind. It has been decided by the council above that you are to be send to earth where you won't have a chance to…"

Armaan quickly grabbed on the chair in front and furiously blinked hi eyes as sudden darkness overwhelmed him. Earth.. Earth… send to earth… His heart pounded loudly in his chest as if it just might burst out any moment…

Armaan saw the angels lips move to complete his pronouncement, but hardly heard what the angel was saying, his ears rang and adrenaline pumped high in his veins Earth.. that word had always had a strange effect on him.

Armaan watched as the angel raised his arm to send him down to earth, he felt the floor beneath his feet become soft and then disappear. They were throwing him out like some rabid dog.. As if he would let them do just that.. Shaking with every emotion he had ever felt, Armaan lunged forward to grab onto his heavenly warriors knife on the desk before the floor completely disappeared and he fell…

He saw the superior raging at his taking the knife, the angel shrugging with indifference, he felt his emotions leaving him and a numbness taking over his body till the only thing he felt was falling through endless space..

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CHARACTERS



The main characters are:


Ridhima Khanna: The quite reserved girl, who posses a heart of steel or as some believe no heart at all. Was she always like this? What would it take to make her feel again? She is a "Halfling"........


Armaan: The man without a past. The man who fights along heavenly warrior, but isn't a warrior himself. Who also fights along humans, but isn't a human either. Who is he? What is he? What would he do when he meets a person who makes him feel things, he has never felt before.


Angad Khanna: Ridhima's real brother. A charismatic man who had his world turned upside down and inside out when he met his mate/ love of life Kripa Sharma. He is married to Kripa. He is a "Halfling" too........


Kripa Sharma Khanna: The simple, bubbly girl; loyal to her master/liege, deadly to her enemies. her life changed drastically 20 yrs back and now it changes yet again. after 20 yrs will she risk everything again for her love? She is a werewolf....


Sujal Grewal: The man who had seen the dark side of everything. He accepted Kirpa into his house when she had been condemned to die alone and saved her her love Angad's life, even when they don't see eye to eye. He is a vampire...


Kashish Sinha Grewal: She is sujal's wife, a mere human, loved by all and the one who rules over several preternatural beings....


Rest of the charecters will be introduced as they appear.

"halflings" are being which are either 2 natured or have born or coupling of two different species....

Ridhima and her brother are born of such fate... what they really are.. what different powers they possess.. u will find as u read on.


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