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Posted: 15 years ago
Meggs FINALLY! You took a LONG time to update. *glares*๐Ÿ˜† But it was worth the wait. Awwwww Angad really cares about Kripa and then i loved how Kripa was so bubbly and happy when she entered the office. ๐Ÿ˜† The closet part was the best!! Okay so...we know that Kripa is a dog...a vampire protecting dog...๐Ÿ˜† and we also know that Angad is not normal and he can't go in the night. WHAT IS HE? LOL Ummmm....if vamps go out the night and not in the day...then....is Angad an angel? It's too bad he can't tell Kripa the truth because of his sister but if Angad's sister is also not a human than whatever they are, they can die? Because Angad's sister is his only family....so whatever happened to the rest of his family?
Oh god. I just hope Angad and Sujal's rivalry doesn't ruin AK's relationship even though Kripa thinks it isn't going to happen. Her nature better not come between them because that would be extremely sad.
Wonderful update Meggs and yes, it was short for such a long wait but it's alright because it was amazing.
Please continue soon and PM me when you do. Excited for the next chap!!
*Jot*
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey meggs h r u? welcome back and EID MUBARAK with super duper exciting rocking update but yaar now i m tooooooooooo much curious to know about angad and more then exciting to know that kripa is too close to his secret wowow so much thrill this time i can't wait 4 long plz try update soon otherwise ur FF will be the cause of death for me.oh man u r incredible writer u know what y i like u so much caz u always select rare and valuable topics . plz plz update soon and thanks 4 pm. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
great story and fic
read it today...
i luved it as its different from many of fics i have enjoyed readin...
great work,,,
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Posted: 15 years ago

CHAPTER 5

Part B

Close I I.




<<<< 2 months later.

Angad looked at Kripa bouncing around feeling a surge of jealousy. He wasn't sure of what was he jealous of though. Every head in the park was turned towards Kripa as she bounced around, laughing wildly, chasing a small puppy. Something about her drew everyone's attentionโ€ฆ It wasn't her appearance or her personality alone, but her auraโ€ฆ Just like his own. For decades he had been used to all the head turning towards him, admiring him, revering his presence and yet suddenly now he wasn't the center of everyone's attention. He wasn't sure he felt bad coz nobody was looking at him or coz every male was drinking up her image with hungry eyesโ€ฆ

"Angad!!!!!", Kripa screamed and Angad returned from his dreaming. She held the struggling puppy up to him to pet.

"Why don't you let it go.. It doesn't look too happy there..", Angad said trying to calm down the poor thing. Although Kripa was being extremely gentle with it, it looked terrified in her hold.

Kripa pouted and handed the puppy over to Angad, "All animals aren't happy around me."

True enough. The puppy instantly quieted down and snuggled in Angad's chest. Kripa pouted badly when Angad smiled. Well atleast he hadn't lost his touch with animals, even if humans weren't fawning over him any longer.

"I am so jealous!!", Kripa muttered stamping her foot cutely, blowing hair out of her eyes. Angad raised his brows, but remained quite. Sometimes he really wondered if they felt same things or were they just so well matched.

"All animals are nice and cuddly around you and they go wild gorilla around meโ€ฆ Uuuugghhh!! I want to snuggle up too, and that puppy is in my place!!"

Angad laughed and gently put the puppy down, pulling Kripa to him in the next instant.

"Happy now?", Angad stroked her hair and kissed her forehead.

"I feel bad for being so stupid.. It's just a puppyโ€ฆ", Kripa snuggled closer and wrapped her hands around his waist, effectively getting lost in the embrace.

"Nahโ€ฆ It's ok. I feel jealous too, when everyone looks at you." Angad spoke quietly. Kripa looked up and slowly kissed his lips.

"But I look at you. So does it matter?"

Angad laughed and suddenly lifted her and twirled her around, feeling a little stupid himself for his earlier emotions.

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"Why is Angad Khanna moving into our circle of clients? He has either befriended or made some dealings with most of our clientele since Kripa has started going out with him", Kashish asked Sujal on the way back home from office.

Sujal looked up from his papers to cast an appreciative glance at Kashish. How truly a wonder his Kashish was. She spotted out this anomaly when no one else did and is sharp enough to know that Angad's move isn't a coincidence. She just isn't spiteful enough as yet to know the bad in peopleโ€ฆ

"I believe he is trying to build a network which can crush us if it withdraws its support from our company, of course he would use this network as a leverage for Kripa I suppose.", Sujal drawled, not at all bothered with this turn of events.

"He has no idea how hurt Kripa would get if she finds this. Why doesn't he understand that she is free to do as she wishes, free to leave us for him." Kashish asked sinking back into her seat, she worried about Kripa so much. She was so pure of heart and intentions. There wasn't one deceptive bone in Kripa's body.

"Men have egoโ€ฆ it's hard to believe that he isn't enough to pull her away from us. So he pretends we are forcing her to stay here. He has no idea what he is up against.", Sujal brought Kashish's hand to her lips and kissed it reverently.

"So whatever he is trying to doโ€ฆ It won't harm us?"

"No. But I am afraid it will hurt Kripa." Sujal spoke coolly

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>>> Another week later

"What is it Angad you have been thinking too hard about something. Is something worrying you?" Kripa asked as they sat near a lake. They had decided to go on a picnic near an isolated lake. Kripa was sitting back in a relaxed posture and Angad lay near her with his head on her lap.

"Its nothing, everything's fine.", Angad closed his eyes as he felt Kripa playing around with his hair. He had known that moving against Grewal wouldn't have been easy, yet all his scheme and plans had gone without a hitch till now and he just couldn't believe that Grewal hadn't found out what he was trying to do. What worried Angad was the fact that why Grewal wasn't doing anything to stop him. He didn't seem bothered in the least.

"Liar. It doesn't suit you. This lying. Your forehead wrinkles up and your brows get puckered. Is it your sister? Or something with your business?"

"Neither. And maybe you should just leave it if you don't want me lying huh?" Angad opened a slitted eye to look at her. She was too good at reading him.

"Look, why don't you tell me? Even if its something I can't help you with I am sure Mr. Grewal can help if I ask-"

"NO!" with a single furious word Angad sat up and glared at her, "No. I don't want anything from him. Neither do I want you taking anything from him. I can give to you whatever he gives you. And soon you won't have to rely on him at all."

"What are you saying? Angad don't say half baked things to me." Kripa stood up and crossed her arms.

"All I am saying is that soon you would be free of him. You won't have to do anything he says." Angad too stood up and tried pulling Kripa into his arms. He had wanted to surprise Kripa with this newsโ€ฆ. But he didn't mind sharing the plan.

Kripa resisted his pull and stood stoutly at her place, "What the hell are you talking about? Free of what? I am not anyone's slave. Haven't I told you that I am where I exactly want to be and I am not being forced to do anything against my will? Then what are you talking about? What are you planning Angad."

"My god! He has you completely brainwashed Kripa!! He is.. he.. He is holding you back! Why don't you see it? You want to be with me and he is holding you back to him. He is using going to use you against me to get what he wants. It's all part of a big plan. You don't understand." Angad sputtered, jealousy coloring his voice

"You are right Angad. I don't understand." Kripa said quietly and picked up the basket which she had brought. Taking a few steps away from him, she spoke with a voice which shattered Angad's heart.

"I don't understand the double crossing and planning. But I do understand one thing. Mr. Grewal will never harm me. Ever. Now it's up to you to understand that it is me who isn't ready to leave him and not him who is holding me back. I like you very much Angad. But I won't stay and watch you try to harm him, to get something which you can never have."

Kripa turned and stalked away. But before she could go much further Angad caught up with her and jerked her around.

"What the heck you mean!!! Don't try me Kripa. I am a very patient man, but you always have me on a short fuse. I will make sure he is forced to let go of you and you are going to come to me. I don't care if you think he is the god, coz I know he isn't."

Kripa swung her arm free of Angad's tight hold and repressed a snarl, her wolf didn't like being dominated like this. Kripa caught hold of his shirt front and invaded his personal space.

"You don't tell me what to do. You don't have any right over understand! You even try and force him to do anything Khanna and I'll do so many bad things to you, you would regret being born." Kripa snapped viciously close to completely losing her temper.

"Is this it then? This is how it is going to be? I stand nowhere in your opinion. He is all you care about?" Angad spoke barely masking the disgust and hurt in his voice.

He had been ready to give her the world and she still clung to that creature. What would it take her to come to him? What more does she want? WHAT?!!

"You matter a lot. But you are asking me to choose between you and Mr. Grewalโ€ฆ. You are asking me to chooseโ€ฆ You remember a month back, I said that I would never choose? I am sorry Angad. I have caused you so much distress and trouble. I need to go home and think about certain thingโ€ฆ This all has become too intenseโ€ฆ tooโ€ฆ."

"Close?" Angad whispered his question. But turned around and left. He couldn't bear to hear the answer.

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part dear...................wow angad is actually doing the wrong stuff and sujal is too very sure that it will be angad's plan which will back fire and kripa would be hurt................and hes right.................angad has to understand her loyaly to sujal.................cont soon dear..................u gonna finish this ff soon???????????? will miss it bad....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey meggs fantastic update now AK fight interesting.
hey i m in hurry sorry i m going now i will comment u later
plz try update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
megs at last toom you long enough bt i cant complain i m abt the same with my ff.

loved part 5 bt now i really want to noe wat angad is. i have never read abt a creature which cannot go out in dark. so i m really curious. btw how r u now?btw wen will dey both reveal their identities or being.

nd i wanted to ask will you continue this series after this story? nd will angad's sis get a story of her own too. i want to know y she is so aloof.

anshu
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Posted: 15 years ago
meghna dear the parts were very nice....the story is gaining momentum & going at a very interesting phase...well i like the way sujal & kashish are protecting kripa, as though she is a integral part of their hosehold.. & as a matter of fact she really is..for kashish, kripa is like a friend & i sometimes feel sujal takes kripa to be his younger sibling...waise sujal is so right about men & their ego....you know what dear i feel angad is behaving like a typical jerk...he is just not ready to believe that kripa, sujal & kashish are attached to each other..he feels their's is forced bond... but as much as kripa tries to explain to him, angad sees it as a forced bond.. while for kripa her attachment for sujal, kashish is a special bond....i just hope that angad does not do grave mistakes which he cannot revert back again...i hope that angad's sister knocks some sense into angad's head & angad starts looking at things in a different manner....you know now i'am feeling very bad for kripa, like sujal said it is kripa who is going to be hurt in the end....& seeing kripa hurt, this will hurt sujal, kashish too..& i'am sure angad's haalat will also be no good..even he would be upset....i'am feeling so sad...anyway good going....keep it up....๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Meghna dear do continue soon...waiting for the next part eagerly..๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
=O OMG! First of all...this was a quick update and you just made me realize...i should update one if not all of my ffs. LOL
But anyways...the beginning was so calm, cute and sweet but then it all of a sudden got so tense. Amazing! I love how Kripa is so protective of the people she cares about but even Angad is protective...way too protective i'd say. LOL
Awww so...now they fought and Kripa has decided to end this....relationship they had? Woah....Angad is pretty confident huh? I really want to know what Khanna is and Sujal..what did he mean when he said "Kripa is the one whos going to be hurt?" I love Kashish! She's so sweet.
I'm guessing the next few parts are going to be sad. A few more chaps till the AK story ends? Okay....LOL
Thanks for the PM Meggs. Waiting for the next chap! Oh and did i tell you how funny the puppy part was? LMAO. She is a dog though right? A wolf-dog?...I understand why the puppy was scared then. LOL
Poor Kripa. I love the "the puppy is in my place!" line. SOOO cutee!!! LOL.
*Jot*
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey the last to part were really good..continue soon.

Thanks for the pm...

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